NationStates Jolt Archive

“Project Evolution”
A group of scientists called GE “Genetic Evolution” have figured out how to transferor gene strands by replacing other strands they want to replace normal some human senses with that of some of @@animal@@.
[option] “This is great one more step up the evolutionary chain” Says respected biologist @@random name@@ “sure it’ll take a generation or two for the effects to kick in but once they do we will be on are way to having a perfected system man kind’s next step is coming.”
[effects] side affects of the Project GE often include lose of hearing, it also happens that it is now extremely rare for a person to have a single child in @@name@@.
[stats] health decreases, size increases
[option] “I agree but we should test it I mean it won’t matter if two generations later if every one is dead now we can have volunteers who apply to test it.” Says @@random name@@ a pioneer researcher who has been on with GE testing Project Evolution on monkeys noticing slight negative effects “that way we can figure out the kinks in the project.’
[effects] a large amount of the populous have now been induced with the safe lab tested end results of Project evolution at considerable cost.
[stats] Health Increase, Tax Increase.
[option] “This is not only unsafe, unproven, and most likely dangerous, but it interferes with the way god made us to be.” Says religious doctor @@random name@@ “now I am not say mechanical limbs are wrong if you volunteer but if we do this it will be passed on for all of the following generations.”
[effects] scientist in biology are viewed with suspicion and all cures under go a long testing process.
[stats] Health stays the same, Religion & Spirituality goes up, taxes go up.

yes i do know that this is a bit out of reality it is however at least explained a little.

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I like it. :)

interesting idea

can i get a moder to look at this

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Unique idea, but it might be a bit too unfeasible to be accepted.

At any rate, I'd recommend reworking the effects that appear in the nation description. For instance, the first one is quite wordy, it would serve to condense it. Also, the effects and stat changes for the second are a little too.. good. Remember, there should never be any ideal choice that makes everything good.

Also, I think the "sense of smell" thing is a little too specific. Maybe just gene infusion in general, particularly as not all animals have a functioning sense of smell, and the last thing we want is an opportunity for someone to open another "OMG look hjow funy thisd ishue is wit my animl!" topic.

Other than that, run your issue through the spellchecker. There's quite a few spelling and punctuation erros in it, and the more professional it looks, the more likely it is to get accepted.

thanks now all i have to do is wait a month so i can submit it a.k.a when i have 500 millon people. by the way the senses work well becasue all of the creatures in the world (if their human well can't be helped) have a better sense of something then we do.