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Jack could not take it anymore he remembered a line from Sith
Philosophy. "Peace is a lie, there is only passion."

Brianna sighed, Why must he require me to do it the hard way...

She tossed the boy's lightsaber to Boshpan who caught it and held it tightly. She closed in on the boy and began focusing intently - Attempting to dominate his mind and have him spill his every thought.

Ershuude sense that brianna was trying to dominate Jack. He set up barriers in Jacks mind. "That should slow them down 'til I get there" He didn't trust himself that much and pushed the engions to 120% power.

Too late. The barriers were weak because they were not set up by the force user that was under attack. Jack was already breaking under the pressure. "Good, very good," Brianna commented, "Go on... tell me everything."

"soon we will have company...... a jedi.... what fun" with that he turned the turrets back on to stall the jedi, and he locked the complex's outer doors.

Jack was even thinking anymore he was so weak now and said another Sith Line. "Through passion, I gain strength. What shall I tell you?"

Ershuude sensed his barriers had failed. "Damn," he thought he pushed the engions to 190% the fastest he could make them go with out a meltdown. He hurtled thourgh space at 15 times the speed of light. He saw the planet but it was too late to use the brakes he aimed right at the temple and turned the shuttle 180* and fired the engions at 190% slowing it mach 17 when he it the structure. If the shuttle hadnt been backwards he would have been killed instantly in stead he only had a cut on his forehead.

"who are you, why are you here, and what was your intention by bringing an army here?" locutus said calmly

"Tell me everything," Brianna continued, "Why did you come here?"

ooc: I am not quite sure how to react to a ship crashing into the temple at seventeen times the speed of sound... most likely effictively killing anyone it hit. So... lets just say it hit a part in which they were not.

Just as Jack was about to answer a escape pod of a ship crashed through the wall. One lone ocupant emerged. He stood lightsaber in his hand but relaxed. His shoulders were hunched over. He said one thing: "Let. Him. Go."

Feeling the crash, locutus turned to a droid control panel, and activated all remaining droids, and sent them searching for the intruder.

"I'm Jack Ryan. I'm here because Master Kurr told me to come. Master Kurr brother suspected Sith being on this plan. Through passion, I gain strength." Jack told them what they wanted to hear.

"What are there plans now?" Brianna asked Jack. She decided to let the dark lord and the base's defenses handle the intruder for now.

After Ershuude effectivly dismissed the droids(more like owned) he was shoocked to find that he had used a dark side power-Lightning. He decided that it felt good to have power and sow he strood calmly into the chamber were Jack was being tortured.

"I don't know what the rest of the plan is. Through strength, I gain power." Jack answered the question.

lifting his hand ever so slightly, locutus dissarmed the intruder

ooc Thats a good line "thrugh strength i gain power" Ershuude was physicly strong and now he has gained a power

"You are useless then... we shall have to kill you," Brianna said threateningly as she ignited her lightsaber.

She made a mental connection to the dark lord that only he could hear, "Perhaps they could be turned to the darkside... they have already embraced it somewhat."

Ershuude Glared at the Sith lord and just said:"That was a child trick" He laughed. It was not a laugh he had ever used before(it sounded like and evil animal being stuffed in a blender while cackling)

ooc: ershuude will convert only if jack escapes and goes free

"Through power, I gain victory.Through victory, my chains are broken.The Force shall free me." Said Jack while still enduing pain.

He returned the mental connection. "that is a high probability", Then he turned to the intruder and opened his arms. "you want to see true power?" eoth that he lifted his hand and closed it into a fist. at the same time the intruder flew into the air crumpled up, and dropped to the floor barely consious

Ershuude stood up a little shaken. He said again "a childs trick" he knew he had pissed off the Sith now he galnced at the Zabrak who had just watched this til now as Ershuude Pushed him into the wall and screamed "traitor!"

"Ershuude you fool why did you come?" Jack said very weakly.

Bosphan flew across the room and smashed into a solid stone wall. He was shaken badly, but still managed to get to his feet.

"Bosphan... the lightsaber!" Brianna ordered.

"Right!" he replied quickly as he grabbed up Jack's lightsaber and again held it seculery.

"Perhaps we don't need to be enemies," Brianna said to the newcomer as she was using some of force influence/dominate mind to help convince him.

ooc: she isn't dominating his mind, merely using a strong persuade that you can easily decide to overcome.

"I came to save you. But i can leave it you think you're up to the challenge of saving yourself." he said with a snarl.

Ershuude srugged off the influence of Brianna. By he now descreitly had recovered his lightsaber and placed it on his belt, just in case.

At this point, all locutus said was "Kneel" and the intruder fell to his knees and as much as he tried he couldn't get up.

"Hey Ershuude get my lightsaber back." Jack was still weaked by now that Ershuude he found new strenght.

Even though he couldn't get up he still said "you kneel!" forcing the sith lord to at least bend his knees "a powerful acomplishment for one so young" the sith said

"Why fight us?" Brianna asked again, "You have seen the weakness of the light..."

She raised her hand behind her and applied a powerful force choke to Jack.

"No!!!" screamed Ershuude. "Do what ever you want to me but let him go." he was still on his knees

Jack could fell the force choke. "Stop I will do whatever you want. Please just let my friend go." Jack didn't want Ershuude to endure anymore of this.

Locutus clocked both of the guests on the head with large pieces of newly formed rubble, and hoped it would knock them out

Again across the link that she had created with Locutus, she commented, "Now is your chance to convert them... they are both weak and willing."

Felt a piece of rubble hit his head he was knocked out.

again he returned the link "not yet, we need to sepearate them, and then promise them the same thing, that we would release the other."

Ershuude swore as he was hit in the head with a piece of rock. Let him go and i will convert to the dark side.

Locutus used the force and picked up a giant metal beam. he used it like a bat on the second persons head. and hoped he would finally shut up

"Betray my trust and i will kill you like the animals you are!"he said as he sliped into darkness

"Now you take Jack to the torture chamber on the other side of the academy" he told brianna, "and get him to crack!"

Ershuude coughed and slowly stood as he cast of the beam. "You underestimate my power!"(kinda like anakin in ep 3)

Jack woke up to see he was in a different room and the woman was there.

ooc: we have 5 and a half pages of lightside following of the rp, in times new roman size 10

Locutus cast the intruder what you could think of as a sad look, as he dropped a nerve gas grenade next to him. The gas invades ones body and temperaly paralizes and knocks out its victum. Locutus hoped it would put him on ice for a good 10 mins. He yelled "maybe this will make you SHUT UP!"

Eight and a half minutes later Ershuude started to wake. "Damn! this kid is stong that stuff could knock out a normal person for 15 minutes!" Locutus said as he hit Ershuude in the back of the head with his lightsaber hilt. Ershuude grunted as his world went back to night-time

When the intruder woke again he looked around the room, then asked "Where is jack, what have you done with him?" Locutus looked at the him and said "he left. When we found he was of no more use we let him leave. You on the other hand have something we want..... YOU!"

ooc: Sorry, I had to do something, though now I am back.
IC:

As Jack awoke he found that he was strapped to the ground with force resistent chains and Brianna stood over him. "Have a nice sleep," she said sarcastically.

In the darkness of the corner, Basphan stood.

"Really?" he said unbelivingly. "I'm sorry if I dont belive you but something screams that you are lying to me." Ershuude was knocked out as the Sith slamed his head against the wall. "What... the... Hell...," he mumbled as he went to sleep.

"no, where the hell is Ershuude?" Jack looked at Brianna.

Ershuude woke in the same room as before. He opened his mouth to talk and felt his head slammed in to the wall causing another nap-time for him. "STO...P......I..TT..." he yelled as he fell asleep.

ooc: i thought id add some comedy in to the plot

Locutus waited for the intruder to wake up, then when he did, locutus activated a video screen that showed Jack excaping in the escape capsule, which he pointed out was no longer here. Ershuude had failed to notice. Then locutus said "by the way, I never got your name...."

"Its Ershuude, but i guess since you let Jack go i should call you 'master'"he said while bracing himself for another impact againt the wall. When it didn't come he let his guard down. Big mistake...

"We gave him to options," Brianna said as she stood in control over Jack. "He could either fight us and die trying to save you... or he could leave you here and never return."

"Do you know what he chose?" Brianna asked rhetorically, "I will tell you... he chose to leave you here... he doesn't care about you!"

"Fine I want the choice to fight you then bring it on you weakling!!!" Jack stared at Brianna.

Locutus set the unconsious Ershuude on a the chair in the middle of the room, and awaited him to wake up

"You don't get that choice," Brianna said as she lowered a hand (would be raising it, but Jack is directly below her) and again force choked him into silence. "We decided whoever was strong enough to recover first would have the choice..." she mached him, "And he was stronger than you... you are weak..."

The bench that Ershuude had been laying on started to move. It was moving into the wall. He rolled off it in time to see Locutus ignite his lightsaber and the blue beam leapt out. He examined the blade. "Hmmm, this blade has seen to much action for it to have originaly been yours. Whose was it I wonder? Whats this! the back is shorn. How could that have happened?"
I don't know Ershuude lied.

"I don't trust you at all. You are a coward now give me back my lightsaber you coward. Ershuude would never join you." Jack wasn't going to listen to the sith.

Jack got up and used force push against Brianna.

ooc: note... he is tied to the ground with force resistent chains... not sure how he got up nor moved his hands.

locutus twirled the lightsaber around, "wait" he said "I have seen this blade before, but where?"

"I don't know!" Ershuude felt Locutus probing him for the answer. Locutus smiled when he found the answer. "Wait." he said, leaving the room. He returned with the other half of the hilt. Ershuude gasped at what Locutus wispered in his ear.

"I don't trust you at all. You are a coward now give me back my lightsaber you coward. Ershuude would never join you." Jack wasn't going to listen to the sith.

"You are right... he didn't join us," Brianna said still standing over him, "We gave him the oppurtunity to join us in order to save you... but he decline... he instead chose to save his own ass and left you here to be tortured... and die."

"Then kill me if you have any guts then. I'm ready to die and one day other Jedis will kill you. Then once again the world will be in a better place." All Jack needed to do was get back his lightsaber to get out of here.

"Thats where I know it From. I remember a disturbance in the force, and I caught glimpses of a battle, two figures, dueling it out with lightsabers, a man, and a woman. Half way through the battle the lighsaber was cut in half....." he trailed off.

ooc: alright its after midnight here so im gonna go to bed now il be back in the morning

ooc: remember Loc, that women was Brianna.
IC:

She again choked Jack to end his pitiful moans, "ENOUGH!" she bellowed. "I gave you the choice... join us now... become powerful... have your revenge..." she began attempting to dominate his weakened mind again, "Or DIE now!" she shouted.

Locutus thought for a sec, and then slammed Ershuude's head once more into the wall. Then he called in some droids, and told them to drag him to a detention cell.

A little while later, locutus entered the second room and saw Bosphan, Brianna and Jack all there.

OOC: i had to break the silence!

ooc:Kong is freaking epic, go see it

Ic: "stop!" Yelled the tired Bosphan. "If you cannot tell, he will not turn to the dark side. and he knows not about this plot! Just hurt him, badly, then send him back to the imperial palace and tell them this will happen to all jedi who defy us!"

"I thought I told you to be silent and remain in the shadows," Brianna said yelled at Boshpan and simultaneously broke her connection to Jack. "You think you know more about the mind and psyche of a fragile and broken jedi than I...!"

"hmmmm" said locutus "guess i gotta go tell sleeping beauty......"

"I thought I told you to be silent and remain in the shadows," Brianna said yelled at Boshpan and simultaneously broke her connection to Jack. "You think you know more about the mind and psyche of a fragile and broken jedi than I...!"
"This is a foolish waste of time, I'm going to the ship to scour for parts to replace the droids we lost in the battle." There seemed to be much defiance in him, something was uneasy inside him.

Meanwhile on Yavin4, Master Kurr was heartbroken."(deep sobbing)Why! those damn sith, I'll kill em'!" He screamed. He then departed to coruscant to appeal to his brother for more troops.

Think what you like Brianna thought as the two left and she was now alone with Jack. She turned to him when she was sure they had both gone and said, "Good... now they are gone, and I can do what I feel like with you."

She sat down on his chest, forcing much of the air out of his lungs. She pulled her lightsaber from her side and ignited one of the ends, bringing it dangerously close to Jack's throat. "The only thing that was keeping you alive before was them... now they are gone!"

"halt, lets not argue, we got more pressing matters. that battle left our fotress in ruins, and our army greatly thinned. We need to amass more troops. The enemy is sure to return, and we need to be more prepared this time. and you are not going anywhere bosphan or have you forgotten something?"

On his ship nearing Coruscant felt his padawans may yet be alive. Wich would make this not a revenge, but a rescue mission. As soon as the ship touched down he cames sprinting at the emperor."(Heavy breathing)Brother, brother! Our worst fears have been realized, the sith have returned!" The whole palace seemed to come to a hault"I need an army, with all the jedi we have, and I need to rescue my padawans! He begged.

"You fool! can't you see that they would be dead, this is about more than you! If there are sith, we cannot attack them with our current force! We'd all be slaughtered! I need time to amass an army."

"You coward! If it was you out there being tortured you'd be begging for help! How could you betray your own people!" Then he left, and at that moment, he felt he would never speak to his brother again.

"Kill me I will never become a sith come do it not so I will not have to live threw this pain any longer." Jack didn't care anymore.

"halt, lets not argue, we got more pressing matters. that battle left our fotress in ruins, and our army greatly thinned. We need to amass more troops. The enemy is sure to return, and we need to be more prepared this time. and you are not going anywhere bosphan or have you forgotten something?"
ooc: what the hell are you talking about?

ic: I have forgotten nothing, I am going to gather parts. I'll be back in a few hours." he then took off with a few droids.

The mysterious figure watched as Kurr ran by him in the hall and towards the emperor. He entered the room at the end of Kurr's rant and made his presence known with the slightest clearing of his throat.

OOC: you never actually despite the following posted events, got to constrct your own lightaber. You used the ones you found... or anyway thats what the story should tell.....

The mysterious figure watched as Kurr ran by him in the hall and towards the emperor. He entered the room at the end of Kurr's rant and made his presence known with the slightest clearing of his throat.
kurr stopped,looked at the figure thn ran right on by.

ooc:hahah

OOC: you never actually despite the following posted events, got to constrct your own lightaber. You used the ones you found... or anyway thats what the story should tell.....
ooc:Fine after i get the parts.

ic:Yes master, Right after im done scavenging the parts I will construct it

Liam entered behind Kurr and listened to his talk with the emperor that seemed to silence everyone in the palace... everyone save one. "And so the pathes are revealed."

Liam entered behind Kurr and listened to his talk with the emperor that seemed to silence everyone in the palace... everyone save one. "And so the pathes are revealed."
"what did you say?" Yelled the already frustrated kurr."I was not speaking to you, so hold your tounge or i'll cut it out!" After he said these words he realized he was straying away from the light.

ooc:major plot twist coming

OOC: ahhh, the corruptive lure of the sith....

IC: Locutus Went back into the room, to see what damage had been done.....

ooc: lol, cool
IC:

"I said your pathes have now been revealed," the mysterious man repeated, "What happens next... is your choice."

As Bosphan realized how many parts there were he realized there were too many to carry. He called in the whole army to help him. Once the parts were gathered, he began building his lightsaber, he made in to ablood red dual sided saber wich he would cut down anyone wityh, he felt. After that was finished, he began work on the army. Once he realized these were ridiculous amounts of battle droids, he stopped."But what to do with these leftover parts" he thought to himself. Then he thought about a fleet, oh how powerful they would be, a working fleet! He worked day and night and finished it. "My lord, we know have40,000 operational battle droids waitng behind the base and 10 battleships.

ooc: lol, cool
IC:

"I said your pathes have now been revealed," the mysterious man repeated, "What happens next... is your choice."
"My choice!you son of a ..." he then gathered himself,"I'm leaving going into exile, I'll return someday."

ooc:lol, thanks guys, it wont take him long to break and give up

"The amazing wonders of exile..." the mysterious man said as he forced the doors to slam close before Kurr coudl exit. "I know them all too well... do you want to face them... is that your choice? To leave everything behind..."

ooc1: Liam is currently in self-exile also (as you would know if you read his history)
ooc2: It moves the plot so I won't really complain... but usually you need massive docks and machines to build starships.

As he entered his ship, Kurrs mind was lost, he was once composed, brave, and rational. All that was gone now, he had to get away, go to dagobah, where the greatest jedi of all time had once lived. There he could die in peace...

ooc:obviously thats not the twist

"The amazing wonders of exile..." the mysterious man said as he forced the doors to slam close before Kurr coudl exit. "I know them all too well... do you want to face them... is that your choice? To leave everything behind..."

ooc1: Liam is currently in self-exile also (as you would know if you read his history)
ooc2: It moves the plot so I won't really complain... but usually you need massive docks and machines to build starships.
Bosphan is brilliant, with all the material he found he probably built the damn starports

ooc: um, I kind of closed the doors before he left
ooc2: I know... I was just saying that it did move the plot along and helped established the basis of the sith power.

ooc: um, I kind of closed the doors before he left
ooc2: I know... I was just saying that it did move the plot along and helped established the basis of the sith power.
well lets pretend that didnt happen then

well lets pretend that didnt happen then

ooc: boo :(
IC:

"He has chosen his path," the mysterious man spoke again as he Kurr steamed out of the room. "It is too late to change his will... though his choice will only lead to more destruction..."

Locutus went to look at the army. It seemed like a nice sized army and locutus was pleased. suddenly locutus turned to bosphan and brianna "I want to know why my powers are gone, and I need to seek answers"

ooc: boo :(
IC:

"He has chosen his path," the mysterious man spoke again as he Kurr steamed out of the room. "It is too late to change his will... though his choice will only lead to more destruction..."
ooc:srry didnt do what you wanted,but imtired and done for the night, you I give you permission to post for anyone you like though. you could advance the story by yourself tell tommorow

ooc: we can just continue it tomorrow then, unless Locutus wants to have a conversation between him and Brianna.
IC:

"Perhaps, it occured when they sealed you in your tomb," Brianna suggested having left Jack in the cell to think about his fate.

OOC: Nahh, I to need to get off. So yea. We will continue the story tomorrow

IC: locutus said "that is a definite possiblility, But power like that doesn't just dissappear. It has got to be somewhere and i got to find it"

ooc: okay, continue tomorrow we will...
IC:

"You know... there are stories of the Jedi cutting people off from the force," Brianna threw out there.

Locutus simply thought and said "If they did. I know who would have done it. It would have been the one that I called a friend....Sheila....... She will Pay"

"In time..." Brianna said as she walked to the door. "Lord, what shall I do with the prisoners?"

"Well if you are going to kill me kill me now. I will never embrace the dark side." Jack had regained some strenght, but not all of it.

locutus turned and and gave an evil smile "oush them, soon the will see that there is no other way than to join the dark side" Then he re-activated his helmet and stared deeply into the sky.

"Give me my lightsaber back you coward. The sith are weak and the Jedi will destroy you." Jack looked at the sith locutus

"We, are weak? You were the one who was broken during interrogation. You cracked like an egg. Now you have the backbone to call us weak?" With that Locutus laughed. Then he grabbed jacks lightsaber and tossed it to him. Then grabbed one of his own and ignited both ends.

Jack ignited his lightsaber and he got up and got into a battle position. "There is no death; there is the Force. Where is Ershuude you bastard?" Jack waited for Locutus and Brianna he was ready to fight.

Brianna cut his chains loose and stood to the side, ready.

Locutus simply said "We let him go. He wasn't worth our time to kill nor our energy. We gave him a choice, and he decided that you weren't worth dying for." Then with his other hand he grabbed another lightsaber hilt and ignited both of it's ends.

"Why should I believe you? Bring it on!" Jack picked the Soresu style of lightsaber combat. When looking in the past files the great Obi-Wan Kenobi used this form.

Locutus beckoned him foward, and sarted twirling both lightsabers around him to form a sphere of light.

Jack waited for him to strike to start fighting.

Locutus simply grinned as a rock went flying towards jack.... Locutus then jumped and landed behind and slightly to the left of jack

ooc: oy vey.
IC:

Boshpan, irritated by the timid combat styles of both Locutus and Jack, pulled out his blaster. Focusing his force energy into it, he aimed and fired directly at Jack.

Brianna cared not to watch the remainder of the fight. She sighed and left the cell before heading back to her chamber. She walked into her room, closed the massive stone door that sealed her from the rest of the temple and then sat down on the floor. She began meditating, though occasionally she would watch the ongoing battle through the force.

Jack blocked the shot from Boshpan. The shot went flying into a wall. Then he used force speed to be directly in front of Locutus. He got his lightsaber and was about to strike Locutus.

locutus let out a long fury, of hard hitting attacks, Each with the power to stop a speeder in it's tracks, But none of them were getting through More or less on purpose...... Locutus was trying to push jack back into the wall which he seemed to be doing an effective job.

Jack knew that Boshpan was going to be a problem so he used force push against him. Boshpan flew into the wall. Jack hoped that he didn't get up. Then he used force push to propel himself into the air.

locutus concentrated on jack, and then he used the force to bring jack to the ground. He charged at jack he unleashed 2 strikes at the same time, one strike was aimed where his lightsaber wasn't the other was aimed at where it was. HE didn't aim to kill him, buit just to glance him.

Bosphan was quite angry when he recovered from his spill. He had stayed mostly out of the combat, allowing the two to fight, except when they were being timid. But Jack had stupidly attacked him, which meant he wasn't focusing on the more lethal threat from Locutus.

Bosphan concentrated on his blaster, increasing their speed and power. He then let all hell loose as he repeatedly fired at Jack, unrelentingly.

Jack landed and Locutus tried to strike him but he blocked it with his lightsaber and aimmed for his legs.

Bosphan fired with great speed and power but let his emotions get the best of him thus his shots were off target, blowing a whole in the side of the academy.

Ershuude woke. He looked around. Blinked several times. Ershuude could not tell if he was awake. He stood, felt for the wall. Ershuude followed the wall to the door He touched the pad by the door. It opened. "Stupid sith," he said to himself. Ershuude was surprised to see that Brianna was standing right outside the door waiting for him.
"Walk with me," she said.
Ershuude followed her with out protest. His head hurt too much for that.

Locutus, beneath his helmet gave an evil smile, and though no one saw it, they could feel it. Then locutus struck at jacks saber with both of his, and managed to acheive an excelent saber lock. He pulled one of his blades down to destroy jack's saber hilt.

Bosphan now took advantage of the weaponless jack and held his newly constructed lightsaber at jack's throat,"Master, we should kill him, and send his body back to Coruscant!"

"Fine, Locutus if you are not a coward let me face your apprentice alone. I have no need for a lightsaber against him." Jack picked up his broken lightsaber. If he got back to the academy he would make a new one from the old pieces

"No, I attacked him, to prove a point. There is no point in killing him." He laughed and he then asked "you still think the sith are weak?"

ooc:dude, youre a freakin teenager with no lightsaber, theres no way you could win this fight. But, I do have a rescue mission coming, so just run out of the academy

ic:"You fool, you expect to challenge me with no weapon!" Bosphan took the Makashi form of combat, and was ready to cut Jack down.

Brianna took Ershuude to the lightsaber sparring room. She handed him both halves of his fathers lightsaber. She said, "Turn them on."
Ershuude did thinking "Well, at least I'm armed now."
He pressed the two activation buttons. The blue beam leapt out as expected. But from the other half, a scarlet blade hissed into existance.
Ershuude stared looking confused he glanced at Brianna who only smiled and motioned for him to follow take ing the two extinguished halves.

Jack used force push and ran up to Bosphan. He kicked him and ran out with using force speed. He got into the escape pod used and shot back into space.

ooc: Pyronne... seriously watch the GM. I didn't put Brianna there at all - so stop controlling her.
IC:

Brianna led him to another room in the temple. She placed her hand on the pad next to the door and it responded by opening in front of them. She pushed him inside the dark room - it was pitch black - and closed the door behind him. He couldn't see as it was so dark, but if he could he would notice that there was no pad to open the door from the inside and it now locked him in.

Meanwhile back in space, Kurr regained his senses."No, I still feel them, they somehow still live, I know what to do." So, without another word, he ruturned to yavin4 and took every jedi he had, including apprentices(around 150 jedi). He had them gather their supplies and with out even explaining what he was doing, departed for Korriban, he would save them, no matter the cost...

Jack used force push and ran up to Bosphan. He kicked him and ran out with using force speed. He got into the escape pod used and shot back into space.
ooc:noooo,lol, damn you, there goes the rescue mission!

Jack sent out a distress call from the escape pod. He hoped someone got it if not he would be stuck in space since the pod was slow.

As his battleship sped through space Kurr saw a small pod pass by, it was him,Jack had escaped! he immediately ordered his gravitational cannon to pull him in. "Jack,Jack! My god, you're alive! What about ?Ershude, is he okay?"

OOC: didn't u just post that???

ooc: the pod is not slopw its just dammaged to the point where it doesn't work too good.

IC: Ershuude lay there, for how long he didn't know. He had given up all hope. All that drove him to survive was the lust for revenge and his hatred of the Sith who had imprisoned him

"No those damn sith said he left. Master Kurr also do you have another lightsaber, since the sith's master Locutus broke it. There are three siths down there." Jack said while waiting for Master Kurr.

Locutus stood and pondered.... "well now we only have one prisoner. Let us hope he does not escape either. But enough, we need to rebuild our base.

Ershuudes eyes had adjusted to the darkness. He had heard that explosion that sounded like an engion lifting off but he couldn't be sure if that was real or just his imagination.

ooc: Kurr has Ershuudes single bladed lightsaber

"No those damn sith said he left. Master Kurr also do you have another lightsaber, since the sith's master Locutus broke it. There are three siths down there." Jack said while waiting for Master Kurr.
"My young padawan, have i not taught you well enough to see past a mindless lie? He would never leave without you, he is still there, and as for your other question, yes, I have an imperial blue double sided lightsaber. I know you're speciality is with one-sided, but this is all I could spare."

As they closed into the atmosphere, Kurr ordered all jedi into pods, as the battleship was a sitting duck.

Jack got his lightsaber and ignited his new blue lightsaber. He got his old lightsaber and took out the crystal to make a new one. He got in a pod with some other Jedi. Then the pod shot out and was bound for the planet.

Locutus stood and pondered.... "well now we only have one prisoner. Let us hope he does not escape either. But enough, we need to rebuild our base.
"My lord, there is no time, scout droids have confirmed jedi in the atmosphere, and our mainn army is not operational. All we can spare is about 500 droids, we will all have to fight this one."

"We might not have time for that," Brianna commented as she had securely locked Ershuude away and entered the room with Locutus and Bosphan. "I sense a large force coming towards us... perhaps we should leave?"

"no, I have a better plan..... we shall let the prisoner go.... But we will put a tracker on him.... Let us see where he heads....." locutus said with an evil laugh

Ershuudes eyes had adjusted to the darkness. He had heard that explosion that sounded like an engion lifting off but he couldn't be sure if that was real or just his imagination.

ooc: Kurr has Ershuudes single bladed lightsaber
ooc:nah, its more interesting if he uses a blade hes unfamiliar with

Ic:As the pods struck the surface Master Kurr ordered all Jedi to spread out and advance on the base. "Spread out, and avoid that turret fire! Once youre inside look for a jedi by the name of Ershude, destroy any droids you see!"

Ershuude had had enough of the room he went up to the ancient stone wall and began to bash it with all his strength. First using he shoulder, then pounding on it with his fists until his knuckles were bloody. He then kicked the wall and threw his body into it.

"We might not have time for that," Brianna commented as she had securely locked Ershuude away and entered the room with Locutus and Bosphan. "I sense a large force coming towards us... perhaps we should leave?"
"not time, they are coming"Screamed the frightened Bosphan, they had just finished a battle, and already another one was commencing...

ooc: that was in reference to Locutus' comments.
IC:

"Indeed, I have already injected him with an undetectable tracking device when he was unconscious," Brianna commented. "Now gather up your stuff... and lets go!"

Ershuude finally gave up his assult. He sat down on the rock floor and riped his shirt to make bandages. He looked at his ragged apperance. He had four days worth of beard, his hair was disheavled, and his clothes were torn. He suddenly felt cold. He wished he had his robe.

Jack ran up and was the first one out of his pod and ran out a turret and slashed the turret in half. He then saw some scout droids come out. "Charge!" he yellled. Jumping in the air Jack landed on a droid and used his double sided lightsaber to stab two droids at once.

OOC: You should keep Ershuude as a prisoner and try to brain wash him.

ooc no it didn't! the door didn't open! nobody opened it yet! be patient!

as master Kurr easily avoided the turret fire, he noticed something, since he had broughten many inexperienced jedi they did not possess force jump or speed. They were sitting ducks, by the time they made it to within 100 feet of the base, he had lost half is jedi, and inside, 500 droids and 3 sith were wating..

ooc:k, to keep mthis organized, were going in turns, itl go me,locutus,dmg, then jack, then ershude

Locutusd beckoned the other two to follow. He headed into the hanger. There while Bosphan and Brianna were expecting two ships, there were three. Locutus simply commanded the droids to prep for launch, and he bolted the doors with a command code, and sealed off the academy.

ooc: the time that was intended for was like 2 days from where you guys are hes been there for four days.

ooc: finally some organization, thanks dem.
IC:

Brianna typed in the coordinates into the the control panel of the ship and it blasted off. She left the Jedi in the dust as they landed and she departed. The next destination... unknown.

Locutusd beckoned the other two to follow. He headed into the hanger. There while Bosphan and Brianna were expecting two ships, there were three. Locutus simply commanded the droids to prep for launch, and he bolted the doors with a command code, and sealed off the academy.
ooc:Guys, im gonna be gone all day until about 4pm tommorow so you can rp for kurr and bosphan

ooc:Guys, im gonna be gone all day until about 4pm tommorow so you can rp for kurr and bosphan

ooc: ug... you leaving now?

Jack ran threw the droids and made it inside. He was on a bent of revenge. He slashed threw the barely armoured droids. Then he looked threw the academy and opened a door. He saw Ershuude on the ground. "Hey Ershuude get up the welcome party has come."

Ershuude looked up, grunted and stood. He coughed and said, " I thought you left in the 'scape pod. Jack could tell he was very weak. Ershuude tried to walk but fell over. It was then that Jack noticed the pool of blood around where Ershuudes hands had been. He called for med-evac.

Locutus and Bosphan both entered their ships and took off. Near the edge of the system locutus stopped and entered a debris field. Hidden Inside was a battleship of great magnitude in perfect shape except for it being abandoned. Locutus called bosphan on the comlink system and told him to head for dock A.

Boshpan and Brianna followed Locutus into the debris field. Dodging the pieces that came flying at them, they skillfully flew their ships into Dock A of the battleship.

They exited their ships quickly and ran to meet up with Locutus at his ship.

Locutus jumped out of his ship, and looked around. Then he said "someone needs to go to the engine room, and another needs to go to the gun control room. I am going to the bridge. As soon as you to fire up the engines and activate the guns. we will be able to leave....."

Brianna nodded and headed off. Boshpan would obviously be the one gonig to the engine room as he knew much more about mechanics and engines.

Bosphan entered the engine room a short time later and hit the comlink to the bridge, "All good to go here." He flipped a few switches and kicked on the engines as they were now ready to go.

Brianna meanwhile had made her to the gun control room and sat in the command chair. Flipping on the automatic guns, she took the controls of the main cannons, "Locked and loaded," came her voice over the comlink.

After the engines were fired up, full power was restored to the ship, and locutus made his way to the the command room. There he activated all the worker droids on the ship. He ordered them to set a course for a system a little ways away........ Kamino......

Ershuude woke up on a medical transport flying towards a large flagship. He hoped that it was the Jedis. He hope was confermed as Master Kurr noticed hi and said, "By the Force how is he consious. Well, as long as you're awake I will go ahead and tell you that you were right. Jack was alive. The only thing you did wrong was try to save Ja..." That was all Ershuude heard. The transport hit some rough air. Ershuude went back to sleep.

Back on Coruscant, the mysterious figure of Liam spoke again to the emperor, "A terrible decision you have allowed Kurr to make... You risked and lost countless jedi in the rescue of two... two! Two pathetically weak jedi... were they really worth the death of eight others?"

The large ship came to a fast halt in high orbit around a planet covered completely with water. Locutus called his two apprentices to the bridge and waited their arrival

After recieving the message to come to the bridge over the comlink, Bosphand and Brianna left their posts and began walking down the hall. Half way to the bridge, the two met up in a narrow hallway, which was designed strategically to make it harder for bording enemies to attack the ship - it was only wide enough for one person to go through at a time. "Excuse me," Brianna said as she came around one corner and to the narrow hallway, nearly running Bosphan over.

"No, excuse me," Bosphan replied, "It was my fault... after you," he gestured to let Brianna go ahead of him.

"Why thank you... you might just be learning some manners after all," she smirked as she walked appealingly in front of him, swishing her hips as she went.

"Wh-what do you think we are doing here?" Bosphan asked nervously as he began down the hall after Brianna.

"Well this is Kamino... most likely he wants to build a clone army like that of recent times," Brianna suggested as they reached the door.

"Ah," Boshpan commented as he opened the door to the bridge and allowed Brianna to enter ahead of him.

"ahh about time" said locutus as the two entered the bridge. "I have brought us here for two reasons. THe first is to clone those two idiotic jedi and clone us up some troops. the second is to destroy the cloning facility. We can not have the jedi making more troopers. Destroying It will be easy. After we get our clones we will take off again and use this ship to destroy the facitity"

Jack went into his private room and started to build his new lightsaber. He used his old parts to make a new one. The lightsaber turned on and a green light appeared. He tested out his new lightsaber. The lightsaber spin around then turned off. Jack put the lightsaber onto his belt and also Ershuude's other lightsaber. He went into the medical bay. "Hey Ershuude how do you feel? Master Kurr also wanted me to give you this." Jack handed Ershuude the lightsaber.

"Fine," Brianna said as she shifted her weight in her cat like suit, "Did you secure DNA from the jedi to clone?"

Why is he using the weak Jedi for clones? Brianna thought to herself.

Locutus didn't speak only dug into his utility belt and pulled out two vials of red liquid. "These jedi will make useful spies. And they will be perfect for battling the real ones." locutus finally said. With that he took the ship into the planets atmosphere and dropped it down into the water where it went down to the bottom. the other two could here the hull creaking and Bosphan winced. Locutus only laughed.

"You to realize it takes years for clones to be completed," Brianna commented to the power hungry dark lord, "We will have to come back for them... if the battle lasts for that long."

Jack got up and said "There is a great disturbance in the Force." Jack knew something bad was happening and the sith were causing it.

locutus pondered this...... Well "I totally forgot about that. Well I guess we will just have to clone them in the future, but kamino's cloning facility will not be there." Locutus fired up the engines and took the ship back into space. Then Locutus fired the main cannons and annihilated the facility. With that he whispered something in a droids ear and he punched something into his console, and the ship sped into hyperspace.

unfortunately, this blast by the foolhardy sith lord attracted the attention of a fllet of ships floating around in the utapau system, this was going to be a chase...

ooc:you dont just blow up a whole fucking planet and expect to get off that easy.

Locutus looked over at one of the consoles, and noticed something he turned to his apprentices and said "man the guns"

Brianna nodded and rushed off back through the tight hallway to the gun control room.

edit: lol, my bad.... I forgot you were back and able to control Bosphan :headbang:

Locutus looked over at one of the consoles, and noticed something he turned to his apprentices and said "man the guns"
"Yes, my lord. Oh, wait, when I was docking I noticed a large ion cannon that was partially hidden, if I were to shoot this, it could blow up a ship in one shot."

"True there is an Ion cannon on the ship. I should know, I designed the ship. But, if you are going to man the ion cannon, you will need to activate its power core. Here take this and put it into the computer" he handed Bosphan a disk. "now hurry"

"True there is an Ion cannon on the ship. I should know, I designed the ship. But, if you are going to man the ion cannon, you will need to activate its power core. Here take this and put it into the computer" he handed Bosphan a disk. "now hurry"
Without even acknoweleding his master as he normally does, Bosphan took off, he installed the power core in the cannon and manned it.He loaded it up, targeted the main battleship and blated it out of the sky, now all that was left were some small fighters

The comlink in the bridge sounded. "This is Brianna... I have reached the gun control room and are tracking incoming targets."

The comlink in the bridge sounded. "This is Brianna... I have reached the gun control room and are tracking incoming targets."
"Master, we could jump to hyperspace and leave. We should get back to the base and continue our training, these fighters are irrelevant."

Locutus told the droid to cut power to the hyperdrive engines, and he made his way to the hanger. When he looked out the hanger doors he could see incoming targets. He jumped into his fighter and took off into space to engage some of the fighters. He pulled the trigger back for a long pull and destroyed three fighters Then launched two torpedos which took care of two more.

Brianna replied over the comlink, "I am not sure if that is possible... they know of our base there and we would not be safe. We must find a new planet to set up our secret base..."

"For now though... you are right, lets jump hyperspace and get out of here - they have a lot more ships than our one."

ooc:dude, the imperial army wont be there for like another 5 years, and the whole droid army is there

Ic:Bosphan contacted his master via comlink."Master, im making the jump now, sensors are picking up more ships coming, our bases defense turrets will keep them away. the silence by his mater was all he needed. He made the jump and within minutes they were in the hangar on korriban.

OOC: Not that it would fit in the hanger, but ok....

IC: locutus made his way to the ramp, and looked around. He felt no jedi presence...

ooc: yes it certainly wouldn't fit - but whatever, lets just say it is in space orbiting the planet.
IC:

"We are not safe here," Brianna protested to the dark lord. "I know that we have a droid army ready for battle... but that does little good when the Jedi come with a massive fleet of ships and bombard this planet back to the 4000BBY. We must gather what we can and leave..."

ooc: thats stupid

OOC: new idea

IC:

Locutus thought for a moment and said "brianna is right we can't stay here. It is to risky. Collect what you can. I will.... I will prepare to take the ship to Mustafar......"

Brianna had already gone to her room and quickly collected the vital objects she had recovered. She left the heavy stuff in the locker, but took ancient objects as well as the lightsaber (and parts) with her. Returning shortly to the dark lord she spoke, "I am ready to leave."

Soon, Bosphan returned, and they got on the ship. The ship took off into space, and within minutes dissappeared from view into hyperspace.....

ooc: Democracaaay, I think this would be a good point to move the plot forward a few years - if you want to. Just make a semi-detailed post saying what happened in the years that we skipped and how the different characters (and sides grew). I will make a post on what Liam did during the time, but you can say how Brianna advanced.

ooc: i agree

IC:
Ershuude had to have his left hand replaced. If it were truely peace time he would have just learned to fight with one hand. But time was pressing and he didn't have time for that. They were going to have to search the outer rim. He jokingly said," It'll be the last planet we look at master. Kurr nodded and Jack said, "Really, no we'll find them but go check another planet just for fun." He was a quick healer. About a year after they left Korriban Ershuude was completly rehabilitated. They only thing Ershuude didn't get back from their seach of the Korriban base was his fathers lightsaber. He didn't tell anyone what he had seen, the red blade. They had serch the few close by planets but Ershuude didn't think the Sith would stay nearby. Jack and Ershuude continued to spar. They had done it so much that they were a perfect match for each other. When Ershuude would strike Jack parried and struck back. They looked like they were part of a deadly dance with flashes of green and turquoise.

ooc: Democracaaay, I think this would be a good point to move the plot forward a few years - if you want to. Just make a semi-detailed post saying what happened in the years that we skipped and how the different characters (and sides grew). I will make a post on what Liam did during the time, but you can say how Brianna advanced.
ooc:sure

Ic:Once the dark trio landed on Mustafar, they immediately took what supplies they had brought and moved them into the central plaza of the now abandoned Mustafar. Bosphan had also thought to bring parts on the trip and used what he had to upgrade the Anakin ravaged plaza into a workable base. With the defenses set, he set out in the giant battleship to retrieve his battle droids from Korriban. Once they were returned, they used their now free time to train.

The dark lord showed them how to hone their skills by meditation as well as using the enviorment, such as one of the two using the force to pick up a lare rock and hurling at the other student who would then cut it in half. After they were amply trained, Locutus had them spar. Obviously for the first few matches Brianna was the victor. But it was coming abundatly clear to the two powerful sith he had potential to easily match or surpass any jedi or sith in power, he had just to use his potential. As he beheld his pupils training, Locutus was also slowly regaining his power. Once he felt he was powerful enough, the dark lord hopped into his small pod, took off to Nar Shadda, and slaughtered Atilla the hut and his entire gang. And once Brianna and Bosphan were strong enough, they would make short trips to close planets and steal war droids and the parts to build them, this army was now strong at 200,000 spread out on Mustafar. With this great army and three powerful sith leading it, it appeared nothing would stop the sith...

New Bio

Name:Bosphan Tradonis

Position:Sith apprentice

Bio: Bosphan came to the sith a weak, cowardly zabrak.But none the less he came with a great connection to the force, a brilliant engineering gift, and will to kill every jedi. He has proved useful to the dark lord(unamed to most people) in his quest to dominate the galaxy, as he has builten two great bases and single-handedly made a great droid army. He is now tapping into his potential as a fighter and apears close(Along with Brianna) to being named a sith lord.

Abilities:Brilliant and Great with lightsaber(still questionable with the force).

Weapons:Blood red dual phase lightsaber,Zabrak heavy blasterx2

Age:32

During the span of the years the sith grew in power, Kurr regained his self-control and confidence, although he was still angry at his brother who was going to abandon his two pupils. Jack and Ershude steadiy grew in power and Jack was named a jack was named a jedi knight, with Ershude about to be. Although he would not speak to his brother directly, he kept in touch with what he was doing by sending his regional diplomat to keep him posted. Everytime the diplomat returned, he told his brother of the increasing size of the imperial army(Clone troopers, but not from Kamino as you blew it up). On the latest report by his diplomat, Kurr was told of his brothers plan to march on the sith, as he had scout droids tell him they were on Mustafar. The war would begin shortly and it appeared Kurr's jedi would not be joining them...

Over the next few years in which the Sith and Jedi grew stronger and prepared for battle, Liam was wandering across distant planets. He was gathering information from his connections about what each of the sides were doing and what there plans were. He was also growing stronger in the force and had perfected many lightsaber forms. Also, he managed to contact the spirits of former Jedi and Sith and learned much from them. Currently he is located on the planet Vortex.

OOC: aint much of a reason for a new bio for loc.... as the onlything that changes is more power.....

IC: Locutus stood at the observation post and looked down upon his army. Those that stood around him couldn't help but think that the dark lord seemed troubled. He could feel an army moving, but there wasn't any real power to it. Another thing that troubled him was the fact that it was coming towards them. He walked over to a control panel,and brought it to light. In the display was a picture of a woman. No one knew who it was except for locutus. HE just stood there staring angerly at it. Soon she would pay for what she did to him. Soon she would feel the biting end of the blade she kept from its master. In the end she would beg for death, and he would not give it to her. All of a sudden a powerful wave was felt in the room and the machine projecting the picture crumpled up and fizzeled out. Locutus turned away, in search of his apprentices.

As the final preperations for battle were being made, both sides had a few last things they needed to take care of.

The empeor knew this battle would be almost immposible if he had no jedi and all the jedi that remained in the world were the students of his brother. Instead of sending a messenger, he went himself. Kyle immediately recognized his brothers ship before it landed in the hangar. "What are you doing here, I have no desire to speak to you." Kurr sounded very serious."Look, I'm sorry for what happend to your students, but you have to let it go now. There are bigger things at work here than me and you." The emperor was leading up to asking him."Let it go! You would have left my pupils to certain death! I lost many of my finest students in that mission you bastard! Screamed the enraged Kyle Kurr."Look, if you don't go to war with me, the sith will win and all your pupils will be all killed, as will everything good in this galaxy! This statement really hit home, Kurr seemed to finally relinquish his personal feelings."Okay, but after this war is over, you will stay away from me and my academy. With that the emperor left and the final preperations for war were done...

Brianna had established a nice "base camp" for herself - in reality it was just a room that stood alone in the middle of a courtyard. It used to be a bunker so it was well protected including a massive steel door and a turret on the roof, which was only accesable from going inside the bunker. It also had a few storage lockers and a comfortable bed which presently Brianna was laying on. She had commissioned ten Droidekas to be loyal to her and always be by her - presently four of them stood outside the door, two inside the bunker, and the other four on the roof.

Secretly, even keeping it from his master, Bospphan hired some of the finest mercenaries in the galaxy, mandalorians.As he was looking over his army the dark lord recognized a ship on the horizon and was ready to blast it out of the sky until Bosphan stopped him and told him of the new aquisition. Now the already mighty army added 500 good mandalorians...

Locutus being slightly annoyed at being left in the dark simply gave Bosphan a really dark look and said " I want all droids ready for war within two hours. In the mean time I have things to attend to." all of a sudden out of the dark came five droids. two resembled battle droids but held double bladed lightsaber hilts, and were silver in color. another two were indeed HK series droids of an unkown model. The last stood tall and had a cape. When It came into the light Bosphan stepped back a couple feet. IT resembled General Grievous, except it was all machine, instead of part living. Bosphan looked at it with a tiny remote bit of fear.

Locutus being slightly annoyed at being left in the dark simply gave Bosphan a really dark look and said " I want all droids ready for war within two hours. In the mean time I have things to attend to." all of a sudden out of the dark came five droids. two resembled battle droids but held double bladed lightsaber hilts, and were silver in color. another two were indeed HK series droids of an unkown model. The last stood tall and had a cape. When It came into the light Bosphan stepped back a couple feet. IT resembled General Grievous, except it was all machine, instead of part living. Bosphan looked at it with a tiny remote bit of fear.
"My lord, I never built these, where did they come from?"

Locutus smiled and laughed "you are not the only one that knows how to make droids. Besides. The technique i used to make them requires a deeper understanding of the force than you currently have. Though i wouldn't put it out of Brianna's reach......"

"Great, we should positon them on the front line with our sith war bots." Said the confused Bosphan, not knowing what they were made for.

" oh......, no" said locutus "these droids are not for the front line. They are my personal droids.... They would muder the opposition before it had a chance to pick up it's weapon. What is the status of the droid production facility? has it been fully repaired?"

New Bio

Name:Jack Ryan

Position:Jedi Knight

Bio: Jack Ryan has grown in the past four year. He has become a Jed Kngiht and has been training with Ershuude. Jack and Ershuude are still best friends. He was know that the war is going to get more extreme and wants revenge against the sith for what they did to him. Even though Jack is a Jedi Knight he treats Ershuude with respect.

Abilities: Force Speed and Push.

Weapons:green lightsaber

Age:20

New Bio:

Name: Ershuude Del Korra

Position: Jedi Knight

Bio: Still coping with his injuries of his previous engagements with the sith, he surpresses all outward signs of his hatred for their kind. He does not hate the dark side he hates the three sith in particular. Flirts with the dark side as a result of this hatred and his lust of war and battles. Jacks best friend.

Abilities: When in the pure light: Force Jump and Battle Meditation/ when consumed by hatred: add Lightning

Weapons: Turquoise single-bladed lightsaber.

Age: 21

Master Kurr found Jack and Ershuude dueling in their usual spot. This time however they were not using their lightsabers, they were using longswords. Like the Jedi of ancient times. The small clearing rang out with clinks and clangs. The swords sparked when they hit together. Kurr said nothing as he watched the two fight. He became very interested and didn't notice that he had been there for over an hour. Finally Ershuude was knocked off balance, a result of his recent growth spurt. Jack disarmed him. And said" Yield," then as he laughed, "I win."Kurr sliped away while Jack helped Ershuude up. They walked back to the temple dorms comenting on each others weaknesses and strengths durning the fight.

OOC: actually your still an apprentice from the post Democracaaay. Though you will become very soon.

Jack went back to his room thinking about the invasion of Mustafar by the Empire. He wanted to be there, but Master Kurr's brother didn't want the Jedi to be there. Jack knew that the troopers were going to get massacred by the Sith. He had grown in strenght, but the sith must of also grown too. Especially that girl named Brianna. He had been deeply affected by that experince and would never join the sith. Ershuude had also changed, but something bother Jack about his exprince with the sith. Jack cared deeply about Ershuude and thought about him almost as a brother.

Locutus now stood on the bridge of his battleship, and took in reports of the suroundign sectors, so far no ships were near. His star fighters had been busy the whole day setting up orbital laser cannon platforms for the upcoming assault. He knew that they would not stop all the ships, But it was a start. His battleship would also engage incoming ships as would the fighters,but even with all that firepower a good majority of the ships would land safely. They would just have to try their best to minimize the attacking force.

Brianna sensed the war coming... the final battle. She would stay on the surface and fight from her fortified bunker. As the battle began and raged on, she would use battle meditation to support the droid forces against the Jedi. But eventually, if and when the Jedi made it to her bunker... she would ignite her deadly lightsaber and let all hell loose.

Currently she was meditating as she floated her self in the middle of the room - her droidekas still keeping watch.

OOC: actually your still an apprentice from the post Democracaaay. Though you will become very soon.

ooc: page 4 post 58 says that was already a knight on our first mission ( you were one too)

Jack was going to wait for the war to start without the Jedi. So during the night he took a ship and made his way to Mustafar. He then made his way onto the planet far away from the supposed base of the sith. Jack got on a speeder and made his way off. When he got close to the base he left he speeder and scouted the area out.

Locutus who had been meditating, made his way back up to the bridge. The droids had made a transmittion to him about something "important" Locutus came in and demanded an explination. One of the droids piped up "sir, We detected a vessel that landed a few hours ago. We were observing it and made no move to let it know we had detected it. It was the vessel of a jedi warrior. Also, our troops on the surface have detected the craft. They have also found a speeder. Location of the pilot remains unknown. But, he can't be too far from the base, as his speeder was less than a kilometer from it." locutus simply sighed and went over to send a transmittion to the planet.

"Yes, my lord?" bosphan had responded. Locutus said in an amused tone, "we have visitors bosphan. Please accomidate them, and give them a warm 'welcome', please shoiw him our best hospitality." "yes my lord" Bosphan replied, "it will be done.

Jack was hiding behind some rocks and saw the siths base and waited until a Sith came out to fight.

Jack was hiding behind some rocks and saw the siths base and waited until a Sith came out to fight.

ooc: lol, why would we do that... one jedi, versus an entire army of droids.

Ershuude couldn't sleep. He went to see if Jack was asleep. He glanced in Jacks door, trying to be quiet. He looked around not seeing jack in bed. He turned the light on. Jack wasn't there. Ershuude tried to sense him through the force. Jack must be far all he got was random glimpses. Then he saw a lake full of molten rock and fire. It doned on him that Jack was on Mustafar. He ran to Master Kurrs chamber. He told him of this turn of events. Master Kurr said it was too dangerous to go after Jack. Ershuude reminded him of what had happened last time Kurr had denied his request to help his friend. Kurr said, " Okay but take a battalion of troopers with you."
" NO, they'll be too obvious. I'll go alone."
Kurr replied," I'll come with you but I disapprove of this."
"You don't have to, master" Ershuude said with a smile

Locutus went to his room on the ship and began meditating. HE let his mind flow out, feeling everything within lightyears. He concentrated on what he had been taught searching back for something. Then he found it. He had found her. Sheila was near. He would finally make her pay. HE jumped up, and turned towards the door. Without even moving his hands, both of his lightsabers flew up into them and ignited. Suddenly the door opened, and in came.....

Jack was hiding behind some rocks and saw the siths base and waited until a Sith came out to fight.

ooc: ugg... can we please get this war going.
IC:

Brianna was still meditating inside her armored bunker. She felt the presence of the young Jedi land on the planet's surface and approach the base. She stood up and walked over to the control panel at the side of her room which had command controls throughout the base. Typing quickly, she sent a command for the droid army located on Mustafar to surround the young Jedi and kill him. Within seconds the base was a buzz as tens of thousands of droids (only a small portion of the army) began marching towards the Jedi's location.

Bosphan and his small portion of the army were closing in on jack and were ready to finish him until Master Kurr and Ershude landed on the surface of Mustafar. Kurr knew that they had no chance of facing this lforce of around 5,000 so he ordered his pupils to combine their powers and all force push the center of the army, this sent the whole section flying with the exception of Bosphan and his sith war bots who were too heavy to be pushed, He activated his saber and began pursuinng the fleeing jedi, since Ershude was known more for his power than for his speed, he quickly fell behind the fleeing jedi and Bosphan caught up. As Ershude turned, the saber was already at him and off went his leg. Bosphan was furious."Damnit, you're not Kurr! AHHHHH! I swear I'll get you bastard! Get this pathetic excuse for a jedi to the cryogenic freezing room!"

ooc:Got my 360 a few days ago, thats why i havent been posting, hope it's alright for your leg to get chopped off

As Kurr and Jack reached the shutttle, they both realized Ershude had been captured. "We have to go back and get him!" Yelled Jack."No, No! Don't worry, they won't kill him, and the imperial army will be here soon. Then we'll destrot all of them and get Ershude back!" Reluctantly, Jack got on the ship and rendezvoued with the main army. General Habban immediately spotted the jedi enter the imperial capital ship(Biggest freaking ship ever). "My god, it's kurr! How are you doing? All of you're other jedi landed on this ship a few hours ago! There in the mess hall on florr 16,room 187." the general was happy to see the only master in the world."Thank you, general, By the way, when we reach Mustafar do not destroy the main base, I have a pupil in there."With that, he departed and met up with his jedi brothers.

Sheila stood in the doorway, and smiled "it's been a long time locutus." Even though her name did not mention a hint of it, anyone could tell of her 'asian' heritage. Locutus stared at her and said "you made a mistake coming to me. Here I have the advantage." she rolled her eyes at him and said "so, you want to keep this all business then, huh? You want to forget all the great times we had together?" "GREAT TIMES?????? You mocking me with my own blade is great times? I trusted you, and you turned your back on me!" locutus said not infuriated. She gave him a slightly sad look "I have seen the errors of my ways. I'm sorry okay? I know now that I shouldn't have done what I did, and that saying sorry aint gonna cut it, but you have to believe me, I'm sorry that I hurt you." Locutus gave a short laugh "Oh, your right. You are sorry, but not as sorry as your gonna be!" With that locutus leaped forward at struck out. Before the blade reached where she was, she had leaped and ignited her lightsabers. They were both a darker shade of purple. The two clashed, apparently even matched. The battle kept changing hands every couple seconds, and then..... Locutus struck out and it collided with her saber, and he ran it down. It cut into the saber hilt, and the blade flickered out. She pulled out another saber. It was a double bladed one. She ignited the ends, and instead of purple blades coming into existance, they were crimson. Locutus stared at the blade, and then launched a lethal attack. She kept blocking him. Then he concentrated. All of a sudden, he could see the blades movements before they hit.

He used this to his advantage. He attacked, and attacked finally, as she hand a momentary upper hand, he reached out with his blade, and cut her hand off. His blade went flying. She dropped to her knees, and dropped her other blade. Locutus walked over and picked up his blade with his now empty right hand. He felt it's power coarse through him again. He turned to Sheila and said, "I have waited for a long time for this." He circled around back of her, ignited on of the blades, and cut across her back. IT wasn't deep enough to actually cause damage, but deep enough to leave a mark. She submitted "I am yours now,.......My lord." Locutus simply smiled and said "I could use your help.'

Locutus and sheila made their way to the bridge, and locutus told the droid in charge. "prepare all the guns, and ever fighter i want able to launch on my order, not ready to launch, actually launching on my orders. I have a feeling that we will be needing a lot of firepower!"

Hearing his master's orders, Bosphan was ready."Droids, Activate.(Thousands of droids turning on), Get in your fighters and engage those fighters,our capital ship and frigates will handle thir main ships, move!" He then ordered another section of droids to man the turrets. Finally, he ordered his best pilots to enter the main ship and it's frigates. On the main battleship, 4 droids manned the outer turrets, 6 piloted, 30 guarded it from boarding parties and 1 manned the ion cannon. The trio of sith knew there ships were outnumbered so there goal was to take out the main ship and as many fighters as they could wich would make the turrets job easier.

After that the fleet was prepared, Bosphan Spread out the droids wisely. He positioned the bulk of his army(160,000) in front of the base ready to meet the imperials in battle. He then commisioned 20,000 droidds to defend the hangar and the inside of the base. Afer that, he used his elite armored war bots and his mercenary mandalorians(Around 2,000) to flank the enemy. He positioned them just over the ridge were the battle would take place. He knew this flank would most likeley decide the outcome of the battle.

Bosphan looked at the radar and saw them closing in, a massive fleet, 10,000 fighters it seemed."Droids ships, take off, remember fighters kill the fighters and battleships and frigates aim for their capital ship!" With that, they took off and prepared for an epic space clash. 400 droid fighters and 3 battleships vs. a capital ship and 2,000 fighters.

ooc:someone else can rp the space battle.

Brianna sat in her armored bunker and meditated in midair. She was concentrating her force ability into battle meditation to hopefully help the droid army hold back the Jedi. However, she knew that they could not hold out forever and eventually she would have to fight, and so she had her double-bladed red lightsaber floating in front of her.

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Liam decided it was necessary to see how the war turned out for it would directly effect what his future was to be. He hopped onto one of the Jedi ships that was bound for Mustafar and meditated as they blasted through space. Soon... soon this war will be over... ... ...unfortunately.

ooc:this is not the end, although I may have a main character die.(none of your guys without permission)

Warmth filled the body of one long dead. He was a clone of one of the originals, his DNA strand kept intact inside many a computer's memory banks for just such a purpose. It was common knowlege that all the Mandalorians were dead, but common knowlege was often just rumors kept alive over generations. Here was one of the last Mandalorians, most of the true Mandalorians had interbred with Echani creating a new breed of warriors, and pure Mandalorian blood was scarce now. However, the Kominos had kept all the Jango Fett DNA on file, even after their destruction, and the creators of this warrior had found more such DNA when they were lucky enough to find undisturbed Mandalorian armor. They spliced all this DNA along with a little Idorian and Echani and they had created a warrior almost perfect. Program his mind using neural implants and a memory chip in case he was killed and all the knolege wouldn't be lost and they had no need to retrain operatives.

"Zero Zero Seven, it is time to wake up." a female Echani voice stated, alluring the warrior to rise, with one helluva headache.

For a while locutus watched the battle. His ship was battering the lead enemy cruiser, and the fighters were picking off other fighters and the gunships. THen all of a sudden a large explosing came from the cruiser. One of it's forward ammo bunkers had been destroyed. Locutus smiled and made his way down to the hanger. HE jumped into his ship and took off. He headed towards the action. He started destroying fighters, and gunships. Then when he was close enough, he let loose a barrage of blaster, minigun, missle, and torpedo fire at the spot where the explosion had been. The ship trembled, bucked and sprung out. Another large explosion tore through the entire front half of the ship. Explosions were happening everywhere. Then he looked around and saw escape pods launching and could only assume that he damaged it enough to where it was going to blow up. Locutus, being evil and all took his chance. HE began strafing the escape pods. Destroying all that he could. All of a sudden, hes fighter rocked. His fighter had been hit by a torpedo. While it didn't to any permanent damage, it ruined his paint job. He clenched his teeth, and pulled back hard on his joystick. HE brought it around to see who launched the torpedo. He saw a fighter fleeing and chased after it.

Brianna continued to meditate and use battle meditation to weaken the spirits and morales of the enemy while simultaneously raising the ability of the droids. Her personally upgraded droidekas still sat surrounding her armored bunkers and the turret atop it was online and prepared to fire...

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Liam stood calmly aboard a landing ship that was departing from the main battleships toward the surface of Mustafar. He stood without weapon in hand and an indifferent/unattatched look upon his face (though it could not be seen under the shadow of his dark cloak).

"Zero Zero Seven. You have a mission."

"No shit. That's why you revived me. What happened last time?"

"Oh, last time," the sweet Echani voice called, "You got zapped by about eighty droid dekas with repeating blasters. We're lucky we recovered your chip unscatehed."

"Yeah, you put it a meter of powered durasteel and flesh. Any photos of my corpse?"

"Ever seen a match after its been struck?"

"Yes, why?"

"That's what your last corpse looked like. Anyways, you killed your mark, and with your revival and rearmament fees you have a net balance of 50,375,023 credits. And this new mark should be a suitable challenge for you." the echani woman said.

"Bella, whenever you tell me a challenge, it means I'll get killed at least once. And how many times have I told you to call me Maximus."

"Maybe on our dates, not on the job Max." Bella said, smiling, "Anywho. Your target is a Sith named Brianna. Her believed location is near or on Mustafar inside a bunker with dozens of guards and droid dekas. I hope you remember their armament on the Prime Minister job? Yeah, it'll be tough, but more of a stealth mission. Your new armor will reflect that. More Echani in nature, its stealth generators allow you to walk at 1.5 meters a decibel sound. No powered armor because its frequency would give you away, so you'll have to go in the front door. And you have pretty much invisibility, a light refractor allows you to act like a bottle of water. Add that to the grav drivers that allow you to float and stick to walls and Force disruptors to not be detected by either Jedi or Sith, we have you pretty much covered. Your weapon will be ion blasters, a Super Force Disruption pistol to rip any Force Sensitive out of the force and kill them quick and cleanly, and wrist darts to take care of anything silently we think you're covered."

"What about a slug thrower and armor?" Maximus stated.

"You have whatever armor comes on the suit which is equivalent to Jedi robes but nothing more. As for a gun, no. They are too loud and clunky for this mission."

"Its a Sith," Max countered, "They can deflect blasters with their lightsaber but the metal slugs just melt and burn their flesh all the way through."

"Your dart thrower is the equivalent." Bella said nonchalant, "Plus, if you die we just rivive you at only 5 million credits cost like always."

"I'm getting too old for this shit. Maybe next time you revive, do so with my body back to the way it was when I was 29."

"Maximus, you never did tell me that one little fact..." Bella said over the intercom while the mercenary was entering his cloaked version of Slave One.

"You have my DNA sequence. Figuring out my personal appearance shouldn't be that hard now can it?" Maximus said stepping into the pilot's seat.

"But it is more fun if you tell me and back it up." Bella said playfully as Maximus took off and hit warp. He was in-system within a day and landed five kilometers off from where he was told to attack and grabbed a rather large pack of thermal detonators. One hundred to be exact. He marched the six klicks and placed the charge on the front door and ran away.

KABLOOSH! The bomb exploded prematurely, sending a pressure wave fierce enough to break Maximus' back. There he was, struggling in front of a bunker he was trying to clear, back broken, jetpack dead, stealth generators fried and left to the mercy of his prey.

"Great...just great..."

The explosion knocked the door in and sent Brianna hurtling from her hovering meditative stance into the wall. Luckily, with her fast reaction times, she was able to position herself to minimize the damage as her body smashed into the hard, cold wall. The pain was intense, but she managed to brush herself off and get to her feet. After she was stable again and had regained her sense of balance, she slowly made her way to the large hole in which the door once stood. As she looked around she noticed that the droids had been fried by the blast and she was now alone in the area... that is until she saw the intruder's body lying limp a short distance away. She walked over to the intruder and kicked him onto his back, "Who sent you!" she yelled at him with rage.

"Uhhhhhh," he replied in pain.

"Fine... have it your way," she said as she pulled her lightsaber from her belt and ignited one end. "Last chance... tell me or die," she said as she raised a hand and began force choking him (though he was still able to talk).

"I-I don't know..." he replied still in obvious agony.

"Then die!" she screamed as she released the choke hold and brought her lightsaber in for the stab.

"No..."

"Huh!?" Brianna replied as she stopped in mid thrust, "Who's there? Who's voice is that..." She was clearly unnerved by the mysterious voice speaking to her without her knowing of it's presence. "Where are YOU!"

"Here..." replied the voice calmly as a cloaked figure emerged a few meters away. Brianna raised her hand in attmempt to force choke the figure but to no avail. "No..." said the figure again as he walked closer ever so slowly.

"But-t... how?" Brianna was clearly confused at why the figure was not being choked. "I am a SITH LORD! You will obey me!" she cried out at him.

"I think... not," replied the figure as it was now only a couple of feet away from the kneeling sith lord. Maximus still looked on but was unable to do anything from his vulnerable position.

"But ho-" Brianna repeated as she was becoming frustrated.

"Silence... repeating yourself is not necessary. You will understand all in time, if you so choose.... but for now, you will do as I say," replied the cloaked figure.

"I will not bow to anyone," she replied in a vile manner.

"You will bow to me!" Brianna felt her knees buckle under her and she fell to a kneeling position. "You are going to do as I say whether you like it or not, Brianna!" As everything else had failed, Brianna now relied on the last thing in her possession to strike out at the cloaked figure; her lightsaber. But as she went to swing it at him, she found that it flew out of her hand and landed in the lava of Mustafar. "So strong willed... so resistant..." replied the cloaked figure, "That is good... but for now... you sleep." Without moving a finger, the hood of the man's cloak fell backwards off his head and his face was finally revealed; just as soon as Liam revealed his identity to her, Brianna felt a crushing sensation in her throat and went limp...


When she woke up, Brianna was laying on a examination type table at a distant cloning facility. Across from her, lay the crippled body of the man who had attempted to kill her on Mustafar. As she came to, she rubbed her eyes and tried to remember what happened; as she did, all she could remember was seeing the face of Liam... and nothing more.

Bella's sweet voice called Maximus to awaken. His back had been healed, and the mark was next to him. However, considering what had happened earlier, he was willing to give her a chance. He activated eighty Force Disruptors around her and she awoke.

"What are you going to do to me?" she asked.

"Well, Briana, I'm not sure. You're a Sith, and Sith make for bad buisness. as you well know, I almost killed you, but you could have finished me off. Not for good, mind you, but still have made my mission of eliminating you hard to say the least. So I'm willing to make you a deal. We have adequate cloning facilities here. Bella informs me that during your slumber we have had taken nough of your DNA to clone you infinately number of times, and it is stored digitally. So if you die, all your spirit has to do is come to this planet and enter a pre-made clone. Your doing so will animate it and we will take it from there. We also offer to perform certain services for you in exchange for you helping us kill your master. However, since there is still a price on your head we must kill you to provide a body and lack of spirit in the Force. So we have a dieliemma. Either you say yes and mean it and we kill a clone and use the Disruptors to mask your presence...or you say no and we actually kill you. Your choice, you have five minutes to decide." Maximus said, levelling a Force Seperation blaster as well as a projectile pistol.

Brianna had a strange feeling as she was cut off from the Force. "So let me see... my options are say yes and I don't die... or say no, and I do die," Brianna said mockingly. "Hmmm... well that is a tough one. Do I really only have five minutes to decide?" she said sarcastically. "I guess I will choose... yes," Brianna said.

Bella said over the speaker from the clean room, "Good. Now, as your partner, I am required to inform you that you must be kept here and cut off from the Force for a week just to make sure we get paid. You'll get a third of our 150 million credit bounty, but you have to remain in hiding for a while. Then you can go and help us kill the guy who contracted for your killing. It was that guy you and Maximus saw planetside."

Brianna sat up as she pictured the man's face again. Who was he? How was he so powerful? Why did he want her dead? Why didn't he just kill me? Brianna's mind was flowing with thoughts since she regained conciousness. "How long have I been out?" she asked.

"About two weeks. We were worried for a while, but when that Force Disruptor kicked in you improved drastically. Looks like a Force poison job." Bella said without emotion, "I did all I could, but it was Maximus who really knew what was happening, so we shot you with all kinds of adrenals and you improved constantly. We kept you asleep, however, until we knew exactly what our options were. So here we are...Maximus."

"Yes Bella, I know, I have to go and dump the clone to recieve payment. Before I go, I want you to backup my chip."

"But I did that while you were asleep."

"Yeah, and we have made a new friend since then."

"Sure sweetie." Bella said with a grin as cords came from the wall and implanted itself into the base of Max's skull, copying all he knew and saw. "Update complete." she said, "Now go to it."

"Yes dear..." Maximus said, disconnecting himself in a frustrated manner, and picking up a genetic duplicate infintile in its lack of a mind, dropped it, beat ti up a little, and finally shooting it with a blaster a number of times. He then carbon froze the stiff and loaded it onto his ship and left for the planet of Tattoine, the meeting place.

OOC: If she was knocked out the Battle against Lord Locutus must be over by now.

"Uh... Bella?" Brianna said to get her attention, "I have a few questions and concerns that I can't figure out. You said that man hired you guys to kill me..." she asked.

"Yes..." Bella replied.

"Well... if he wanted me dead," Brianna continued, "Why didn't he just kill me when he had the chance? And if he did bring us here... why?"

OOC: If she was knocked out the Battle against Lord Locutus must be over by now.

ooc: No, the battle is still going on. Its called fluid time. It means you can have two things going on at once... but not at the same time in the RP time. So the battle is still going on, but the scene with Brianna is a couple weeks into future.

"Uh... Bella?" Brianna said to get her attention, "I have a few questions and concerns that I can't figure out. You said that man hired you guys to kill me..." she asked.

"Yes..." Bella replied.

"Well... if he wanted me dead," Brianna continued, "Why didn't he just kill me when he had the chance? And if he did bring us here... why?"

Bella replied, "Ours is not to reason why, but to do. Do you recognise the quote?"

Brianna searched her mind, trying to remember if she had heard those words before. Seeing as she could not, she answered Bella in the negative, "No... no, I can't say that I do. Should I?"

"It is an old Soldier's creed. We mercenaries carried it over. Our policy is not to ask why, who wants it done, and what role in the Galaxy it takes. We just do what we're told and laugh all the way to the bank. We decided to spare you becaus we didn't like the job and me and Maximus are thinking of quitting, moving the labs, and raising a family on a distant planet. You can help make that happen by making sure we're alive by eliminating many enemies we've made. We'll keep reviving you as long as we can, but you may have a few delays so stick around the facility if its necessary." Bella said not mentining the possibility of them killing her with a Force Disruption pistol to permantly kill her.

"Alright then..." Brianna commented still not completely trustful of her new acquaintances.

"Oh... by the way, I need a knew lightsaber," Brianna added as she hopped off the bed, "That man, he destroyed mine..."

Locutus pulled the trigger long and hard, and a long chain of lead poored out. Locutus had prefered using the rotary cannons he had installed compared to the lasers, they were far more fast and effective. Half way through the chain the bullets hit their mark, the ship blew up, killing its occupant instantly. the rest of the bullets kept traveling, all of a sudden 5 bullets collided with something. a series of spark issued from a ship, locutus could only see it for a few seconds. Then, the cloak reconstituted, and the ship dissapeared. Locutus laughed and smiled. This was gonna be a good day yet he thought. a few minutes later, he felt a huge explosion. He pulled back hard on the stick and headed planet bound. The battle in space was almost over anyway. Clone ships were beginning to land.

Once on the planet, Locutus went to the source of the explosion, there he saw a merc. and Brianna lying unconsious. By the lava, he could see what little remained of a lightsaber hilt. Most of it had been melted. He used the force and picked it up. Suddenly, he felt he wasn't alone. He looked around, and he saw who he had felt so many years ago. That same mysterious man. "Why are you here again?" locutus asked. The man just stood there staring "sit" said locutus, as he used the force to make him sit. "Now answer me" he said, raising his voice a little

"It is none of your concern," Liam replied as he stood and levitated the bodies of Brianna and Maximus towards the ship. He walked past Locutus without ever looking at him and the two bodies loaded into the ship that stood not far away. Liam walked up the ramp and before it closed he whispered one word, "Balance..."

As the ramp closed, the engines roared and the ship blasted off from the surface into deep space.

Before the man had managed to get the ship into the air locutus threw a tracking device onto it. When it had left the system locutus ordered his elitest droid fighters to follow it, and to destroy any resistance that they encountered. He went over to a cliff above a large field. It was here that the clone warriors would lose their lives, be taken prisoner, or change their alegience. Locutus ordered all units into ambush positions. The battle would be over befor the enemy knew it had started.....