NationStates Jolt Archive


recruitment letter is it catchy

Tyrannt Destroyers
18-02-2005, 07:37
it is the desire of the region a democratic heaven for you to consider a move to our great region. we are a growing nation and would love to have you grow with us. if you deicde to move when you join the un i will happily endorse you. your democratic heaven recruiting officer
Hendrick4824
18-02-2005, 12:39
No actually it's pretty flat and boring. Just being honest. Spelling, proper capitalization and punctuation is important in a recruiting letter, as well.

Not nit-picking.... giving you an honest opinion.