NationStates Jolt Archive


Tentative issue idea

Golgothastan
31-03-2006, 14:57
Totally completely 100% absolutely not based off anything from real life. Honest.

Name:Tbc

Description: Former Head of State Colin Farch recently passed away, and there are calls for the present government to lay on a state funeral in his memory.

Validity: All

Options:

[option]"He was elegant, graceful, the model of a modern diplomat," sniffs his former press secretary, @@RANDONNAME@@. "And I think it's only fair we honour that memory - with a full procession, a twenty-one-gun salute, and fireworks! No expense must be spared if we are to truly recognise what this great man did for @@NAME@@."
[effect]millions of @@CURRENCY@@s are blown on state funerals for every former leader

[option]"Well excuse me, but why should he be getting some fancy parade, while the rest of us are left to die alone and sad?" sneers renowned miser and numismatist @@RANDONNAME@@. "I don't want my tax money wasted on all that sort of thing. We pay far too much tax anyway, if you ask me."
[effect]government spending is being reigned in

[option]"I agree that we shouldn't spend too much," advises government publicity officer @@RANDONNAME@@. "But, Farch was a popular leader, and it certainly wouldn't do any harm for the current administration to associate itself with his memory. A few speeches, a prominent presence at the funeral, and maybe even a prayer in his memory, and I guarantee the public will lap it up."
[effect]the government attempts to draw tenuous links between its policies and those of every popular past leader

[option]"Prayers!? This is an outrage!" screams avowed secularist, @@RANDONNAME@@, whilst carefully arranging a non-denominational holiday card. "This funeral should maintain the strongest and clearest of divisions between church and state: if ever there was a time to show the public how committed we are to religious freedom, this is it. We should be banning all religious associations from anything the state's involved in, actually."
[effect]any form of religious symbolism is banned from all state functions

[option]"Colin Farch may have been popular amongst the majority of voters, but that's forgetting how damaging they proved in the long run," complains newspaper columnist @@RANDONNAME@@. "Excessive military spending, environmental destruction, illegal hand-outs to the @@MAJORINDUSTRY@@ industry, and of course the atrocious handling of the VODAIS crisis. Enough with this talk of 'honouring' him: the government should be issuing a condemnation. And it's about time we got to work fixing the problems he caused, too."
[effect]the government is attempting to tackle pollution and disease

I think the [effect]s could be snappier - I'm terrible at thinking up those. And no, I haven't done stats yet.
Not Quite Dead Peoples
01-04-2006, 01:49
Well, it looks good. I especially like the variety of options (I'm annoyed because I haven't gotten a single tax-reduction option in a week). It is a bit on the long side, though. Could you make it more consice? Even though I couldn't do anything if you didn't.
Atheistic Right
01-04-2006, 02:44
One suggestion about the Validity... Since you mention crappy handling of VODAIS... I reckon you need to have at least have had that issue in the past to qualify for this one
Emperor Matthuis
01-04-2006, 10:18
I liked the issue but thought it could have some improving done to the concept. I would probably get rid of the bit about the handling of the VODAIS virus because otherwise you will have to put that in the validity. Also I would get rid of the name Colin Farch and perhaps say that your Five Star General or Leader who led your country through a great war 50 years ago with Maxtopia had died.