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The City of the Eternals that was once lost. (Fairly Open FT) - Page 2

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The Scandinvans
21-07-2005, 21:48
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Mini Miehm
21-07-2005, 21:51
It was morning, they needed to get to work, another city needed to go up before the middle of the afternoon, no more cliff cities though, this time they sought out a plateau, they tried to vary the sites of their cities as much as possible, that way visiting another city woulsd be a real change of pace, instead of a carbon copy of every other city.
The Scandinvans
21-07-2005, 22:08
The Eternals' driods immeidately upon seeing where the wanted the city began to build the city, but they this time listened to the commands of the Templars if they wanred any adjustments.
Mini Miehm
21-07-2005, 22:15
They gave detailed instructions, shaping the city to fit the eye of the Protoss, the rounded edges of the first city were cut away, leaving sharp angles, they were made in this way to differentiate even more between the cities of the Dark Templar, this city was also more sprawling that the vertically stacked cliff city, its great size and nature were pleasing to the Protoss world-view, and they were greatly satisfied with the work they had completed on this pace.

3 hours after noon, the second fleet arrived, disgorging the civilians and wariors who would populate this city, there would be only onew more city after this, a mighy enclave obn the vast plains, towering over the surrounding landscape, but they had many weeks to completre the final city, the last fleet was many light-years away from this place, and it would take time for them to get here.
The Scandinvans
21-07-2005, 22:23
The Eternals did not go amongst the inhabitants of the new city and they withdrew the driods upon the coming of the ships of the second waves of settlers instead each of their homes an Eternal jewel of magniffecent beauty and craftsmenship also of tremondous value.
Mini Miehm
21-07-2005, 22:26
The Dark Templar quickly went about the daily duties of their lives, getting everything ready for the generations to follow, one of which would be arriving soon, two of the protoss women were with child, and one would be born in less than a week.
The Scandinvans
21-07-2005, 22:30
To grace the Protoss the Eternals had brought before them to each of their cities a mighty crystal as if made of diamonds, but yet not. Each of the two jewels possesed some of the light, joy, and bliss of the Eternal homeworld within it the jewels bore forth a light that would give joy and light to all the area and people around it for a great distance.
Mini Miehm
21-07-2005, 22:35
To grace the Protoss the Eternals had brought before them to each of their cities a mighty crystal as if made of diamonds, but yet not. Each of the two jewels possesed some of the light, joy, and bliss of the Eternal homeworld within it the jewels bore forth a light that would give joy and light to all the area and people around it for a great distance.

OOC: Sound like the Silmarils... Feanor isn't gonna come after me for this, is he?

IC:

The Jewels were a joy to behold, entrancing even the most jaded of the Templar, truly this was a world of miracles.
The Scandinvans
21-07-2005, 22:39
OOC: The three cities your gonna build gave me the idea and no Eternal is gonna come after you if you don't overly posses them.

Around the great jewels great fields of flowers began to grow and the air around carried a strange aure of light through it.
Mini Miehm
21-07-2005, 22:49
OOC: I love the Silmarils, and we won't be overly posessive, we'll guard them, but not be obsessive about them. Named them after random Valar\Maiar.

IC:

The Beauty of the Jewels was such that they were given names, Manwe, Orome, and Voronwe, they were beautiful gems, and who knew what might they posessed, their light would be for all to see, but they would also be protected, each jewel was made into the focus of a mighty Pylon, in the center of the city it represented, now all could share in their light, and they would be safe from all who would dim their light as well.
The Scandinvans
21-07-2005, 22:54
OOC: Good names for them.

After the building of them the Eternals come amongst them agian this time casting off their false guises and appeared in their beauty which was beyond measure of mortals and the light around was like that of the jewels. The Eternals now spoke to them in their true voices which were like of the angels.
Mini Miehm
21-07-2005, 22:57
OOC: I figured it out, your Eternals are like the Valar and Maiar, aren't they?

Did the Eternals ever play around with lesser species genetics, I can turn these guys into my Xel'Naga with absolutely no effort if they did.

IC:

The protoss were stunned by the beauty of the Eternals, they were deformed beasts when compared to the perfect forms they saw, their loyalty and trust in the Eternals was made all the greater due to the purity of form and spirit displayed by these perfect beings.
The Scandinvans
21-07-2005, 23:04
OOC: That would be a good example not the perfect, but good none the less.

The Eternals bowed before them and said to them," We charish your friendship and trust in us and for that we love as love in our cultre is to be returned with love."

OOC: Using some lines from good books I have read and using desriptives verse from LOTOR.
Mini Miehm
21-07-2005, 23:20
OOC: That would be a good example not the perfect, but good none the less.

The Eternals bowed before them and said to them," We charish your friendship and trust in us and for that we love as love in our cultre is to be returned with love."

OOC: Using some lines from good books I have read and using desriptives verse from LOTOR.

"We thank you for allowing us to view the beauty of your true forms and this world, we are humbled by your perfection of mind and body."
The Scandinvans
21-07-2005, 23:22
"You honor us as well by being so humble and gracious. We must say that your race is truly remarkable in all rights you are far more advanced in mind and technolgoy then most races your age."
Mini Miehm
21-07-2005, 23:24
"You honor us as well by being so humble and gracious. We must say that your race is truly remarkable in all rights you are far more advanced in mind and technolgoy then most races your age."

"We are a made race, we were not evolved, we were created by our progenitors, that is why we are as you see and hear, it is not through our purity, but through that of our creators that we are so humble."
The Scandinvans
21-07-2005, 23:39
"Your nature is your own that is one of the major traits that impresses us and also your mannerisms impress us also."
Mini Miehm
21-07-2005, 23:57
"Your nature is your own that is one of the major traits that impresses us and also your mannerisms impress us also."

"How can we be anything but what our creators have made us, you are greater beings than ourselves, we are simply a flawed work, a failed creation that outlived its creators, how can we possibly impress you?" A look of genuine confusion is stamped on the spokesbeings face, they cannot understand that someone might find any of their traits admirable, since their creators abandoned them as failed.
The Scandinvans
22-07-2005, 00:01
"No, do not believe that as all sentient beings are great and special in their own right. We understand your confusion, but do not look at yourselves as flawed you just to have trust in yourselves and also understand yourselves. Those are the only things you truly need."
Mini Miehm
22-07-2005, 00:08
"No, do not believe that as all sentient beings are great and special in their own right. We understand your confusion, but do not look at yourselves as flawed you just to have trust in yourselves and also understand yourselves. Those are the only things you truly need."

"We shall try, I wil spread this wisdom amongthe tribes, and from there it will spread across the entire Race, thank you again for understanding our troubles."
The Scandinvans
22-07-2005, 00:14
"Your gratiude is greatly appericated, but we only wish for the good of your people."
Mini Miehm
22-07-2005, 00:18
"Your gratiude is greatly appericated, but we only wish for the good of your people."

"Your concern is most appreciated, but I must go to spread word among my people, I thank you for your counsel."
The Scandinvans
22-07-2005, 00:25
The Eternals bowed, bidded them farewell, then they went amongst the rest of the Protoss in their true forms bewildering all who saw them with their beauty.
Deatharon
22-07-2005, 01:06
The Deatharon Civilians immediately went to work on a city for there population. The Raas did most of the construction effort. The Evon and Humans helped with there machines and supervising the Raas workers. Antaran Commander Vrosh over saw the construction via holo image. He decides to make the city like the ones Deatharon humans live in. The massive towers are the first to be constructed and after that the Shield Generators would be constructed to protect the city from heavy bombardment. This was common for most Deatharon cities.
The Scandinvans
22-07-2005, 22:20
The Eternals pondered why the Deatharons were building towers armed with weapons and as they went and asked," Why do you build towers of war?"
Deatharon
23-07-2005, 00:52
A holo Image of Vrosh appears (think like the ones the Asgards use in Stargate.) He answers the Eternals questions, "The common city of Deatharon is built to withstand heavy attack from rival Empires. This was primarly due to the brutal and warlike past of Deatharon. Now its more of a tradition that we all follow."
The Scandinvans
23-07-2005, 04:15
'We understand this and we will allow and let us hope it never comes to that point though upon this world of peace and beauty."
Deatharon
23-07-2005, 05:18
The holo image responds, "The Hegemony and the Empire will keep this in mind. The main parts of the city will be constructed after the defenses are in place."
The Scandinvans
23-07-2005, 15:39
The Eternals responds," Thank you for your coperation."
Deatharon
23-07-2005, 16:15
The holo Image responds, "Your welcome."

The Raas are nearly done with the shield Generators and the Towers. The Humans and Evon prepare to build the Dome like structures that will house the population. The Marines have a large Command Complex and Barracks and Pont Singularity Cannons built to defend the city from attack.
The Scandinvans
23-07-2005, 16:20
The Eternals send their driods to help if their help is either wanted or needed,
The Scandinvans
23-07-2005, 17:45
bump still waiting for your respsonse Mini Miehm
Mini Miehm
23-07-2005, 17:57
The Eternals bowed, bidded them farewell, then they went amongst the rest of the Protoss in their true forms bewildering all who saw them with their beauty.

The colonists were awed by the might and beauty of the Eternals in their midst, they sought them out for their wisdom, or merely to bask in their beatific presence.

The Templar they had been speaking wit began to spread the wisdom of the Eternals, starting with his own tribe, where he was at first denegrated as a heretic, but eventyually they came to his side, the youngest first, then they began to move among the other tribes, speaking the wisdom of the Eternals, unfortunately this spawbned some troubles among certain members of the Race, they felt that their oathas were null because of the Eternals thoughts, and the Templar dsagreed, holding that they would be oathbreakers if they did not keep their oaths, and they would be cursed, eventually tey sdecided to ask an Eternal to solve this question for them, sionce they wre the originators of this thought, they should have the answer to this as well.
The Scandinvans
23-07-2005, 18:31
The Eternals asnswered," How could oyu break an oath to a people who never cared for you? How could you have an oath to a being you never saw? How can you keep an oath that is in shadow and despair are with in it?"
Deatharon
23-07-2005, 20:18
The Droids are employed to build the Dome like houses of the Deatharon Civilians the shields Generators were given more power to support the vast shield that would defend the City, In case of orbital bombardment. The Raas eagerly start building the homes along side the Droids. When this was done they would start to work on Sensors and possiably a orbital space station for ships to come a go and resupply.
The Scandinvans
23-07-2005, 20:25
The driods rapidly built the domes and then they awaited their next assigment in the building of the new Deatharon settlement.
Deatharon
23-07-2005, 20:30
The Droids are given the task of building the Sensor stations and power generators for the civilian public. The Raas are given the job of creating a orbital Space Station.
Mini Miehm
23-07-2005, 20:58
The Eternals asnswered," How could oyu break an oath to a people who never cared for you? How could you have an oath to a being you never saw? How can you keep an oath that is in shadow and despair are with in it?"

"I see, but is it not that any oath that is made should be kept, no matter to whom the oath was made?"
The Scandinvans
23-07-2005, 21:02
"But, yet your free will dictates the oaths that you have made and you should decide weather to keep it or not."

The Eternal driods did there job efficentl, well, and percises to the exact intruction.
Mini Miehm
23-07-2005, 21:04
"But, yet your free will dictates the oaths that you have made and you should decide weather to keep it or not."

The Eternal driods did there job efficentl, well, and percises to the exact intruction.

"Then let that be our decision, for it should satisfy both sides, meaning that it is right."
The Scandinvans
23-07-2005, 21:11
"That is faor for everyone so everyone should be happy as you said."
Mini Miehm
23-07-2005, 21:13
"Indeed, then let me spread the word, thank you for yourwisdom."
The Scandinvans
23-07-2005, 21:15
"Your welcome, amy the blessing of the Eldest One be with you also."
Mini Miehm
23-07-2005, 21:19
"Your welcome, amy the blessing of the Eldest One be with you also."

"Entaro Adun, we will now spread the wisdom to thse who need it most."

And he did, going among the colonists to tell them of the Eternals wisdom and reasoning, and many more were inclined to agree with him now that they saw the power of compromise.
The Scandinvans
23-07-2005, 21:24
The Eternals had finally found a race of beings that were capable and worthy of the inhetaining much of the Eternal knowledge and wisdom.
Deatharon
23-07-2005, 21:25
The Deatharon city was finally completed. It had all the power and defense it needed. The Orbital Space Station would help supply food. (The Empire will send large shipments of food to the Citizens via cargo ships.) The Station was also capable of defending the planet from attack. The Antaran Commander Vrosh had completed the first task. The replicator rooms were being built to make the City more self sufficent.
Mini Miehm
23-07-2005, 21:42
The Eternals had finally found a race of beings that were capable and worthy of the inhetaining much of the Eternal knowledge and wisdom.

The Dark Templar was telling hs people of the wisdom of the Eternals when the word came, the third fleet was under attack, the colonists were being hit by pirates, and they would soon be defeated, their combatants had been overwhelmed by the pirate ambush and there was little that the few remaining Scouts could do to stop the attack, the colonists were calling for help, and help would not be slow in coming, there was a squadron of the newest ships from the Terran shipyards at New Gettysburg, Intercetors they called them, single pilot craft of great speed and maneuverability, capable of FTL travel, they would have to be enough to save the fleet.

Ten pilots were found quickly, and the ships were outfitted to the pilots preferences, a single Genesis class was mounted with Plasma cannons, Gatling Lasers, Tracking Tracer cannons, and a Phase Disruption Cannon, as well as 2 batteries of Parallax missiles, 1 of Fusion Torpedoes, and a single Doppleganger battery, the 4 Gravebane Interceptors were mounted similarly, minus the Gatling Lasers, the 5 Bloodpath Interceptors were mounted with simple Burst Laser batteries and Elerium Torpedoes, they were on the move, they would save their kin from the fools who would attack them in such a cowardly manner.
The Scandinvans
23-07-2005, 22:13
To conture the pirates the a massive Eternal ship came and immediaetly destroyed or routed the suriving pirates and made safe the convoy of transports of the Protoss and Templars.

The Eternal sent to the city of Deatharon many gifts of gems, percious metals, and also they gave them much knowledge about the history of the Eteranls during their golden age.
Mini Miehm
23-07-2005, 22:21
To conture the pirates the a massive Eternal ship came and immediaetly destroyed or routed the suriving pirates and made safe the convoy of transports of the Protoss and Templars.

The Eternal sent to the city of Deatharon many gifts of gems, percious metals, and also they gave them much knowledge about the history of the Eteranls during their golden age.

OOC: oh, I was gonna have some real fun showing off my newest ships, oh well, this has possibilities as well.

IC:

Shortly after the Eternals had beaten the pirates, the Interceptors arrived, they were stunned, and exteremely grateful that their new friends had saved their kin from the scum of the spacelanes, they would accompany the fleet to the Eternals World, and allow the Eternals to return to whatever it was they wee doing, since it was surely moreimportant than sheherding a fleet of civilians.
The Scandinvans
23-07-2005, 22:27
The Eternals shortly after the arrival of the interceptors left the sight and returned to the Eternal home galaxy. But, before leaving they had put an protective tempoary shield over each of the civilian transports.

OOC: Sorry, didn't know they were new.
Deatharon
23-07-2005, 22:32
The Civilians thank the Eternals for there gifts. The Evon and Human Scientists and Historians add the information of the Eternal histroy to the Imperial Archives. The Deatharon Citizens give the Eternals the history of Deatharon in its early years and the histroy of the Antaran Hegemony. (The Elder Race.)
The Scandinvans
23-07-2005, 22:40
The Eternal remeber the histories of that were given to them by the people of the Deatharon. The Eternals then after this went amongst the people of Deatharon in the hues of huumans and spoke amongst them seeing how they viewed the Eternals.
Mini Miehm
23-07-2005, 22:41
The Eternals shortly after the arrival of the interceptors left the sight and returned to the Eternal home galaxy. But, before leaving they had put an protective tempoary shield over each of the civilian transports.

OOC: Sorry, didn't know they were new.

OOC: Quite alright, it hapens.

IC:

The Interceptors and their charges continued their voyage, it would be nearly another week till they reached the Eternals home world, and it would be a very long week.
The Scandinvans
23-07-2005, 22:48
An Eternal message was sent ot the transport fleet:
"We can offer you immediate transportation to the Eternal planet if you will it. Do you wish to this?"
Mini Miehm
23-07-2005, 22:50
An Eternal message was sent ot the transport fleet:
"We can offer you immediate transportation to the Eternal planet if you will it. Do you wish to this?"

They are overjoyed by the prospect of getting to the Eternals world so soon, and they relay the feeling in their transmission, gladly accepting the offer.
The Scandinvans
23-07-2005, 22:55
An Eternal ship jumps out of a jump point that it made out of notthing and then with the Eternal shields around the Protoss ships would protect them in it.
Mini Miehm
23-07-2005, 22:58
On the planet, the third city is under construction, its curved walls and spiked towers rising for many hundreds of feet above the jungle canopy.
The Scandinvans
23-07-2005, 23:02
The Eternal ship and the convoy of transports arrive above the planet mere seconds after entering. Then the Eternals' droids go to the contruction site and help where they can in it's construction.
Mini Miehm
23-07-2005, 23:08
The Eternal ship and the convoy of transports arrive above the planet mere seconds after entering. Then the Eternals' droids go to the contruction site and help where they can in it's construction.

The droids are put to work on the outer walls and the flowing spuires, while the Dark Templar probes complewted the inside work.
The Scandinvans
23-07-2005, 23:12
The driods build the structures with great speed and efficecy. The Eternal ship left the convoy and the transports in orbit above the Eternal world.
Deatharon
23-07-2005, 23:48
The Humans talk with the Eternals. The Antaran Commander Vrosh watched from his command Center in the middle of the city. He made sure the Eternals were safe and that dissidents would be suppressed should there be any.
The Scandinvans
23-07-2005, 23:50
OOC: Do you mond if I rp a attack by an dissendent?
Deatharon
23-07-2005, 23:51
OOC: Ok
The Scandinvans
24-07-2005, 00:13
OOC: Thanks.

Inside the city an dissendant came out of nowhere with a blaster rifle at an Eternal and fired rapidly at him. To the attackers remorse the Eternal was unaffected entirely by it and in response to it the Eternal raised his hand and the dissendant floated into the ar susbended by a blue aura that did no harm to him.
Deatharon
24-07-2005, 00:28
The Marine Division heads out to kill the dissident. He has broken the Code of Iron.The attack on the Eternals was considered betrayal of the Empire's law which is considered treason in the Empire and the penality for that is death. The Enforcers were not yet here but they would arrive in the next transport wave.

OOC: Enforcers are the standard police force of the empire. The Code of Iron is responsable for keeping the Empire together. It states those that betray the Empire have to die. All Deatharon forces are required to full fill this policy.
The Scandinvans
24-07-2005, 08:13
The Eternal said to the marines," Nay, this man shall not be killed for this world is that of the Eternals and under our jurstiction and their shall never be murderer upon this world while our power lasts and we shall not allow his exctution while this world lasts while we respect your laws we cannot allow this death to happen."
Deatharon
24-07-2005, 08:26
The Marines reply, "This man is a traitor and he must die under Imperial law and code. Plus the fact he is an Imperial Citizen meaning that his fate falls under our jurstication of justice."
The Scandinvans
24-07-2005, 08:33
"Accordlingly he attacked me upon the world of the Eternal so techincally the Eternals would have juristcition of him, but he will not be allowed to be killed upon this or any other Eternal world as we prohibit the death penalty."
Deatharon
24-07-2005, 08:47
The Marine Sargent replies, "The Empire can not allow rebels and traitors to escape to worlds like this to escape Imperial justice. however we request an impartical third party be called to mediate on the matter at hand."


OOC: Last post for tonight
The Scandinvans
24-07-2005, 08:54
OOC: Goodnight.

"Nay, we shall return him to you but his excutition snetance will not be allowed on this planet let the trial if you will it take place on your spave station then."
The Scandinvans
24-07-2005, 18:28
OOC: This is still open to more people.
Deatharon
24-07-2005, 18:51
The Marines grab the dissident and head towards a transporter room to beam him to the station for execution.

OOC: The trial was not needed due to sensors and Security cameras throughout the city
The Scandinvans
24-07-2005, 21:17
For Mini Meihm:
The driods build the structures with great speed and efficecy. The Eternal ship left the convoy and the transports in orbit above the Eternal world.

For Deatharon:
The Eternals would angered and saddened that this had happened under the eyes of an Eternal. The Eternal called for a trail of the Eternal who had allowed this to take place without even a trail of the individual who ahd attacked the Eternal. Also the Eternals summoned a represntataive of the Empire of Deatharon to help explain why their actions even after the Eternal had explained to them that the dissendant was under the juriduiction of the Eternals, but the Eternals were not going to pass judgement upon the people of Deatharon as a whole only those who ahd colonisied this planet and their culture would remain the same only that they wished to meet a compromise with them upon their process of exctution.
The Scandinvans
24-07-2005, 21:44
OOC: Should i start a new thread for this to cover this better in a few weeks?
Mini Miehm
24-07-2005, 21:56
OOC: Should i start a new thread for this to cover this better in a few weeks?

OOC: might be a good idea.

IC:

With the final city complete, and the jewel set in its pylon, everything was going well, the colonists were building the minimal constructs that the droids were unable to work on, and the Templar were spreadin the Eternals wisdom among the newest colonists.
The Scandinvans
24-07-2005, 22:00
The Eternals in their true forms went to the new settlement and asked," May we have entrance into your fine city?"
Mini Miehm
24-07-2005, 22:08
The Eternals in their true forms went to the new settlement and asked," May we have entrance into your fine city?"

"You need never ask permission of us to enter any city of the People, you are the ones who gave them to us, and we owe you much, we would never deny you entrance."
The Scandinvans
24-07-2005, 22:15
The full company of the Eternals enters the city singing songs of remeberance in the ancient Eternal empire in the glorious tongue of the Eternal race. The Eternal enter celebtrating the completion of the final city of the Protoss on this world. In fornt of the company is the bearer of the banner of the Eternal with the three stars of the Eternal home syestem of jewels crowning the Eternal homeworld.
Mini Miehm
24-07-2005, 22:29
The full company of the Eternals enters the city singing songs of remeberance in the ancient Eternal empire in the glorious tongue of the Eternal race. The Eternal enter celebtrating the completion of the final city of the Protoss on this world. In fornt of the company is the bearer of the banner of the Eternal with the three stars of the Eternal home syestem of jewels crowning the Eternal homeworld.

The Dark Templar lined the streets and walkways of the city, watching the beauty of the Eternals as they marched through the final city, they were not sure of the reason for the entuire company of thwe Eternals to be here, and they did not care, they were content to bask in the beauty of the assembled throng.
The Scandinvans
24-07-2005, 22:34
Then at last upon reaching an upon area in the city that was lagre enough for their purpose the Eternals rose up a mighty table filled with many strange delicous foods so that they may feast in celebration of this occasion and they invitied all of the Templar to join them in the feast.
Mini Miehm
24-07-2005, 22:58
Then at last upon reaching an upon area in the city that was lagre enough for their purpose the Eternals rose up a mighty table filled with many strange delicous foods so that they may feast in celebration of this occasion and they invitied all of the Templar to join them in the feast.

The Templar thanked them profusely, and they feasted with the Eternals, wondering at the powers that were displayed by these beings.
The Scandinvans
24-07-2005, 23:01
As the feast the Eternals told the Templar about the many worlds of the Old Eternal Empire as well as the current Eternal Empire. Also the Eternals tlaked one on one with some of the Protoss about personal things.
Mini Miehm
24-07-2005, 23:07
As the feast the Eternals told the Templar about the many worlds of the Old Eternal Empire as well as the current Eternal Empire. Also the Eternals tlaked one on one with some of the Protoss about personal things.

The Templar in turn told them ofthe Terran Dominion, and the history of their people, as well as speaking of their wants and needs, their hopes and dreams, they told the Eternals everything they asked about, because the Eternals were deserving of the trust they placed in them, and they did not fear that their secrets would be used against them.
The Scandinvans
24-07-2005, 23:13
The Eternals rembered well what they were told, but had no thought of using any of it against them ever. The Eternals also told them of the light, glory, and bliss of the Eternal homeworld.
Mini Miehm
24-07-2005, 23:21
The Eternals rembered well what they were told, but had no thought of using any of it against them ever. The Eternals also told them of the light, glory, and bliss of the Eternal homeworld.

The Templar were amazed by the tales the Eternals told of the Homeworld, there was nothing like it in the Templars memory, they too remembered all they were told, and they told all they knew about their lost home of Aiur.
The Scandinvans
24-07-2005, 23:27
The Eternals were saddened upon hearing that the Templar had ot abandon such a fine world, but the Eternals were enheartened to know at least this world gave them a home worthy of the Protoss.
Mini Miehm
24-07-2005, 23:41
The Eternals were saddened upon hearing that the Templar had ot abandon such a fine world, but the Eternals were enheartened to know at least this world gave them a home worthy of the Protoss.

The joy of the feast was dampened for a time with the teling of the tale, but it was rekindled like a banked flame, brought roaring back to full with a single breath, because they had lost the home of their birth, but found a new home, a home of their choice.
The Scandinvans
24-07-2005, 23:47
Then a Eternal Lord stood up and said," Let this day be rembered as the day that the settlement of the Templar upon this world was compteted and that this world has rentered it's day of glory, light, and bliss."
The Scandinvans
25-07-2005, 03:16
For Deatharon:
The Eternals would angered and saddened that this had happened under the eyes of an Eternal. The Eternal called for a trail of the Eternal who had allowed this to take place without even a trail of the individual who ahd attacked the Eternal. Also the Eternals summoned a represntataive of the Empire of Deatharon to help explain why their actions even after the Eternal had explained to them that the dissendant was under the juriduiction of the Eternals, but the Eternals were not going to pass judgement upon the people of Deatharon as a whole only those who ahd colonisied this planet and their culture would remain the same only that they wished to meet a compromise with them upon their process of exctution.
just to bring it up to make it easier to find
Deatharon
25-07-2005, 03:23
The Antaran Commander Vrosh sends a mesage to the Empire and the Hegemony. In the end the Empire agrees to allow Vrosh to represent the Empire in this matter.
The Scandinvans
25-07-2005, 03:28
The Eternal brought Vrosh to a high dome tower in the Eternal's city where at the top the High Council of the Eternals of that world was called. There before them the Eternals brought him to represent his people. The opening argument was started by one of the Eternals saying this," Why did you kill the dissendnant without a trial?"
Deatharon
25-07-2005, 03:33
Vrosh replies, "The Empire and the Hegemony can not afford dissidents and traitors to live. The fact an ally of the Empire was attacked shows the man was a traitor plus the fact he was seen by our sensors and security camera's elieminates the need for a trial."
The Scandinvans
25-07-2005, 03:36
The Eternal answered," Why yet does he not full under the jurisdiction of the Eternals upon an Eternal world and when the victim was an Eternal?"
Deatharon
25-07-2005, 03:41
Vrosh replies, "The Eternal gave the traitor to the Marines as punishment and we did execute him on our space station in orbit which falls on Imperial jurisdiction."
The Scandinvans
25-07-2005, 03:45
"Yes, that was true, but the Eternal thought he would be given a fair trail yet it is ture that teh space station falls under the jurdiction of Deatharon. Yet from now I propose all crimes able to be subject of cpaital crimes have a trail if it occurs on this world."
Deatharon
25-07-2005, 03:50
Commander Vrosh replies, "The Empire will do this out of respect to the Eternals but even if the man had a trail he would have been found guility anyway."
The Scandinvans
25-07-2005, 04:00
"True we thank you for this and we understand he would have died anyway, but yet at least it will be fairer and more just."
Deatharon
25-07-2005, 04:04
Commander Vrosh replies, "The Empire and The Hegemony sees the use of such a trial as a waste of time and Credits. The sensors and Security Camera's usually provide decent evidence of such crimes. This is why trials are not used unless the details are not entirely clear."
The Scandinvans
25-07-2005, 04:10
"We respect your laws and customs, but yet we believe that a trail is an essentail part of our society to be just and fair."
Deatharon
25-07-2005, 04:18
Commander Vrosh replies, "If this was Deatharon territory he would have been killed on the spot. The only reason he lived was because the Eternal would not let the Marine's shoot him."

OOC: I will be off for dinner.
The Scandinvans
25-07-2005, 04:22
"We thank you again for taking into consideratin our thoughts upon the subject."
Deatharon
25-07-2005, 04:36
OOC: I'm back

IC: Vrosh adds, "Is that all?"
The Scandinvans
25-07-2005, 04:47
The Eternals respond," Unless there are other matters you wish to discuss that is except we wish to tell you that the Protoss have also settled upon this world with our premission."
Deatharon
25-07-2005, 04:49
The Antaran Commander responds, "We have not had any contact with the Protoss but the Empire and the Hegemony is intresting in meeting new species."
The Scandinvans
25-07-2005, 04:54
"We will ask them if it will be alright with the Protoss and we will inform you when they answer us which we are sure that they will agree, but we would like to ask them first."
Deatharon
25-07-2005, 05:16
Vrosh responds, "We would not like to meet them uninvited anyway."
The Scandinvans
25-07-2005, 05:25
The Eternals agree then they senfd this message to the Protoss:
"The settlers from Deatharon wish to meet with do you wish to meet them also?"
The Scandinvans
25-07-2005, 05:49
OOC: Going to bed now.
Deatharon
25-07-2005, 05:53
OOC: Ok
The Scandinvans
25-07-2005, 19:54
bump
Mini Miehm
25-07-2005, 20:08
Then a Eternal Lord stood up and said," Let this day be rembered as the day that the settlement of the Templar upon this world was compteted and that this world has rentered it's day of glory, light, and bliss."


"Let it be as you have said, there was a need, and this place has filled that need, we name this city Aman, land of light and hope, in rememberance of this day, let light never fade from the Jewels of the Eternals so long as a single Templar stands to live in this place, as long as one of us lives we are legion, we forever swear fealty to the Eternals, those who have given us our home."
The Scandinvans
25-07-2005, 20:14
OOC: Man you know your LOTOR.

The Eternals bowed in acceptance and then each of them swore this oath as well," We pledge our friendship and gurdainship over the Templars of this world and all of their kin, we will protect in their times of need, and we will teach them as an older sibiling does an younger sibiling."
The Scandinvans
25-07-2005, 20:29
OOC: I will start a new thread in August also should their be any union between an Eternal and protoss?
Mini Miehm
25-07-2005, 20:31
OOC: Man you know your LOTOR.

The Eternals bowed in acceptance and then each of them swore this oath as well," We pledge our friendship and gurdainship over the Templars of this world and all of their kin, we will protect in their times of need, and we will teach them as an older sibiling does an younger sibiling."

OOC: Been reading it since 4th grade, I better know my LOTR.

IC:

"We accept, as a younger sibling to an older, we shall figt alongside you as equals, your foes as our own, and your friends the same, let it be known, that from this time onward the Eternals shall be accounted among the People with the highest of honor."
Mini Miehm
25-07-2005, 20:34
OOC: I will start a new thread in August also should their be any union between an Eternal and protoss?

OOC: Could be a good idea, could be a rather awkward halfbreed, but I think it would be a good idea, I've got a male set up for the various "Marry (insert random person here) threads", I'll use him for that if we decide to do it.

IC:

The Templar also responded to the Deatharons wish for a meeting, inviting them to visit the first city, Forodwaith, to meet with the Conclave of Seven.
The Scandinvans
25-07-2005, 20:39
OOC: May be, but the halfbreed children of the Eternals tend to inherit Eternal phyiscal traits.

The Eternals answer by saying," You shall be counted amomgst, un our minds, as one of the greatest and most honorable children of the universe."
Deatharon
25-07-2005, 20:44
The Antaran Commander Vrosh accompanied by a squad of Marines went to the Protoss city. The Antaran left the human Carl Vir in charge of the of the Deatharon city.
Mini Miehm
25-07-2005, 20:50
OOC: May be, but the halfbreed children of the Eternals tend to inherit Eternal phyiscal traits.

The Eternals answer by saying," You shall be counted amomgst, un our minds, as one of the greatest and most honorable children of the universe."

"Thank you, you do us great honor in this, but please, come with us, the people of Deatharon approach, let us meet them together to ease their worry."

OOC: Hmm, Eternal looks with Templar mind-powers, that is a truly scary thought. But I think maybe we should do it nonetheless, I have a few RPs waiting in the wings that would benefit from just that kind of character.
The Scandinvans
25-07-2005, 20:55
"We agree with this thought and we shall accopany you to meet the people from the settlement of Deatharon upon this world we all share now."

OOC: Here it is.

An Eternal female of great beauty and sun yellow hair was talking to ne of the male Templar.
Deatharon
25-07-2005, 21:07
The Antaran followed by his guards headed to the Protoss city using an Imperial Walker.




OOC: Think AT-AT with a large Cannon on the back.
Mini Miehm
25-07-2005, 21:10
"We agree with this thought and we shall accopany you to meet the people from the settlement of Deatharon upon this world we all share now."

OOC: Here it is.

An Eternal female of great beauty and sun yellow hair was talking to ne of the male Templar.

"Then let us be off, my friend." They accompanied the Eternals to the gates of the city, there to wait for the Deatharonians, and lead them to the remnants of the feast.

OOC: This is a pre-made character, based on Beren, so I think this should be perfect for thuis situation.

IC:

Berenalai was enraptured, the Eternal to whom he spoke was beautiful beyond any reasoning, he knew he was stricken, and he knew it could never be, she was perfect, while he was a malformed Templar, not even worthy to be in her presence. But how culd he not, she was so perfect, he had to make her aware of how he felt. But what if she was disgusted, he would have made a fool of himself before a great being, how could he make this decision?
Mini Miehm
25-07-2005, 21:13
The Antaran followed by his guards headed to the Protoss city using an Imperial Walker.




OOC: Think AT-AT with a large Cannon on the back.

The Templar delegation was accompanied by a pair of flanking Reavers, and there were Interceptors in the sky to watch for the coming of the Deatharonians, and relay word back to the city of their impending arrival, then the delegates would leave the Reavers and go out to meet them, since the Reavers may have been interpreted as a threat on their part.
The Scandinvans
25-07-2005, 21:13
The Eternal lady went up to him and said," Be not afraid I do not find you repulsive."
Mini Miehm
25-07-2005, 21:22
The Eternal lady went up to him and said," Be not afraid I do not find you repulsive."
"How do you know my thoughts, you are not of the people, and have not our powers?" He was too stunned to have any other response to her seeming mind reading abilities, he quickly realised his error and apologised, "I am sorry for that outburst, it is true that I feared that you would find me unattractive, but how did you know, that I was attracted to you, please tell me."
The Scandinvans
25-07-2005, 21:29
She answered," My people have great mind abilties keen enough to read thoughts and more."
Deatharon
25-07-2005, 21:32
The Imperial Walker halts when it reaches the out skirts of the Protoss city. The Marines and the Antaran beam down via transporter and meet the Protoss Delegation.
Mini Miehm
25-07-2005, 23:24
She answered," My people have great mind abilties keen enough to read thoughts and more."

"Then you know my thoughts, I am sorry, I am unworthy, please forgive me." She's so beautiful, but she can't. . . Can she?
Mini Miehm
25-07-2005, 23:25
The Imperial Walker halts when it reaches the out skirts of the Protoss city. The Marines and the Antaran beam down via transporter and meet the Protoss Delegation.

"Entaro Adun Deatharonians, welcome to Haven." The protoss led them into the city, towards the central square.
The Scandinvans
25-07-2005, 23:39
"The Eternal are gifted in so many ways, but yet we do not consider any who have do any wrongs not worthy of us."
Mini Miehm
25-07-2005, 23:47
"The Eternal are gifted in so many ways, but yet we do not consider any who have do any wrongs not worthy of us."


"But, yu know what I was thinking just now, and I could never be worthy of the thoughts you saw, you know my thoughts and feelings, how can you say that I am not unworthy?" Does she really mean it. . . Could she possibly be. . .
The Scandinvans
25-07-2005, 23:52
"You are worthy as your race us noble and honorable and also you are to. I am yuong amongst the Eternals and I choose to dwell upon this world and I wish to spend that time with you."
Mini Miehm
25-07-2005, 23:55
"You are worthy as your race us noble and honorable and also you are to. I am yuong amongst the Eternals and I choose to dwell upon this world and I wish to spend that time with you."

"Why, I am happy about this, but I do not understand why you would dwell with me, I am a simple Khalia warrior, as an Eternal you are equal with the Seven, and it is rare for out-of-caste pairings, I wish tro understand your reasoning, please." He steps towards her, lookingf at her in an almost begging manner, like he wants something very badly, but cannot believe that he may get his wish.
The Scandinvans
26-07-2005, 00:02
"Their are now castes in Eternal society we allow free movement on our soceity leader as long as it through wisdom, knowledge, or actions of daring and honor which you and your people have done many times over you are happy becasue you belove an Eternal who loves as she does not look down upon, but sees you as an equal.
Mini Miehm
26-07-2005, 00:07
"Their are now castes in Eternal society we allow free movement on our soceity leader as long as it through wisdom, knowledge, or actions of daring and honor which you and your people have done many times over you are happy becasue you belove an Eternal who loves as she does not look down upon, but sees you as an equal.

He could not speak, he was struck dumb by her admission of love for him, he couldn't... He did, he steped close to her, and embraced her with a gentleness that belied his true strength, his eyes flared and dimmed, the protoss equivalent of tears, "Thank you, thank you so much, ashke, you will never be rid of me now." He whispered, and gave a tired chuckle, "We are life-bonded, I love you more than I do myself, and I will never leave you."
The Scandinvans
26-07-2005, 00:12
OOC: Are Protoss immortal?

The Eternal answered laughingly," Alright, alright we are life bonded for eternity. Also it is alright do not fear for me as I am an Eternal and can easily and you as well as defend myself."
Mini Miehm
26-07-2005, 00:37
OOC: Are Protoss immortal?

The Eternal answered laughingly," Alright, alright we are life bonded for eternity. Also it is alright do not fear for me as I am an Eternal and can easily and you as well as defend myself."

OOC: Theoretically..., they're alot like elves in that regard. The Matriarch is over a millenium I think, Zeratul is 700 odd years, so they can get on up there in age.

"If I did not fear for you I would not be the person I am, but I will trust you, I have only one question left, and that is for myself to answer, "What will my parents think?", they will either be overjoyed, or crucify me." He spoke with a wry grin, he truly did not know what his parents would think, but he was hopeful. "I believe we must tell our parents, they may not like it, mine at least, but they will not fight a life-bonding, they think that they will be cursed if they do, and they would never bring a curse down on their own heads." At this he chuckled again, his mother would go into a screaming fit, right up until he told her of the life-bond, his father would be quiet and disapproving, but he would support him in this, it was always his father who supported him before, and so it would be now.
The Scandinvans
26-07-2005, 00:41
"It's queit alright to my parents as the Eternals believe in free will as long as it doesn't cause harm or intefere in the free wills of others. Also when do I get to meet you parents, I hope soon though?"
Mini Miehm
26-07-2005, 00:48
"It's queit alright to my parents as the Eternals believe in free will as long as it doesn't cause harm or intefere in the free wills of others. Also when do I get to meet you parents, I hope soon though?"

"It will indeed be soon, they are walking towards us right now." And indeed they were, a pair of Dark Templar, one in a burgundy cloak, the other in teal, they greeted him cordially enough, "Entaro Adun Berenalai, it is good to see you again, and I see you have met one of the Eternals..."

"About that, we need to talk, you see, I'm in love with her, and she loves me, it's a life-bond, you can't fight it mother." He tensed, waiting for the onslaught that he knew was coming.

Contrary to his expectations, his parents were extatic, he had fallen in love with an Eternal, and she was blessing them with loving him in return, they were never happier, "And what is your name, m'lady?" His mother was adressing the Eternal, her son had, of course, failed to introduce them.
The Scandinvans
26-07-2005, 00:52
The Eternal searched her mind for the translation then said," I am Lady Yaveana."

After answering the Eternal lady bowed in respect of them and for their gracious and understanding response.
Mini Miehm
26-07-2005, 00:59
The Eternal searched her mind for the translation then said," I am Lady Vaveana."

After answering the Eternal lady bowed in respect of them and for their gracious and understanding response.

OOC: Bum bum bum!!!

"It is good to meet you Vavena, I am known simply as "The Matriarch", a bit of an onerous title at times, but the one I am given, and my ashke, Zeratul."

"Indeed, Berenalai, when are you going to be handfasted?"

"Father, I have only met her just a few hours ago, even a life-bond is no reason for a Handfasting so soon, surely?"

OOC2: You wanna make one of those "everyone invited to this marraige" threads, or just keep it here?
The Scandinvans
26-07-2005, 01:05
OOC: Started the other thread.
Deatharon
26-07-2005, 18:44
The Antaran Commander replies to the protoss, "Thank you for the greeting. I hope this day will bring our nations closer together." The Marines stay militantly silent as the party is being led to the center part of the city.
Mini Miehm
04-08-2005, 02:16
The Antaran Commander replies to the protoss, "Thank you for the greeting. I hope this day will bring our nations closer together." The Marines stay militantly silent as the party is being led to the center part of the city.

"It is our hope as well, we seek peace in this universe, and in so doing we all too often find strife, bringing two races closer together is a worthy goal for any nation."
Deatharon
04-08-2005, 07:08
The Antaran replies, "The Problem we have is that many Interstellar nations want to expand there borders through force and leave little to peace. The United Galactic Empire of Deatharon was also such a nation but under Emperor Akarth Von Antheron we are trying to become more neighborly with other peoples."
Mini Miehm
04-08-2005, 12:32
The Antaran replies, "The Problem we have is that many Interstellar nations want to expand there borders through force and leave little to peace. The United Galactic Empire of Deatharon was also such a nation but under Emperor Akarth Von Antheron we are trying to become more neighborly with other peoples."

"Those who seek peace shall attain it, though the price may be more than they are willing to pay. . . We are a relatively peacable people, and we have little to do with the doings of the intergalactic community, we leave that to our allies, we are Guardians, Defenders of hope, we do not deal well with diplomacy, we are much too honest, I hope that it will not be a weakness here."