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The Queen, who was ruling in the place of her husband (currently visiting the Minutan), saw two robed men walk towards her.

"Has construction been finished?" She asked

"Indeed your highness, we are ready for students." Said Master Ishiak Moniv

"Have you sent out the telegrams?" asked the other robed man, Master Po Liak

"We are just in the business of doing so."

And as they left she got news that the telegram had been sent.

To all nations,
If any of you have force-sensitive young people who need training, send them to our academy on Ftang. All shall be trained by Masters Ishiak Moniv and Po Liak, we are in the process of training others, and would like more sutdents.

Please reply back if you wish to send students,

Queen Worica,
Wife of King Roshan I of Ftang.

dude you need a nation.

dude you need a nation.

what do you mean? I've got one.

We are sending a prospective student to check the school out, please make him feel welcome.

We are sending a prospective student to check the school out, please make him feel welcome.

We shall indeed. We look forward to meeting him.

Queen Worica,
Wife of his Highness, King Roshan I

OOC: Feel free to rp your character arriving or something

"Are you ready?"

"Yes, come get me."

Light flashed throughout the halls of the Academy as Jedi Knight Qixom Lun and his padawan Ulu Khan fought a battle. They threw blow after blow at each other. Qixom used a more aerobic form of fighting and parried every blow with skill and style, whil Ulu fought a more defensive form and protected himself with wisdom.

When it was just about to get interesting, Master Ishiak walked onto the scene accompanied by Master Po Liak and Ren Vuric, another jedi knight.

"Enough," the hum of the lightsaber stopped "We will be receiving a student here from Drexil Hillsville soon. Make sure you look after him, I am assigning him as Ren's padawan, so tweak Ren's fencing abilities."

"Of course Master." Qixom bowed, as did Ulu. Ulu had been Qixom's padawan for over 2 years now, before this place was even built, and Qixom had been trained by Ishiak himself over 9 years ago.

OOC: I try to mix future and present tech in my rps, I am also trying to mix some fantasy into them so I hope you don't mind the fact that my character has a regular name.

IC: As Brendan M. Crowley stepped out of his transport he instantly began to take in the scenery around him. He quickly noticed that this was noting like his home in Drexel Hillsville, this was a peaceful place, a place where you didn't have to worry about being hit by a stray shot. He felt at home.

"This way," called a man in brown robes. "Sir, yes, sir!" he instinctively replied. "These are yours," the robed figure said while handing the boy a set of robes. The child accepted them saying, "Thankl you, Sir. If you don't mind my asking, what is this place, sir?"

"This my child, is the Jedi Academy of Ftang." He spread his arms showing the boy the vast building before him.

"It is here that you shall become a strong person." He patted the boy on the shoulder "You may need this." He handed the boy a metal stick.

"Do not press that button until told to." He said, knowing full well the boy would.

"Thank you sir," Brenden said. He followed the man inside and was amazed by the achitechture in the academy. He saw technology that he hed never even dreamed of back in Drexel Hillsville. His thoughts then turned towards his family still in the Hills. He thought of his father in the trenches of some battlefeild. He thought of his sister starving in their small cave which they shared with three other families. He remebered seeing his mother being taken by Them. He turned to the robed man and asked, "Excuse me sir, is their any way I can contact my sister?"

"Of course, right over there." He pointed to a console on the wall.

The robed man met with Master Ishiak and began to talk

"Ren, are you sure about this?"

"Of course Master, he is an able child, I can feel it."

"So can I, but just don't let it go to your head."

"Of course not Master." He bowed as Ishiak left.

He turned to see the boy at the console

Brenden looked the console in front of him. The marks on the buttons were foriegn to him. He looked over towards the man he met earlier and saw him talking to a shorter man wearing the same clothes. He tried to listen to what they were saying but then the first man started to turn towards him. Brendan quickly went back to trying to decipherthe keys. After a few minutes he asked the taller man, "Can you give some assistance, sir?"

"Of course." He headed to the console.

"Where do you want to contact? I will type in where it is."

We, The grand Senate of Imperial Aaronia, wish you to train 1,000 of our most budding athletes as well as send a personall trainer for the Baron himnself.

With Thanks.

Lord Xenrat Tyran, Sub-Baron of Imperial Aaronia.

The Queen, who was ruling in the place of her husband (currently visiting the Minutan), saw two robed men walk towards her.

"Has construction been finished?" She asked

"Indeed your highness, we are ready for students." Said Master Ishiak Moniv

"Have you sent out the telegrams?" asked the other robed man, Master Po Liak

"We are just in the business of doing so."

And as they left she got news that the telegram had been sent.
I need training :mp5: ive never fought in the ...forums b4. 100% noob (me) plz help. thx

We, The grand Senate of Imperial Aaronia, wish you to train 1,000 of our most budding athletes as well as send a personall trainer for the Baron himnself.

With Thanks.

Lord Xenrat Tyran, Sub-Baron of Imperial Aaronia.

We shall accomadate for them immediately. Master Kuruun Kak will be sent to train the Baron.

Do you wish to have them trained in all the ways of the jedi?

Master Ishiak Moniv,
Leading Master of the order

I need training :mp5: ive never fought in the ...forums b4. 100% noob (me) plz help. thx

We shall train you in the ways of the jedi if you want

While Ren was with his new Padawan, Ishiak was in the midst of training his padawan, Lukia Peros. A tall girl for her age, and very agile.

He used the famous floating droid technique. Lukia was unique in many ways, she was a natural force user from birth, she levitated when she was 1 year old. And she made a new lightsaber form. One that contained the three elements of attack, defense and aerobics. Her lightsaber was handmade by herself and had purple blade, a colour not seen in a long time.

Once that part of her training was over they did meditation. Ishiak went first and made everything levitate that was in 50 yards of the room. And when Lukia's turn came she just skimmed 30 yards. She was 12 and was already nearly as good as Ishiak himself.

"Lukia?"

"Yes Master."

"You know the new padawan."

"Indeed, what about him."

"I wish for you to help train him."

"Excuse me Master?"

"You are the greatest student I have ever seen in my whole life. You would be of great influence to him and could make a good friend."

"I will consider it Master."

"Good, now back to training..."

Dweladelfia Prime has a few youth who show signs of force abilatys we would like to send them to you for training.

Dweladelfia Prime has a few youth who show signs of force abilatys we would like to send them to you for training.

We look forward to training them. All will receive housing together in the academy. When would they be arriving?

Master Ishiak Moniv
Leading Master of the Order

They will be ariving shortly. There names are:

Kyle Avondale the XIII
Ally Yellowstone
Jacob Yellowstone
James Yellowstone

They are being loaded onto a transport as we speak. Or nation is exploring FT. We dont have a fleet yet but we are sending youth as a first step into space.

We shall train you in the ways of the jedi if you want
sry, i didnt see this post until now. where...and how do i start training?:confused:

"Of course." He headed to the console.

"Where do you want to contact? I will type in where it is."

"Drexel Hillsville sir, sector G 10,5. My younger sister is hiding in the caves with some of our old neighbors. We had to leave our homes when They attacked. My freinds fathet managed to bring a long distance comunicator with him while we fled" Brendens eyes began to water as he thought of how They took his mother.

To:Queen Worica
From:Anonymous
Subject: Forse Sensitives

I (it is not important my name), have decided to send one of my prospective students to your academy for schooling in the ways of the Jedi. His name is Cypher and he will be arriving shortly.

Orbit Around Ftang

A Dweladelfian Transport ship arived in orbit carrying the 5 students. "Ftang comand this is a Dweladelfian transport ship, perrmission to land?"

"Permission granted, land in the Academy hanger."

In the Academy, Ren was looking at the boy, he was suffering, the way of the dark side. But with Ishiak's help he could turn him away from that.

"Right away my boy," he tapped in the co-ordinates into the console "is this your sister?" he moved away from the console so the boy could see

To:Queen Worica
From:Anonymous
Subject: Forse Sensitives

I (it is not important my name), have decided to send one of my prospective students to your academy for schooling in the ways of the Jedi. His name is Cypher and he will be arriving shortly.

We shall ready the hanger for his arrival.

Master Ishiak Moniv, Queen Worica
Leading Master, Queen of Ftang

The Academy was a hive of activity, many students had arrived from all around Ftang, as all Ftangians are born force-sensitive, and due to the shortage of Masters (Only 20 of the required 40), knights were given mulitple padawans.

The newest Padawan, was Ruu Pabourn. He was a natural duelist, he was 6 years of age, and had already bested many of his fellow padawans in a duel. He was skiled in Form IV which allowed him to jump around and surprise his opponent. He was assigned to Jedi Knight Amursu Lia. a wise lady who knew the devastation that was the Dark Side, her first padawan fell to the dark side and she struck her down. So now she was teaching Ruu the ways of the good, and nothing to do with the Dark Side.

Masters Ishiak Moniv, Po Liak, Xin Garlix and Zech Moon awaited the Dweladelfian ship to land.

bump

Slowly, the transport ship from DMG landed at the academy. When the door opened two soldiers in full armor quickly ran out and handed a datapad to the nearest person.


This is in regards to Cypher:
-Height: 5'8"
-Weight: 175 lbs
-Quick
-Blind

As the soldiers ran back to the ships door, a figure appeared slowly. Stepping out of the ship, his misted eyes stared straight forward and concentrated on nothing. He walked down the ramp and stopped in front of the nearest man. "Hello."

The ship was from DMG, not Dweladelfia as expected. They must be coming later. But no matter,

"Greetings Cypher, I am Master Ishiak, the leader of the Order. These are masters Po Liak, Xin Garlix and Zech Moon."

"You shall be my Padawan Cypher." Master Zech said to him "Follow me, and take these."

Cypher bowed his head slightly, "Greetings."

He stuck out a hand and waited to recieve the items.

Master Zech handed him his robes and a lightsaber, "Now follow me, we shall start your training."

Cypher quickly threw on the cloak and attached the lightsabre to his side. "As you wish, master," he said as he bowed again before following behind. "I am ready and willing."

While Zech walked off with his new padawan, Ishiak spoke with the other masters.

"He has much potential in him."

"Indeed, and has much of a future." Po Liak said.

"We will watch this boy carefully." Xin Garlix replied "He must be taught well."

Meanwhile Zech took Cypher into a round room. "Now, my padawan, concentrate and make the objects in the room float."

Cypher entered the room and sat down in the center. His eyes remained open, but useless as usual, as he began concentrating. Within moments he had got a feel for the entire room and made a mental image of it. Without turning his head, a book on the shelf to his right came out of its spot and levitated over Zech. The pages began turning rapidly as Cypher concentrated more intensely on moving another object. In the corner to his left a chair rose into the air slightly and crossed the room to Zech.

Master Zech looked at what was happening. "Impressive Cypher, normally it takes years for people to do that. But you got it right away."

He watched his Padawan further...

Though he wasn't experienced in the ways of the force, he had been practicing on his own for man years. He rested the chair behind Zech, "When you grow up blind... you have to focus on your mind a little more."

Cypher reconcentrated and doulbed his efforts. Many books flung from the shelves and began dancing and circling in unison. "What else would you have me do?" he asked as he stacked the books into a tower to the ceiling.

The Dweladelfian Ship landed next to the DMG ship.

Kyle Avondale son of King Avondale steped out of the ship with Ally Avondale at his side. Jacob and James followed behind.

Masters Gaava Lu, Nia Gon, Xin Garlix and Heth Mooba approached the four children and introduced themselves.

"I am Master Gaava Lu, these are Masters Nia Gon, Xin Garlix and Heth Mooba."

"Kyle, you are to come with me. Ally with Nia Gon, Jacob with Xin and James you go with Master Heth. You shall all be given your equipment and robes when you go to the training room." Gaava said as the students left with their respective Masters.

Meanwhile in Zech's training room.

"I would like to test your agility and reflexes, see if you can deflect shots from this droid." A small droid rose from behind one of the chairs

Kyle: Yes master

The 4 padawans follow there new masters to the training room.

"Kyle, this is your sabre and robe, put them on if you please."

He nodded to the other masters and they did the same.

"Now younglings, sit in the centre and concentrate on any object around the room, and try to make it float. This is the first test."

"I would like to test your agility and reflexes, see if you can deflect shots from this droid." A small droid rose from behind one of the chairs

As Cypher sensed the droid behind him, he jumped to his feet and turned towards it. Pulling his lightsabre from his waist, he activated it and began focusing on the droid. Due to his lack of sight, it was harder for him to stop blaster shots than the normal jedi, but he still managed to do so by using the force to guide him.

As the droid began firing at him, he begun swinging his lightsabre and deflected the blaster shots to the sides. Shots from one droid was easy enough to handle, so he eventually deflected a shot directly back at the droid.

"Kyle, this is your sabre and robe, put them on if you please."

He nodded to the other masters and they did the same.

"Now younglings, sit in the centre and concentrate on any object around the room, and try to make it float. This is the first test."

Within seconds Kyle and Jacob had objects floting in the air. But Ally and James were having more trouble.

Master Zech was clapping "Haha, very good my Padawan." the sabre he gave him was unique, purple in colour and light in weight.

"You have passed the tests, and I welcome you as a true Jedi of the Order. Do you wish to learn sabre technique now, or rest for a while?"

Masters Xin and Gaava were impressed, more so than the other two masters.

"Those two are definately naturals, Ally and James will require some extensive training but will definately become good jedi."

"Okay younglings, stop your concentration. In a moment a droid will appear before you, I want to use the sabre given to you to deflect shots."

Kyle was the first to jump up to the chalenge. He drew his sword. The light saber gave its huming noise. Kyle loved the green color of his sword. The droid fired onr shot and kyle deflected it back into the droid. "Woops"

*500th Post w00t*

Master Zech was clapping "Haha, very good my Padawan." the sabre he gave him was unique, purple in colour and light in weight.

"You have passed the tests, and I welcome you as a true Jedi of the Order. Do you wish to learn sabre technique now, or rest for a while?"

"I am always eager to learn... I will continue now," Cypher said as he turned and bowed his head again to Zech. Though he was thankful for the praise, he showed no affect. "I am ready..."

Kyle was the first to jump up to the chalenge. He drew his sword. The light saber gave its huming noise. Kyle loved the green color of his sword. The droid fired onr shot and kyle deflected it back into the droid. "Woops"

Master Gaava Lu was very impressed at that, but to see that it wasn't a fluke he sent another one out.

"I am always eager to learn... I will continue now," Cypher said as he turned and bowed his head again to Zech. Though he was thankful for the praise, he showed no affect. "I am ready..."

"He shows no fear or weakness, this is good." Zech thought.

"This, Cypher, is form IV, Ataru. It is acrobatic and allows the user to stike quick and forceful blows onto the opponent." He began to display the use of the sabre when using the form.

"You try and do that." He wanted to see if his student was indeed as intune with force as he thought he was.

Master Gaava Lu was very impressed at that, but to see that it wasn't a fluke he sent another one out.

Kyle twirled his light saber around a prepared for another shot. The droid shot one shot and again Kyle deflected it back into the droid.

"Very very good Kyle. Relax as the others take their turns."

He turned to his fellow Masters, "This one is one we should keep our eye on, he has a lot of potential."

Jacob was the next up. The droid took a shot and Jacob deflected it into a wall away from him.

Though he could not "see" Zech's exact form with his eyes, he could feel the saber radiate with energy as he made his swift strikes. As he used the force to see (as best he could) Zech's movements, he noticed that he moved with an uncanny ability.

Thinking for a moment, Cypher realized that he was using the force to help him in Form IV. Replaying Zech's movements in his mind, he began trying to copy them. He struggled ever so slightly, but as he practiced it more and more, he began to understand the form slightly better and was able to wield the saber in an agressive manner.

Although not as impressive as Kyle, deflecting it was good.

He would wait for a few more shots until he change people.

Jacob prepared for another shot. This time the shot hit jacobs hand. Jacob still held on tight to the saber but was alittle set back by the mishap.

Master Zech was astounded at the ability of his student. He saw him try and try to perfect it, he mastered the way of wielding the saber aggresively and using the force acrobatically.

"Do you wish for a short duel? I would like to see your true potential."

And with that he ignited his saber, silver in color and longer than usual sabers.

Jacob prepared for another shot. This time the shot hit jacobs hand. Jacob still held on tight to the saber but was alittle set back by the mishap.

"One more shot, focus on the droid Jacob, and let your reflexes do the rest."

"I would be honored though I have no doubt that I am no match," Cypher said. "I am ready... any rules?" Cypher asked though he had already dropped into an attack position and began concentrating.

He decided to use Form IV, though he barely knew it, as it was an agressive form which would gave him the best chance versus a more experienced duelist.

Jacob Determand to impress his master this time watched the droid intently. The droid shot and Jacob deflected it right into the droid like Kyle.

"I would be honored though I have no doubt that I am no match," Cypher said. "I am ready... any rules?" Cypher asked though he had already dropped into an attack position and began concentrating.

He decided to use Form IV, though he barely knew it, as it was an agressive form which would gave him the best chance versus a more experienced duelist.

"Excellent. No rules except do not fatally wound the opponent, make them surrender."

He dropped into a defensive/agressive position. He decided to use Form V.

Zech awaited Cyphers move.

Jacob Determand to impress his master this time watched the droid intently. The droid shot and Jacob deflected it right into the droid like Kyle.

"Better Jacob, now relax. Who is next?"

"I guess I am......." As Ally steps up drawing her Saber.

Cypher bowed once again before launching into an attack. Using the force to enhance his speed and strength as best he could, he shifted from righ to left swinging his saber and prodding at a weak spot.

Jumping into the air through the use of the force, he propelled himself over Zech and brought the purple beam down as he turned.

"Okay Ally, try and do what Jacob and Kyle did, concectrate and deflect."

The droid readied itself for a shot

OOC: Is it too late for me?

Cypher bowed once again before launching into an attack. Using the force to enhance his speed and strength as best he could, he shifted from righ to left swinging his saber and prodding at a weak spot.

Jumping into the air through the use of the force, he propelled himself over Zech and brought the purple beam down as he turned.

Master Zech was caught off-guard by the skill Cypher used, he had never seen anyone move that fast before. His reflexes kicked in though as he blocked the saber behind him and forced Cypher back before launching into an attack himself. He used wide powerful swings hoping to knock Cypher of balance...

OOC: Is it too late for me?

Not at all, feel free to join in the fun :)

OOC: thanks, I've wanted to do a jedi academy rp for a long time now. mind if my character has an...unorthadox method of entry?

"Okay Ally, try and do what Jacob and Kyle did, concectrate and deflect."

The droid readied itself for a shot

The droid shot and hit Ally in the chest. She fell down Kyle jumped up to see if she was alright. "Are you alright Ally?" "I'm ok...." She got up and looked timidly at the droid.

When Cypher's attack was blocked by a well palced parry of Zech's, he was forced backward and into a defensive position. Zech began launching powerful attacks at Cypher's sides that forced him to parry and back up slowly.

He wasn't as comfortable in a defensive position and began faltering against Zech's blows. When he was almost sure that Zech would get past his saber, he used his strength of the force to leap out of reach. When he had a second, he regained his balance and composure and readied himself for the next volley of attacks.

OOC: thanks, I've wanted to do a jedi academy rp for a long time now. mind if my character has an...unorthadox method of entry?

No, it will spice things up a bit.

OOC: all right, i'll post it in about 20 minutes. maybe less. gotta walk le dog...

The droid shot and hit Ally in the chest. She fell down Kyle jumped up to see if she was alright. "Are you alright Ally?" "I'm ok...." She got up and looked timidly at the droid.

"Don't worry, those blasts cannot damage you fatally, it may sting but it will go away. Now Ally, do not be afraid, use the force to sense what the droid is going to do.

"Drexel Hillsville sir, sector G 10,5. My younger sister is hiding in the caves with some of our old neighbors. We had to leave our homes when They attacked. My freinds fathet managed to bring a long distance comunicator with him while we fled" Brendens eyes began to water as he thought of how They took his mother.

Brenden watched as the jedi master typed in the area and walked away to talk with another master. "Hello, is there anyone there?" he said into the console. Static. Then he heard a deep raspy voice saying, "They are dead, soon you will join them."

When Cypher's attack was blocked by a well palced parry of Zech's, he was forced backward and into a defensive position. Zech began launching powerful attacks at Cypher's sides that forced him to parry and back up slowly.

He wasn't as comfortable in a defensive position and began faltering against Zech's blows. When he was almost sure that Zech would get past his saber, he used his strength of the force to leap out of reach. When he had a second, he regained his balance and composure and readied himself for the next volley of attacks.

"Haha. very very good Cypher."

He sped up impressively and sweep kicked at Cypher's foot. If it failed he was ready to block and launch into attack again.

Kyle helped ally up and she stood up. She readyed her sword. the three boys yelled out inceragement to ally. She closed her eyes and relaxed. The droid shot and she deflected it into the wall.

Brenden watched as the jedi master typed in the area and walked away to talk with another master. "Hello, is there anyone there?" he said into the console. Static. Then he heard a deep raspy voice saying, "They are dead, soon you will join them."

Ren could sense something was wrong. He asked Po Liak if he could speak with him later, walked up to Brenden and asked what happened.

OOC: Hey this could be good we all go to the planet were he got that message and we fight some bad sith dude.

Kyle helped ally up and she stood up. She readyed her sword. the three boys yelled out inceragement to ally. She closed her eyes and relaxed. The droid shot and she deflected it into the wall.

"Good, you are making progress." Nia Gon said to Ally

"Another shot, concentrate with all your mind Ally." added Gaava

OOC: Hey this could be good we all go to the planet were he got that message and we fight some bad sith dude.

That is quite a good idea. Include some sort of cue into when we will.

Again Ally closed her eyes. The droid shot, and she deflected it again.

Zech successfully landed his blow to Cypher's calf. The contact knocked him off balance but his natural reactions kicked in and he jumped a few feet out of the way.

His new spot was unfortunately in the corner of the room so he prepared himself for another attack. He concentrated on the force and readied his next move.

That is quite a good idea. Include some sort of cue into when we will.

OOC:Hes gonna have to do that like he begs his master to go find out what happend to his sister or somtin.

"Good Ally, very good."

"James prepare yourself." said Master Xin Garlix

James steped up confadently and drew his blue saber. The droid shot and James deflected it.

Zech successfully landed his blow to Cypher's calf. The contact knocked him off balance but his natural reactions kicked in and he jumped a few feet out of the way.

His new spot was unfortunately in the corner of the room so he prepared himself for another attack. He concentrated on the force and readied his next move.

Though he thought the new spot was foolish he did not underestimate Cypher one bit. He launched into a devastating volley of attacks, and waited at the same time to see what Cypher would do.

"Perfect James, one more shot, and we will move onto the next test."

The droid shot at james. But james was looking at his master, he flet the force flowing threw him and he turned around and deflected the shot.

Though he thought the new spot was foolish he did not underestimate Cypher one bit. He launched into a devastating volley of attacks, and waited at the same time to see what Cypher would do.

As Zech approached wielding his lightsaber in a flurry of movements, Cypher waited for the opportune moment to make his move.

When Zech's silver blade was less than three feet from him, Cypher held his blade still and his raised his other hand towards Zech. In no time at all, he had released a force wave at Zech.

Ren could sense something was wrong. He asked Po Liak if he could speak with him later, walked up to Brenden and asked what happened.

"It's my sister sir, the voice on the communicator said that they were all dead. I have no one now. My sister and freinds are dead, My mother was kidnapped by Them, and My father is stuck in some godforsaken trench behind enemylines." His eyes started to water but he tried to hold back his fear, crying was a sign of weakness.

All four masters gasped when they saw this, he used the force to well and truly sense the shot.

"Very good all of you. Your master will now take you to seperate rooms to teach you technique."

The 4 said there goodbyes to eachother and followed there masters to there seprate rooms.

As Zech approached wielding his lightsaber in a flurry of movements, Cypher waited for the opportune moment to make his move.

When Zech's silver blade was less than three feet from him, Cypher held his blade still and his raised his other hand towards Zech. In no time at all, he had released a force wave at Zech.

Zech could not prepare for this and flew across the room into the wall.

He shut off his sabre. "Excellent Cypher, you are on of the best Jedi I have ever seen. You use the force and your sabre well. We shall resume training tomorrow. Shall I lead you to your room?"

Cypher smiled and said simply, "Thank you."

He walked across the room slowly and followed Zech to his room.

"It's my sister sir, the voice on the communicator said that they were all dead. I have no one now. My sister and freinds are dead, My mother was kidnapped by Them, and My father is stuck in some godforsaken trench behind enemylines." His eyes started to water but he tried to hold back his fear, crying was a sign of weakness.

"Don't worry lad. I'm sure they are fine, the person may be just trying to scare you." But he could feel a disturbance from that planet.

"Krubak..." He whispered to himself as he looked at the boy.

Cypher smiled and said simply, "Thank you."

He walked across the room slowly and followed Zech to his room.

Zech led him down the hall and into a large room full of technology rarely seen anywhere else. "This will be your residence during your training."

He walked out the door and assigned a fellow knight to patrol the area. He didn't want anything to happen to his best student.

Cypher thanked Zech and bowed to him as he left the room. When the door shut, he began tinkering with the different objects and examining what they did. When he had looked at most of the objects he decided that he would practice some more.

He launched into a flurry of attacks and parrys, as his mind conjured an enemy that he was fighting. He practiced for hours before settling on the ground and calming his blood flow. He began meditating and concentrating on using and wielding the force.

OOC:You gonna respond on to the post up there?

OOC:You gonna respond on to the post up there?

*patience*

*patience*
OOC: lol sorry, master.

Brendan calmed himself down and decided that if he wanted to make a difference he had to focus on the here and now. "Can we start my training now?" He asked his master.

OOC: I started a new thread that is tied in with my character here.

Brendan calmed himself down and decided that if he wanted to make a difference he had to focus on the here and now. "Can we start my training now?" He asked his master.

OOC: I started a new thread that is tied in with my character here.

Is it were we have the mission?

The 4 said there goodbyes to eachother and followed there masters to there seprate rooms.

Gaava was the first to teach his padawan. "This is Shi Cho, Form I, it uses basic techniques of fighting." He whirled his saber round and made jabbing gestures and parrying

"You have a go."

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Nia Gon took Ally to a sabre room.

"I shall teach you form II, it is powerful, elegant and require precise accuracy."

She began making parries, thrusts and small accurate slices.

"Do you want a go Ally?"

***************

Master Xin took Jacob into his own room.

"I shall teach you Form VI, it allows strengths in all parts of dueling and battle."

Xin used basic sabre moves and look at Jacob, "Can you do that?"

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Master Heth Mooba spoke to James, "You were very good back there, you have a good future ahead of you my boy. I will be teaching you Form IV, Ataru. Due to you having good force abilities, it will be good to you. You use the force to move around and use your strength to weaken your opponent."

He jumped around the room while spinning his sabre with skill.

"You try."

OOC: Its not the mission but it is the story of what's happening.

Gaava was the first to teach his padawan. "This is Shi Cho, Form I, it uses basic techniques of fighting." He whirled his saber round and made jabbing gestures and parrying

"You have a go."

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Nia Gon took Ally to a sabre room.

"I shall teach you form II, it is powerful, elegant and require precise accuracy."

She began making parries, thrusts and small accurate slices.

"Do you want a go Ally?"

***************

Master Xin took Jacob into his own room.

"I shall teach you Form VI, it allows strengths in all parts of dueling and battle."

Xin used basic sabre moves and look at Jacob, "Can you do that?"

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Master Heth Mooba spoke to James, "You were very good back there, you have a good future ahead of you my boy. I will be teaching you Form IV, Ataru. Due to you having good force abilities, it will be good to you. You use the force to move around and use your strength to weaken your opponent."

He jumped around the room while spinning his sabre with skill.

"You try."


Kyle: Alright, so what do I do first?
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Ally: "Yes Master" Ally began trying to do what her master was doing. But it was some what slopyer than her master.
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Jacob: Yes sir. Jacob draws his saber. It humed and he copyed what his master was doing.
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James: James draws his saber and Makes a high twirling jump.

Kyle: Alright, so what do I do first?
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Ally: "Yes Master" Ally began trying to do what her master was doing. But it was some what slopyer than her master.
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Jacob: Yes sir. Jacob draws his saber. It humed and he copyed what his master was doing.
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James: James draws his saber and Makes a high twirling jump.

Gaava: Attack me and then parry.
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Nia: That's okay, you will do better with practice, focus on the sabre and imagine there is an enemy in front of you.
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Xin: Very good
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Heth: Very good, now use the sabre during that

Gaava: Attack me and then parry.
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Nia: That's okay, you will do better with practice, focus on the sabre and imagine there is an enemy in front of you.
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Xin: Very good
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Heth: Very good, now use the sabre during that

Kyle attacked his master and then parryed.
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Ally Closed her eyes and visoned there was an enamy in fornt of her she made a few japs and then a slash.
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Jacob: Thankyou Master
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James jumped again and twirled his light saber around and then when he landed he did a fast down slash.

bump, the thread disapeared from the boards....

Kyle attacked his master and then parryed.
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Ally Closed her eyes and visoned there was an enamy in fornt of her she made a few japs and then a slash.
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Jacob: Thankyou Master
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James jumped again and twirled his light saber around and then when he landed he did a fast down slash.

Gaava: Good, he slashed down onto the parrying child
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Nia: Great, you may become good yet.
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Xin: You're welcome keep training, he said as he left the room
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Heth: Excellent, continue training. He left the room.

Gaava: Good, he slashed down onto the parrying child
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Nia: Great, you may become good yet.
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Xin: You're welcome keep training, he said as he left the room
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Heth: Excellent, continue training. He left the room.

Kyle block the oncoming attack and a burst of force came from his other hand. OOC: Child?
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Ally: Thankyou master
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Jacob: Yes master, He Made a series of slashes at the air.
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James: Yes master.

Kyle block the oncoming attack and a burst of force came from his other hand. OOC: Child?
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Ally: Thankyou master
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Jacob: Yes master, He Made a series of slashes at the air.
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James: Yes master.

OOC: sorry

Gaava flew back and landed on on the desk. "Very smart young Kyle." Continue practicing. He left to speak with the other Masters.
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Nia left the room and met with the other Masters outside in the council room.

OOC: Where's Kiraebana?

OOC: lol thats ok.

Kyle: yes master. He starts parying and slashing.
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Ally: Guess that means were done. Ally left the room to go find her friends.

OOC: Looks like someone is playing favorites, jk

ooc: lets cut out the OOC comments, unless attatched to a legit IC post.

IC:
Cypher continued to meditate until he was in such a calmed state it was apparent that he awake anymore.

All five masters met in the council chamber, Master Ishiak was already waiting for them

"How are the new students?"

"Cypher is a natural, he has almost mastered Ataru and has powerful command of the force."

"Young Kyle is very impressive. Deflected a shot back into a droid twice."

"Ally can be powerful when she concentrates, yet is quite timid."

"Jacob has a bright future in this Academy."

"James though, out of the four friends who arrived here, has the strongest power of the force. He used it to sense what the droid was doing even when he was focused on something else."

"Good, good." Ishiak commented "I look forward to seeing them during class tomorrow."

"Of course Master Ishiak." They all said in unison as they bowed and headed back to the bedrooms.

OOC: Can my people go back to there rooms now?

OOC: What about my guy? His master wasn't even in the room!

OOC: Can my people go back to there rooms now?

Most of them are in their bedrooms, if you want some to not be do so.

OOC: What about my guy? His master wasn't even in the room!

That is because he is with your character

OOC: Can my Character get an answer?

OOC: Ok i c

IC:

Ally walk into Kyles room were he was meditating.

Ally: Kyle?

Kyle: Hey Ally whats up?

Ally: I'm kinda nervouse.

Kyle: About what?

Ally: I dont know. this whole force thing.

Kyle: Dont be youll get used to it.

Ally: I hope your right. Well I'm gonna go to bed.

Kyle smiles "Ok good night", Ally smiles back at him night Kyle.

i wish to send my five thousand of my millitary trainees to the acadmy SOULY to be trained in how to fight with a sowrd figuring that you are more cababel to do this than i am. but only sowrds i do not want an form of force training involved. how long untill i can pick them up and send another goup of 5,000 students

Rotten one millitary Col.Juan Taboneya

i wish to send my five thousand of my millitary trainees to the acadmy SOULY to be trained in how to fight with a sowrd figuring that you are more cababel to do this than i am. but only sowrds i do not want an form of force training involved. how long untill i can pick them up and send another goup of 5,000 students

Rotten one millitary Col.Juan Taboneya

A few weeks should be sufficient for proper sword training

i wish to send my five thousand of my millitary trainees to the acadmy SOULY to be trained in how to fight with a sowrd figuring that you are more cababel to do this than i am. but only sowrds i do not want an form of force training involved. how long untill i can pick them up and send another goup of 5,000 students

Rotten one millitary Col.Juan Taboneya

why are you sending soldiers to a jedi academy...

funny how you made SOULY bold and underlined to emphasize it and yet it is actually spelled "solely"

OOC: Can my Character get an answer?

Terribly sorry, forgot about the post you made.

"If you feel up to it, I will have Master Ishiak look into the situation with your sister. Don't worry."

He took him into the same chamber that Kyle, Ally, Jacob and James had been in and told him to sit in the centre.

"Concentrate on anything in the room and try to make it float."

OOC: dude you will find that i can not spell for crap

any way I would like to keep a constant circulation of trainees coming in. would that be ok

why are you sending soldiers to a jedi academy...

funny how you made SOULY bold and underlined to emphasize it and yet it is actually spelled "solely"

What do you mean?

Terribly sorry, forgot about the post you made.

"If you feel up to it, I will have Master Ishiak look into the situation with your sister. Don't worry."

He took him into the same chamber that Kyle, Ally, Jacob and James had been in and told him to sit in the centre.

"Concentrate on anything in the room and try to make it float."


Brenden sat on the floor, looked around the room, and made a mental picture. He closed his eyes and focused on the chair near his master. He suceeded in sending it across the room. He then proceeded to do the same with the bookshelf.

Ren ducked as the chair came towards him, and laughed as the bookcase started to move, "This boy is just what we're looking for." he thought.

OOC: Ok can we skip to the next morning?

Brendan soon started trying to move multiple items at once. He was much less graceful at this and being his clumsy self accidentily hit himself with the chair.

OOC: Ok can we skip to the next morning?

OOC: Yes indeed we can

IC: "Brendan, it's getting late, I think you should rest, you took quite a hit there. We'll continue with the training tomorrow."

He led him to his room and then retired to his own chambers.

He began to meditate, his mind was full of questions of why the boys family was now gone.

After a good night's sleep, Cypher awoke before the sun rose and proceeded to complete his normal rituals. After meditating for an hour, he exited his room and began walking down the hall.

As he walked, he noticed that one of the jedi continued to follow him - though he didn't mind it. He went outdoors and sat under a tree to watch the sun rise.

Kyle awoke and walk out his door. He found Ally, Jacob And James sitting there waiting for him.

Kyle: Um have I kept you waiting?

Jacob: O no weve only been waiting here for an hour....

Ally: Jacob shut up. Its ok Kyle.

Kyle sits next to ally.

Kyle: So what are we doing?

James: Waiting to be told what to do.

Kyle: Sounds fair.

All throughout the night Brenden was plagued with nightmares about the fate of his family. When he woke up he had no energy. He tried to fall back asleep but every time he tried the images from the nightmares returned.

He left his room and took a walk around the Academy. He saw some other padawans talking and approached them. "Hi," He said, "I'm Brenden"

Zech was wandering throught the halls when he saw Cypher sitting outside. He didn't want to disturb him, but noticed the guard jedi sitting next to him so walked towards him anyway.

***************

Ishiak saw the five children waiting in the hallway and told them:

"Your Masters wait for you in the Council Chamber, take the 4th right." he pointed out where he meant.

He went to find Ren, he could sense something had been troubling him for some time.

As Cypher stared out toward the sun was rising he sensed the presence of Zech. "Beautiful morning?" Cypher said though he wasn't sure if Zech would catch onto the question part of it.

OOC: 5? 4 lol

Kyle: Yes master.

Kyle and the rest go and find there masters.

They enter and find there masters waiting for them.

"It is very beautiful. How do you like the Academy?" Zech said as he lay comfortably under the tree.

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Ishiak found Ren Vuric meditating in his chambers.

"Did you rest at all last night?"

"No, I had bad dreams."

"About Brendan?"

"Yes, I sense everything that happens to him. What happened to his sister still plagues me."

"Master Po Liak and I looked into it. It is as we feared. Your former Padawan has returned to seek vengeance."

"I hoped you wouldn't say that." he stood up "I have to find Brenden."

Gaava Lu was the first to speak:

"Today you will face the final test before you become a true Jedi."

Nia Gon added:

"Today you will have duels with a padawan. Whoever you face do not fatally injure them, make them surrender."

OOC: Jedis already?

Kyle: So we can take on any padawan?

"It is very beautiful. How do you like the Academy?" Zech said as he lay comfortably under the tree.

"It is quite pleasant from what I know of it so far," Cypher commented after a moment's pause. "I haven't had such a peaceful night's sleep in a long time."

"So... what do we do today?"

OOC: Jedis already?

Kyle: So we can take on any padawan?

OOC: Minor Jedi, my classes go Padawan, Minor Jedi, Jedi, Jedi Knight and so forth.

Gaava Lu spoke:

"Yes, any padawan." A group of padawans walked into the chamber. "Any of these, or someone from your own group."

OOC: Whos any of these?

"It is quite pleasant from what I know of it so far," Cypher commented after a moment's pause. "I haven't had such a peaceful night's sleep in a long time."

"So... what do we do today?"

"Today, we work on another Form, I hear Ren Vuric wants you to accompany him on a mission. And you will need to be in top shape."

He passed him a letter

OOC: Whos any of these?

Any of these is from the group of Padawan's in the chamber.

Kyle: Ok I'll take that one

OCC: Guess thats what I say?

"Today, we work on another Form, I hear Ren Vuric wants you to accompany him on a mission. And you will need to be in top shape."

He passed him a letter

"Very interesting," Cypher said as he propped himself up against the tree.

As Zech passed him the letter, he grinned slightly and passed it back, "I doubt I can sense what the writing on a piece of paper is... would you read it please."


ooc: piece of advice Dweladelfia. If you want the RP to go more smoothly you can take a little bit of liberty. This means you could write:

"That one there would be fine," Kyle said as he pointed to a tall boy with brown hair. He walked over to him and introduced himself.

You don't have to rely on Ftang for every little piece of info.

OOC: That is what you say, you can RP all the fights if you want.

IC: "Nice to meet you Kyle, I am Kuu Ramak. I am being trained by Master Ishiak himself, and so will not be easy to defeat."

The padawan's sabre flashed into action, everyone spread to the walls of the room so there was space. He charged towards Kyle almost immediately

"Very interesting," Cypher said as he propped himself up against the tree.

As Zech passed him the letter, he grinned slightly and passed it back, "I doubt I can sense what the writing on a piece of paper is... would you read it please."

It reads:

"Cypher, I am pleased with your progress.

And because of this, I would like you to join me on a mission to Drexel Hillsville to figure out what happened to a padawan's family. You are one of the few Jedi I see that are capable of such a mission.

Ren Vuric."

Kyle: Indeed

Kyle lifts his hand and force pushs the charging padawan away form him.

Kyle then takes out his saber and ignights it *Buzzzzzz* the green blade came into action. Kyle waited for the padawan to make his next move.

OOC: You can rp that padawan.

Kuu crashed into one of the chairs and bounced off it into the centre of the room.

Kuu: Well done, but you won't get time to gloat.

His blue sabre hummed as he jumped fast and high in the air, and came down slashing at Kyle.

It reads:

"Cypher, I am pleased with your progress.

And because of this, I would like you to join me on a mission to Drexel Hillsville to figure out what happened to a padawan's family. You are one of the few Jedi I see that are capable of such a mission.

Ren Vuric."

"Very good," Cypher said as he lept to his feet with ease. He strode to the door in a few brisk steps with his robe flowing in the early morning breeze. Pausing momentarily he turned back to Zech and asked, "Do you know where I might find Ren Vuric?"

Kyle jumped out of the way of the padawan and blocks his slash. Kyle then throws and side slash at the padawans side.

"I hear that he is currently in Hallway B, near where we trained together."

He turned and stared at the sky as Cypher walked away with his robes flowing behind him. "He is going somewhere, I am glad I am his Master." He relaxed and nodded off in the cool summer breeze.

Kyle jumped out of the way of the padawan and blocks his slash. Kyle then throws and side slash at the padawans side.

The padawan was unready for such an attack and narrowly missed pain. He used the force to jump behind Kyle and landed behind him in less than a second, slashing quickly at Kyles back.

"Thank you kindly," he said as he bowed to Zech and walked into the academy again. He proceeded to find his way about the academy until he found himself in Hallway B.

Noticing an imposing looking man he walked over to him and bowed his head, "Pardon me, sir. Are you Master Ren Vuric?"

Kyle quickly throws his sword over his shoulder and spins around. The 2 padawans sabers were now locked each pushing at each other swords.

He nodded,

"Yes I am, and you must Cypher. You are an impressive student. I heard you bested Master Zech in combat, not an easy thing to do."

Kuu tried to push his saber forward but only found he was being pushed back. He couldn't be defeated, Master Ishiak had trained him. Then a thought came to mind and he put all his power into a force push...

Kyle was thrown back onto the wall but he found his footing and pushed off the wall towards Kuu. He struk at Kuu with a stronge down thrust.

Kuu flew backwards after being knocked down by Kyle, and the boys blade landed near his throat....

OOC: sry it took me so long to get this up.

Hilard ran. He was running through a thick, humid jungle, stumbling over roots and small bushes as he ran. Panting, he hurled himself behind a tree as a blaster bolt flew into it, sending splinters flying. One hit him above the left eye and he cried out in pain and began sprinting towards what he thought was the treeline.

He crashed out into an open plain before a large temple of sorts. He did not know what it was, but it seemed to draw him towards it. He ran from the men behind him, towards the temple, trying to reach its safety before they to reached the clearing and had an open shot at him.

Mere feet from a doorway, he felt a blasterbolt slam into his back and he screamed out in pain. He stumbled towards the door, trying to force it open, but he passed out.


OOC: just so you know, because i dont want you all getting confused finding this dead guy, he was hallucinating all of that. He actually was running to the jedi temple, but he was not shot, and there were no men. Just for clarification purposes.

Kyle: Give up?

He nodded,

"Yes I am, and you must Cypher. You are an impressive student. I heard you bested Master Zech in combat, not an easy thing to do."

"Thank you very much," Cypher said as he bowed his head. "He is a good teacher..."

"I recieved your letter..."

Master Po Liak opened the doors to see a man standing before him

"And you are?"

"I guess I give." Kuu switched off his sabre and stood up to congratulate Kyle..

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"You did, great. You already know what the mission is. It is in fact my new Padawan's family that have been killed and I fear it was an old aquaintance of mine. We shall leave tomorrow, train today. You may need it."

He shook Cypher's hand and wondered off to find Brendan.

"I guess I give." Kuu switched off his sabre and stood up to congratulate Kyle..

You did great to. Kyle Bows, and switchs off his sword.

"Ah... I see," Cypher said as he bowed and left to go back outside.

When he arrived at his previous spot he found Zech still lying under the tree.

"He told me I was to train for the rest of the day..."

Hilard slowly got to his feet, looking around frantically, and then a relieved expression came over his face.

"Was running...chased...shot...it...nothing...halluci..." He panted trying to catch his breath.

He stood up straight and stuck out his hand to this new-found man.

"My name is Hilard Draxz. I am wondering if you could kindly lend me some shelter for a few days?"

You did great to. Kyle Bows, and switchs off his sword.

"Who wishes to duel next?"

Hilard slowly got to his feet, looking around frantically, and then a relieved expression came over his face.

"Was running...chased...shot...it...nothing...halluci..." He panted trying to catch his breath.

He stood up straight and stuck out his hand to this new-found man.

"My name is Hilard Draxz. I am wondering if you could kindly lend me some shelter for a few days?"

He shook the stranger's hand

"My name if Po Liak, Master of the Jedi here. Follow me to your room. You look like you need rest."

Jacob Steps up.

"I guess I will."

I would like to fight her (points to a girl in the crowed of padawans.)

"Ah... I see," Cypher said as he bowed and left to go back outside.

When he arrived at his previous spot he found Zech still lying under the tree.

"He told me I was to train for the rest of the day..."

Zech awoke quickly

"Did he now? Well, it is a dangerous mission. You most likely tuned your meditation during the night. So we will go straight into learning Form III. Get ready and meet me where we trained before." He got up and strode to his room to get his sabre.

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Ren finally found Brendan talking to some other Padawans.

"Good morning Master Ren." The padawans said.

"Good morning, may I speak to Brenden here alone." The padawans walked off around the corner.

"I have some news about what happened to your family...."

Jacob Steps up.

"I guess I will."

I would like to fight her (points to a girl in the crowed of padawans.)

"I am Grace Allburn." her orange sabre started and she approached Jacob and saluted. Then dropped into a defensive position.

"Right then," Cypher said as he strode off to the training room. He entered in and sat down crossed legged on the floor, waiting for Zech to arrive.

Form III, eh

Zech entered the room and found Cypher already there. "Are you ready to learn?" Knowing what the answer would be anyway.

He began performing classic moves of Form III. It used moves tight to the body to totally protect the user, and used little energy.

"I am Grace Allburn." her orange sabre started and she approached Jacob and saluted. Then dropped into a defensive position.

Jacob drew his saber. He ignighted it. The blue blade came out and Jacob saluted back. He Prepares for an attack.

Grace used Form III and so was very defensive, but unleashed an assault upon Jacob as quick as lightning.

Zech entered the room and found Cypher already there. "Are you ready to learn?" Knowing what the answer would be anyway.

He began performing classic moves of Form III. It used moves tight to the body to totally protect the user, and used little energy.

"Quite defensive, no?" Cypher said as he got to his feet.

I doubt I have the patience to use such a style, but I may as well learn it.

"Well... I will give it a try," Cypher said as he studied the movements of the blade through sound and force. It seemed simple enough to him as he ignited his lightsaber and brought it closed to his body. He began making quick tight movements back and forth across his body as to cover its entirety.

"Seems more useful against a blaster..."

ooc: note* italics are thoughts

Jacob caught off gaurd jumped back and blocked and then slashs at his adversary.

Grace defended herself well, and pushed away every attack thrown at her. She catapulted herself off a nearby table into Jacob.

"It is a pleasure to make your acquantince Po Liak."

Hilard followed Po inside and was astonished to see a very well furbished interior, not just dull gray stone like he was expecting.

Catching up to Po leading the way, he said "So this is a school for jedi? What do you teach want-to-becomes?"

Zech heard his Padawan:

"It is, but can deal well against sabres as well. If you master this, and Ataru. You will be unstoppable." he said with confidence.

At that moment Ishiak burst into the room, "Sorry to interrupt, but I need to speak to you Zech."

"I'll just be a minute Cypher."

"We teach 'want-to-becomes' how to use the force and a lightsabre, like this one." He ignited his sabre, and a yellow blade appeared.

"Your room is to the left. Feel free to talk to me or any other Jedi you encounter."

"Not a problem," Cypher said as he watch Zech talk with Ishiak.

While he was waiting he mulled over Zech's words about mastering both. He decided to do his best to learn Form III and IV.

He continued to practice Form III though he also through in some Form IV to practice a change in battle.

Hilard was slightly startled by the Jedi showing him his lightsaber, it was a fairly sudden gesture and it threw him off a little.

"Actually, let me ask you a question. How would I go about...enrolling...in this academy for Jedi. I have long wished to increase my skills with a saber and I have heard many stories in bars about this Force you speak of."

"Zech, some troopers have been seen on in the forest. I need you to join me fight them."

"Of course."

He tried to talk to Cyphers's mind I'll be back soon, just going to a skirmish

He followed Ishiak to the doors and scanned the area for trooper presence...

Grace defended herself well, and pushed away every attack thrown at her. She catapulted herself off a nearby table into Jacob.

Jacob trys and stops the table and inturn throws it at Grace.

OOC: Mind if I join? As the most powerful Jedi Order in NS, I shall send someone to inspect the place and approval-stamp it. :)

IC:
"Master Alex. A few days ago, a Jedi Academy has begun training students in the ways of the Force in a nation known as Ftang. We've just recieved an open message from them." A Knight reported to the Patriarch Alexander Masaki, High Councilor of the Jedi Order and head of government of the Jurai faction of the Coreworlds.

"Ah. Thank you, Ginny. I'll take it from here." Old Alex answered. Some people say he's the spitting image of the very late Count Dooku, complete with white hair and curved lightsaber hilt. Not to mention crackling lightning attacks. The old man smiled at that little comparison. At least I'm a little kinder than that old coot.

He gave the latest report some thought and decided that it would be a good idea to send someone to take a look at how they train the students and such. He pressed a button. "Erica? Are any of the Masaki Brothers available?"

"Uh, yes sir. Jacob's just come back from the front of Neo Zeta's civil war. Daniel's training some students in the Fountain Gardens. And Taylor? I think he's trying to get a girlfriend, with, uh, interesting results." The Patriarch's personal secretary giggled.

"Another normal day in the life of my grandkids." Alex smiled warmly. "Find them and bring them in. I have a little mission for them."

"All three of them, sir?"

"Yes."

"Very well. Give me a couple of moments, please."

-----

A few hours later in hyperspace...

"Now tell me again why we're doing this?" Taylor grumbled. He's a mid-twenties Knight the size of a teenager (and is extremely touchy about being only five foot four inches) and wears a red cloak over a black jacket, red T-shirt and black cargo pants. He also has a dirty-blond braid running down his neck and bangs running down his face and his eyes are steel-blue. His lightsaber color is red and his specialty is pyrokinesis, as noted by the fire symbol on the front of his red shirt and the back of his cloak. Oh yes, forgot to mention that he has prosthetic limbs replacing his right arm and left leg strong enough to stand up to his flame powers.

"Besides the fact that Grandpa told us to, it's a good idea to meet new Jedi Academies to keep in touch with them." Jacob Masaki sighed. Here is Jacob, twin brother of Taylor. The same age and basic looks as his brother, his browner hair parts to the right as if combed that way and he doesn't have a hairtail but his eyes match his brother's. A medium blue cloak strides his shoulders with a complex symbol on his back (http://upload.wikimedia.org/wikipedia/en/0/05/White_transmutation_circle.jpg) and another symbol decepting a serpent stridling a cross on his green shirt. These two symbols, along with a silver watch he keeps on a rung of his navy blue cargo pants, denote him as an alchemist, and a powerful one to boot. His lightsaber color is silver.

"And of course, we could teach the kids some real neat stuff, like how to fight small-fry." I smirked, knowing what's about to happen. Oh, hi. I'm Daniel Masaki, the Lightning Master. As my title says, I have the power of electricity as my main specialty. I'm the eldest brother of the Masaki Clan. My clothing, well, it's a standard light brown cloak with the lightning symbol on my back, a grey-white untucked shirt with the buttons open and a blue T-shirt underneath with the same symbol as my cloak. My hair is brown and has a very long (like a yard) braid running down my back and my eyes are brown. My lightsabers (yes, two) are blue and green, respectively.

Taylor immediately steamed up in anger at being called 'small-fry'. "I'm not a small-fry who can be eaten up by a larger fish in one gulp!!" He tried to land a punch on me, but a little static electricity stopped him with a zap. His hair stood on end, making Jacob and me laugh.

"Anyway, we're coming up on Ftang. Reverting to realspace...now!" I cried, pulling back the lever of our little ship, Much Ado About Nothing. "Jacob, start the music!"

"Right-o!" He answered.

Ftang traffic control, this is the Jedi representatives of the Coreworlds requesting clearance to land at the Academy.

Hilard was slightly startled by the Jedi showing him his lightsaber, it was a fairly sudden gesture and it threw him off a little.

"Actually, let me ask you a question. How would I go about...enrolling...in this academy for Jedi. I have long wished to increase my skills with a saber and I have heard many stories in bars about this Force you speak of."

"You just need to talk to Master Ishiak, he leads us and so controls who enters. He should be coming this way, he normally patrols this area."

He walked to his chambers turning his sabre off...

"I'll do that, thank you."

He watched Po walk away and thought that he too would like to be part of this academy...

Coreworlds representatives, you may land now. A space is being cleared for you in the hanger.

"Zech, some troopers have been seen on in the forest. I need you to join me fight them."

"Of course."

He tried to talk to Cyphers's mind I'll be back soon, just going to a skirmish

He followed Ishiak to the doors and scanned the area for trooper presence...


Cypher her Zech's voice in his head though he was quite familiar with that type of thing and remained unsettled. He continued to practice the forms, determined to master them, until Zech's return.

Ishiak met a man named Hilard on his way to the door and asked to speak to him later.

"Zech do you see anything?"

"I see ten in the clearing, and a further fifteen behind them."

Both ignited their sabers. "Let's do this."

Both Master's jumped and ambushed the troopers. Cutting down five in an instant. Zech mastery of Ataru enabled him to hack through all of the troopers before him. Ishiak had mastered all seven forms and so this posed no problem with Zech there.

Within minutes the area was littered with the bodies of old Imperial Troopers. "That'll teach them to come here." said Ishiak.

They entered the Academy and Ishiak spoke to the person he met earlier as Zech returned to the training room...

Jacob trys and stops the table and inturn throws it at Grace.

Grace force pushed the table to the side and unleshed her attacks on Jacob once more."

Jacob Blocks, Then he force pushs Grace.

Grace flew away and hit the wall, she was obviously in pain, but stood up and switched her sabre off. "Well done Jacob."

Jacob smiles you to. Are you ok?

Seeing that Zech had returned Cypher didn't pause his practice of Form III and IV, but asked, "How went the battle... good I assume sensing that you are alive."

"Yes, thankyou. You are an impressive student." She bowed and dissapeared into the crowd.

"James, Ally, who wishes to fight next?"

James steps up I do and I want to fight my sister.

Seeing that Zech had returned Cypher didn't pause his practice of Form III and IV, but asked, "How went the battle... good I assume sensing that you are alive."

"Good, just some troopers trying to scout. Let's just say they won't be scouting anymore." He sniggered and noticed that Cypher was still practising.

"Very good. You seem to use them both well. Ren will definately be pleased."

James steps up I do and I want to fight my sister.

"Are you ok with that Ally?"

OOC: I guess you will rp both of them then?

Coreworlds representatives, you may land now. A space is being cleared for you in the hanger.
"All right. We're coming down." I said. And so I took the Much Ado About Nothing and zoomed it down to the hangar bay.

OOC:
For a better idea of the characters:

Taylor (http://izumi-c.musiccafe.jp/img/jacket/SVWC-7212.JPG)

Jacob (http://www.fullmetal-alchemist.com/gallery/data/media/3/AlphonseElric2838.jpg)

Daniel (http://astro.temple.edu/~mriver06/duo.jpg)

"Good, just some troopers trying to scout. Let's just say they won't be scouting anymore." He sniggered and noticed that Cypher was still practising.

"Very good. You seem to use them both well. Ren will definately be pleased."

"Thank you..." Cypher said without breaking his concentration. He continued practicing for a moment more before turning his lightsaber off. "Is there anything else? Or should I continue to practice III and IV for the time bein?" he asked.

"If you wish to learn another technique, say so. Otherwise I will train you in the force some more."

OOC: Ya

Ally: I guess so.

James drew and swiched on his saber the blue blade came out and he prepared for the battle.

Ally swiched on her blade. Her blade was Blue also.

James charge Ally with a series of swipes. Ally fended them off, she side swiped her brother. But james efortlessly dogeged out of the way and he force pushs his sister into the wall. Ally gets up and moans. She jumps over and down slashs her brother.

James: Is that the best you can do?

Ally: Shut your mouth.

Ally then fakes a down slash but in a split second hits james' blade so hard it knocks his blade out of his hand. She points her blade at his throat.

Ally: Give up yet?

James: Yes.......

Master Ishiak, Kiabu Shuur, Po Liak and Clieeg Kabi awaited the Coreworld Jedi. As they were the largest Jedi trainers ever, it was important to get good relations with them.

"Very Impressive all of you. Especially Kyle and Ally. I think Ishiak would like to train you further."

He signalled for everyone to leave.

"If you wish to learn another technique, say so. Otherwise I will train you in the force some more."

"Either would be much appreciated," Cypher said. "Though I think at this point learning some forces moves would be nice."

"Very well then. Try and sense what I am doing and copy it." He performed a wall-run and leapt off landing right in front of Cypher without making a sound.

Master Ishiak, Kiabu Shuur, Po Liak and Clieeg Kabi awaited the Coreworld Jedi. As they were the largest Jedi trainers ever, it was important to get good relations with them.
"Hey there." I called as I stepped down and bowed. "I'm Daniel Masaki, Jedi Master. My brothers Taylor and Jacob, Jedi Knights."

"Yo." "Hi." The twins bowed as well.

"We're here on behalf of the Jedi Council to take a look around this Academy and maybe do a few things here." I smiled.

The nation of X Wings sends a 100 man delegation to be trained. [bows]

"Ah... the running part will be easy, its the sound that makes it difficult," Cypher commented as he prepared himself for the manuever.

All of a sudden he was off... running across the wall until he reached his previous spot. He lept of the wall and landed in front of Zech with a muffled sound.

"Hmm.... not ideal," Cypher commented when he finished. "How do I completely surpress the noise... will of force?"

"Very Impressive all of you. Especially Kyle and Ally. I think Ishiak would like to train you further."

He signalled for everyone to leave.

They left the room.

Kyle: Good job on the battle Ally.

Ally smiles. "Thankyou Kyle." She keeps smiling as Kyle walks away.

Ishiak approached and nodded. "We are honoured to have you here. Feel free to look around. Master Po Liak will be your guide should you want one. I am the leading Master of this order. I look forward to seeing how your people use the force and sabre."

"Ah... the running part will be easy, its the sound that makes it difficult," Cypher commented as he prepared himself for the manuever.

All of a sudden he was off... running across the wall until he reached his previous spot. He lept of the wall and landed in front of Zech with a muffled sound.

"Hmm.... not ideal," Cypher commented when he finished. "How do I completely surpress the noise... will of force?"

"Indeed, this can be a good tactic when using Ataru, as you can ambush someone before they knew you were near. Concentrate as if you were landing on glass that would break if you used any force what-so-ever. Then you will land quietly."

We are happy to be hear.

"Men attention and draw"

Men get into attention with lightsabers out and ready

The nation of X Wings sends a 100 man delegation to be trained. [bows]

We shall welcome them with open arms

Ishiak approached and nodded. "We are honoured to have you here. Feel free to look around. Master Po Liak will be your guide should you want one. I am the leading Master of this order. I look forward to seeing how your people use the force and sabre."
"I'm sure it'll be an electrifying experience, my friends." I smirked, ignoring the groans of the twins about my pun. "Anyway, we would like a little tour, if that's ok with you."

yes a tour would be nice

"That is fine." He signalled for Po Liak to come forth.

"Follow me, I shall show you the Academy up close."

OOC: So what are my people saposed to do now?

yes a tour would be nice

Master Cliegg Kabi will take your men on a tour.

"Indeed, this can be a good tactic when using Ataru, as you can ambush someone before they knew you were near. Concentrate as if you were landing on glass that would break if you used any force what-so-ever. Then you will land quietly."

"Ah... I see," Cypher said as he mulled over the idea.

In a brief second, he had again lept onto the wall and began running. He lept off and landed on a wooden table without a noise. "Very good..."

OOC: So what are my people saposed to do now?

OOC: Have them do a little story between them. And I shall maybe include them in a skirmish?

"Yes sir, we will follow our guild now"

OOC: Now, to teach you, Padawans. Be sure to describe things as much as you possibly can, because on a tour, description is key to a good picture. Look at how I described my characters, for example. Just remember to think of this as a story you guys are writing.

IC:
"Thanks. Lead the way." I nodded.

OOC: A story a skirmish what?

"Yes. Now do this," He pushed off the table and backflipped onto the bookcase and shot forward creating a dent in the wall.

"This is good when you want to knock something or someone away from you. And evade combat."

Jedi Todd: Ok, I understand. Backflips over X wing parked in Hanger

OOC: A story a skirmish what?


OOC: More troopers may show up, and one of the Masters will ask for their help, if I confused you sorry.

Ok lol are these galactic empire?

OOC: Now, to teach you, Padawans. Be sure to describe things as much as you possibly can, because on a tour, description is key to a good picture. Look at how I described my characters, for example. Just remember to think of this as a story you guys are writing.

IC:
"Thanks. Lead the way." I nodded.

"First we have the Council chamber." He raised his arms to show the guests the room they were in. A Large round room with large silver pillars lining the walls and meeting in the centre of the of ceiling. 12 seats lined the walls with a large round hologram projecter sat near the middle chair. "That is where Master Ishiak sits."

Ok lol are these galactic empire?

Imperial Remnant more like. So be prepared....lol

"Yes. Now do this," He pushed off the table and backflipped onto the bookcase and shot forward creating a dent in the wall.

"This is good when you want to knock something or someone away from you. And evade combat."

"Yes I believe I know that move well..." Cypher said with a grin of rememberance. He backflipped onto the wall and the second his feet touched, he shot forward with immense power. He slammed into the opposite wall, creating a large "dent". Though in fact is more like a partial shattering of the wall as a large chunk was missing, the wall appeared cracked, and many little pieces of the wall were crumbling off and falling to the ground.

"Easy enough..." Cypher said as he got to his feet and brushed his robes off.

Imperial Remnant more like. So be prepared....lol

lol i c well i gtg ill be back later tonight so dont bring the troops tell then o and dont have like 11 more pages when i get back dont wanna have to read them all lol.

Jedi Todd: Ok, I understand. Backflips over X wing parked in Hanger

"We will go a different way to Po Liak. Here is he Training Room, this is where we train jedi in the ways of the force and sabre techniques." A medium sized room lay before them. Huge pillars lined the walls. A circle was in the centre. "That is where we meditate." Bookcases and chairs littered the east wall, some overturned from the last session. "Students levitate those objects during meditation training. Now if you will follow me."

"First we have the Council chamber." He raised his arms to show the guests the room they were in. A Large round room with large silver pillars lining the walls and meeting in the centre of the of ceiling. 12 seats lined the walls with a large round hologram projecter sat near the middle chair. "That is where Master Ishiak sits."
"Nice place." Taylor commented. "Looks kind of like the one back home."

"Mmhmm." I nodded. Council chambers don't change very much, I see.

OOC:
Next little lesson for you young Padawans of Nationstates. One line sentences are weak *zaps them*. Each sentence must begin with a capital and end with a punctuation (looks at X Wings). See how I do it. Understand?

"Yes I believe I know that move well..." Cypher said with a grin of rememberance. He backflipped onto the wall and the second his feet touched, he shot forward with immense power. He slammed into the opposite wall, creating a large "dent". Though in fact is more like a partial shattering of the wall as a large chunk was missing, the wall appeared cracked, and many little pieces of the wall were crumbling off and falling to the ground.

"Easy enough..." Cypher said as he got to his feet and brushed his robes off.

"Very good Cypher. Now something more challenging. Do this." He focused and a forcefield appeared around him. These were inpregnable to blaster shots yet were weak against sabres.

OOC: Thank you for pointing that out to some of these more un-experianced writers CW. One line posts bother me, try to beef 'em up a little, add some flavor. Yes, food is on the mind...

I understand

"Hmmm...." Cypher thought momentarily as he examined the forcefield. Its power radiated as he used the force to look at it. "I shall try..."

Cypher began to concentrate intensely as he tried to make a forcefield appear. A dim field appeared around him briefly but wavered and disappeared. He sighed as the field disappeare completely and he stopped his attempt.

Noticing that Zech's field was still glowing intensely, Cypher redoubled his efforts. His misty eyes swirled intensely as he concentrated on wielding the force. After a few brief moments, he was able to make a constant field appear around him - weak... but apparent.

OOC: Thank you for pointing that out to some of these more un-experianced writers CW. One line posts bother me, try to beef 'em up a little, add some flavor. Yes, food is on the mind...
OOC: You're welcome. Indeed, imagination is key in all these things. Much to learn, you younglings still have. But teach you, I will, and better writers you will become, hmm?

I understand

What an ironic answer.

CW:
Stow it Yoda :p

"The next room is the sabre room." Po Liak told Taylor. The room was one big square. Each wall had racks of sabres on them for dueling or simple giving out of sabres to padawans. The room had orange walls and a white ceiling, all had pictures of the great duelists known to the Order. You could see a picture of Yoda, one of Cin Drallig. Many more were hanging from the walls. The room was not as tall as the council chamber, but had more colourful pillars.

OOC: Ah the irony of x-wings response...it does indeed tickle my funny bone...

"Hmmm...." Cypher thought momentarily as he examined the forcefield. Its power radiated as he used the force to look at it. "I shall try..."

Cypher began to concentrate intensely as he tried to make a forcefield appear. A dim field appeared around him briefly but wavered and disappeared. He sighed as the field disappeare completely and he stopped his attempt.

Noticing that Zech's field was still glowing intensely, Cypher redoubled his efforts. His misty eyes swirled intensely as he concentrated on wielding the force. After a few brief moments, he was able to make a constant field appear around him - weak... but apparent.

Zech dropped his field and looked up at Cypher. He had managed to form a field around him. "Do not worry, you will get better in time." He looked outside, the sun was beginning to set as he scanned the horizon. "If you wish to continue your training, seek out Master Ren, as I am heading to my Chambers. There is something I must do." And with that he walked out of the room.

"The next room is the sabre room." Po Liak told Taylor. The room was one big square. Each wall had racks of sabres on them for dueling or simple giving out of sabres to padawans. The room had orange walls and a white ceiling, all had pictures of the great duelists known to the Order. You could see a picture of Yoda, one of Cin Drallig. Many more were hanging from the walls. The room was not as tall as the council chamber, but had more colourful pillars.
"Colorful room. Full of all types of sabers." Jacob observed. He pointed to a long one. "There's a double-bladed design."

"Rare, that." Taylor said. "Hard to train with one, but the results are often worth it."