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Threw the chaotic fighting Jack saw Locutus. He saw another guy, Brianna, and what to be a bounty hunter. Jack pushed a button to engited his lightsaber. "There is no death, there is the Force" Jack ran up to Locutus.

"Lord Locutus you will die for the pain you caused to the Jedi."

Jack ran foward toward Locutus with his force speed.

Locutus saw jack, and laughed. Jack pulled his blade up to strike. It never landed. Locutus stopped jack before he could strike."Did you honestly think that would work? Did you think that a saber strike would get me?" With that he let go of jack, and pushed him against a wall.

Liam had programmed Coruscant's coordinates into the system and in no time they were heading across the galaxy to the main planet of the Jedi. When they landed, Liam took care of a little business before heading off again into hyperspace. He also ordered a droid onboard his personal ship to follow him and pick him after he dropped off his cargo.

Liam flew through hyperspace before landing on a distant planet with his own ship not far behind. He unloaded the bodies of Brianna and Maximus and quickly boarded his own ship were he took off again into hyperspace...

"No where is Ershuude! Tell me you fool." Jack yelled as his angry grew. Charging again at Lord Locutus angry and hatered filled his hard.

"did I say you could get up?" locutus asked sarcastically "Sit back dowd" with that he shuved jack back up against the wall. Where he is is of none of your concern." he simply laughed. "you could not kill me now, even if i wanted you to!"

Even though he was up against wall he still was waving around his lightsaber. Angry cloud his thoughts. He pushed a button to alert his special unit. They came and started to shoot at Locutus.

locutus laughed "this is gonna be grand". Before any of the lasers hit, he ducked and weaved, around them (matrix style). Then he pressed a button of his own, and five droids came out of the surrounding shadows. The two battle droid ones deflected the rest of the shots that were aimed at locutus. The two Hk models. Shot back at the troopers forcing them to take cover behind rocks. Thats when the last droid went into action. He took of his cape, and pulled out four lightsabers, then his arms seperated, and he ignited all four blades. They were all crimson. The droid charged and quickly mopped up the troopers. They now all laid dead.

"No" Charging toward the lightsaber droid he used force push to make one fall into the lava. "Come on you patheic robots you want fight?" While saying this he threw his lightsaber into one and jumped to pick it up. Landing while getting his lightsaber.

Kindly locutus said, "you know I will help you here, I will save your life by giving you a good tip. The tip i'm gonna give you is that you might not want to attack them, and that you might want to sit down and drop the lightsaber. Fighting these droids won't do you any good." with that he gave a good long laugh, and looked over at the lava. Jack looked over, and was horrified. The droid came, out covered in lava. Then it shook itself off like a dog, sending lava everywhere. Some of it hit locutus's armor, and just sizzled there. Some of it also hit jack in the arm. It started burning.

Feeling the burning Jack let his lightsaber go and fell to the ground. He could fight anymore with the angry inside.

Locutus pushed the button again and they dissapeared. He then looked down at Jack. "It was foolish of you to come here and you know it. You and your jedi friends have sealed the fait of these troopers. They will die because you wanted to destroy us so bad. And now, you jack, are filled with anger, the type of anger you swore to defend against. The path you are taking will only lead to the dark side. And with it, you will lose your friends, your mentors, your place among the jedi, and maybe your life. Don't you feel like you've wasted your life?" With that he kicked jack's lightsaber to him, and laughed.

"Die!..." Jack said as he got his lightsaber and tried to pick himself up. He fell down again and closed his eyes. The strength in him was barely none. Lying on the floor he passed out.

He then began looking out onto the battlefield. The battle was raging. left and right explosions shook the planet. Troopers and droids were flying everywhere. The droids were steadily pushing the troopers back towards one of the larger lava veins. There he hoped the last of the troopers would be snuffed out. Locutus could only guess as to where Brianna was at, But something told him that soon enough he would know. What Bosphan was up to was beyond locutus knowledge. HE hadn't seen bosphan sinse he gave him the order to find the jedi.

The next couple of weeks went by, Locutus had put Jack in a holding cell, and he kept watching the battle. He didn't dare enter the battle, as he rather didn't want to get involed with the jedi at the time. He just stood on the cliff and watched, as inch by inch the droids puched the troopers back. THe troopers fought for every inch they could, but they didn't stand a chance against the droids. Still locutus was unaware of the doings of his apprentices. He was getting worried. It was not like brianna to just dissapear, even if this time she was captured. Something didn't feel right to him. Countless times through the weeks he meditated to try and find her. Of late, he couldn't even feel her presence in the force. That was never a good sign. He started thinking, and he thought for a while. Meanwhile the battle was dragging out.

"Brianna. We'll get you a workbench and materials. One last question, who would put a locating device on our ship. This means we move the labs. That's a week's worth of work, but we have robots for that. And might I warn you not to meditate as it might short out the Disruptors...in fact, hold still." Bella said, shooting her with a Disruption pistol. "That'll take care of the problem for a while, I'll have to reshoot you in a week. Ok robots, go to work." She finished as around fifty droids started breaking down the lab and moved them into a Liberator Class Star Destroyer.

ooc: CM, if you had read my post, Liam dumped the ship with the tracker on it and transfered to another one before coming to the facility to drop of Brianna and Maximus... but whatever, this works fine.
IC:

"Ah!" Brianna yelled as she was hit by the force disruptor; she felt quite hollow inside; even more so than when the Force Disruptor's were activated. After a moment though, she rubbed it off and continued on to the star destroyer. Where they were bound... she didn't know.

Happy New Year!

OOC: I didn't break the continuity, he did by godmoding my character. Remember, I posted my guy returning on his own, in his own ship, but not knowing why.

ooc: ok im back

IC:

Ershuude woke up. This all seemed very familiar. "Damn it, why am I always the one who gets captured." He found a metal pipe that had fallen from the ceiling. Using it as a crutch he went towards the wall. he felt along it and found dents and sratches and something that felt like dried blood. He had been in this room before. What was it five years, maybe six. Ershuude didn't want to be here ever again. He reached out through the force but nothing but dark emptiness came to him. He used puched the wall barley felling it through his durasteel knuckles. He became frustrated and flirted with the dark side as he had several years before. Using Force Lightning he cast a wave of it at the wall. The Lighting hit the wall and drilled a small hole in it. he looked out the hole and saw droids runing back and forth. He cast lightning at some of them. He couldn't help laughing as they fell to the ground and shortcirceted. "This could entertain me for hours," he said. It did.

Locutus was still outside watching the battle. HE was standing near a panel that held all the droid controls. As he watched, he noticed that some of the droids in the compound were being destroyed. He flipped up a map, and checked to see where they were. To confirm his beliefs they were all near the holding cells when they were being destroyed. Regretfally he left his view of the battle. He went into the compound. There he went to the holding cell and opened the door...

Jack heard the sounds of droids being destroyed. That must be Ershuude. He felt something different about Ershuude. Picking himself up he laid on the wall. Looking around for his lightsaber he was getting out of here. Using the force push he blew the wall open. Jack wondered where his lightsaber was. After searching he found his lightsaber and lighted it. Some droids saw him. He pushed them into the wall and slashed them. Running out of the fortess, he saw the clones still fighting. The droids were about to get some hell.

Locutus felt this wave of force, and then got fed up. He went over to Ershuude and used force drain on him to prevent him from continuing his destructive manner. Then he locked the door and went after Jack. He found him walking out the door, and without being noticed locutus let out a large bolt of force lighting at jack.

Ershuude felt himself weakening. He gave one last burst of Lightning then stopped. He was exahsted. He laid down and went to sleep...

Jack felt something behind him. He ran out of the way. Lord Locutus used lighting against him. If he didn't get out of the way he would have been knocked out. Someone came behind Locutus. The person used lighting too, but this time it hit Locutus. The person fell to the ground. It was Ershuude. Jack thought for a second. How could Ershuude learn a Sith move?

Locutus, who at the time didn't have his helmet on, felt the lightning hit him in the back. he didn't even move, he just rolled his eyes. "pathetic!" he said. "you two think that you have the power to stop me, that is just funny. I admit, that during the last six or seven years since our last encouter you two have grown in strength immensely, but do you think that during that time that i have just been sleeping? Do you think that you are the only ones who grew in power?" All of a sudden locutus let out another bolt of lightning. It hit Jack squarely in the chest and knocked him into the nearby wall behind him.

OOC: Stop god modding. We can't say if it hit Jack.

Before the lighting hit Jack used force push to deflect the lighting.

"Come on old man is that you have got?"

It charged at Locutus and used his force speed. His lightsaber was right in front of him.

OOC: guys quit fighting and godmoding. If you have a squabble take it to OOC and hash it out there. There is a lot of immaturity in this thread and it will fail unless you guys clean up and accept that there will always be things that happen to your character that you don't like and you won't get your way every time. I am in this thread as a favor to DMG and others in my Jedi Academy thread. Clean it up or I'm gone.

OOC: fine i will stop god-modding, but then u got to, too goreing (i.e. ershuude hitting locutus with lightning is also go modding, so there) :) as for the OOC forum, i looked, but will look again,:mad: as for when i looked i could not find it >:0!

OOC: Ok I will too. No more god modding.

Locutus, lit both of his lightsabers, and said "let us see who the better one is at lightsabers." Then he raised a hand, and a panel flickered. The door slammed shut, and all of a sudden locutus felt hollow and empty as the force restricters (much like a disruptor but slightly diff) kicked to life. Locutus swung his blades at unparralelled speed. and motioned Jack to bring it on.....

Jack ran at him head on. Then he stopped directly infront of him. He used force push against Locutus. "Take this old man!!" Then he felt the force being pulled from his bodies. The force was gone.

OOC:.......... im just going to say did u read my post........lmao i activated force restrictors...........

IC: the wave of force came at locutus and he just stood waiting for it to hit..... it never reached. the force had disipated by being absorbed by the restrictors. locutus seemed dissapointed. He wanted it to hit him, to see how strong jack was. Oh well, guess we will have to see through his skill with a blade..... . Locutus stepped forward a couple feet.

OOC: Well Jack doesn't know that.

Jack saw that the force push didn't work. He was going to have to use the Lightsaber combat Djem So. This form is more offensive than the others. Charging toward Lord Locutus, Jack held his lightsaber in his hands.

Locutus waited for just the moment, and then he made an x style block from jacks attack. Then immediately he brought the other blade from his right handed lightsaber up and brought it skimming across jacks lightsaber pushing the blade away.

Jack got one of his legs and was about to kick Locutus. He got his lightsaber and turned it off. He brought it closer to his body and engited it again.

locutus brought both lightsabers above his head and leaped to strike, He was blocked like he had planned, then with the bottom set of blades he struck upwards..... He hoped that this would end the fight, but he didn't know if jack would block it......

OOC: Well Jack doesn't know that.
ooc: He would have to be the wrost Jedi or force sensitive in the world not to know that. He would immediatelly feel a disruption in the Force and the hollowness that followed as he was cut off from something that was so familiar. It woul be like having both of your legs cut off... and you think you wouldn't notice that?
IC:

Aboard the starship, Brianna met up with Bella again. "Do you have a destination in mind to set up base? I would suggest Ilum or better yet Dantooine... places where the Force resounds mightily and we won't have to bother with such annoying Force disruptors to hide my presence. Also... we might be able to find crystals for my new lightsaber if we were to set up base there..." Brianna suggested. Oh how nice it would be to set up a base in the backyard of what used to be the head of the Jedi Order... Brianna thought as she felt evil inside.

Seeing the lightsaber come up, Jack kicked Locutus to fly in the other direction. Once landing he got up and went after a force restricters. Getting near one he plunged his lightsaber into it.

Locutus stared a little horrified at what the jedi had done. "You fool!" he shouted "do know the amount of power that has now been stored up in that thing? doing what you have done will just release it's power, and in a bad way, It will cause an immense power surge!" with that locutus ran down the hallway and around the corner. and he dropped to the ground. Just then, he heard the sound of a massive wave of energy. He knew all to well that that energy wave would be nearly fatal. all of a sudden with the rush of the force coming back to him, and the amount of energy that managed to get to him he felt dizzy and soon blacked out.

Ershuude sat in his cell he was trying to figure a way out when he heard the sound of multiple lightsabers igniting. Jack always has the fun, he though to himself. He saw the two figures faces change and realized that they had been drained of their conection to the force. Ershuude had been drained of his by Locutus but it had slowly come back. He heard The siths voice scream, "You fool! Do know the amount of power that has now been stored up in that thing? Doing what you have done will just release it's power, and in a bad way, It will cause an immense power surge!" Ershuude heard footsteps as he looked out the hole. Jack was standing, bracing for the impact of the power surge. Ershuude was still conected to the force so he shielded them both form the surge. It wasn't the best shield job but it most likely saved their lives. Jack blacked out. Once the Surge was over Ershuude fell to the ground panting and exhausted. Right before he went to sleep he crused the damned sith to a fate worse than hell.

Aboard the starship, Brianna met up with Bella again. "Do you have a destination in mind to set up base? I would suggest Ilum or better yet Dantooine... places where the Force resounds mightily and we won't have to bother with such annoying Force disruptors to hide my presence. Also... we might be able to find crystals for my new lightsaber if we were to set up base there..." Brianna suggested. Oh how nice it would be to set up a base in the backyard of what used to be the head of the Jedi Order... Brianna thought as she felt evil inside.
Bella replied as the last crates were being loaded onto the ship, "Maximus and I planned to meet on Dantooine. We were previously on Ilum and got some crystals and heat, but we know the ones on Dantooine are better. We'll have to hide in the caves and keep you supressed for two more weeks so you can go after your contractor and we can all escape for good. We have been to Dantooine before and actually found lots of lightsaber parts there, which should be in your kit there. Go ahead and get most of it done on the way there, we even have a pure black color crystal."

Brianna grinned, "That will do quite nicely." She picked up her crate, containing the lightsaber kit among other things, and walked off down the hall. Eventually she found a suitable room where she had enough room to work on the lightsaber, and settled in. This Force supression is really getting annoying... Brianna thought as she sat down on the bed, Two more weeks... Perhaps... I should kill them when I finish my lightsaber... she thought wickedly as she drifted off to sleep.

While he was out locutus had a glimpse of something, he couldn't tell what it was, as he could neither think nor see clearly. But the voices, they were crystal clear. There were three. Two of them sounded familiar but he could not put a face on them. The third was not familiar to him at all. The voices talked about a job of some sort, then it turned to hiding, and with a mention of cloning.... locutus heard Kamino, but he couldn't think too much on it. Then the voices conversation turned to betrayal. Talking of killing someone. he wondered who they were planning on killing. He faded out further and came back. They had moved, and the topic was now that of hiding. Then Locutus felt the sensation that the force was being ripped away from him once more, and could only assume that a force disruptor had been used. That ment that one of the people there HAD to be a jedi. Then the world faded out once more, and he woke to find he was back on Mustafar. Locutus thought for a moment, Had he seen a glimpse of a conversation between liam and some other people? If that is the case I need to find out who he is planning to kill. Then he snapped to reality. He jumped up ignited his lightsaber and looked around. He assumed that Jack had been killed, and then went back to the command center. There he decided to view the recordings of the event through the cameras. What he saw made him mad. The other jedi had saved him. And what he said afterwards didn't go over so well either. HE headed out towards the area again. This time they would both pay.....

Jack got up to see Ershuude. He had saved his life. Looking threw his clothing he found Ershuude's lightsaber. Throwing it toward Ershuude.

"You forgot this. Also thanks for saving my life."

Then Jack saw Locutus enter the room. Two Jedi Knights against a Sith Lord. They would crush this old man.

Locutus smiled and laughed "your thoughts betray you" He could easily sense the thought Jack had, It was a deep and powerful thought. "But, you under estimate me, and over estimate yourself." He simply said it, ignoring the expressions he was getting. "I have faced tougher oppenants than you, and came out easily. I have even faced off with yoda, back in his 'prime' years. What makes you so speacial as as to think that you could easily crush me?" With that he activated all four of his lightsaber blades and activated his helmet, and powered up his armor to full. "and as for 'old'. true, I am old, but don't count that as an advantage, because i think that if you happen to be thousands of years old and still look as young as me, I think that that is quite a testimony to your power." (Honestly by looking at locutus you would never know he was old at all, He looked like he was in his late 20's early 30's It was his power that gave away his age)

Brianna stood in her compartment (room) next to a small table with her lightsaber kit laid out and several components already put together. The black crystal was sitting out on the table as she admired its wicked looking beauty, "So black... so beautiful... so powerful... so evil!" she whispered to herself as she was unknowingly comparing herself to the crystal. She continued taking out different pieces of the set and putting them together until she completed her lightsaber. She turned it on briefly to admire the double blades of pure black energy before switching it off and lying back on her bed... she still had many things that she hadn't figured out yet and no end was in sight.

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Liam cut the engines on his ship as he traveled through space and began slowly drifting. The cloaking devices were on, ensuring that nobody would spot him on their sensors and he was actively employing a very powerful Force Concealment to hide his presence from any and every force sensitive person in the galaxy. It was bliss... not a sound to be heard, not the parts of a droid or the whirring of the hyperdrive. He sat back and relaxed as he observed the numerous stars and planets that seemed to go on forever. He was alone, where nobody could find him, and he was quite peaceful - a rarity in his life.

He began scanning the universe, particulary a few planets; Dantooine, Coruscant, Mustafar, and Korriban. He sensed the strong presence on Dantooine of the echos in the Force caused by fallen Jedi and Sith who did battle there. On Korriban, he felt the same presence, though it was much more dark this time. On Coruscant he could feel a smaller presence of the Force that had been there in recent months... But on Mustafar, he sensed a battle raging on; he honed in on the battle and began 'watching' it through the Force.

The Prison Special, Maximus' ship, was travelling through normal space at this point in time. He was close to Tattooine and was entering orbit when his ship all of a sudden jerked in one direction. He knew that a gravity flux like that around absolutely nothing meant that there was more than absolutely nothing there. He had come perilously close to hitting a cloaked ship. That meant his employer, Liam or whoever the hell he was, was close by. Maxcimus landed and unloaded the carbonite corpse and put a homing device on it and bounded to Corusant, where he shot himself with a Force Disruption pistol before bouncing to ten other planets before he hit Dantooine.

The sensors aboard Liam's ship tracked Maximus has he landed on Tatooine and unloaded his cargo. Liam hopped back into the pilot seat and directed his ship to the planet's surface. When he arrived he walked over to the body and looked at it briefly. Everything is going according to plan... Liam thought with an evil smile on his face as he walked back to his ship.

He left the planet and headed back into space where he continued watching the battle through the Force.

Ershuude ignited his lightsaber and said "you under-estimated me before, We were just returning the favor." Ershuude thought about jumping over him and attacking the other side. He let that thought be easy to see through the force. Locutus would have never expected the lightning that would have come if Jack had not stoped Ershuude.
"That is the dumest idea I have ever heard" Jack said.
Ershuude said " i recomend that we," He rubbed his left eyebrow twice and patted his right cheek.
"No, that will never work," he said. Let's, he glanced twice at Locutus.
"Hmmmmm, Very nice I agree." They sprung in to an attack formation. The battle was about to start, but two Jedi( slightly Younger that Jack and Ershuude) entered the room. Looking confused they saw Jack and Ershuude. They moved to attack but fell to the ground limply. Ershuude could sense that they were still alive just knocked out.
"Do you have some kind of addiction to knocking people out?" Ershuude remaked.
That was the last line of insults exchanged between them as the clashing of firey red and emerald and turquoise erupted into a heated lightsaber battle. No one expected it to end shortly or happily for either side.

That remark was a bit funny to locutus, but he would never show it. Splitting his concentration between two jedi was an easy task, he barely gave it any thought. Jack struck out and nearly hit locutus. He cursed himself inwardly for letting that happen. Then Ershuude struck out, and before the blow came anywhere near, locutus flipped backwards into the air. He went flying backwards a little ways, but he didn't land where they expected him to. Instead he clung to a wall, and before they fully noticed he shot himself full speed, with the aid of the force at them. His lightsaber purpously striking theirs squarely. The Impact of his blow was like that of a planetary freight hauler (Star Wars version of a freight train). Had he hit the wall behind them, it would surely have been like a sand castle wall to him.

Ershuude blocked and paried over and over again. He knew that Locutus had to have a weakness. Locutus was driving him backwards. As he steped back he triped over one of the knocked out jedis bodies. He fell to the ground. Locutus was about to kill him when Jack blocked it, saving Ershuudes life.
"Foolish Jedi," Locutus seethed, "You can not hope to beat me"

OOC: just then the whole place blew up killing them all THE END.(just kidding)

IC: While he and Jack were engaged in a power struggle Ershuude cast out a massive charge of lightning. Locutus knew it was coming but could not react because he was focusing his all on Jack. The bolt hit him squarely in the chest. Locutus flew backwards into a wall. The wall crumbled and fell down.
"You cannot beat me by using a darkside power you foolish boy" Locutus raged.
"Really, never would have thought that someone who had faced yoda in his prime, wouldn't be able to kill a mere boy in one strike." antagonized Ershuude with a smirk. Locutus charged Ershuude(obviouisly pissed) and swung with several rapid attacks. Ershuude would not have been able to block all of them if he and Jack hadn't been training for the past five years. Jack strick at Locutus's back. Locutus blocked and swung at Jack with out even looking. He was focusing his anger and fury on Ershuude. Exactly what Ershuude had wanted...

Locutus knew that Ershuude wanted to make him made. So he let him, and lead him to believe that Locutus was striking out rashly. Meanwhile he was carefully planning his moves. Then unespectedly he retreated back away from them, shut off his lightsabers, and sat down in the middle of the room. Then He concentrated complete and hardly on the force, completely ignoring the two jedi. Then the force being mastered by him so completely took on a solid form. he concentrated it around him, and it was so powerful that when jack struck at it, IT didn't even dent it. Then something else happened. It became unstable. Jack struck once more at it. This time It did have an effect. The sphere it created exploded massively. There had been a thermonuclear reaction. Anything within a foot of him (which was neither ershuude or jack (who having been launched back from the force after his strike)) was instantaniously incinerated. The explosion had been concentrated so it was dense and small, only going to the walls of the room.

OOC: so good to see someone else knows about Force Bombs.

OOC: so good to see someone else knows about Force Bombs.
ooc: agreed (assuming you are talking about Thought Bombs), though I am not sure that they can be concentrated to such a small radius.

btw: CM, waiting on you to have them reach Dantooine.

"Damn," said Ershuude, "I've only read about those. What would happen if I said I was considering surrender? Hypothetically of course." Jack looked at Ershuude, then at Locutus then back to Ershuude. He looked very confused. "Well," said Ershuude, "what would you do, Lord Locutus? Yes, I know your name."

ooc: he is asking a serious question not antagonizing

Locutus laughed, "It would be wise that you did, because if you syand against me, you will die! Jack you might want to consider it too. Because one on one, you wouldn't stand a chance." Just then Locutus without looking jumped to the side as a lightsaber slammed down right where he was standing the moment before. Jack and Ershuude looked around to see the cause. It was one of the jedis locutus had knocked out earlier. They both knew he was doomed from the start. Effortlessly locutus picked up the jedi using the force, and crushed him. The now dead jedi's body fell to the ground with a thump. The other young jedi got mad and struck out rashly. He brought his lightsaber up to strike, and as quick as lightning Locutus had wheeled around, ignited his lightsabers, plunged one blade into his stomach, and brought the other one to cut off the jedis arm. The jedi fell still alive to the ground, and his lightsaber fell next to Ershuude's feet. The jedi pleaded locutus to let him live, and another quick flash and his head was rolling around on the floor. he turned his head slightly back at Ershuude and Jack and said "you guys were lucky that back when you fought me I didn't have as much of my powers as I do now...., But then again, these jedi were less experienced. And I have a feeling that If they got in here, a good portion of their buddies did not. My droids were guarding the entrance....." With that he let his voice die off, and left the two jedi that remained to think of what might have happened.

Jack saw what he did to the young jedi. They weren't even jedi knights yet. They would never be. He used the force to pick up their lightsabers. The lightsabers went onto his belt. His head moved toward Ershuude.

"You have changed my old friend. I can see it in your eyes. You have fallen to the darkside. Ershuude you are no longer a Jedi Knight."

Jack picked up the two young jedi bodies and ran away with force speed. The clones were starting to left. He got aboard a ship and told the clones to immediate tell the ships they were going to, to set a course for Yavin 4. After getting to the Academy he found most of the Jedi practicing. He brought the two jedi home with their lightsabers. After the burial, Jack went to his room. He had just lost his friend to the Sith.

Liam continued watching the battle on Mustafar as he drifted innocently through space. He felt the loss of the two young Jedi as Locutus cut them down. He also felt how one of the Jedi Knights was teetering on the brink of darkness, questioning which path was right - truth was, neither path was right; neither dark nor light was right, but most would never discover that truth in their lifetime.

"Perhaps..." Liam whispered to himself, "Perhaps, he could be useful..." Liam's plan had already been set in motion years ago though the fruition of it had not come yet... soon, but not yet.

Maximus had reached Dantooine about a day before Bella did in her slightly slower ship. The Liberator SD touched down on the abandoned spaceport and the robots began their work inserting the cloning machines and reactors inside various caves and began drilling to connect the caves. When they finished, the Liberator cloaked, even visually, and the three companions walked off together. And with Briana removed from the Force, she wouldn't know a series of droid dekas armed with Heavy Force Disruption Blaster were always aimed at her in case she turned on Maximus and Bella. One shot and she would be dead so quickly that Yoda would scream in pain.

The Force resonates greatly here Brianna thought as she entered the crystal caves which had been turned into their base of operations. Even though the force disruptors were still on and she could not feel the Force, she could feel that the caves were emenating the Force all around them.

After exploring the caves for a little while and finding her way around, Brianna caught up with Bella and Max again. "I had a question and a proposition for you," she said as they met up, "Is it possible to clone me so that my clone would be fully grown and trained in Force and lightsaber arts?"

"So.... I can't go back to the Jedi." Said Ershuude mumbling to himself. " I could join you and the Sith...or I could go back to the Jedi and beg for forgiveness... Or I could leave the known universe and go into exile.
"Could you give me some advice....I know the Sith don't accept just anyone and the Jedi would take my lightsaber and strip me of my force connection. What would you do if you were in this predicament." Ershuude said as he turned off his saber and placed it on his belt.

On board his cloaked ship in deep space, Liam was still watching Locutus and Ershuude.

"... And so... he falls."

Locutus thought for a moment. Then he said "this may seem like an obvious decision coming from me, but actually much thought has gone into it. I would say Join the sith. You have much power potential and would go far. Plus, There is no doubt in my mind that Jack would destroy you ever he saw you again. He fears you have fallen to the sith anyway. I can feel the immese hate for me that is coming from him. But, Whatever You may decide, That is your decision. I do not wish to fight any longer, so i will go out for a while. Do not even try to wreck the base while I am gone, as my droids will still be here...." He left the room and went to his ship. There he contacted Bosphan. He left a short message. "I am seeking out Liam. No doubt he has gone to a planet that is full of the force, So that he may mask his presance. I will start with Korriban, Then to Dantooine. I will contact you if I find him at neither." With That he took of and went on the day long trip to korriban. When he got there he did a life form scan. He found many life signs there. Some were jedi, others were troopers, but none were liam. Locutus saw that the lifeforms were all gathered in the academy. He guessed that they were checking it for some clues as to the sith. He would come back and deal with them later. Then He took another long trip to Dantooine. He wanted badly to find Liam. His droids had followed the ship, to find nothing but a hollowed out base of a planet. So he hd reached a dead end as to where to look for Liam. Soon he would find him, and soon he would find out what happened to Brianna......

Ershuude thought that jack would still veiw him as a friend, but he could not go back to the Jedi. "No," he said outloud to no one, " I will join these Sith and reach my full power." Ershuude had never realized how much he had craved power. Ershuude wandered around the base for a long time, While on him walk he found a large bunker covered with rubble and pieces of droids. He tried to investigate the bunker but there much debris. Perhaps this was one of the sites of the planetry bombardment the Jedi had issued before he had arrived. He continued until he was exhausted. He found a secluded spot in the medical bay and went to sleep.

OOC: I didn't really fall to the darkside i kind of just hopped down. Its not like I tripped. I fixed the bunker part. my bad

ooc: the bunker is half destroyed and those droids are disabled.

Bella looked at Briana, "We could do that, but it would take some extra machinery and a lot of time, but once we did that we could create dozens of copies of you in a week, and only you would be the real thing. They would have set-in death dates to protect the original, but it would give you a very nice edge in battle. Its even possible for all of you to share a common link and mind, since you would be technically the same Force Aura. I'll start working on making the machine right away, could you help me and gather all the clear crystals you find?"

"That'll have to wait." Maximus interrupted, "We have company. Another sith is on the planet. He landed ten klicks from our Destroyer. He's looking for someone. We'll all have to be shot again with the disruptor. Briana, you must trust me and keep yourself away from the Force or we will all die quickly. I've seen this guy before in battle. We've been hired by his cronies before to kill him but he's just too strong to kill with anything short of a Death Star." Maximus then shot Bella, Briana, and then himself with the Force Disruption pistol again.

Despite the lack of Force flowing through her, Brianna still felt the uncomfortable feeling when she was shot by the Force Disruptor. "Could have at least let me get ready," she mumbled as she refocused herself.

"Don't worry..." Brianna said, knowing that the Sith could be none other than Locutus, "The Force resonates quite strongly hear due to all of the death of fallen Jedi and Sith... as well as these crsytals," she said as she picked up a clear crystal as Bella had asked her too. "That in combination with these annoying force disruptors will be more than enough to hide my presence here... and even if he does find us, he won't be able to tap into the force either."

Ershuude woke up. He longed to rid himself of his Jedi connections. He striped off his tunic. Now bare-chested he looked for something else to wear. He found no clothes but did find a workbench with some tools and supplies. He examined his lightsaber. It had a blue blade. All the sith stories and legends told him that they used red blades. His blue one would not do. He took it apart, examining what he had to work with: some crystals, scraps of metal, and swithches. He reconstruceted his lightsaber to ingnite in a Firey Red hue. It was amazing to feel this sort of freedom and power. The Jedi taught that the Force was the power and that they were its instumment. The force would do his will from now on. It was his tool. Now he could call himself a Sith.

Locutus didn't need to scan the planet to tell something was wrong. He felt a small void in the force. even in space a void in the force wasn't right, as everything had the force in it. It ment one of two things. one a jedi/sith cut them selves off from the force, or two a force disruptor had been used. Either way he would have to look for it, because it was so small, and on top of that there was a lot of force around it. He was unable to sense its location. after he landed he felt a flourish of dark energy. It had come from mustafar. he could feel Ershuude succumb to the dark side. He smiled and pressed forward. I will have to train him, he will be very powerful indeed. he thought. Just then a blaster bolt hit the ground right infront of him. He looked to its source. a turret had attacked him. He looked at the turrent and got more disturbed. Only a jedi/sith could have activated this turret he thought. and it has been fixed too. Without any effort what so ever, he let out a bolt of force lightning. He held it on long after he felt the turret short circuit. Then with a flash his lightsaber cut deep into the turret. The only way it was ever going to work again is if it was replace, or seriously taken a part, and having its parts replaced. he continued on, then without paying any attention to where he was going or the force, as he was deep in thought. HE ran into something. he looked up. What he saw puzzled him more, There was absolutly nothing there. It was obviously a cloaked object, what exactly Locutus was unsure. He wondered why anyone would go out of their way to cloak something here, in the middle of nowhere. And what was more disturbing, was the fact that here layed another void. It wasn't as if it was air. It was as if someone had sucked all the force out of the area. Force disruptors had to be at work here. This got him more puzzeled. He sat down on a nearby rock and went deep into thought, and mediatation, Concentrating on the planet, and this region inparticular.

Jack felt a disturbance in the Force. In his room he felt Ershuude succumb to the darkside. Ershuude would always be his friend, but he was now Sith. Sweat soaked his bed. He knew that the Jedi Acadmy was not a place for him right now. Jack had many memories of Ershuude. Ershuude was his best friend since they were young.

Jack got up and picked his lightsaber up. After getting up he put his lightsaber on his belt. He went to the Library. During the Galatic Civil Obi-Wan Kenobi lived on Tatooine. Jack was going there. He quietly made his way to the hangar. In the hangar was his Delta-7 Aethersprite-class light interceptor. Getting inside he lifted off. Once getting away from Yavin IV he found the hyperspace ring.

"G8-R3 set a course of the planet of Tatoonie."

G8-R3, his astromech droid, set the course. Jack hit a switch and the Delta-7 went into hyperspace.

Once landing in Tatoonie he had to find a speeder to get to Obi-Wan's home. Jack looked at the desert of Tatoonie. Walking around Mos Eisley he saw the clones doing there patrols. He went up to one.

"I'm Jedi Knight Jack Ryan. I have come from the Jedi Academy. I need a speeder for my mission."

The clone in his sand armour looked at him.

"Yes sir!"

The clone led Jack to the garrison. Jack thanked the clone and found a speeder bike. The speeder was out in the open and Jack got on. He sped off toward Obi-Wan's home. On the way the suns started to set. He stopped for a moment when he was attack by Sandpeople. Jack engited his lightsaber and charged at them. Using his force speed he cut off the torso of one then force pushed one into the wall. He came up to the one pinned up against the wall and cut of it's head. Knowing that more would come he got on the speeder bike and made it to Obi-Wan's house. Walking inside he knew that the place hadn't been visted since Luke came here during the Galactic War. For the next couple of days Jack went into a Battle Meditation. Before he left he found Obi-Wan trying to learn how to retain one's identity within the Force after death. Jack didn't see anything else written. Making his way back to Mos Eisley. He thought about it more. On the archives of Yavin IV Luke wrote about how he saw Obi-Wan in a ghost like form. At the archives of Yavin IV knew that they said noting more about it. Jack wanted to acheive this force power and the only place he thought that the information would be held was in the Jedi Archives of Ossus. Once getting into the Delta-7 he made his way to the abandon Jedi Academy. The Academy had been abandoned long before the Clone War.

"G8-R3 set a course of the planet of Ossus."

"Just sit back and relax," Brianna commented to the Bella and Max. "If he finds us and comes in here we can easily defeat him... and if he doesn't find us and stays out there... well, we are still fine then." Brianna was standing by a monitor as she spoke, watching the Sith Lord through a small camera. "How long do you think it will take to get those machines up and running?" she asked, "Because the sooner, the better..."

Locutus had a funny feeling. He couldn't quite put his finger on it, but he felt like he wasn't alone. He turned around and looked, and saw nothing he became fustrated. He didn't like the feeling. It was the feeling of being watched. finally he let it take up all his concentration. At last he found the source of his feeling. He saw a camera that was trained on him. Before he decided to destroy it, he decided to find it's source. He sent out a low powered bolt of force lightning to try and find its source. But, the crystals in the nearby caves sent it scattering. Then, out of the camera's view he placed a blast charge on it. He went back to meditating and within plain view of the camera he pulled out, and held for a bit the detonator. Then he flipped off the safety switch and pushed the detonate button. The screen on the terminal went blank. Locutus granted was powerful enough with his lightsaber, but he also like to bring along tons of explosives, and his trusty sniper rifle and shot gun style plasma rifle. He loved destroying things. He set out to try and find the source by foot. Soon he found an entrance to a tunnel. His face lit up. He had a plan.....

HE ran into something. he looked up. it was indeed a ship. this got him more puzzeled. It wasn't the style of ship that liam had. Nor did it look like one he would use.

OOC: Just a note, if he hit the ship that's one thing, but the ship would have stayed invisible throughout the relatively small impact he created and he couldn't see it. Add that to the Force Disruptors set ot in a 100 m radius from both ships, he'd have a very hard time meditating if he could do it at all. I guess I should have posted more detail on that one, but I was in kinda a rush.

IC:
Belle looked at brianna and said, "These things take time. We only have limited resources to work with. I could do it in under a day given everything I need, but I have to redesign a quarter of the machine with what I have. Even then I'd have to take apart two droids for the circuitry to finish it in two days. I'll work around the clock, but you're gonna have to wait a little bit and hope that Sith will just stay at bay until then."

"Fat chance," Maximus said, "He blew turret number seven sky high and ran into one of our ships. The sensors don't recall which one ,but they measured an impact on one of the cloaks. And since both ships are so close together, we can't really tell which one was hit."

"Patience is not one of my virtues," Brianna responded to the woman. "Unfortunately, skill with machines, I also do not have..." she commented thinking of her time back on Korriban when she couldn't help Bosphan set up the defenses or droids. "Though... if there is anything I can do to help make the process quick... I will," hoping that there was. Once she had an army of cloned sith warriors... nobody would be able to stand against her.

Locutus hoped to make things quick and easy. He grabbed three gas grenades and threw them all in making sure that they bounced pretty far in. Then he lightly tossed in a thermal charge, making sure that this one stayed at the entrance. He then proceeded in laying disabling mines around the entrance. He was going to smoke whoever might be in it out.

Ershuude was bored. He had been in the sith base for almost a week since Locutus left and had not seen anny signs of life. The occasional droid, but no sentient beings. I wonder what happened to the other sith. He remembered that there were three, well four now that he had joined them: Locutus, who had left. Brianna, who he assumed had died in the battle and was hidden among the rubble because he could not find her through the force. And that Zabbrak who had been a Jedi. Ershuude wandered around for several more days. He found his way to the hanger. There was a small ship and a large cruiser. The small ship looked almost new. The larger one, however had a lot of scaring on her hull. She had been in many fights. Both ships were locked and force-proof. Ershuude was getting tired of being lost and breathing the indoor air. He wanted to go outside. He turned his lightsaber on and twirled it around casually. He had grown to love the Firey red strokes the blade made as it arced through the air. Ershuude sighed and turned it off. He longed for some form of contact( i.e. a volleyball named Wilson).

OOC: I know this might be considered god modding, but Dem has been gone a little to long for my taste.

IC: Bosphan walked into the hanger and found Ershuude. He walked up to him and gave a evil smile. " I see that you have decided to join us" he said lightly "you made the right choice. The jedi are weak. They do not know the power that they could have. If they used that power they could help forge the universe and get it the way they want it. Locutus was right in bringing you to the dark side. With the four of us (obviously unless he was all-knowing wouldn't know the circumstances) we could rule the galaxy. They don't stand up to one sith lord, let alone four, and with one being Locutus, he will give them hell." he stood there waiting for a responce.

ooc: its not GMing. Dem said we could control his characters while he was gone and now he isn't coming back he said because he is too far behind.

Locutus hoped to make things quick and easy. He grabbed three gas grenades and threw them all in making sure that they bounced pretty far in. Then he lightly tossed in a thermal charge, making sure that this one stayed at the entrance. He then proceeded in laying disabling mines around the entrance. He was going to smoke them out.
OOC: What the hell is he doing and where?

OOC: What the hell is he doing and where?

ooc: At the entrance to the crystal cave he is trying to smoke us (Brianna, Bella, and Maximus) out...

"Look," Brianna said as she stood by the monitors. "Locutus is smoking that cave where that beast lives... ha, he is going to really piss it off," she laughed. "This should be an interesting thing to watch if nothing else..."

OOC: ok i fixed it if you are happy, and btw, CM stay on long enough to post something that isn't an ooc, if u wanted 2 do that you could go to the...... OOC forum :) its a waste, of time and space.

IC: within a few moments locutus heard a growling sound, followed by a crunch, and a boom. Obviously the monster had eaten one of the gas grenades. Man these monsters are getting dumber, and dumber wonder if he would-- just then he got hit and thrown back. The monster was at the entrance. The monster was a huge Dragon like animal. It was an impressive yet hostile creature. He got up, grabbed his detonater, and threw a rock at the ground near the charge. the monster looked down at the rock and the charge and took a huge sniff, the charge flew up his nose. Locutus then drew him into the minefield. The monster, being hit by all the mines at once fell limp, though still concious to the ground. Locutus took his chance, getting up close he attached several charges into the monsters nose. He was about to move away when, he was struck again. he went flying forward. the impact had caused many of his ribs and upper body bones to break. With shear will power he got to his feet, and was alarmed to see that the detonater lyed shattered. He was thinking furiously What do I do now. With my detonator destroyed i need another plan to detonate the charges. Wait I could..... He ran up to the monster and carefully dodging the blows, got out his lightsaber, cut off one of the mosnters arms. Then he proceeded to throw a small explosive, fuse style into the creatures nose. Then he ran back and got out his rifle. Carefully aim at the creature running towards him, he fired a single shot. The laser bolt traveled skillfuly through the air. It hi the fuse charge. Then all of a sudden a very large explosion shook the valley. a few seconds later when the smoke cleared, Locutus saw the creature. It's head had been blow to small peices. The creature fell to the ground with a large, thud. Locutus was really mad. After he was sure that the monster was dead he entered the cave. What he saw there shocked him. It was a large cave. I could make a temperary base here he thought. He explored the cave collecting the mass amount of stuff he found there. There were fully intacked lightsabers partially intacked lightsabers, droids, droid parts, and lots of other things. Then what he saw made him smile. In the cave layed a single egg. He felt it, it was still warm. He proceeded to make a large machine, which he placed around the egg.

After a little while Locutus had established a base. He had sensors everywhere, and he made machines to focus force in the caves,(to explain further: were designed to hide the presance of small objects by using the force to dilude any force senative beings senses of them. It was also a crude force focusing device, that focused the force enough to cause it to mass into a semi solid and be launched at enimies, at which point would do some sizable damage, so that if any other force sensitve being came in, besides him they would have more instore than they bargained for. He made sure that anyone who wasn't would never be able to get in, no matter who it was. He then proceeded to scan the planet to see what he could find. Afer he set up the scan he went in to meditation. He thought about many things including the need to build a new lightsaber, as his secondary one (not the one he got back) had beed found recently, destroyed.

ooc: alright... the problem is you moved time a long to fast without allowing other people to act. The time it takes to set up a fully operational base with the power and capabilites that you wrote, would be days and days (weeks). In such time, Bella would have easily finished her machine and been able to create an army of Brianna clones. So... if that is the way you want it... be prepared to face the power of a hundred Sith Lords....

OOC: actually let me see here, sensors, not that long, maybe a few hours, yes i have seen primative sensor wiring done withing minutes, In real life too. Umm machines, Locutus is a wiz at them, Never said how complex they were..... hmmm am i forgeting something, ahh yes the thing about how no one could get in, hmmm droids, wouldn't take that long to build 10-15 droids, mines, complicated, yeah right, turrets, part of the stuff he found, so that wouldn't take long, charges, he already had those, so i would say, 1-2 days max, if anything else i missed I will fix that, and if it does in turn turn out that it would take more than that, then yes i will admit that i was wrong, but for now to me it don't look that way :).

also if you want to go down that road, remember my Original character. Besides, your character only know as much as locutus has tought them, not what he hasn't :p

"Wow, he's not half bad..." Maximus mused, watching the fight between Locutus and the beast. "Bella, dear, are you finished?"

"Yes, I have finished. Brianna, if you could please step in here." Bella said, motioning the Sith into a cryo-like chamber. She complied and her Force Aura was duplicated onto a blank quatrz crystal. Bella did so again twenty times and all the crystals then turned black with a gold trim. She inserted this into another machine, which cloned Brianna and then the black crystal turned into pure quartz again as the clone came to life with the knowledge and soul of Briana. She activated a lightsaber given to her by one of the droids and Briana emerged.

"Original, all the clones have a genetic disorder that will kill them in a month. Also, here's a power crystal to use. It is basically your Force Aura and will increase your power ten fold." Bella finished, not telling Briana that she too had the same genetic disorder installed when she stepped in.

"Nice work..." Brianna commented as she looked over her clones, inspecting them with a highly scrutinous eye. Finding no flaws in their design or character, Brianna was quite satisfied with her work. She took the power crystal and slipped it onto a necklace around her neck. Despite the force disruptors in the area, she began feeling the Force again for the first time in many weeks... she needed to feel more of it.

"Alright... for simplicity sake, I will refer to each of you as Clone B followed by a number from one to twenty," Brianna said as she adressed them. "Just call me Brianna, they will understand," she said as she turned to Bella, "The term original... it sounds to much like an experiment."

"How about turning the force disruptors off now and bring those droids so we can go face Locutus now," Brianna said as she strode towards the cave's entrance.

OOC: Do i sense an underplot here, or maybe a plot twist? lmao

IC: Locutus had been meditating for a good day or two. All of a sudden he heard a sound at the entrance. He quickly shut off all the machines. He hoped to lure them in. Most of his injuries had healed, and he was ready to fight off any intruder need he have to. he slid into the shadows. The one place that nobody would find him. He had his undamaged lightsaber in hand. The second one lay on the other side of the room, newly repaired. He dared not to risk getting it. So he waited

OOC: oh, and this might be a good chance for the jedi and all to do some posting, as they are falling way behind, and also someone will have to be incharge of Kurr and all now, as dem no longer wishes to rp, lmao......

OOC: oh, and this might be a good chance for the jedi and all to do some posting, as they are falling way behind, and also someone will have to be incharge of Kurr and all now, as dem no longer wishes to rp, lmao......

ooc: I am not sure that there are any Jedi RPers left besides Jack. Kurr is Dem's and Ershuude is dark side now...

Ershuude was groogy. He had been woken by Bosphan before he could sleep a whole night. He was formulating a plan with which the Jedi would be wiped from the face of the Galaxy. Extinct. Ershuude smiled evily confusing Bosphan.

Bella and Maximus took the one remaining cloning pod, loaded it into a droid, and sneaked quickly off to Maximus' ship, decloaking, reloading, and lifting off. The LSD lifted of as well and detonated in the air. Maximus and Bella hid their ship in the debris field until the Locutus-Briana fight was over.

On Ossus Jack had built a found the Jedi Archives. They were empty and for a week he had been looking for the file about Jedi Spirt. He finally found it and went back to his ship. Reading the Jedi scrolls he mediated and learned about live after death.

"Hmph..." Brianna said as she sensed them sneak off. "No matter... soon nobody will stand in my way," she commented as she looked up into space.

Unbeknownst to her, Liam was looking down at her through the force, waiting for the beginning and end of her battle.

"Lets go..." she said calmly to her twenty perfect clones. They responded by following her orders and proceeded out of the cave in front of her. Quickly they strode across the surface of Dantooine until they found the cave in which Locutus hid.

It was impossible to tell which Brianna was the real one as they all looked perfectly alike and their force signatures were exactly the same. He even wouldn't know which was her by her lightsaber as she had been forced to build a new one since her time with the Dark Lord.

"LOCUTUS!" one of the twenty one Briannas yelled as they entered the cave. Even without the power crystal Bella had given her, Locutus was no match for the squad of Brianna clones. "Your time... has COME!" another shouted. Simultaneously they ignited their lightsabers and strode towards him. This was the end... there was no escape for Locutus.

OOC: not that you know that for sure, as there might possibly be another exit, but ok.....

IC: Locutus Slid silently further into his cave. By his hope he would split most of them up, but then he looked back and saw that one of the assailants was facing in his general direction. her lightsaber infront of her. Directly behind her was his inactive lightsaber, she stood between him and it. He smiled, then he used the force and called out his lightsaber, within a flash it had ignited and came to him. And without looking to see what damage he had done, he ran full speed deeper into the cave, and waited. They would fight on his terms, on his turf. He was ready for them...

ooc: it doesn't mean literally that there isn't an exit... it means that there are TWENTY ONE sith lords about to run your ass down.
IC:

The lightsaber had activated after it had already passed through her legs and so it had done no damage to her. However it bumped off her leg ever so slightly and distracted her for a split second, allowing for Locutus to escape into the caves again.

However, finding him again was not hard. With the force flowing so fully through the caves and with the help of the power crystal, which increased their control and power over the force, they were easily able to tracak Locutus' force signature. Soon the twenty-one Brianna's which had broken up into three person teams, began converging on Locutus' position and blocking off the different tunnels of the cave.

Locutus pondered for a second, then with all speed he made towards a single branching section, it lead deeper into the cave, then branched of to a large chamber, previously he had dropped a rope down from an opening near the top, and tied it securely. He made his way to the rope, and then stopped. He spun around to face three of his assailants. He could feel that none of the others were anywhere close to being near. The closest ones were over ten minutes away. If he wanted to escape he would have to make it fast. He signaled to his ship, and called it to him. it would be more than ten minutes before it got here, but all he needed was to get to the top of the rope. he activated his lightsabers. This wasn't going to be to hard. All he had to do was fend them off till his last defense measure kicked in. The droids were being activated. They all had holo projectors of very high quality that he set to his image, so that he could distract the intruders. It was nearly impossible to tell the difference between the droids and him. Unless you got really really close. Even through the force you couldn't tell, as they all had force crystals with them. So They would distract the others for atleast a while. Meanwhile his last desperate hope (not defense) was laid into action. If he could keep them here long enough he hoped he could kill atleast most of them. The cave had over several tons of explosives in it. They were all inactive, and hidden deep in the walls. some of it was placed there by him, others were set there by the old mining crews that used to be in this cave mining the valuable crystals. He had managed to over the week wire enough of them to cause a chain reaction if he blew one of them. The entire cave would collapse. He had set the timer. Now He faced three of his former apprentices, all of them being the same person. The thing was, He well knew their tactics, even with a group, and of the same person. He knew their styles and how they would fit together. That meant that he knew every countermove to move he made. He would use this to his advantage. He would purposly make a gap in his defense. He had observed over the years that she never missed a hole in someones defense. Another advantage of his was that she knew only some of his skills knowledge and moves. Locutus was wise in not teaching every thing he knew. It had come back to bite him in the butt once when he had did it. He had taught an eger apprentice all he knew, and the apprentice rose up and tried to kill him, out of his sheer skill talent, and raw power, he managed to defeat his apprentice. He would not let that happen again.

Locutus used the force to scan the room. He soon found what he was looking for. Without the slightest hand movement he caused five empty barrels to fly across the room at his opponents. They blocked, as he had expected. Then while they were still blocking he quickly moved in unleashing a fury to tire them, then he jumped back. He then sent more barrels, except these had small traces of fuel still left in them. The Only way he had known was, he had opened them up and looked in them. Without further waiting to see what they would do, he jumped backwards onto the rope and quickly climbed up it. He got to the top, but noticed he had followers. He looked down to see they were also on the rope, and they were close to the top. As quick as he could, he cut the line, sending its passengers back to the ground. Frantically looking around he found a large rock a few feet away. He ran over to it and used the force to move it over the hole. It would not delay them long, but maybe long enough. He then caught site of his ship, without waiting, he jumped down to a lower ledge, and ran towards his ship. He kept running towards it, jumping down levels as needed. He jumped on his ship, which hadn't landed, so it could get away quickly, and looked back to see the rock thrown free of the hole, and no one to be seen. Quickly he ran to the front of his ship, and took control. He knew that he would most likely be followed, so he decided to do something riskey. He reached the edge of the system, and ejected out of his ship, which immediately self destructed. For only a matter of seconds he was floating in space, when all of a sudden he was sucked in by an invisible object. Then aboard the ship, It went to hyperspace. Within a few days he had made it to his destination. He was at the old "center" of the galaxy: Courescant. There he took a small shuttle and landed several hundred kilometers from his intended destination. He wanted to lose his followers at all costs, but knew they would soon be on him. He went to the one place that they would never look. The old remains of what used to be the jedi temple.

Here he planned on hiding for as long as he could. Maybe by the time they arrived the rest of his army would already be here. It was already on its way. This would be his final stand. If he came out victorious, all hopes for the jedi, and the people that supported them would be lost. If he failed, everyone else (all the sith and troopers at the battle) would go with him. He would fight for his life. He was scared for whoever faced him and his fury. They would see him fight like never before. His fury previously like a kitten, now compared to a dragon. It would be a fight to his very end. He would not surrender if he was cut down and still breathing. Evey last breath would be a fighting moment. Only when his corpse lay dead upon the steps of the academy would his fight finnaly be over, but then, if that moment came, then the same would be for anyone else that was there.

" Can you fly one of these?'" said Ershuude to Bosphan. " I want to go to Yavin..." Ershuude smiled again.
"Yeah I can, but why would you want to go to a planet full of Jed....Oh I get it." Bosphan realized Ershuudes plan. "No we couldn't do it with out Locutus and we'd probably need Brianna too."
"You either with me or your staying because I am going. Open the starfighters canopy, I'm leaving."
Bosphan looked at Ershuude. " This is suicide, Ershuude, you will be killed."
"No I can.. take me to a workbench."
"I thought you wanted to leave. There is a workbench right in that room."
Ershuude went into the room. He emerged fifteen minutes later. He ignited his lightsaber. The blade came out the same shade and hue of blue that he had had when he had been a Jedi. "I can return to the temple and tell them that i have returned from my lapse into the darkside. I will face a trial. But if I brought you with me i could say that I had returned another fallen Jedi." Ershuude laughed evily. Bosphan looked at Ershuude. There was no deciet in his eyes. Bosphan walked to the smaller ship, The fighter. He unlocked it with the Force and got in the pilots seat. Ershuude force jumped into the Gunners position and the took off. They left Mustafar's atmosphere and jumped to hyperspace.

Another week passed for Jack and he had been mediating the whole time. He was on the brink of learning how to become a force ghost. During his visit on Ossus he met the Ysanna. The Ysanna he knew where force sensitive. He became friends with them when one of their children was trapped inside a old Sith ship. Using the force he pushed the ship to find the child. The Ysanna gave him a Jedi Holocron. It was of Master Yoda. Jack kept it on his ship to look at it later on Yavin IV. While mediating one day he felt a disturbance in the force. He gave his good-byes to the Ysanna and left. Getting into his Jedi Starfighter he went into space then into the hyperdrive ring. The Starfighter blasted into hyperspace. Jack felt something evil come toward the Jedi Academy.

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ooc: OMG! Can you manage not to God Mod? And I am not even talking about you controlling my characters actions numerous times (which is god modding no matter the results). I am talking about not giving me any chance to do anything. You just RPed the entire thing yourself. You can't RP a long period of time when there is a battle happening... it just doesn't work and is a blatant God Mod.

OOC: Actually, it was only 4 possible ones, and for another part, if you read it you would notice that there are gaps in the story perpously left there for you to use at your will :p ! I left parts where i didn't know where they were, and besides wouldn't that be the pot calling the kettle black? last time I checked trying to make my character do something, maybe not directly, but still, is god modding. I left hole so your character could follow if they liked, and w/e. basically, you could have done a number of things, including, manage to sneak aboard his ship, follow him, hide out on the other ship, as the first ship he had blew up to hide him, but they could have managed to escape the ship before it blew up, as the other one wasn't that far away. you could have followed him to Courescant, and so fourth, besides what about your other, eighteen characters, I said nothing of them, they could have sneaked aboard his ship as well. Look at it from all sides, not just the one opposite of mine. :), and if you wanna make a point, look at the whole thing first, so you don't leave holes in your objection.

ooc: I was about to make this IC post after my OOC post but I had to leave...

The 21 Briannas were not fooled by the droids as they could easily tell by Locutus' familiary force signature, that the holo projections, which were of high quality but still no where near like life, were not him. As he raced off to his ship and into space, the Briannas boarded their own ship and were shortly behind him. When his ship exploded, they noticed that he was still alive by his force signature and followed him to Coruscant. They arrived only a couple minutes after he did.

Liam meanwhile had gone to the Jedi Temple at Coruscant and warned the Jedi that the Dark Lord was coming to their planet. He convinced them to work with Brianna and her clones to fight against him.

As Brianna and her clones landed nearby Locutus, she was met by two hundred and fifty Jedi of assorted ranks who were all ready to fight. The large force of converged on Locutus spot which he had only arrived at minutes before...

Locutus could feel them coming, he could not keep in a laugh, He seriously doubted the judgment of them to bring the jedi into this. Soon as he stood in a clearing they began to converge slowly on him. All of a sudden a large group of drop ships came down. Locutus smiled, his army was early, but he had no problem with that. The drop ships emptied their load of droids, and began firing on the jedi, and Briannas. Five of the droids came directly up to Locutus. Three of them Activated lightsabers. The two battle droid looking ones had two double bladed lightsabers each. The Grevious model droid had four of the same kind. This was going to be one big battle. Locutus activated his helmet. Then he activated something else. His armor glowed briefly then when the glow subsided. He appeared again, His armor had been beefed up to full battle armor. He then called in his nice weapon of choice. His exosuit. While it in itself had no real weapon, other than its hands feet and whatever else it could slam into something with, It allowed Locutus better control of his Last weapon. His arch blade. It was a massive ancient style sword measuring about 12 feet in length. While it looked like just a sword, on its edges it was tipped with laser edges. He knew very well that even in his exosuit he could not take them all alone, But he could stand a hell of a lot better chance with them. In one on one combat, a jedi did not stand a chance. If it got hit by the blade, there would be no blocking it, its either dodge, or get crushed. The exosuit packed over 500psi. Its main disadvantage, was that it was a bit slower than Locutus would be on his own feet, but not by a ton. A well trained jedi, could make it through his defenses and get a hit off, but unless he had help, he would never make it out again. He knew that unless The droids managed to knock off enough of them, that he wouldn't stand a chance. All over the place drop ships were dropping down. This was going to be the fight of their lives....

As it was the Jedi's main planet, they too had their army there. As Locutus' droid ships began entering into the system, they began taking fire from the surrounding star destroyers of the Jedi. Main were being attacked before they had a chance to land on the planet's surface and unload their droids. The others that did, were met by a massive clone army that had the advantage of having a prepared defense for any invasion.

As some of the droids began landing, about two hundred Jedi turned away from Locutus and joined the clone forces to do battle. However, the remaining fifty Jedi and twenty-one Briannas advanced on him, enclosing him and his personal droids in a circle. The Briannas, being more powerful, took point and as they fully encircled the enemy, they simulatenously hit the droids with a powerful force lightning (coming from 21 directions). With lightsabers lit (71), the combinde forces began closing the tight circle on him...

Locutus' droids fell to the ground, for the moment they were out of the fight. But ecentually, they would get back up, for now they laid inactive on the ground, searching for ways around the fried circuitry. Locutus began spinning his blade. It spun faster and faster. When it reached the speed he wanted it to, he charged full speed at the nearest Brianna he saw. He brought his blade, which was still spinning, up to cut it down at half height.

The Brianna clone fell to ground, dead. She was not ready for the attack and was cut in two by Locutus, but as he did so, the other seventy members of the group, closed in tighter, prepared for anything he might do.

Ten of the Jedi began using Froce Supression on Locutus to weaken his powers substantially. Another five Jedi Masters used Force Absorb so that if Locutus did attempt to use any force powers, they would be strengthened by it, rather than hurt. Five more Jedi Masters began meditating as they performed Battle Meditation to significantly enhance the others powers and fighting ability. Two Jedi Masters were able to use Force Enlightenment to increase their power, speed, protection, and fighting ability by a tremendous amount. Others Jedi were using Force Valor and Increasing their speed, while ten other Jedi began using Force Statis on Locutus and his droids to stun Locutus and diminish his fighting capabilities.

The Briannas however, were using Force abilities to attack Locutus, while the Jedi were using the Force to help themselves and the Briannas. Some began using Force Fields while others used Force Rage to increase their abilities. However, ten Briannas used another powerful Force Lightning, this time on Locutus himself.

While being weakened Locutus was still quite strong, both physically and mentaly, with or without the force. When they used lightning on him he burst out laughing. Some of the jedi there looked puzzled. He went on to say "This thing isn't a droid, and using lightnign won't short circuit it, unless that lightning was coming from a really, and i mean really powerful source. Not even if I used force lightning on it full power would it even come close to short circuiting. And rather what you have done was rather foolish. You may have absorb to strenthen you guys from my force powers, but throwing electricity at this is rather stupid. I have Generators that absorb any form of electricity form outside of my armor, that turn it into usable form. Using lightning against me is like the sun shining on a solar panel. You would have been better of using drain or any other force power, but forms of energy." Then quickly without warning he brought the collasal machine into the air with a massive jump, and brought it back to the ground with a large amount of strength , the result was gigantic. The ground shook with such force that nearby buildings became so unstable that they collapsed to the ground. Then right away he ran full speed forward with his blade spinning, he planned on breaking through the circle.

The time it took for Locutus to jump into the air, easily gave the combined forces of Briannas and Jedi enough warning to see his attack coming. As he slammed into the ground, the seventy members simply jumped over the wave and landed before Locutus had time to run under them.

The circle had to closed to no more than fifteen feet in diameter, and was tightly secured at every spot by Jedi and Briannas. Every spot of the circle had four people in depth guarding it, meaning if by some miracle had could get by one (which would include getting my the one next to him), he would still be met by a lot more Jedi or Briannas.

As he ran forward wildly with his blade spinning, the Briannas and Jedi were ready for him and without allowing from the circle, they began attacking with their lightsabers. With nearly seventy Jedi and Sith working in unison, it would not be long before Locutus fell.

Locutus pulled his free hand backwards, and then using all its strength and throwing his weight into it, he launched it forward into one of his opponants. He could not tell who as he was to buisy trying to keep them back. All he knew is it flew and soon it hit a permacrete wall. The wall even as powerful as it was shattered upon impact with the jedi/sith. Locutus knew at that point that whoever it was was as good as dead, having had shattered every bone in their body. Then Locutus had an idea, without the slightest hint as to his intentions, he fired up the jet engines on his back, the two massive engines roared to life, throwing plenty of hot fire out of them. He flew into the air about twenty feet, then he started to spin his whole body with the blade outstreched, The engines shut off, and he fell to the ground, spinning rapidly.

ooc: I guess you will just ignore all the lightsabers attacking you...
IC:

The young and inexperienced Jedi fell to the ground as he was stabbed through the chest. However, the other kept fighting and were slashing at Locutus from every direction imaginable - almost impossible to stop everyone's saber.

OOC: I guess my time for a little suprise is here to come and reveal my true intentions of this RP. And yes, I've had this idea the whole way in.

IC: Maximus and Bella watched as Brianna and Locutus headed off for Corusant. They warped behind them by an hour.

"Bella, you better get the thing unwrapped and start meditating." Maximus said as his wife. The two of them had been playing everyone thusfar. Yes, Maximus was a bounty hunter, but he had married a Sith. She had become a Shadow Sith, exiled after she and Maximus had married. They both changed their names and hunted down enemies for a moderately overpricced fee. She suppressed her Force Aura and maintained the cloning yards they stole so one could revive the other. She broke her Force Suppression and got out a small statue. It looked like an Echani female, laying in the lotus position, meditating. Bella did the same after inserting a black crystal into the statue's arms. This statue was a bomb, a rather large one at that. With the crystal inserted and absorbed as it was now, once it broke or was disintergated, it would create a Force explosion powerful to literally destroy an entire planetary system. She meditated on this bomb for the entire week it took to reach Corusant, where they proceded to gently toss it outside the ship. Even if they were detected and caught, it would be too late to do anything about since the bomb was armed in a sense. The only thing they could do against this would be to meditate on it before it bumped anything. And was Corusant ever coming fast.

OOC: I don't care one way or another, just know that disarming the bomb through meditation would take many Jedi's lives through exposure to tremendous amounts of the Force and only the original Brianna could do it in one shot, and she'd still die. She can do it wherre others fail since her Aura was used to enhance the bomb. Remember thee bounty hnter series comic books after Episode 1/2? That's where this is from.

ooc: I guess it is time to unveal my little surprise also...

IC:

"And now... the final step," Liam said to himself. He was still floating in space aboard his cloaked ship, watching the events unfold. The truth about who he was had been hidden for years from even the most powerful of people in the galaxy. He was not a mere Jedi or Sith, nor was he a plain man who wandered the galaxy trying to find meaning. No. Liam was the last of the long line of Greys. Grey had been his ancestor's family name, though it later came to mean one who walked the fine line between dark and light, as his ancestors had. They had been the strongest of force users to be found anywhere in the galaxy... So strong that they had become bored with the dominating the world and eventually died out... almost. Now he was the last one.

The whole series of events that had occured over the last few years were carefully planned and carried out by the Lord of the Force, Liam. He had drawn Brianna and Bosphan to Korriban in order to release Locutus. He had informed the Jedi of the re-emergence of the Sith. He was the one who hired Bella and Max, as he knew more about them than he let on. He knew that they would fail, as it was part of master plan. He had inspired Brianna to turn on her Master, Locutus. He had convinced her to clone herself. He had brought the Jedi and Sith together. And he had done all of this for one simple reason... an apprentice.

Whether Brianna was able to stop the bomb or not, was trivial. Whether she did or didn't, either way he would have the added bonus of balancing the Force. After Locutus fell, which Liam saw was soon, the Jedi and Sith would turn on each other and fight to the death... and he would have his apprentice.

Jack's Jedi Starfighter entered Yavin 4's atmosphere. The other hyperspace rings where there. Once landing he got the news of the Jedi Academy on Dantooine. Master Kurr order all Jedi to stay on Yavin 4. Jack also told Kurr about making a new Jedi Academy on Ossus to train the Ysanna. He also showed Kurr the scrolls and about how he was learning to become a Jedi ghost. Afterwards he went to his room to sleep.

OOC: I have no plan I just wing it! I guess this is the big climactic battle.

IC: Ershuude and Boshan were on their way to Yavin when they both felt a large battle through the force. Ershude and Bosphan looked at each other and smiled. The set a couse to the source of the battle. To Corusant. The landed fairly close to the battle about a kilometer from the ruins. even from there they could hear the cries of men and women being riped in half by Locutus's blade. The reached the battle field and stoped. The sceane was amazing. Ershuude looked at Bosphan and started running for the fight. Ershuude loved combat. Something he had had to surpress when he was a Jedi. Now he ran the entire klick and hacked his way through the back of the lines. The Jedi and Sith were both here. This confused Ershuuude but he didn't think about it much. Bosphan was right behind him. They were not even noticed until Ershuude had counted ten or so kills for his blade. Ershuude could have sworn he had seen Brianna several times duing the first few seconds, but she had been far away.

OOC: Actually no i didn't ignore the lightsabers that were "attacking" me, But with the ignition of the jump jets, which were powerful enough to lift a several ton mech into the air would have been enough to throw most of his assailants into a partial retreat from the immediate area, and any of the rest would not be enough to stop it even if they wanted to!, and besides, the one that died, wouldn't have been stabbed, I said his free hand, the one without the blade. That means he punched him.

IC: Locutus would not let them win over him, He fought Long and hard. Suddenly he slammed his blade, point down, into the ground. It went deep (like a foot deep). Many of his assailants went in for what they thought would be the final strike. Locutus thought, What Fools, these jedi willingly risk their lives to attack me? They will soon learn how wrong they are..... Locutus then concentrated on his blade. Suddenly it lit up near the hilt in the form of a small sphere. As the sphere moved down the hilt it gain speed slowly. Then as the first blow was about to hit the sphere hit the ground. The Acumulated energy immediately dispersed in a bubble like fashion. There was so much energy that the sphere like bubble expanded out to fifteen feet, anything left inside would have been incinerated, except for locutus, when it hit him, a glow originated around him, He had set his sheild to this frequency only for the entire time. That ment that any time they attacked him, the sheild wouldn't protect him, but when this sphere hit him, it just resinated off his sheild. He took his momentary advantage. Within a flash he had his blade in his hand again. This time the whole blade lit up, and he swung the blade at air, at the end of it an energy arch came out. before he could see the full damage of it, he turned to defend from any attack that may have come from the opposite side, and all he ended up seeing was that it hit atleast one jedi.


Locutus could hear the other battle raging on. All the time he saw dropships dropping droids and clones all around. He knew that the clones would most likely be beaten off, as the had been forced to flee on Mustafar due to the casualties. And granted they had most likey receaved more troopers from the batch of Clones that had probably been released from training, The droid army, having lost very few droids in the last battle, had also increased in size, as more droids had been made in the factories, and the clones had not seen the full droid army yet. Above he heard the massive space battle, The eighty some strong droid fleet was hounding all it could on the republic fleet, the question was, if the Clone fleet was larger, could the remaining droid ships reach in time to help. Then he saw a new ship enter the battle when he quickly glanced up. It was his old battleship, the Valhala. He knew that they were in for it. It's massive guns could tear most ships to pieces with very little effort. Not to mention with it's immense size, it could probably hold a lot of droids. The question Locutus asked was Will they be in time to help me? Locutus Then had an idea, he grabbed from his back, yet another blade, with this one he attached it to the other blade forming a doubled bladed weapon. Then he called in two more, and they were already fashioned in the same style (double bladed). He was back to his normal style, Swinging several large blades. With four blades, he would be able to hold them longer, but not forever, not unless he thinned their ranks. Then feeling an attack coming he kicked out behind him, feeling his foot collide with something, he was satisfied. He hear a thud, and assumed the person had hit the wall.

ooc: No, you definately are ignoring their attacks. You realize there are SEVENTY Jedi and Sith attacking you... and all you say is he starts igniting his boosters and yada yada yada. Nobody could resist the attack of that many Jedi and Sith at the last time...
IC:

The combined forces of Jedi and Sith easily blocked his attack with a combined Force Field which nullfied the damage it otherwise would have done. As Locutus swung around he missed another young Jedi, but had left his sides exposed. The Jedi and Sith were now right on him and were about to stab him multiple times with their lightsabers.

The Clones' ships were much more powerful than the droid ships and were knocking dropships out of the air. Also, the clones had gun emplacements on the surface that were firing up at the enemies and knocking out their ships. The entrenched clones were holding back the droids as they were much better fighters and they had the help of nearly two hundred Jedi.

OOC: Really heavy and powerful droids, mind you!, and how could they put up implacements, im my guys were there first, and another thing, while the droid dropships may be weaker in construction, the ships have many guns to defend their selves, not including the reduced clone army. plus, The droids would have most likely taken out the implacements if they had managed to get some set up. and by the way, its not 70, like you said some were meditating, others protecting the ones that were, and no way in hell could seventy people attack one person at the same time, even if they were standing on top of each other, and the the intense heat from the jump jets needed to lift that mech, would have been enough to incinerate anybody standing next to it. :p

ooc: You're guys weren't there first as I said. You are on CORUSCANT. The fucking homeworld of the Jedi and Republic...

Exactly they have more guns, but their defenses and structures are weaker... meaning they are destroyed easier. And what is with these "really powerful droids"? Care to elaborate a bit... considering that these "really powerful droids" don't exist...

I said they had been doing those things, I also said that they began all attacking as they moved in. I understand that 70 couldn't attack at once, but multiple could and every time one fell back another would move in. Every time you did some move like pull out another lightsaber, you arms would have already been chopped off...

And no they wouldn't have been incinerated as I said they all used a force field. Think about a force field created by 70 powerful Jedi and Sith...

Face it... Locutus isn't getting out of this... not even with god modding skills.

OOC: Last time i checked it was, what USED to be the home world of the Jedi and the republic, and by the way, at this time there is no such thing as the "republic", just the new republic, and im still curious how there are over 200 jedi only 10 or so years after the end of the war, and besides, I pretty sure that unless i missed something in the books that Yavin 4 was the home world of the Jedi. And Have you not read all the posts of the thread, im talking about the same heavy droids that have been mentioned troughout, not to get into the fact that the droid army, is the sole maker of the destroyer droid, and more than likely have stumbled upon one of the diruptor armed droids, and could have made a few hundred by now., and as for the incinerated part.... READ you blind BAT I wasw talking about The jump jets, and i said ANYONE STANDING NEAR THEM WOULD HAVE BEEN INCINERATED, I wasn't neccisarily talking about them, and actually i could, so :p And also i think that it would be less than 70, as i would think of the several taken down, not to mention those who would obviously been already killed, not to mention 1 would have died, as he couldn't have gotten out in time, and they would never have been able to all focus on forcefields as that would have taken to long, and they would already be hit, and besides there was to much power in that blast to have been deflrcted that easily, unless your sheild was set to the EXACT frequency, which it wasn't.... And don't get me started on the taking out more blades, hmmmm let me see here he already has one out which he could possibly defend with, and he can jump ya know, along with kick. So he grabs one, and attaches it, anyone getting to close would be chopped up :) And im sorry did you call it a lightsaber, because I never pulled one of those out, i specifically made a mention that it was not a lightsaber, but an old style sword with laser edging. Make sure to double check this before you post, so you cover everything :)

ooc: All of this and you still neglect to face the fact that you are fighting against nearly 70 Jedi and Sith. A combined force of which not even Locutus could escape... he couldn't escape 8 Jedi and now he is fighting against 70. Face it... he is dead. DEAD!

OOC: OK with the eight jedi, first of 8 of the most powerful jedi, who, actually couldn't KILL him, they just captured him, and secondly, it wasn't just them, they had help, they had to wear him down first. Most of the jedi that helped, lost their lives, and they battled him for days, and still through all their efforts they could not KILL him. And also, Locutus trained the brianna's he knows her style, and he also knows more than he ever taught her :p, And what was that you speak of, God modding, you say? Plus know he has help, and soon his droids will come to his aide, So let me see a REDUCED 70 jedi/sith (that means less than nearly 70, more like 50 or 40, as by now, logically he would have cut down many jedi, and a few Brianna's, as like you said a jedi isn;t a match for a sith, let alone a way more powerful 1, and also he is in a mech, and some of these jedi's are apprentices) against 1 tough ass sith in a mech, 5 super droids, numerous normal droids, and 2 other sith, actually not bad odds. If you think about it. Imagine ther were still 70, with all 5 droids, and the 3 sith that would be 8.75 jedi/sith to 1 sith/super droid. or 2.5 Brianna's to The Sith's and driods, now while The brianna's are the second best in the galaxy, Locutus is #1, and 2.5 on him, he would probably cut them down within an hour, and by that time, there would be significantly less jedi by then, so it would end up being like 17 brianna's and 5 jedi to Locutus, and whoever else may possibly be alive, (Bosphan, etc.). And undoubtedly the larger droid force would win over the clones and jedi, and would most likely end up in the battle between My character and the Brianna's. So then we would have the upper hand here. :p

ooc:
1) Every Sith thinks that they held something back from their apprentice in order to make sure they couldn't be killed by them, and guess what? They still get killed by their apprentices...

2) Reduced by three or four... not thirty.

3) You say logically your one character would have cut down about twenty or thirty Jedi and Sith... and you would think by the same logic you would be able to see that 70 Jedi and Sith could cut down your one character... somehow that keeps eluding you.

4) A Jedi can be more than a match for a Sith. You can't be telling me that Darth Maul would have been able to handle Yoda, are you? What I was saying was that the Dark Side is more powerful than the Light Side, so a dark sider would potentially be more powerful

5) While one Jedi may not be match for a powerful Sith... I am sure 70 are.

6) I believe your super droids already were struck by Force lightning and hit the ground.

7) Numerous normal droids are in battle with a more highly trained clone army. They aren't simply going to overrun them in a matter of seconds and be able to surround you in defense.

8) If you are reffering to Ershuude and Boshpan, a) neither is close to as powerful as one Brianna, b) they are busy fighting against the other hundred Jedi

9) That brings the odds back to 1 Sith vrs. 68 Jedi and Sith.

10) Face it your character is dead. He is not God, he is not unkillable, he is not immortal, he is not one hundred times stronger than the second most powerful character. He is dead!

OOC: please read the whole thing. Yes i realize that there were 70 jedi/sith, true, but By now the many more than three of them would have been cut down, as If Locutus could cut down 2 in a matter of seconds, im sure he could take more out in the time it has been, also Never said he was immortal, GET A BETTER BRAIN TO HOLD MEMORY, WE HAVE GON OVER THAT MANY TIMES. another thing, i said a jedi could not beat a sith what i ment by that is a jedi of the same level, I.E. padawan vs. padawan, Not to mention AGAIN, that they are of a seriously lower level. And also i never said Ershuude and Bosphan could beat Brianna, just hold her off long enough, and the droid army is immesly larger, like 1 clone to 100 droids, Even a clone couldn't stand up to that odds, remembering the destroyer droids and the super battle droids, and such not. Also READ THE POSTS YOU MORON, I said the droids were TEMPERARALY disabled, i don't think that a bit of lightning could take them down that easily if one of them managed to survive being tossed into a pit of lava. Plus they were specially designed., And Locutus can hold out for more than seconds.... so :p, how the hell could he only kill a few, that alludes me, i think 40 or 50 is actually what it would really be at the moment!!!

ooc: First of all if you flame again, I am alerting the mods.

The only issue I am going to adress is the one you clearly aren't comprehending. While Locutus would easily be able to take out Jedi after Jedi if they were fighting alone, he can't do the same thing when he is fighting 70 of them.

Let me try to explain this to you with numbers. Say on a scale of one to ten, Locutus' power was ten and each Jedi and Sith was 1 (10 being ten times stronger than 1). When a battle is going on in which there are 70 Jedi and Sith at power level 1, and one Locutus at power level 10, the ratio isn't 7:1 (70x1:1x10). When two people fight together there combined power goes up exponentially not additively; meaning the ratio is much greater than 7:1.

1v1 repeated seventy times, does NOT equal 70v1.

(by the way, I am not sure why you get to decide that the Clone army is one hundreth the size of the droids...)

ooc: I am tired of this crap and I am tired of you. This RP has been effectively killed, and now it is time to end it.
IC:

Amidst the fighting, the original Brianna felt it. Another Force signature was getting closer, though she felt that it was in space. Much like that of her clones, the force signature was equal to Brianna's.

She gasped as she realized what it was... a bomb. A very large bomb, capable of wiping out Coruscant and much more. She had been double crossed by Bella and Max as it had to be them because nobody else had access to her signature. She left the fighting to the Jedi and her clones and quickly hurried away to a spot on the battlefield where nobody was fighting. Her lightsaber hovered in front of her to protect her from blaster fire as she sat down on the ground in a lotus position.

She began focusing on the bomb, trying to stop it from detonating, but because of Locutus she had been late in discovering its presence. She continued to sit and focus all her energy into stopping the bomb.


"Pity... I always knew she was too weak," Liam said to himself in disgust as he felt Brianna fall over, drained as all of her enerygy. "My soon to be new apprentice... has proven quite capable," he said with a smirk on his face as he returned to his chambers aboard his ship. The droids controling the ship sent it into hyperspace and soon they had tracked down Bella and Maximus' ship, away from Coruscant.


As Brianna had passed out, the bomb remained armed and continued to drift towards Coruscant. Soon it entered the atmosphere and began disintegrating. Pieces were falling off as the bomb was now at the point of no return.

And then... a massive explosion as the bomb fully disintegrated and released its immense amount of energy. The explosion shot through Coruscant and reduced it to nothing but space dust. It even reached nearby planets, scorching their lands and destroying their moons. Life upon what used to be Coruscant and was now gone, had been reduced to nothing. Nobody had escaped. The droids had all been wiped out along with their counterparts, the clones. The entire Jedi Order which had ventured to Coruscant in hopes of staving off certain death, got just that... death. All the sith, too, had been wiped out by the amazing power of the bomb. Bosphan had been killed, Ershuude was likely fried, Brianna and her twenty clones had all been deleted from existance, and Locutus had been vaporized. None survived. Not a single Jedi, Sith, or other being was able to make it away from the explosion in time as it consumed Coruscant and effectively wiped it off the galactic map.


Liam chuckled as he felt the heretics being wiped out. He felt each and every death as it occured. He felt Brianna's death and the twenty similar ones that occured simultaneously. He felt all the heretic Jedi's deaths... and he felt Locutus' death. None were left to oppose the power of the Greys. "And now... for my apprentice," he said as he had the droids send a communication to Bella's ship.

Sweat came down from Jack's head. He woke up in the middle of the night. Their was a great disturbance in the force. He felt the screams of people. Also the death of a sith and Ershuude. Making his way around the academy other Jedi were awake. He found out that Coruscant had been blown to pieces.

OOC: now, before you object, (fidgj;flsg;fsgm'ersd;kgksf) read it, befoe you say anything.

IC: Locutus woke up, he looked around, everything seemed hazy, Locutus said "what the hell, how did that happen, What are the odds that a bomb ended up doing me in? And that bomb, it felt familiar like i had felt it before. As he looked around he saw all the other people who had died that day, of them Brianna was one of them. He went over to talk to her....

OOC: if you wanna, u can, if not, oh well, i don't really care

OOC: Oh and by the way, i never meant to win that battle, my intesions were to get it to one to one combat, so it was just the original versus, Locutus, then i was planing on being defeated after the one one one battle, believe me if you want, like i said i really don't care

ooc: sorry, no. Brianna is not going to be RPed past death...

OOC: Im sorry, but did i not say that i don't care? (not to be mean or anything) but if that is the case, you never had to say anything, and could you please hurry up and post about Liam and his "apprentice" or get CM to, because i really dislike cliff hanger endings.

IC: After talking to Brianna, Locutus went over to talk to the master Jedi that he saw meditating. Locutus asked "what the heck are you doing?" The Jedi said "I'm trying to contact the living world, they need to know that a powerful being besides yourself and Brianna exist." Locutus simply laughed then he said "With me now gone from the living world who will be able to stop Her? Do you think that I can just come back to life in two seconds and beat her in combat? First of all, if I could, I would be severly drained of force power, and i wouldn't be able to win in combat, secondly god only knows where she went. The jedi simply sighed "What makes you think that you are the only one who could beat her?" Locutus stared into him "You did, thousands of years ago, and you know it's true." The jedi simply said "Well then as you say all thos times, its not over, then isn't it?" Locutus smiled "Yes, your right, this isn't over, but Im stuck here" The jedi laughed "you think so"

ooc: You say you don't like leaving things hanging and yet you would rather I not make a simply post detailing my intentions? Frankly, I have no concern for likes and dislikes and if me and CM decide to leave it on a cliff hanger because this RP was so thoroughly destroyed, he will. I have no greater potential to get in contact with CM, than you do.

By the way, you aren't going to RP Locutus coming back and possessing clones or something along those lines. He is dead and will remain so.

OOC: i plan on him remaining dead, look at the conversation from all point of views, and you will see there was a sarcasm in that concersation, and yeah, i would say you did do a good job destroying it, and ya you do have a better chance, because i remember him posting something about being here on your request, and im sorry you feel that way, thats your perogative, and IF you do leave, it is not yours to say what happens, like with dem

ooc: Changing your post after the fact to try to make me look bad isn't going to work. You had written, "Sure you are..." which as you said is a sarcastic statement, meaning that he really isn't. I belive you destroyed the RP back when you created your God character. And I have no way of contacting CM other than posting here and if he is reading these posts he knows it is turn. Frankly I don't care what you "decide" happens in this RP because you have already made it a total mess. This RP is dead so stop posting here.

OOC: ok, that wasn't the sarcastic part, and really, i don't really have to try o make you look bad, you being a strict does that enough, and i really did type it wrong, not that it would have mattered i would have fixed it if you had posted or not, so try again, and you aren't the one that decides if the RP is dead, only it's orginal creator, or those who wish to continue can decide that, unless someone closes it, and in that case that wouldn't look good for someone to ruin someone else fun, or what used to be fun..... and MY god character, hmmm lets just forget all about Liam, say he never did anything, or for that matter CM's who destroyed a whole planet, no let's just put mine under the spot light, and if you wanna come back with a retort, save it I already know what your gonna say "NO! you changed it to try and make me look bad (SURE)" oh and how would that make you look bad if the RP was dead, it would just be me and you, so that doesn't figure in with me......

I don't have the patience to deal with you anymore. No more retorts or showing how badly you have messed up (not that I need too as your writing does that for itself). I officially quit this RP and have added you to my ignore list.

OOC: Fine by me, i don't need someone who it seems that their entire purpose in the world is to argue with me, and who always takes what i say the wrong way, (I.E. that crap about being sensitve) and if you ever read this really i care not if you do or don't i believe this should put me on the winning side of the arguement about being able to contact CM He said and i quote "I am in this thread as a favor to DMG and others in my Jedi Academy thread." hmmm i see that your name is specifically mentioned, and also you are in the jedi academy thread, I am not :)

Sorry for the delay, Jolt's been a bitch for me and crashed every time I tryed to post. Here's my ending I wrote last week, and maybe its a little off, but it was dead-on when I wrote it.

IC:

Bella and Maximus looked at each other, smiling while watching the news that Corusant had been destroyed. Bella, as though on cue, warmed up the cloning machine and began to create another generation of Brianna, hoping she would find her body and join them in the hunting. After all, the bank required her to make the withdrawls on her account. Too bad all their Corusant money was worthless, but the payoff for killing Locutus was a star system and was well worth it. There, they could rebuld everything destroyed in their lives and maybe Brianna would get to meet Cassius.

OOC: by the way, CM i am not 13, and i do know that sometimes you lose, it's just i hate losing to a ***hole, that just wants to be mean, so i make it tough, and the only reason im still here and posting is that i just wanted a decent ending, and maybe to talk to those who would still post, but hey, i am man enough to admit that this was definately a mistake on my part.

Locutus laughed, "well this battle is over for me", with that he walked off into the distance, and faded into the mist, will he ever return, you never know, he might be gone, which is the most likely case, or he might get his revenge. But, that is highly unlikely, it is nearing the end of his public time. he may never show his power to the public again.

OOC: I had the same problem as you CM...ok so the rp died because you two were both triing to god mode and it failed. I don't care about that. I care that while you two were fighting my charactor was "Killed"...that is what pisses me off. That was major God moding and i am sick of all that.

IC: Ershuude woke up with a massive headache sat up looked around. It was pitch black. He used force push. The blackness was removed and he stood up. as far as he could see the sky was burning. Debris rained down on the world. he saw many Jedi and Sith dead on the ground. Ershuude gathered their lightsabers...to many to wear on his belt. He found a servicable vehicle and left. He longed to go back to the Temple on Yavin. He had been shocked by the evil of the final battle. Ershuude contacted Master Kurr through the ships comunications device. Ershuude told him of how he had witnessesed such destruction. Kurr belived him. Ershuude got permission to land and went to the main hall for his hearing. Ershuude wished that Jack and the other jedi who were left would forgive him for his blindness...

OOC: I had nothing to do with your character's death, and as it stands i too am ticked at my character having to die, but i tried to go along with that, but my character aint gone for good, if this rp were to continue long enough he would make a come back! :) And anyways, DMG did that so he could end the RP. I told him he couldn't, it has to be a unanamous decision so thats where he thinks he gets off on it

OOC: Pyronne Corusant was being blown to pieces. How could you be on the planet when it has been blown apart?

OOC: blowing the planet to peices was gdmodding because three other peoples charactors were on the planet... if that doesn't work than he was protected by the peice of metal he was under...or he got away before the last implosion of the planet...whatever...i did not give my consent to kill my charactor. I disregard the "death" of my charactor and assume locutus got away too.

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a very well formed argument

OOC: blowing the planet to peices was gdmodding because three other peoples charactors were on the planet... if that doesn't work than he was protected by the peice of metal he was under...or he got away before the last implosion of the planet...whatever...i did not give my consent to kill my charactor. I disregard the "death" of my charactor and assume locutus got away too.

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a very well formed argument

A well formed argument based on an RP that has been utterly destroyed by poor writing, RPing, logical, and comprehension skills. You can do whatever you want for all I care, but this RP is one of the most disgraceful ones I have ever seen. I admit it was a semi god mod (though there really wasn't a way for anyone to get away from the explosion), but sometimes you have to use a God-Mod against a repeat God-Modder.

OOC: i could have sworn he said he was leaving, i could have sworn...... and all i ever wanted was atleast a 1 on 1, and it's hard not to god mod when half the other playyers are at it too, cloning in a day, i tried that, and that got blown out, then cm tries it and all you say is that kamino couldn't produce clones that fast, then you stopped, so i don;t know how that figures in, and i don't know if you can read this but, i will post it anyway, because if your going to post on a thread make sure that you can read the posts from all of the people still there.

Canadstein you aren't Jack, I thought Goering was Jack. You guys kept laying down booby traps around each other then once u couldn't move to lay more of them you decided to set them off causing the death of the RP... Its not one specific persons fault. Its everyones fault.( acctually i blame Dem. because he founded it then left for whatever excuse he used, i cant remember) This was a good rp until you guys had to Try to kill yourselves(gods) and both tried to be immortal. That just pisses me off that you guys who are both good rpers would have to stoop down to godmodding to try and beat each other. that was rediculous

OOC: The planet being destroyed wasn't godmoding. Everyone had enough time to sense it (it wasn't cloaked) and react. Plus, brianna's trying to depower it would have been enough for it to just scorch the entire planet to where a good of lucky Force user could have survived it. We'll just say Corusant isn't dust but the surface is scorched to a diamond.

OOC: well your right CM the way you had the bomb set up was good, but then DMG had to have it come in right at the moment, so that was bull

ok so it wasn't godmoding but i was having problems connecting to jolt and couldn't submit a post telling what my charactor does to defend himself or escape or anything. I didn't get to do anything. it was discovered and destroied be fore i could log on again and get the F*CK out of there

well, RPing online works wit hflex time. Even if other events happen and you can't post, you can still post what your guy did so long as it does not conflict with what has already been posted.

OOC: well thats the thing, DMG god modded, by saying that the bomb came down right then, killing not only his/her character, but also mine, pyronnes, Dem/pyronne/my alterate. That was god modding, what you did was fair game. THe only reason i ended up god modding, was the fact that i wanted to end it 1 on 1 but DMG wouldn't let me

ok ill fix my post so that he leaves before the bomb explodes... what do you guys think we should do about the RPs state of almost total colapse

IC:
Ershuude sensed the bombs inpending explosion and distruction of the planet. The Jedi, Sith, clones and droids were retraiting. During the retreats he saw many Jedi and Sith dead on the ground. Ershuude gathered their lightsabers...to many to wear on his belt. He found a servicable vehicle and left. Just before he jumped to hyperspace a silent explosion took place in the atmosphere. The planet was blown to pieces. Coresaunt would be an asteroid field now. He longed to go back to the Temple on Yavin. He had been shocked by the evil of the final battle. Ershuude contacted Master Kurr through the ships comunications device. Ershuude told him of how he had witnessesed such destruction. Told him of the darkness that had shown him the light. Ersuude said the the darkness he had embraced had shown him the true light. Ershuude got permission to land and went to the main hall for his hearing. Ershuude wished that Jack and the other jedi who were left would forgive him for his blindness...

OOC: i think a total refix, like replot the thing, starting out with setting the characters back up, like who controls who, and then we work with after the bombing of Corusant. Im thinking, since i already posted that i did die, that we do like we did in the beginning and i get re-awakened (only in this case, as do to god modding) then we get together like on the OOC forum and decide where the story will go from there.

OOC: oh, and if anyone wants to, you could re invite DMG, not that he would go for it, but, if ya do, tell him that this time around no one will be god modding, no one....

yeah that is probly the best idea to use... but i think that Ershuude going back to the Jedi for repentance and whatnot is still my charactors "path"

Jack saw Ershuude. He looked at him.

"You are no Jedi. You left us. You will never be the person I once knew, but in my heart you will always be my friend."

Then Jack went back into his room and studied the scrolls from Ossus.

Ershuude was thankful that Jack still considered him a friend. Ershuude was unsure of what to do after the bomb went off. He came to Yavin because he had always felt safe here. Ershuude wanted his conscience to be cleared.

Ershuude stood before Master Kurr. His trial was about to start. Master Kurr started off by saying that he," Respected Ershuude for returning to the Jedi after the path he had choosen. Many fallen jedi never return except to attack our peaceful training centers."
Ershuude stood in the middle of a circle. He said, "I am ready and willing to accept the results for my actions, master. I know that I never officialy turned to the Dark Side, I admit that I was going to before I say the destruction of...." he trailed off.

OOC: I think that I should not decide if he is returned to the Jedi or not. some one else should decide the result of the trial.

Jack walked around to see Ershuude to have a trial by Master Kurr. Jack's lightersaber was around his belt. He still could fell the dark side still in Ershuude. He would never trust him again. Ershuude would never be the same person. Jack already told Master Kurr about his idea of starting a Jedi Academy on Ossus. He agreed and made him the Master of the Academy, but he was still a Jedi Knight. He was going to take some Jedi with him.

Ershuude was found guilty. He was sentanced to surrender of this lightsaber for an undefined time. He would also be sent into exile. Duringing his exile he would have to visit ancient Jedi and Sith planets. If he returned following the path of the lightside, he would be reinstated. Ershuude accepted these rulings. He made no attemt to argue for himself. He merly walked up to Master Kurr handed him his lightsaber and said," see you in a few years, master."
"I hope so, Ershuude." Kurr said.
Ershuude left...

Locutus was in a state of dismal gloom, je was still pondering on the bomb that had killed him, and where it's power had come from. But, he was far from concerned for the fact remained that Brianna had also been killed, so he was happy with that. For now he would lie in thought in the realm of death. He would think on how to get his revenge on the person that killed him. He was bound and determined. He would have his revenge.

On the planet of Ossus Jack brought one Padawan to begin the Jedi Academy here. The Padawan was building his lightsabers. He met with the Ysanna and showed them the the young Padawan. The Padawan was named Jaden Korr. After a weeks time more Jedi came to build the Academy. After a month the Academy was also finished. Inside they were setting up all of the electrical stuff. Jack's Padawan was going stronger every day. The Academy was not crowded but wasn't empty. There was about twenty Jedi Knights with their Padawans. Also so of the Ysanna were being trained.

Jack sat in the courtyard with Jaden. He told him about Ershuude.

"I once had a friend, but he was swayed to the dark side. He came back but was banished."

Jaden looked at Jack and stood up.

"From the stories you have told me about Ershuude he was a great man."

Jaden picked up his lightsaber and engited it. The color was blue.

"Make your move master."

Jack's and Jaden's blades hit each others.

Locutus sat waiting. Soon he would find someone to release him, but who? That he did not know. Now all he could do is sit and wait.

Ershuude went through many trials during his quest to find the true path of the Force. He went to several planets collecting holocrans and other artifacts. There were two planets left: Dantooine and Ossus. Ershuude would go to the ancient Jedi temple on Dantooine first.

OOC he doesn't know about Jacks academy on Ossus

OOC: ok, lets get the story moving, we need to replot this so, visit the OOC thread and we will brainstorm ideas of where to take this