NationStates Jolt Archive


issue feedback

27-01-2004, 18:22
looking for some feedback on this one before i submit

the issue:
there has been some petitions from larger business operators in the <random industry>. they want the owner-operator laws surrounding the industry.

option 1 - this is about protecting the small owner operator. if this is repealed all the licecense(sp) will be bought up by foreign mega-corps. and then they'll replace me with cheap labour. from <random name> a gatherer.
effect - slight increase in big industry

option 2 - i just want to buy a couple of licesences(sp). if i can't keep my processing plant supplied i'll end up having to close shop and lay off everybody. from <random name> a processor
effect - increase in economy

option 3 - with the all the liceseces i can by up i can improve the processes and produce a better end product for less. from <random name> a mega-corp ceo.
effect - increase in big industry.

option 3 -
Sirocco
28-01-2004, 12:10
It needs a bit of fleshing out... to make it more quirky and interesting. Tak' a look at the issues already around and see how you can incorporate that style into your issue.
28-01-2004, 18:27
that's kind of what i'm looking for. i don't have the raw creativity to write a quirky issue.