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Toxic Tunnel Target Of Turbulence

Hata-alla
06-03-2004, 15:54
Title: Toxic Tunnel Target Of Turbulence

Description: When given the diagnosis Chronical Hyphnorrea, seventy tunnelworkers from the not yet-completed railway
tunnel through the Hallansos Mountain has started a campain to prevent further sickness.

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[option]"I suspected there was something strange when I came to work there," tunnel worker @@RANDOMNAME@@ says.
"I mean, all those strange barreles marked "Toxic! Rocka-Gel" made me wonder. And then I got this constant headache,
well, my suspects got confirmed when I went to the doctor. I hope that the government stops using that poison stuff.
It's dangerous!"
[effect]food containing minimal doses of unnatural substances are forbidden
[stats]environment spending increases a bit, tax increases, political feeedoms increase a bit, economy decreases a bit.

[option]Local villager @@RANDOIMNAME@@ agrees. "Since they started building that tunnel all the birds in the area
has died and the fish is poisonous! And the digging is extremely disturbing. Not to mention thatbthe water from our well is undrinkable.
I say stop the tunnel!"
[effect]railway tracks go miles around mountains to prevent the building of tunnels
[stats]environment spending increases, economy decreases quite much, tax increases, political freedoms increase.

[option]"That "poison stuff" was not poison at all," says Head of Transport department @@RANDOMNAME@@. "It was simply a
concrete-reinforcing substance that we always use to build tunnels. Allright, it was bad that some of it leaked out in
the groundwater, but hey! We save twenty-eight minutes by building that tunnel throught he mountain! You can't prevent hard-working people
from going to work, can you?"
[effect]huge tunnels destroy the precious mountains of @@NAME@@
[stats]political freedoms decrease, economy increases.

Based on a problem here in Sweden (Therefor the name of the mountain). Improvements, comments etc?
Reploid Productions
06-03-2004, 16:29
Looks pretty good- there are quite a few grammatical errors that would need to be fixed, either before submission or by the mod that looks at it, but otherwise, it looks pretty sound.