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As he departed from coruscant in his modified battleship, Bosphan Tradonis was filled with anger and hate,"How could they do this to me!? kick me out of the order in times of peace! I will show them, I will start my own syndicate. I will learn the ways of the dark side and destroy those fools!"

With almost all the evil beings of the world vanquished, he knew little where to start his training, but then he felt something... 2 sith, he could feel them through the force evn though he had no proper training.

"yes,yes, YES that is where I will go, Korriban! How fitting to learn the ways of the dark side where it began!

And so he set out speeding through the systems dreaming of the day he would stand over the last jedi and plunge his saber into him.

With his modified cruisers breathtaking speed, he reached korriban in little time. As soon as the ship set down could feel the darkness radiating from the land piercing his thoughts.

"Ahhhh! It feels like an earthquake in my mind!" It took him a little while to gather himself and once he did, he began his quest to find the sith academy.

But as he walked through the baran lands, he felt he wasn't alone. He searched for what seemed like days, only stopping to admire the
amazing statues of ancient sith. It astounded him, he could feel their power flowing through them as he stood next to the dark memorials.

Jack was on Yavin 4 the home of the Jedi Academy. He had been here for ten years. He remembered when Master Skywalker was the trainer now that Master Kurr was training the Jedi since Master Skywalker's dead. Jack was still training to be a Jedi Knight. The Master Kurr thought as him as to young, but he had been training very hard the last year to master force push and force speed. He was in the courtyard training with his lightsaber and used force push to throw the rocks into the air, then used force speed to cut the rocks in half. Jack wanted to meet with Master Kurr about something about he would have to find him.

Ershuude was meditating. His mind was completly still. Though he had his eyes closed he was totaly aware of his surroundings. He was so in tune with the force that he could sense the heart beat of the girl in the next room over. The door opened, breaking his concentration. He opened his eyes to see Master Kurr walling in to his room. He was immediatly ashamed of the mess his room was. Kurr seemed not to notice. He was deep in thought. Finally he spoke, "Why is your room such a mess, Korra."
"I'm sorry master i was meditating and didn't think you would be coming."
"You should have sensed me before I entered the hallway. What were you meditating on?" Kurr asked, knowing full well that it was incredibly hard for Ershuude not to blush.
"I was er-" he stuttered.
"You should worry more about your half-built lightsaber than about your fellow students... especially the female ones." he said with a smirk and Ershuudes face turned bright red.
" Yes master." he said composing himself and getting back to work on his lightsaber.

Ershuude smiled as he remebered that day, two years ago. He had finally completed the second teir of the 3 tier lightsaber traning system Master Kurr had used in place of a skilled master. Ershuude was very skilled with a lightsaber. He was fast. Really fast. The only one who had ever beaten him was Jack. Jack was the fastest person he had ever seen and was the favorite apprentice of the group during training matches. Ershuude could have worked on his speed day and night, and still have been beaten by that fraction of a second that Jack had beaten him by. Ershuude never envied him, though. Where Jack was fast, Ershuude was strong. He wore sleeveless tunics to show off his riped biceps and powerful shoulders, adding to his already massive ego. He knew that the were both destined for great things.

Meanwhile in an Ancient temple on korriban Locutus (an ancient yet mostly unknown sith lord) lie beaten and and spritually imprisoned. He had been trapped by the jedi. Specifically yoda. He awaited fully aware in his ancient prison, that used to be his fotress. Unaware that he was about to embark on a journey that would prove to him that help, even as weak as it may seem to him, could be a good thing. He felt in the distance that there was a dark force drawing near. He wondered, if he would be awakened, then his attention turned to finding his ancient lightsaber after he would be released. And then his thoughts turned to the one who took it from him, a girl he had known, who had been his friend in hard times when he was in school. He had not known she was a jedi, until that fateful day when he was stripped of his powers. She kicked him to his knees and took the blade, and sent the tip of its blade, searing into his back, Scaring him for life. The thought of her made him angry, and sent his power pulsating threw space. When he woke he would find his blade, then he would find her, and she would beg for mercy before him, right before he destroyed her mind. Her Name Was..... Sheila

As he went about his daily routine of training jedi and overlooking some of his more powerful pupils like ershude, who he talked to earlier, master kurr was uneasy. Something was wrong, in the council room that day when they banished the young zabrak he felt a powerful emitting from him. His feelings were so strong that somethinq was wrong he evn was starting to think that maybe he should leave his base on yavin4 to go appeal to his brother directly to get a battalion of troops to survey the outer systems, he would have to sleep on it.

A lone fighter traveled through space towards the ancient sith homeworld of Korriban. It made the long journey from the Mobus, a planet in the unknown regions and was now coming to the end of its travels. Slowly, the pilot brought it down on the dry surface of the planet and landed it with skill. The lone passenger unbuckled herself (http://i23.photobucket.com/albums/b360/DMG2005/Brianna.jpg) from the pilot seat and hopped out onto solid ground. Its been a long time...

She walked briskly, as her body was tightly constricted by her clothing - emphasizing her shape. She came upon the ruined entrance of the ancient temple and kneeled in front of the door. Once again, this temple will rise to dominate the galaxy. She opened the massive doors and walked inside...

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Far, in the outer reaches of the galaxy, a figure traveled alone. At his hip sat a lightsaber and a lightwhip, though they were concealed by his brown robe - a robe that was once given to jedi of the order.

Jack wanted to talk to Master Kurr, but it was almost nighttime. So the next morning he went to talk with Master Kurr. "Master Kurr can I have felt evil last night. The felting of evil is growing somewhere. I wanted also to tell can I have a mission? I must test my truth strength in the real world." Jack saw Ershuude come into the room. Jack knew Ershuude since he first came to the academy. His strength was better than Jack's, but he didn't envy it they all had their own strengths and weakness. Jack wondered what Ershuude was doing here.

Jack wanted to talk to Master Kurr, but it was almost nighttime. So the next morning he went to talk with Master Kurr. "Master Kurr can I have felt evil last night. The felting of evil is growing somewhere. I wanted also to tell can I have a mission? I must test my truth strength in the real world." Jack saw Ershuude come into the room. Jack knew Ershuude since he first came to the academy. His strength was better than Jack's, but he didn't envy it they all had their own strengths and weakness. Jack wondered what Ershuude was doing here.
You know Jack, I think you and Ershuude should go on a mission, there is an incredibly wealthy planet called taka'men that I need some lightsaber supplies from, crystals, emmtiers, things like that, but its also very dangerous there, there is variious mercs hired to kill jedi, trandoshans, mandalorians, you two should go with about 20 of my gunmen and retrieve the supplies from a base in the center of the planet. You will leave tommorw(anytime you feel like writing it will be fine).

As he stepped in the young zabrak was expecting company, he sensed two powerful beings in the area. He saw a women, being catious and on edge by nature, he raised his zabrak pistols and questioned her.

"Who are you!"

Brianna had also sensed the presence of another and was immediately alert as the Iridonian questioned her. With her lightsaber already at the ready she responed, "I am who I am."

Without another word, she walked forward and through the next set of doors into a room with four hallways leading from it.

Jack told Ershuude about their first to the planet of Taka'men and to pack supplies for the trip tommorrow. Jack packed up his lightsaber, food, and other supplies. Jack trained for the rest of the day for the mission. He practiced with his speed and lightsaber training. Then he went to sleep. Jack had a dream of a young man going to a distance planet. The next morning they were ready to go and Ershuude and Jack loaded into the ship going to Taka'men. The ship lifted off and went toward Taka'men.

Locutus, sensed the visitors as they ventured into the halls of the Academy. With what little power he had, he turned on all the working lights and consoles in the building. He made himself known as to lure the others to find him. Soon their power was easily sensed as to be very close.

As Brianna entered into the next room, she noticed that a console in the center had mysteriously powered up. "Something strange is going on around here... It feels like I am not alone with the nervous Iridonian," she commented as she walked over to the panel.

"Lets see what information it still has," she commented as she began tapping it over and over reading what was left on it.

The console provided the location of 8 sith holocrons marked as dots on the radar. They immediately began there search for them. As he and his new sith companion surveyed the halls, Bosphan Tradonis spotted one. His Sith companion, Brianna, knowing more than him about the ways of the force, knew these objects power. She immediately urged him him to pick any he saw up even though he himself did not know the purpose of them. They came across 8 of them in there search for anything of value in the academy. Then they came across the grave of an ancient sith not named with 8 spots to apparently put the holocrons in, They accordingly inserted them and the room began to shake, A prescence was closing in, someone was coming...

As the room shook, a powerful blast went through the academy, as though something was being released, the entire complex went as cold as ice, and although lacking in power, it was absolute evil, an evil that would chill even the worst criminals to the bone. The tomb released a loud hiss, and the lid slid off. Inside lay a skeleton, but before the two visitors' eyes it was reformed to perfect condition, and then all went silent. The two visitors calmly looked down on the still and silent figure. Then his eyes popped open (looking into them directly would stop you in your tracks). They told of a person, who in his former glory, ruled with an iron fist. But judging on his state, he had apparently lost most of that power. He got up and looked at the others. He then gave a low bow, and with a deep, earth shaking voice spoke " at long last I have been freed of that prison. I, although reluctantly, thank you for releasing me. Those who put me there will pay, If i can get my hands on them." As though it couldn't get worse the strangers relaxed. Then all of a sudden, a wall burst to life and slid out of the way. Locutus went over and stood in the newly revealed alcove. Then something occured that made the two shudder. A noise like a mass amount of needle like objects was sent through the room. Locutus moved forward and smiled. Then as with a thought a series of glows surrounded locutus. When the glows subsided they looked to see a man in a suit of armor (that in many ways resembles the armor worn by Spartans (not that they know that !:D )) stood there. In a mechanical voice he said "ahhh, my armor". Then he pulled out his dual bladed lightsaber from the statue. He stood, and waited......

As Brianna stood there calmy not terrified or startled, Bosphan was shocked, but he quickly gathered himself and confronted the figure.

"We... uh... we... (gulp).... are in nee,eed of your training.(deep sigh), we wish to learn the ways of the dark side of the force, and you wi..will not refuse us, beca.. because i feel your diminished power and we could kill you here!" He seemed now that he had gotten over his fears and was composed.

"Train us in the dark side, or die here, you're choice!"

This menacing figure seemed to be in deep thought.

What an odd threat... Brianna thought. Nonetheless she pushed on, "What is the name you held in your former glory?" she asked as she stepped closer to him.

Locutus looked long and hard at Bosphan, who could feel his gaze boaring deep into him. then he spoke "Do you think you are really ready. I can feel your fear, and that is something that you are right in doing. If you decide you are ready, you will not be able to back out. The dark side is a dark road to follow, and many die trying to achieve their goal of power and knowledge of the darkside. And i go by many names. The most known is Locutus, But you would do well, not to call me directly by that"

"I am ready." muttered Bosphan. There was still fear in him, but he hid it well.

"I have something inside of me that will propel me to greatness, a characteritistic essential to any sith, Hate. Hate for my family being slaughtered because they were labeled traitors to the empire, and most of all, hate of the jedi." He now stood tall before the dark lord.

"When do we begin training, master...

Locutus was a tiny bit stunned "Let me set one thing straight, master is out of the question. It portrays one as being a slave, and I do not teach my slaves the way of the force. If you want to address me call me lord. You deserve more dignity anyway. And Secondly we shall begin as soon as we can activate the remaining funtional droids, and they fix the place up."

Locutus was a tiny bit stunned "Let me set one thing straight, master is out of the question. It portrays one as being a slave, and I do not teach my slaves the way of the force. If you want to address me call me lord. You deserve more dignity anyway. And Secondly we shall begin as soon as we can activate the remaining funtional droids, and they fix the place up."
ooc:asshole, you know what i meant

Icc:I am sorry my lord, I will attempt to activate all droids in the area.

P.S. Read my post on the ooc thread

He is quite an interesting person...

"Sorry, I can't be any help with that... I have the faintest clue about how to work or fix a droid.


*Meanwhile, halfway across the galaxy on a remote planet...*
"Huh!" the mysterious figure which walked under the robe of a former jedi made a rare sound. He didn't often speak so if he did, it was most likely important. "A disturbance... an awakening..."

"I could probably even upgrade the droids and turn them into battle droids and defense turrets and we could have a little base and a small droid army. I just need to go to my ship to get the parts, I will return soon my lord."

As he walked through the death filled, inhospitable surface of Korriban, Bosphan was filled with glee, his own army(however a small one), a base, and learning froma dark lord? How could this last few days have been any better?

Brianna smiled at the dark lord, "He has potential, no matter how frightened he may seem."

Locutus' looked at the ground, then he looked back "you are right, he has great potential, but so do you. you have only to use it."

As he made it to the ship, he seemed in a hurry looking for the parts he needed, he wanted to get back quickly and begin work on his army. As for cleaning the academy and turning it into a base, he used his two helper droids who he built himself. He and his droids, carrying the supplies, began the 2 mile walk back to the academy. Along the way the droid seemed to be acting faulty, the darkness of this place seemed to evn affect beings without senses or connection to the force.

When he arrrived, he saw the two just sitting there, staring at each other in utter silence.

"um, my lord?" he seemed to be trying to wake the great being up, it seemed.

Then suddenly the dark figure turned abruptly towards him almost suprised by the zabraks presence.

"I will begin building this base and our army now, and whenever it is time to begin training, please let me know."

He briskly walked away, almost embarrased he interupted there stare down

"Well... if he is going to get this operational again - there are a couple of things we need to do," Brianna said after the Iridonian interrupted. "If you see him again, tell him he should hide our two ships so that they aren't spotted... I doubt it will be very long before someone comes looking."

She got up and walked to the door. "I am going to see if I can salvage any old artifacts or important objects," she commented. "And find myself a chamber."

Being left alone, locutus decided to move the ships himself. He remembered there was an old hidden hanger on the side of the cliff near the Acedemy. he set one on auto pilot to follow, and the other one he flew himself. After he docked the ships, he proceded to find himself a place two stay two. He could barley remember where he used to sleep, though every other part of the academy stayed fresh in his mind. Soon he ventured in undetected into the mechanics room. He saw Bosphan working on the droids and he watched for a while, lost in thought but completely aware of everything going on, on the planet.

Brianna had gone exploring the old Sith Academy to find any remnants of what used to be. In her exploration, she had come across many old, and some new, sith possessions such as lightsabers, crystals, parts, robes, armor and other types of equipment. Gathering them all up, she took them with her on her search for a chamber.

Eventually she found a room suitable for her needs - it wasn't like the old students' rooms where they were completely open and in rows - it was a single room with a large stone door at the entrance. As she entered she saw a bed and footlocker to the left and a workbench on the wall to the right. She walked over to the footlocker, kicked it open, and dropped the stuff she had gathered inside. Neatly making sure it fit before closing and locking it. That bench isn't going to do me much good as I have no idea what to do with it...

She quickly tidied up the room, clearing it of the dust that had settled. When her work was completed, she sat down on the ground in the center and began meditating.

It did not take Bosphan long to find all the droids in the academy as there were not many. He began his work on them and discovered that a few of them were already batlle droids. He immediately recognized their design, these were sith war bots, the only type of battle droids sith relied on. They were very old designs, but very powerful none the less. All he would need to do was make a few minor modifications to it and they would be very powerful.

After his work was done and all warbots had been activated, derusted, and upgraded, he began work on the bases outer defenses, but quickly learned that had only enough parts to make the turrets, but then he would be out, leaving him with only about 5 warbots as his army. He knew there were some parts in this facility and that brianna had seen everything in the academy.

After about an hour of not being able to find her, he thought that maybe he could rely on his jedi training to find her. He focused and felt her energy in a distant room. He followed the energy he felt and found her meditating in a secluded room in the back of the academy." Brianna," He whispered, she did not notice him."Brianna!" he raised his voice to a near yell and she turned to him."Did you happen to come across any parts in your search of the academy?"

She didn't open her eyes, though she still seemed to be looking at him. "Take a look and see," she commented as she raised on hand slowly. In the corner, the footlocker unlocked and the top rose out of the way. "Take what you will... except for ancient objects and parts relevant to lightsabers."

ooc:http://forums.jolt.co.uk/showthread.php?t=459606

Icc: "Wow, these sith are civilized. These parts are nearly indestructible! Three layered Durastell armor, that's not even supposed to be out yet! With this I could make about 70 fairly godd droids, or I could make about 10 super bots. I think I'll go with the 70."

He was very exited, because this kind of material was only thought to be theoretical inn existence. He began hiw work immediately and gave enough parts to his droids to go upgrade the outer layer of the academy and build 4 functional turrets. His first day of work he finished 15 solid droids and didn't get much sleep, woke up early the next day and nearly finished them. On the third as he was running through the hall to finish the last 5, Brianna intercepted him and was ready to speak.

"Yes, what is it Brianna?"

"I was just wondering..." she began, "What do you want?" It was a simple question and yet so complex at the same time.

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Across the galaxy, a lone ship took off from the ice covered worl do Csilla. Its coordinates were locked onto the Jedi capital of Coruscant.

After the long journey there, it touched down on a landing pad. A figure emerged from the ship, a brown robe of the former jedi order draped around his bod, his face was cloaked in darkness and he walked with mystery. He walked with long strides that showed of a calm urgency as he made his way off the landing pad and towards the capital building.

ooc:I actually hoped youm would ask why i got banished from the order, but this will work.

Icc:"What do I want? Revenge, revenge against the jedi, the empire, and with this training I'll be able to get it. Is that the answer you seeked?"

He then walked right past her while she still stood there and he completed the last few droids and stored them in the main chamber to be examined by the dark lord. He then checked on his helper droids to see if they had finished the outer defenses or if they had built the turrets, when he got there he saw they were done with both. He then reported to His new master to tell him the news.

"My lord, the droid army is ready for you to examine and the outer defenses are ready."

Locutus stood amused. He did not realize that there were enough slavagable parts left on the planet to allow for this number of droids.then he had a deep thought. He turned to Bosphan and said " download any information you can from what remains of their memory, but do not read the info. I want to see it first, then You can do what you like if I find nothing of great importance

Locutus stood amused. He did not realize that there were enough slavagable parts left on the planet to allow for this number of droids.then he had a deep thought. He turned to Bosphan and said " download any information you can from what remains of their memory, but do not read the info. I want to see it first, then You can do what you like if I find nothing of great importance
It will be done, my lord

On Coruscant, liam made it to the entrance of the palace but was stopped by the palace guardians."Stop there, what is your business here?"They questioned.

Bosphan heeded his masters words right away and used a device he had made himself wich used network connections to download information from all the droids simulntaneously. He then gave the encrypted information card to his master."Here you are my lord, all information on these droids lies on this disk." Even Loctus was suprised at how fast he did it.

still quite amused by his quickness, locutus thought for a moment. Then without a word he raised his hand an a secret door popped open, and locutus went through it.

Still has so much to learn... Brianna thought as the Iridonian left her standing there. Though there is something different about him... he has felt the light... he studied with the jedi...

With that thought she set off back to her chamber and closed the massive stone door as she entered. She sat down on the bed and leaned over to look at the footlocker, "Lets see what we have here..."

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Liam paid them no heed whatsoever. In fact he didn't even show the slightest bit of aknowledgement that they were even there. Walking past them briskly, with his robe fluttering in his wake, he entered the palace.

"Hey, where do you think you're going, get back here! Guards, arrest him!" So they ran after him but were stopped by the emperor.

"Stop! Don't arrest him, he must be very brave to walk right in here, what is it you want, traveler?"

The mysterious figure of the man still didn't pay any attention to the guards as they were shouted to arrest him. "I want nothing..." he replied cryptically, "All that I wanted... I have taken... there is nothing more to want."

Curious as to where his new master went, Bosphan followed him, still yearning to learn the ways of the dark side. "My lord, have you decided yet when we will begin training?"

The dark lord gave him a piercing look.

The mysterious figure of the man still didn't pay any attention to the guards as they were shouted to arrest him. "I want nothing..." he replied cryptically, "All that I wanted... I have taken... there is nothing more to want."
To this, even the wise emperor was confused,"Speak logically, if you have no reason to be here, then leave! Then only reason I allowed you to speak is because I noticed you are a jedi."

Locutus was now sitting in a control room. he looked away from bosphan and he popped the disk into a reader and began viewing it's info. He smiled and said "let's see what I missed after my imprisonment." A little while later he found something interesting. With in the droids memory were the command codes for the entire academy. Of this he took great intrest. he copied the disk, and put one in the safty box in the wall. Then he went up to the command console and typed something in. Suddenly all the outer doors shut fast, and the sound of mag locks activating were heard and a magority of the inactive consoles lit up, on their display where camera feeds, and programs for running blasters. Then the main and secondary armories opened up. With that he took the other disk, WHich he had edited out all the info he thought important and went back over to bosphan and handed him the disk. Bosphan knew that locutus had done something but he did not know what... He again gave bosphan a piercing look, and then he turned his head. It looked as If he had heard or seen something else in the room, but Boshan couldn't see anything, not even a cloaked figure

"I am no jedi," came the response from behind the cloaked veil of his face.

A long pause where nobody spoke. "You should not disdain me... I did not come here for myself... nor to be threatened."

"If you believe that you truly have no reason to listen to my council... I shall leave... but no I will not be the one suffering for it."

ooc: just a side not, it would not be possible to tell his age - so he could be anything from 10 to 10000 (in perception at least), because his face can not be seen.

"What do you speak of? These are times of peace, we are in no danger! Although," he muttered to himself,"My brother has had an ineasy felling since we cast him out." He said to himself. "I will hear you out, what advice would you give?"

"What is it, my lord, I have an implant that allows me to see cloaked figures, there is no one in here." He tried to reassure his master, now growing impatient at the fact he still had not trained yet

"My advice would be to not rest easy..." he commented quietly to the emperor.

"A storm is gathering..." he said in an eerily ominous voice. "A storm that will once again cause those to rise and others to fall..."

"My advice... my advice is nothing more than... be prepared, or suffer the consequences of your reckoning." As the last words trailed off, he turned swiftly and paused momentarily. His eyes seemed to be piercing through the very existence of those who surrounded him, but only for a moment before he walked down the steps and out of the door.

"What is it, my lord, I have an implant that allows me to see cloaked figures, there is no one in here." He tried to reassure his master, now growing impatient at the fact he still had not trained yet

"As good as it may be," came a voice from the corner, "No implant is a match for the force."

Brianna stepped out of the darkness so that they could see her.

"A storm is gathering,those will fall and new will rise," the emperor repeated to himself."My lord, are you alright?" His bodyguard asked."Get one our finest messengers, give him a fast ship, and send him to yavin4. Tell my brother I need to speak to him.

"As good as it may be," came a voice from the corner, "No implant is a match for the force."

Brianna stepped out of the darkness so that they could see her.
"No, how? I built this myself, I have foiled assasination attempts with this, how did you bypass it?

locutus simply laughed at the sense that he could feel bosphans impatience "soon, you shall begin, very soon" then his voice grew deeper and his tone more serious "we are not alone. Someone is in the academy. But, since I have sealed the doors there is no escape, unless you have the code. So I would suggest reading part of that disk soon..... I sense their power, Fragile and weak, but it is still there. For your first lesson, I want you to seek them out with your power an d bring them to me. Do not use anything but the force to find them, and I will know if you do, as I have a link to this place strong enough to even feel If the consoles are used, and what for."

ooc: how about no reading the disk?

Icc: "But master, I do not know where to beginn, I feel no one."

Locutus Simply gave an unamused look at Brianna who gave it back to him and he said "let you anger of him let you find him, because you know who he his... you have seen him before and his power although weakened by being here should stand out. It is the only (good) power here"

"The force is a most marvelous thing," she commented

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The mysterious figure made his way across the courtyard to the landing pad where he had landed his ship. Quickly he got into the pilot seat and took off into space. Shortly after, it made contact with a hyperspace booster ring that took it across the galaxy in a short period of time.

As it left hyperspace and slowed down to its normal speed, the ship was closing in on the ancient sith homeworld of Korriban. It made its way into the planet's atmosphere and slowly landed in the dusty ruins near to the academy.

The mysterious man jumped out of the ship with ease and slowly made his way across the planet's dry surface and to the academy. "It has been along time..." he said as he reached the door. Nodding his head, he entered into the first room just in time to hear the door behind him close and lock.

ooc: by the way Loc, Liam (this man) is hardly good. He used to serve the light but fell to darkness and no wanders the galaxy... he is neutral in the most basic sense. He embraces and rejects, at the same time, the teachings of the sith and the jedi.

Ershuude was finished packing for his mission with Jack. All he needed to do was get dressed and meet Jack at the ship in two hours. Ershuude held two lightsabers, in his left hand he held the one he had built a few years ago. The other was much older, thirteen years old. He pressed the activation switch and the blue blade leapt out of its hilt. He moved it through the air listening to the low hum of the energy weapon. His fathers lightsaber blade was a little bit too long for him, as he was not quite the 6'2" his father had been. He could adjust it but he felt it would dishonor his father. No, he would wield his blade. He switched it off and turned his on. His turquoise blade leapt out and hissed through the air. He moved through the basic steps of Makashi; the form his father had used. He switched it off and exanined the hilts side by side. His was very similar to that of his fathers, both had longer hilts than most, the only difference was that the back end of his fathers was shorn and ragged. He had used a doublebladed lightsaber; cut in half during his last battle. Ershuude felt the ragged metal at the bottem of the hilt. He winced as he cut his finger on the shorn rare titanium alloy his father had used. He placed his on his belt and put his fathers in his bag. He glaced at his datapad, he needed to leave in order to meet Jack on time. It would not be good to be late for his first mission as a Jedi Knight.

OOC:
"ooc: by the way Loc, Liam (this man) is hardly good. He used to serve the light but fell to darkness and no wanders the galaxy... he is neutral in the most basic sense. He embraces and rejects, at the same time, the teachings of the sith and the jedi.

Well what I meant was it was the only, not Active evil......

Icc:"Wait, I do feel a power, it is not from either of you. But it doesn't fell like a sith or a jedi, who is he? I will find out for myself.

"I too have felt it... powerful it is, be careful," she said as the Iridonian lef the room.

Right before they left, master Kurr caught them."Ershude,Jack, I know you're exited about this mission, but do not lose focus, that batlleship over there will be your transport, as I told you. Also, I told you that 50 gunmen will accompany you, they are still waitng inside for you two, go get them and tell them it's time to go."

Locutus hit a switch on the wall with the force powers and went threw it. Inside was a set of large rooms, he had found his chambers, and sat down in the largest one directly adjunct to the room he was just in, and sat down to meditate. Now everyone in the complex could feel his power condense and bare down on them, seeking information.....

Despite her skill with the lightsaber and cunning moves that allowed her to infiltrate the most secure of places, Brianna's mind was her true gem. She had trained immensely in creating barriers in her own mind to keep jedi out and had also learned the skill of dominating another's mind.

As she stood there in the room that had been occupied by three previously, she felt Locutus trying to pry into her mind - but she would not let him. Immediately she began concentrating to block her mind and emptying her mind of any thoughts.

As he briskly walked through the dark halls in search of this new figure, Bosphan was working outn in his mind who it could be,"Could it be an ancient sith, no, it doesn't feel like a sith, WHERE ARE YOU!" he screamed after hours of looking.

Then almost as if he had been there the whole time, the mysteriouys figure stepped out from a corridor right in front of him.

"I am everywhere and nowhere..." said the figure. "I am here in front of you... if that is what you believe," he said cryptically.

"Spare me your cryptic answers fool, who are you!" Bosphan was naturally unacommodating and rude so this was not unusual behavior.

Suddenly locutus' mind shifted. He concentrated on Brianna, but instead of prying, he bent the force to warn her of incoming danger. He felt her hand fly to her lightsaber, and She activated it. Then His concentration shifted again. He could barely make out her, gasp of agony, as she dropped to her knees and then the floor. It felt to her as if a lightsaber had been shuved into her abdomen, but when she went to fell the wound there was nothing there. Nothing had hit her. Locutus came out and simply laughed. "well done" he said "but, you need to remember to focus not only on what is obvious but what is hidden also"

Brianna didn't reply - she was busy concentrating on the new powerful aura in the academy.

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"Oh... I have a name if that is what you are asking," the man replied, "But a name only means as much as you are willing to let it... Boshpan."

Just as Master Kurr was returning from the hangar after the take off of his pupils a messenger caught up to him.

"Sir, I have been sent by the emperor, you're brother sir, to inform you he requires youre prescence immediately I have ship ready for takeoff sir!" The messenger was breathing heavily due to exhaustion. "The only ship I travel in is mine, and it is currently under use, so inform my brother
I will be there as soon as I can."

Brianna didn't reply - she was busy concentrating on the new powerful aura in the academy.

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"Oh... I have a name if that is what you are asking," the man replied, "But a name only means as much as you are willing to let it... Boshpan."
"How do you know my name, you Phsyco! Tell me where your from and what you're doing here or i'll shoot you!" He screamed, not knowing this man's power;.

"That is very brave of you..." the man replied as he walked by the Iridonian. "Brave... but foolish."

He continued on past the Iridonian and into the next room.

Bosphan, now just curious as to who this stranger was, followed. "Tell me, how do you know my name and what do you want here?"

Suddenly Locutus smiled. He turned and looked at Brianna and then he beckoned her to rise. she asked "why" and he simply answered "you will see in a sec." With that his lightsaber popped into his hand and then he ignited both blades. The room immediately took on a red hue, and a loud humming was heard all around. The blades were very detailed. They had the look of skilled craftsmanship.

"Oh there are a many ways I could have known your name," the man replied. "Perhaps I felt the other two concentrating on you. Perhaps it is that I heard the dark one say it. Perhaps you were thinking it and I pried into your mind?"

He allowed the Iridonian to process the thoughts as he entered the next room which had four hallways in it. "But no... I did not do any of those, because I didn't need to."

He chose a hallway and began walking down it, "No... I knew who you were before I came here. I saw it... I saw when the last judgement on you, when they cast you out."

"You were there? I did not see you, no, you couldn't have been, that was a secret jedi council meeting!"

"And this is a secret reconstruction of the Sith temple and reformation of the dark empire... and yet I am here too," he replied as he made his way down the hallway.

Ershuude and Jack left the landing pad at Taka'men. Their trip had been a short one as the Taka'men system was only a few lightyears away from Yavin. Ershuude felt some acute darkness envelope the area. He ganced at Jack and saw him shiver. Ershuude thought to himself "is Jack cold or did he feel that too?" Ershuudes hand rested calmly but noticibly on his lightsabers hilt.
"Ershuude, take your hand off you lightsaber. We need the locals to see us as friendly." Jack muttered as the dockmaster walked towards them.
"Hello and welcome to Taka'men, masta Jedis," He said with a smile,"follow my." Jack and Ershuude walked towards a building. It had a label but it was in a language that Ershuude could not read. Ershuude heard a metalic click, like the loading of a blaster rifle. Jack must have heard it too because a second later a small laser beam put a hole in the ground whe he had been standing. As Jack recovered from his brush with a snipers shot, The gunmen opened fire at the roof of the building. Ershuudes blade leapt out of its hilt and deflected several stray shots as he helped Jack up. But by the time Ershuude got to him, Jack was on his feet and running towards the building. Jack dogded more shots than he blocked as alien soliders poured out of the building. When the battle was over only Ershuude, Jack, and 34 gunmen survived. Ershuude left Jack to report back to Master Kurr. He searched through the ruins of the building. He opened a door to what looked like an office, and what he saw paralyzed him. He saw a large man, a human man, holding a scarlet bladed lightsaber. The man laughed as he swung at Ershuude.
"Too easy" stated the man as Ershuude back away. He swung but missed. Ershuude regained control of himself and his Turquoise blade connected with the red ones next attack. The man was strong but not as strong as Ershuude. In an amazing series of attacks, paries and blocks that made it look as if they were dancing. An elaborate dance of deadly hums and hisses, lucky blocks and near misses. Ershuude was getting pushed back into a corner. He used the Force to send a cry for help out to Jack. Jack had heard the lightsabers and thought that Ershuude was just mopping up the rest of the aliens. He dashed in to the building at phenominal speed. Ershuude was blocking blows without even attacking now. Just as he thought he was going to looses he saw an emerald beam of pure energy split the man in half thourgh the abdomen.
"Thanks," was all an tired Ershuude could mumble before he passed out.

Ershuude and Jack left the landing pad at Taka'men. Their trip had been a short one as the Taka'men system was only a few lightyears away from Yavin. Ershuude felt some acute darkness envelope the area. He ganced at Jack and saw him shiver. Ershuude thought to himself "is Jack cold or did he feel that too?" Ershuudes hand rested calmly but noticibly on his lightsabers hilt.
"Ershuude, take your hand off you lightsaber. We need the locals to see us as friendly." Jack muttered as the dockmaster walked towards them.
"Hello and welcome to Taka'men, masta Jedis," He said with a smile,"follow my." Jack and Ershuude walked towards a building. It had a label but it was in a language that Ershuude could not read. Ershuude heard a metalic click, like the loading of a blaster rifle. Jack must have heard it too because a second later a small laser beam put a hole in the ground whe he had been standing. As Jack recovered from his brush with a snipers shot, The gunmen opened fire at the roof of the building. Ershuudes blade leapt out of its hilt and deflected several stray shots as he helped Jack up. But by the time Ershuude got to him, Jack was on his feet and running towards the building. Jack dogded more shots than he blocked as alien soliders poured out of the building. When the battle was over only Ershuude, Jack, and 34 gunmen survived. Ershuude left Jack to report back to Master Kurr. He searched through the ruins of the building. He opened a door to what looked like an office, and what he saw paralyzed him. He saw a large man, a human man, holding a scarlet bladed lightsaber. The man laughed as he swung at Ershuude.
"Too easy" stated the man as Ershuude back away. He swung but missed. Ershuude regained control of himself and his Turquoise blade connected with the red ones next attack. The man was strong but not as strong as Ershuude. In an amazing series of attacks, paries and blocks they looked like they were dancing. An elaborate dance of deadly hums and hisses, lucky blocks and near misses. Ershuude was getting pushed back into a corner. He used the Force to send a cry for help out to Jack. Jack had heard the lightsabers and thought that Ershuude was just mopping up the rest of the aliens. He dashed in to the building at phenominal speed. Ershuude was blocking blows without even attacking now. Just as he thought he was going to looses he saw an emerald beam of pure energy split the man in half thourgh the abdomen.
"Thanks," was all an tired Ershuude could mumble before he passed out.
ooc:nice post, now as soon as you're done doing what youre doing on taka'men come back to yavin cuz master kurr needs the ship

"And this is a secret reconstruction of the Sith temple and reformation of the dark empire... and yet I am here too," he replied as he made his way down the hallway.
"I do not beleive you, name the masters who were there liar!" He now seemed angry remebering that day.

ooc:Mater Vaas, Mater Eku-Hai,Master Skywalker,Master Kurr were the ones

saved

"Calling me a liar, does not make me one... except in your own mind," said the man. He stopped at the closed stone door in front of him and turned back to look at the angering Iridonian. His eyes seemed to be piercing his mind as he stared at him through the darkness. "You believe that Vaas, Eku-Hai, Skywalker, and Kurr were the only ones there...."

"Now... the question is, did I really know that or did I simply read your mind? What do you think?" he said as he again turned to face the door.

ooc: lol, thanks

Jack pulled Ershuudes uncontious body back to the ship and tried to wake him up. When that didn't work he pulled him into the ship and straped him into a harness. " I guess what they say about muscle weighing more than fat is true." He had broken a sweat just trying to get Ershuude onboard. "I suppose we aren't exactly welcome on this planet." He set a course back to Yavin IV. Master Kurr would know what to do about Ershuude.

"How could you have known who they were?(besides the fact I told you)You could not have been there, the roo was secure and jedi would kill any cloaked nuisances, it does not matter, I passed this test because I found you. I will go report to my master and he will deal with you.

"I am sure he will try to," the man replied, "But then again... why would I come here if I thought I would meet my end?" he asked.

He reached his arm out and the stone door opened, revealing the one who the Iridonian had called master, alongside of Brianna.

Jack pulled Ershuudes uncontious body back to the ship and tried to wake him up. When that didn't work he pulled him into the ship and straped him into a harness. " I guess what they say about muscle weighing more than fat is true." He had broken a sweat just trying to get Ershuude onboard. "I suppose we aren't exactly welcome on this planet." He set a course back to Yavin IV. Master Kurr would know what to do about Ershuude.
ooc: Lets just say he woke up

Icc: When the battleship made it back to the base, they were met by master Kurr. "Did you retrieve the saber? Because I need to use this battleship now, and you two are going with me.

"I am sure he will try to," the man replied, "But then again... why would I come here if I thought I would meet my end?" he asked.

He reached his arm out and the stone door opened, revealing the one who the Iridonian had called master, alongside of Brianna.
"I do not understand you stranger, you sneak around like you've never been here, but yet you know everything about it, I hope my master can get the truth out of you/

OOC: Can the ship be a Lambda-class shuttle

Jack wondered why those men attacked Ershuude, but aleast he saved him. Once they got back to the academy Master Kurr wanted them to come on a mission with him. "No master we didn't get the lightsaber we where ambushed by men plus Ershuude was wounded by a man with a red lightsaber."

"You speek of truth like it is something you can actually obtain... but it is not... it is only a far off dream that you strive to achieve," he said as he entered the room and faced the sith who stood there.

As soon as he finished, the door opened and there stood the mysterious one, and Bosphan. Locutus Just simply smiled. Then a light surrounded his head, and a helmet appeared, with a red visor like covering. "ahh finally. I thought you got lost." he said with an evil laugh.

OOC: Can the ship be a Lambda-class shuttle

Jack wondered why those men attacked Ershuude, but aleast he saved him. Once they got back to the academy Master Kurr wanted them to come on a mission with him. "No master we didn't get the lightsaber we where ambushed by men plus Ershuude was wounded by a man with a red lightsaber."
ooc:sure

Icc: "That is dissapointing, jack, I told you to clear your mind and expect an ambush. No matter, I will rturn and get it after I visit my brother and you two are going with me, so gather your things and say goodbye, sorry you didn'yt get a lot of rest.

"Lost? No..." the man said as he entered the room, "Its hard to get lost in a place as memorable as this..."

"You are right there. But, then again, I guess it happened the same way about 100 years ago didn't it. I am just glad you didn't make a seen there at the jedi council meeting when you noticed me there. that would have made a mess, but anyway. You and me go back a long way..... Especially here, with you lockimg me up...."

Bosphan was now more frustrated than ever. "That's it! If you do not tell me who you are I will report all of you to the galactic senate and you will be dstroyed, now tell me!"

Locutus's head turned slightly to stare at Bosphan. "You need not concern yourself with that right now!"

"You must be remembering wrong," the man said to Locutus, "Old age will do that to you..."

He turned back to Boshpan but did not say a word. His stare dared him to report him.

Jack wasn't that tried, but a little tried. Ersuude got his wound treated and they loaded back onto the Lambda with Master Kurr. Jack got in the back and waited to lift off.

Ooc:geez, im posting my ass off!

Icc: Bosphan now understood to be quiet and listen to the two mighty beings and he would find his answer

locutus seemed to drift away from the visitors, for the moment Brianna while being there had gone all quiet. He turned around and sent out a force ripple to grab her attention......

Master Kurr gathered what supplies he needed and was ready to get on the ship when something tugged at him. It was like a heart attack, all that power on a distant planet focused in one room, his two pupils spotted him struggling, helped him up, and they took off. When they reached the imperial landing pad he told his two pupilos to stay in the ship and he entered the palace.

"Don't worry," the mysterious man said as he felt the force ripple, "Brianna has been ready to lunge at me at any moment..."

Brianna was shocked at the man's knowledge, "But how-, why?"

"He is a man of many mysteries. Very old and very wise" locutus said calmly "though how much does he know about an old sith lord called locutus"

"He is a man of many mysteries. Very old and very wise" locutus said calmly "though how much does he know about an old sith lord called locutus"
ooc: just telling you guys that bosphan isnt going to be talking for a while

"Would I be here if I didn't know about you?" the man asked. "I will let you decide the answer on your own..."

edit: ooc: that is fine. We will not make this too long though.

With That locutus twirled his double-bladed lightsaber and then beckoned the man foward.

Master Kurr entered the miraculous hall decorated with statues of jedi masters
past, he saw his brother, deep in thought. "Brother, you wanted to see me?"he questioned."Haha, there you are, how are you doing? (deep sigh) Actually, there is something, a man came through here the other day and had the same suspicians as you. He believes the sith are returning to power." He muttered. "What! I was merely suspicious, not paranoid!" Master kurr yelled."He would not say sith directly, but that is what he spoke of, now I want you to take a battalion of troops and survey the outer systems.He commanded of his brother.

"I will do it, but this is outrageous, i'll be back soon to confirm there non-existence." He then left without a word.

"I did not come here to follow another's will," the man said as he stood motionless. "Nor did I come here to fight you and your pathetic apprentices."

Brianna was on the edge of attacking and held her lightsaber at the ready.

Bosphan did not take well to that last statement,"Thats it, you're dead!" he pulled out his blasters and fired but it was easily deflected by the great warrior.

ooc: just a message to all jedi rpers, we need to finish sith stuff now so your next few posts can be about your past or what happened on taka'men

"pathetic???? I think not. You forget where you are. This is our Realm. Here I am God! And If you don't come to fight why r u here?"

"I have come here to warn you the same thing I warned the others," the man said. Then he spoke the same words he had said to the emperor:

"My advice would be to not rest easy..."

"A storm is gathering..." he said in an eerily ominous voice. "A storm that will once again cause those to rise and others to fall..."

"My advice... my advice is nothing more than... be prepared, or suffer the consequences of your reckoning."

ooc: watch the shorthand stuff... ("r" and "u")

"pathetic???? I think not. You forget where you are. This is our Realm. Here I am God! And If you don't come to fight why r u here?"
ooc:that was a little heavy

"I have come here to warn you the same thing I warned the others," the man said. Then he spoke the same words he had said to the emperor:

"My advice would be to not rest easy..."

"A storm is gathering..." he said in an eerily ominous voice. "A storm that will once again cause those to rise and others to fall..."

"My advice... my advice is nothing more than... be prepared, or suffer the consequences of your reckoning."

ooc: watch the shorthand stuff... ("r" and "u")
ooc:wow, the plot thickens

Bosphan thought nothing of the advice,"My lord, I wish to add numbers to our army, but to do that I will need to go to a planet and take the parts. For that, I will need a lightsaber, so when do we begin training?

OOC: oops lmao, didn't notice, lmao! and well,its ment as this place is mine more over than god, lmao, should be more descriptive.

ICC: " I Heard that the first time you said It, why do you need to tell me again, and rather interesting, You think that someone who has escaped death hundreds of time will pay for his reckoning, and by what would that mean???" locutus inquired. Just then he felt another presence come closer. It was still aways off but it was drawing nearer. Then he turned to Bosphan, "shortly" he said "soon, we will continue your training"

"I mean what I say," the mysterious figure said ominously as he turned from the sith and stared at Bosphan who stood in his path towards the door.

"This is ridiculous!" The impatient Bosphan screamed."I came here to learn the dark side, not listen to you trade off cryptic words with another freaky old sith!"

With that locutus, snapped his fingers and the door bolted shut, and locutus having been annoyed by bosphan's impatience brought him to his knees with the force

"I don't care why you came here," the man said to Bosphan in a deep tone.

As the door closed in front of him, he turned around and stared at sith, "Do not pretend you want to face me... you and me both know you lack the power you once possessed."

"facing you was no longer my intent, but i am not one for riddles, and you should know that if you knew me....."

"Again... I do not care what you want or like," the man said. "It was never my intention to come here and please you..."

"I serve only myself, as do my intentions and actions. If you fail to grasp my meaning because it is to cryptic that is not entirely your fault. If you fail to grasp what I am saying because you don't ask questions when you have the chance... then you are lost."

"Master destroy him, owwww! let go of me!" Screamed the young zabrak in pain from the hold put on him by the man

"then I shall ask questions.... Who is rising and falling, and who will make me pay for what reckoning, and why do you repeat the same message" with that he opened a side entrance and said "bosphan go, and enter the training room and wait for me, I shall not be long"

"Yes,my lord" Bosphan muttered, then he stared at the man for a little while trying to figure out how he could have been there that day. then he entered the chamber.

The man grinned an unseen grin. "Who rises and who falls is between you and them," the man said. "And YOU... will make yourself pay in the end," he continued more cryptically than ever.

"I repeat what I have... because it serves me to do so... for that reason and none else," he ended.

The man grinned an unseen grin. "Who rises and who falls is between you and them," the man said. "And YOU... will make yourself pay in the end," he continued more cryptically than ever.

"I repeat what I have... because it serves me to do so... for that reason and none else," he ended.
ooc:dude, i sure hope you dont talk this way in reall life

ooc:dude, i sure hope you dont talk this way in reall life

ooc: lets keep needless ooc comments in the OOC thread... and no, I don't. he is intentionally cryptic.

Still annoyed, locutus reluctantly opened the locked door, and threw the man a comlink, and said "I don't care if you want to or not I will contact you in the future and I will ask more questions, so If i were you I wouldn't skip town...." With that he turned and went through the door, from which Bosphan had previously passed

The mysterious man caught the comlink and watched the sith walk through the door. He then looked to Brianna and tossed her the comlink, "Give it to your lord," he mached, "And tell him... if he has questions he will have to seek me out himself."

"Yes, sir," she obeyed unwillingly.

The man turned and began walking down the hallway, retracing his steps back towards the entrance.

Brianna entered the room shortly after Locutus and gave him the message.

ooc:Well excuse me

Icc: As he entered the ship and informed his jedi pupils of the new mission, Master Kurr was deep in thought. He had been worried something was stirring, but he did not think it was sith. But could it be ,could it be"Bosphan."He said aloud. "Master, is that the exiled jedi?" Jack asked. "Yes, but don't listen to me, you are on lookout, you watch and tell me when the battalion of troops come, then we leave."

Bosphan spotted his new master enter the room,"My lord, who was he, a friend, an enemy... who?"

locutus let out a deep sigh then said, " he is neither. He was a jedi once, but then he fell to the lure of the dark side, but not completely. Now he wanders the galaxy helping who he chooses. His name is liam, but don't worry how he knows you. I have a feeling that, that won't be the last of him....."

"I take it you are ready to teach me and Brianna now?"

Brianna entered the room and walked up to Locutus. "Umm... the mysterious one told me to tell you, 'If you have questions you will have to seek him out yourself.'"

She then reached out her hand and showed him the comlink.

Meanwhile, the man known as Liam had exited the academy and was making his way across the dry land to his ship.

he looked around "speaking of Brianna where is she....?"

he looked around "speaking of Brianna where is she....?"
ooc:lets pretend that post didnt happen

icc: "Master, what is in that datapad?

OOC: well i guess that question was answered

ICC: Locutus took the comlink, and crushed it "The datapad contains info on the basic codes for the complex, and we shall now work on combat use of the force"

Brianna nodded, "Alright... I am ready."

"Is it time, ah, finally, now the jedi will rue the day they betrayed me! Master Kurr will fall off the edge of my sword! He then laughed but a harsh look from the sith made him regain focus.

"Aarogance will get you nowhere, We will begin wuth something simple." he brought in two droids. "focus on throwing the droids back"

Brianna sighed. Basics...

In a quick move her arm shot out in front of her, the droid in turn flew into the wall.

Bosphan was ready to show what he could do. He focused and tried to picture the droids flying away and then waved his hand. But nothing happend, he tried several more times and nothing worked."Damn you droids!" he then pulled out his blaster and shot one of them, blowing it up. He immediately recognized this would anger the lord

"Bosphan, you need to channel that anger into the force. Doing so will lead you to power!" he stated flatly

"Yes, my lord." He then pictured how he had just gotten angry and imagined the droid blowing up, he waved his hand and the droid went flying."Haha, take that you damn droid!"

"now we shall worry about pulling things toward you" At that moment bosphan's blasters were ripped from their holsters and Brianna's lightsaber was taken from it's holster and they were thrown across the room.

"Hey those were my favorite blasters, I'll get them back!" Then astoundingly he pulled them towards him with little effort. The other two stood there, suprised."If theres one thing I was a jedi for, it was my force pull, i perfected it.

As her lightsaber flew across the room, Brianna instinctively grabbed out for it with the force and it returned to her hand.

"Thanks for the history lesson, now, lets worry about jumping" he said dully Just then a huge casm appeared between Locutus and the other two.

ooc:After this test, we'll skip forward to when my guy gets his lightsaber

icc:"are you crazy! What if I can't make the jump, I will not die to pass a silly test!" Protestingly yelled The young zabrak

Brianna took a step backward before smiling a catlike grin. She pushed off and using the force, she propelled herself with great speed across the chasm.

Meanwhile, Liam had entered into his ship and exited the atmosphere around Korriban. His next destination unknown...

"If you can't jump over the casm you will find out, Don't worry, I have no intrest in having you die......" With that he let out a laugh that chilled the other 2 to the core

"You cryptic old fool." He said before he attempted the jump. He was getting ready to jump but then pulled back and rerouped. He tried to make all the force in his body shift to his legs, then he got a running start and cleared the gap easily.

Just as he landed all three of the were transported to the cavern. "you now have the task of entering this cavern, and finding the required parts for a lightsaber" locutus said , but just as Bosphan was about to enter Locutus said "wait, I have one more lesson to teach you before you enter the cavern. I will teach you to to strengthen and guide your blaster fire"

Brianna sat back and payed no attention to the latest lesson. Blasters... what a pathetic excuse for a weapon...

"Why, are there foes in there? If so you two should come with me as i have no lightsaber." The lord's customary look made him forget about that. "Okay, what is this thecnique?"

"there are foes in there that ordinary blaster fire will just tickle them, which happenes to be one of the reasons I tought you what I did. Now What I want you to Do is fire your blaster at Brianna there and If she jumps, try to make it follow her, but do not aim to injure or kill her...." he said staring at the ever so skeptical Brianna.

Jack was waiting in the shuttle. He wondered what Master Kurr. He looked at Ersuude.
"I wonder what taking Master Kurr."
Ersuude looked at him.
"I don't know"
Jack thought back to his first days in the academy also when he first met Ersuude. Jack became good friends and were the best of friends. They were pretty close to the same age with Ersuude being older by one year. They were at the same level and also made their lightsabers at the same. Jack stopped remembering and got up and turned on his lightsaber.
"Since we are waiting why don't we have a duel."
Jack went outside of the shuttle and waited for Ersuude to turn on his lightsaber. Jack and Ersuude's lightsaber crossed each other. Jack got onto his attack position and also Ersuude. Now they were ready to battle.

"there are foes in there that ordinary blaster fire will just tickle them, which happenes to be one of the reasons I tought you what I did. Now What I want you to Do is fire your blaster at Brianna there and If she jumps, try to make it follow her, but do not aim to injure or kill her...." he said staring at the ever so skeptical Brianna.
Realizing he would need this technique he stared at his blaster, fucused all the force he had on it, and fired to hit her leg, having sith instincts, she jumped. He looked at her and, as he did, the blaster followed and hit her in the leg.

" now to amplify its power, concentrate on your blasters' firing chamber and give it more power and fire at that rock covering the caverns entrance"

Jack was waiting in the shuttle. He wondered what Master Kurr. He looked at Ersuude.
"I wonder what taking Master Kurr."
Ersuude looked at him.
"I don't know"
Jack thought back to his first days in the academy also when he first met Ersuude. Jack became good friends and were the best of friends. They were pretty close to the same age with Ersuude being older by one year. They were at the same level and also made their lightsabers at the same. Jack stopped remembering and got up and turned on his lightsaber.
"Since we are waiting why don't we have a duel."
Jack went outside of the shuttle and waited for Ersuude to turn on his lightsaber. Jack and Ersuude's lightsaber crossed each other. Jack got onto his attack position and also Ersuude. Now they were ready to battle.
ooc:Jacks already on the shuttle.

Icc:"Jack,Ershude! Dueling is great way to become powerful as you test your skills against a peer but now is not the time! I told you to stay on lookout for the battalion and now they are here!" He yelled. The battalion just stood there and then said,"sir, we are the battalion told to escort you to the outer systems,sir!" They relayed the emperors message. "Yes, I know who you are, now take your ships and prepare for takeoff. We're leaving now. He got back to the ship and told his pupils to prepare for takeoff, he had a strong suspicion these new foes were somewhere in the outer rim.

" now to amplify its power, concentrate on your blasters' firing chamber and give it more power and fire at that rock covering the caverns entrance"
"Yes, my lord." He focused on his blaster and he could see the firing chamber begin to light up, he fired and the blast was enormous and shattered the rock."Wow, still think blasters are pathetic?"

Jack and Ershuude got on and stared at each other and laughed. They loaded up and the shuttle went off toward the outer rim.
"Master Kurr what are we doing in the outer rim?"

ooc: um... I never said they were...

Jack and Ershuude got on and stared at each other and laughed. They loaded up and the shuttle went off toward the outer rim.
"Master Kurr what are we doing in the outer rim?"
"My brother believes it to be the location of the sith, if it truly is, you're training will be sorely tested.Now, any more questions?"

ooc: um... I never said they were...
ooc: yeah, your character did, pathetic excuse for a weapon wre the words

ooc: yeah, your character did, pathetic excuse for a weapon wre the words

ooc: italics mean thoughts... as they had for the entire time I have been posting.

"Yes Master I'm ready to actually face another person with the force besides the Jedi. Those Sith will pay for what they have done to the past generations of Jedi."

ooc: italics mean thoughts... as they had for the entire time I have been posting.
ooc:okay,okay sorry

icc: As the numerous battleships sped through the systems, Master Kurr told the pilots to sweep the hut systems first, he thought those gansters would be the first to affliiate themselves with the sith

"Yes Master I'm ready to actually face another person with the force besides the Jedi. Those Sith will pay for what they have done to the past generations of Jedi."
"dont get ahead of your self, young padawan, it is highly unlikely that they are sith.

"now You are ready to enter the caverns. Go and Brianna will go with you, as an observer, not actually fighting the monsters with you." locutus said trying to grab up his pupils attention.

"Very well," Brianna said as she entered into the cavern with her lightsaber attatched to her side.

Jack got out his lightsaber and polished it he was ready for battle. This was going to be the first test of the new Jedi. Jack had the feeling they were Sith because of the recent days of evil growing somewhere.

"Yes, my lord." Were Bosphans only parting words.He and brianna departed into the cave.

ooc:dmg you can rp what happens in there im a little busy with kurr

Meanwhile Locutus went back to the hanger. There he proceeded to power up a recon spaceship droid. He had a feeling that someone was looking for them, so he sent the droid to see if it could discover anything about this force, It was armed with a cloaking field.

As they landed on Nar Shadaa(total kotor 2 copy), Kurr warned his pupils that this was a dangerous place, but if one wanted info, there was no better place in the galaxy.

As they got off the boarding ramp, kurr told the boarding dock manger of his status as a jedi master and he let him through. Right off the bat they were the victims of an attempted robbery, But the skiled master cut them in half. He then made it to the hq of Atilla the hut(lol, thats great). When he approached the crime lord, his two kath hounds attacked, but kurrs pupils took on both with ease."Now, you fat slimy freak, I need some information, are there sith in the galaxy? And if there are, do you affiliate yourself with them!" He screamed, this kind of anger was not normally seen by a master.

"I,I dont know what you're talking about, honest!" He yelped. Kurr knew he was lying, so he began chocking him."Tell me or i'll rip your throat out!" He threatened."okay,okay! My scouts reported seeing 3 humanoids on korriban. They did'nt know if they were sith, but I can't figure why anyone but a sith would go there.

With this new info, Kurr left ready to fight. "Master?" Jack asked. "Prepare the army, this will be a war.

After a few minutes of total darkness and silence the two came into a large lit chamber within that cavern. Across the way stood two shadow creatures of unknown make. As soon as the creatures saw the two the they were upon Bosphan. He shot the first one and it just soaked up into the shadow creature. Then he focused and let out four bolts. Both creatures dropped dead. Near the center of the room crystals were glowing. Bosphan picked out the ones he liked.

After a few minutes of total darkness and silence the two came into a large lit chamber within that cavern. Across the way stood two shadow creatures of unknown make. As soon as the creatures saw the two the they were upon Bosphan. He shot the first one and it just soaked up into the shadow creature. Then he focused and let out four bolts. Both creatures dropped dead. Near the center of the room crystals were glowing. Bosphan picked out the ones he liked.
ooc:cool, now i obviously need to pick up an emitter and one other thing, right?

meanwhile, only a few systems away now, kurr was preparing for battle. his two young padawans, being eager for battle, were already ready for battle. The ships moved into attack formation all troops were being given blaster rifles and the battle would begin soon...
ooc:someone make a godamn post!

Jack was alittle nervous since this was going to be his first combat. He knew after this battle he was going to be a Jedi Knight. He saw Ershuude look alittle nervous too, but they would make it threw fine. Jack got out his lightsaber and tested it to get ready.

ooc: just to tell you, jack, or eshude, wohevers on right now, the battle e'll have to wait a few minutes as my character has to get his lightsaber

as he and Brianna mad their way through the dark chambers, they came across a huge shadow figure. Bosphan used his training to emitt a huge blast that destroyed the creature, behind it's corpse was a llt the parts nedded for a lightsaber. He took Two seperat hilts and made two blood red sabers to dual wield."I am now a sith apprentice". He said to himself. Then they left

The two continued on and found more monsters and parts. Finally they came to an impassible casm. They had to jump. When Bosphan leapt across the casm, he found that he jumped to far and ran into a wall. Brianna saw this and adjustd her jump accordingly. Then there was a large rock in their path. Bosphan used the force to move it, but it flew way farther than he inteded it to. He said, "this place seems to amplify our power." Brianna simply stated "IT's the power crystals. The longer we are in here the more powerful we become, but it is most of it is only temperay. Then again some is permanent." they continued on until they found a weird dark field of force. Bosphan gulped and walked into it. He grunted as the field sent a pain through his body, but he did not fall, or let it show anymore than he had. Soon the field absorbed into him and revealed a doorway. They passed through it and in there laid a chest. Bosphan opened it to reveal a powerful emitter matrix that responded just to him. With all of this equipment they headed towards the exit.
Outside Locutus waited their arrival. He felt them draw near so he looked towards the entrance

"My lord, these are my sabers, just look at them, they can cut through flesh like a knife through butter. This makes me feel powerful, But, yet, this feeling is interupted because I feel a powerful force coming. It is hard to read who it is because he is surrounded by many other beings, do you feel him?

"yesssssss. HE draws nearer. THe hut spies that told him will pay. I sensed their presence days ago. Prepare for WAR," in the end of his sentence he was at the brink of yelling.

bump

"war! what? I am not ready! I just got my new sabers, i wanna cherish them, not die! How do you even know these men are our enemies!" He yelled. Neither Brianna nor the dark lord said anything, as they knew who was coming. The lords only words were,"activate all droids and outer defenses."

Bosphan was scared but did what he was asked.

Jack felt they enter the planet's atmosphere. They landed and Jack got out of the shuttle. He felt the evil power on this planet. Ershuude was already with Master Kurr. Jack turned on his lightsaber and looked around for anyone. The troops got out and were ready for battle.
"Where is the power coming from Master Kurr?"
ooc:whoa,whoa,slow down this is a war there will be turrets firing at our fleet and droids evey where on the ground so rewind a bit

As Master Kurr and his fleet entered the atmosphere, they came under heavy turret fire."My god, they have a whole army! Spread out! Fire on the origin of those turrets!

Skirmishing seemd to go on for a while, but when a battleship of the empire went down, enough was enough."Prepare a boarding part! Take the battle to them! He yelled. And when the ships touched down, the battle begun...

The ship had linked up with they hyperspeed booster ring and locked on to its next destination.

A short while later, the ship left hyperspace and came into contact with the planet Dantooine. He set the ship down gently at the loading dock and paid the fee to store his ship there, not wanting to call any attention to himself. Without coming in contact with anyone else, Liam made his way to the ruins of the old Jedi Enclave that lay upon Dantooine. He entered into the ruins and slowly made his way around the halls.

Occasionally he picked up an item or two that was hidden beneath the rubble, but for the most part he merely reveled in the power of the force. An old Jedi Master of the order appeared to him as a spirit and said one word before disappearing, Perseverance. Liam nodded to the spirit and then made his way out of the Enclave, across the fields, and back to his ship.

Again his ship left the surface of Dantooine and entered hyperspace with the help of the hyperspace booster ring. This time its coordinates were Coruscant.

He landed on coruscant a few hours later and lept out of the ship.

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ooc: yeh seriously. You don't just land on the planet and run up to the three sith with your lightsaber out.

Locutus watched as countless ships entered the atmosphere. All of a sudden locutus concentrated and the undiscovered space defenses became active. Several ships immediately came under fire. Brianna watched as one ship exploded before her eyes.

Kurr, Jack, Ershude and their ships soldiers were cut off from the main army and under heavy fire. Kurr knew they would be slaughtered if they did not link up with the main force, So he forced pushed seemingly thousands of battle droids and joined captain marco(Commander of fleet) and the main army.

The fight went on for a while and when things were looking ood for the jedi, The betrayed young zabrack and Brianna enterd the frayy..

Soon the heavy Battle droids entered the fight. They were not easy to kill.

Jack rushed out and used force speed to destroy acouple of droids. Ershuude used force jump and landed on a turret. He stabbed the turret and jumped again. The turret exploded. Jack used force push and cleared a path away from the droids. The other troops were getting killed all over the place. One of the shuttles blew up and landed on a platoon of soldiers. Jack saw what Master was doing to all the droids.

Jack rushed out and used force speed to destroy acouple of droids. Ershuude used force jump and landed on a turret. He stabbed the turret and jumped again. The turret exploded. Jack used force push and cleared a path away from the droids. The other troops were getting killed all over the place. One of the shuttles blew up and landed on a platoon of soldiers. Jack saw what Master was doing to all the droids.
ooc:cool, keep making little short posts, it works in battles

Icc:Master Kurr was to busy fighting the modified sith war bots and struggling to see how well his pupils were doing. That is until Ershude hopped out of a crowd of droids and chopped a powerful heavy droid in half

Jack saw more droids come out, but they were different and were more armoured than the other droids. One of the troopers shot at the droid, but the shots only made dents. Then the droid shot the trooper. Jack used force push and stabbed the droid. He looked up to see two people with lightsabers.

Brianna had retreated inside the protective fortress and waited in the second room for the troopers to come streaming in.

Jack used force speed and cut threw twenty droids. He was losted now and couldn't see Master Kurr or Ershuude. He used force push and deflected some shots from the droids. He had to keep on fighting even if he couldn't find them.

Some troopers had strayed from the main battle and made their way up towards the academy. The lead one turned a corner to have his head severed and thrown towards the others. Locutus stepped into the light, then the other troopers shot at him. He deflected the blast making short work of the troopers

now it got interesting. Brianna knew her way on a battlefield, but bosphan was young and inexperienced. They split up and Bosaphan discoverd he was powerful as hecut throught the troops with ease. then he turned and saw jack. he was afraid of facing a tough opponent, so he force pushed him and began fighting again.

Jack saw one of the Sith go into the fortess and used force speed while cutting droids to the fortess. Then someone forced pushed him He ignored the push and a other guy . He ran inside and found the lady.
"Who are you?"

master kurr spoted the young zabrak slaying his troops and binded him in the force and tossed him away from the battle, at least a few miles away. "Damnit, I had him, Damnit!!!"

ooc: guys, during the battle I am going to have to suggest that we slow the posting down so you read everybodys before you post. When you have written up a post and want to post it, go back to the thread and refresh the page to make sure it doesn't contradict somebody else's.

Right now, Locutus is standing between the troopers and the academy.
Bosphan has met up with Jack and force pushed him
And yet somehow, Jack made it to the academy and is looking at Brianna.

ooc: guys, during the battle I am going to have to suggest that we slow the posting down so you read everybodys before you post. When you have written up a post and want to post it, go back to the thread and refresh the page to make sure it doesn't contradict somebody else's.

Right now, Locutus is standing between the troopers and the academy.
Bosphan has met up with Jack and force pushed him
And yet somehow, Jack made it to the academy and is looking at Brianna.
thats easy, jack got force pushed then got up and saw brianna, then Bosphan ran away, saw master kurr and got thrown a few miles away, plus, the battles almost over

thats easy, jack got force pushed then got up and saw brianna, then Bosphan ran away, saw master kurr and got thrown a few miles away, plus, the battles almost over

ooc: first of all, being thrown a few miles is impossible - but whatever, that doesn't matter.

Second of all, the problem is that the battle is happening outside and Brianna is inside. Locutus is at the entrance of the academy inbetween the troopers (and Jack) and Brianna.

ooc:fine, ill fix it

Icc:Jack, having done well in the battle was now seperated from the army, surrounded by droids, he was about to be killed until master kurr, after dealing with bosphan, jumped in and saved him."
What are you doing? I'm getting you out of here!" With that he jumped hundreds of feet in the air and reunited hime with Ershude. "This is alosing battle!!" Yelled Kurr, and ordered the retreat of all remaining troops.

ooc: first of all, being thrown a few miles is impossible - but whatever, that doesn't matter.

Second of all, the problem is that the battle is happening outside and Brianna is inside. Locutus is at the entrance of the academy inbetween the troopers (and Jack) and Brianna.
i fixed it bich, and as for the miles, shut up, it was an exaggeration

i fixed it bich, and as for the miles, shut up, it was an exaggeration

ooc: yo calm the fuck down. I am just trying to keep some organization to this. And if you had bothered to look, I made my post just seconds before you did yours... so calm down. There is no reason to get mad.

ooc: yo calm the fuck down. I am just trying to keep some organization to this. And if you had bothered to look, I made my post just seconds before you did yours... so calm down. There is no reason to get mad.
ooc:what eva, thats not the way i hoped the battle would end, but everything was slightly fucked up.

ooc: just let it go now.
IC:

Brianna remained inside the academy during the fight. Apparently the invasion force was not strong enough to make it past the outer defense and the academy was safe - though their presence was now obviously known.

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On Coruscant, Liam made his away across the landing pad and back to the palace.

"No master I will fight this and not leave. Leave now Master." Jack got up and ran away from Master Kurr.

Bosphan was furious when he returned,"Damnit, he's too powerful! And now that they know our location we will need to start bulding droids wich will leave not time for training!" just as he finished, a jedi apeared on the horizon, he was quickly captured and brought in for interrogation.

"Who sent the army!" The angry bosphan yelled.

"What if you built droids that would build droids... or an assembely line of some kind?" Brianna suggested though she had no knowledge of how it would work.

kurr could not catch him, he was exhausted. So he left sad thinking he had lost a padawan(dont worry, he'll be fine).

ooc:everyone slow the fuck down and delete your last posts, were supposed to be interrogating jack, so lord delete yours and delete the one that says build droids that build

ooc: lol, no problem
IC:

"Well... Execu-use me" she said.

She thought for a moment, "Perhaps we could scavenge the crashed ship for some parts? As well as the fallen droids?"

"I don't know my Master only told me that we were going here, but he is long gone." Jack looked around to see where his lightsaber was kept. He was way to tried to try to use the force. He could barely put his hand up.

OOc:Hey everyone, youre gonna have to rp for my characters for a few hours, im going to see king kong.

Locutus entered the room, and jack went white. He felt as if someone had thrown him into the coldest part of the galaxy. Then the room seemed to fill with a dark boding evil

ooc: okay... though we could just pause it for a while, when are you leaving?
IC:
Brianna was holding the boy's lightsaber firmly in her hands. "He isn't telling the truth," she said.

She began using her adept skill of dominate mind to get inside the boy and learn the truth.

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Liam entered the palace without confrontation and walked into the entrance hall.

Jack knew now where the evil was coming from. "Who are you?" Looked and saw a man appear. Then the woman did something. He could fell as if someone was in his mind and he couldn't control his mind. "What are you doing!!"

locutus just simply stared at the boy " I am called locutus. But, you do not know even the beginning of my power"

The woman was slowly taking of his mind. Jack knew if she kept on doing it she would take over all of his mind. "Stop it now!!!"

Locutus nodded towards her in silent agreement.

"What do you want with me?" He felt his mind was back in control. He knew that lady could take over his mind and make him do what every she wanted with him. He hoped she wouldn't do that again.

Locutus spoke in a low rumbling voice "why are you here, and why have they brought an army?"

As Brianna released his mind, she settled in to finding how the hard way... listening.

"one way or another, You will talk" locutus warned him

Brianna prepared herself to domiante the boy's mind again, if it was deemed necessary by the dark lord.

ooc: lets pause for a moment, both Goreing and Democracaaay are offline right now.

OOC: okay lmao funny one coming up

ICC: all of a sudden locutus clicked a button on the wall and the entire universe froze as they had been paused.... (lmao I had my funny moment)

Jack would not talk to this scum again. He didn't care if he became a brainless zombie for the Sith once the girl took over his mind.

IC/OOC: Brianna reachs up and unclicks the pause button... the world returns to action. :D

Locutus deactivated hi helmet and when it dissappeard Jack stared into his eyes. Suddenly Jacks worst fear seemed to come alive. He tried to look away, but no matter how hard he tried his gaze seemed to be locked on locutus. All locutus said was "tell me what I want to Know"

Jack only said one thing. "There is no death; there is the Force"

As Jack stared into Locutus' eyes, the sith lord created a powerful illusion of Ershude entering the room and being immediately killed. Meanwhile, Locutus noticed Brianna had a curious expression on her face.

OOC: :D

ooc: sry guys i just got back from King Kong...and i didn't get killed because i went with Kurr. im the "good apprentice"

IC: Ershuude looked at Master Kurr. He looked like someone who had lost somebody close to them. Ershuude knew the feeling. Ershuude went to his quarters to use battle meditaion to protect the few remaining troopers left on the surface.

OOC: well democraccy left for King Kong also Jack got captured.

OOC: read and you will notice its all in jacks head. He sees Ershude in his mind, Hes not really there

ooc: check OOC thread for my comment Loc.
IC:

Brianna continued to stand by faithfully. Holding onto the boy's lightsaber tightly and ready to infiltrate his mind if need be.

Jack said again to locutus "There is no chaos; there is harmony".

Suddenly as locutus gaze pulled jack in farther, Jack felt an immense pain. It felt like he was burning alive. There were other mixed pains in there as well. Jack just kept twisting and groaning.

Trying to get rid of the pain they felt like it was buring and staring at Locutus Jack said. "There is no passion; there is serenity."

Locutus, now getting annoyed, stepped it up a level. He stared even farther in to jack, and with jack locked in his gaze the pain went away, but was replaced with the feeling that his life was being ripped from his body.

Jack felt weaker every second, but said. "There is no emotion; there is peace."

Once the remaining troops had either been killed or gotten away. Ershuude went to see Master Kurr. Or would have except for the fact that he had a vision of Jack chained to a wall and screaming at the top of his lungs: "There is no chaos; there is harmony". Ershuude ran to Kurrs room and begged him to let him lead a rescue operation. Kurr said no, that jack was dead and he should just accept it. Ershuude slaped him and told him to get ahold of himself. Kurr still denied the request. Ershuude did the only thing he could: He said "fine Master, I herby leave the Jedi Order and render my oath of fealty void." He handed Kurr HIS lightsaber and left the room leaving Kurr dumbstruck. Ershuude got into a lifeboat pod with his things and left the flagship. As he set a course for the system they had just left, he pulled out his fathers lightsaber. Turning it on he found it to be the perfect length. Hummph he said to himself, pressed the switch and turned it off. He stuck the saber to his belt and went to save Jack.

ooc: if you look at the first few pages Ershuude does take his murdered fathers saber with him... It would be a good plot point if one of the Sith people was his murderer

"He clings to his weak Jedi teachings," Brianna said machingly. "Bosphan!"

"Huh!?" Bosphan piped up for the first time since the boy had entered.

"Why don't you tell our guest what you think of the Jedi teachings."

"Oh... of course!" he said quickly before continuing, "They are weak and pathetic... they drive you down the path of servitude and don't allow you to reach your full potential. I studied under the Jedi for years... but they cast me out - and they will do it to you to now that you have been in the presence of the darkness... now that you know what it feels like. After joining the dark side, in no time at all I gained more power than I ever had with the pathetic Jedi..."

"You see," Brianna said as she interrupted Bosphan, "There is no hope in the light side... it is weak."

Locutus finnaly had one more final attempt. He implanted into jacks mind the thoughts of failure and rejection. Then an image of being banned from the jedi order for his failing to defend his friend in his time of need

snip
ooc: Brianna can be the sith
IC:

"Allow me?" Brianna asked more than said to the dark lord.

Jack started to cry with all the thoughts in his head, he fought the pain and said. "There is no ignorance; there is knowledge."

Brianna was startled by a thought that apperared in Jacks mind. Jack had a vision of Ershuude handing Kurr his lightsaber then leaving.(conviniently not seeing the other lightsaber)

Locutus now fully angered, closed his eyes releasing jack from his hold, then he turned to Brianna, "I want you to make him spill his guts, but do not read his thoughts. Make him say them allowed. That will surely break him"