The Planet Federation
19-05-2005, 02:39
OK heres the sceaniro. Im in an RP with mutiple nations its part of a trade federation.
Green sun replies
Warning: A NeoBlack Sun terrorist has been found onboard one of the ships. Attatched is a picture of him and the ship. We don't want to risk contacting the ship, so when it boards have armed gaurds raid it, capture teh terrorist, and extort himn to Green Sun. He is to be presumed extremely dangerous.
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So this is my response-
As the Greensun Ship came our of warp it was ment by 30 Fast attack craft and a single tramsission was sent to the bridge of the Greensun ship.
"Goto Federation dock 1134 and dock and prepare for boarding this is your only warning."
"Do what he says" the captian ordered.
As the ship hard docked a hissing noise of the dock being pressurized and the thumsbs up from the junior scientit at the docking bay door. 50 Federation Soldiers moved in in full tatical gear. When they entered they found their terrorist at the enterance with a Blaster Pistol to the pilots head and a small switch in his hand.
"This ship is carring petrolum ive put a thermal detonator on the main storage tanks. I flip this switch half your spaceport goes up in flames."
With that a trasmission in sniper 1's earpiece came in "Were going to draw him out in the open take a shop when you get it."
"Roger that"
As he was slowly coaxed out of the docking collar a small lazer came on the side of his head. The sniper was on the third story and within seconds it was all over.
The first shot hit him in the upper left temple passing through his brain severing his nerons that allowed him to control his motor functions. This was followed by a bright red spray out the right side of his head.
As he spun to his right the snipers second shot pearced his neck bewteen the first and seecond verterbre. This paralyzed him from the neck down. this was followed by the bullet going through the front of his neck entering the floor just below him.
The total time it took from the first shot to the Terrorists hitting the ground was less than 2 seconds. When it was all over the copse laid on the ground bleeding profusly.
The General of the Spaceport came down and looked at the body.
"Finsih the security inspection and send the ship to endora if all is cleared. Get this messed cleaned up"
He looked at the Lt. Commanding the Federation Soldiers
"Good work"
"Thank you sir"
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Greensun Wirtes back
((Hey, um, he's technically my character and MY ship, so I would RP him, not you. And UziCorp might be a little ticked taht one of their ships was boarded.))
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Is this godmodding or isnt it......although we have worked it out so we arent arguing i dont belive this to be godmodding
But id like an expert opinion thanks.
Green sun replies
Warning: A NeoBlack Sun terrorist has been found onboard one of the ships. Attatched is a picture of him and the ship. We don't want to risk contacting the ship, so when it boards have armed gaurds raid it, capture teh terrorist, and extort himn to Green Sun. He is to be presumed extremely dangerous.
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So this is my response-
As the Greensun Ship came our of warp it was ment by 30 Fast attack craft and a single tramsission was sent to the bridge of the Greensun ship.
"Goto Federation dock 1134 and dock and prepare for boarding this is your only warning."
"Do what he says" the captian ordered.
As the ship hard docked a hissing noise of the dock being pressurized and the thumsbs up from the junior scientit at the docking bay door. 50 Federation Soldiers moved in in full tatical gear. When they entered they found their terrorist at the enterance with a Blaster Pistol to the pilots head and a small switch in his hand.
"This ship is carring petrolum ive put a thermal detonator on the main storage tanks. I flip this switch half your spaceport goes up in flames."
With that a trasmission in sniper 1's earpiece came in "Were going to draw him out in the open take a shop when you get it."
"Roger that"
As he was slowly coaxed out of the docking collar a small lazer came on the side of his head. The sniper was on the third story and within seconds it was all over.
The first shot hit him in the upper left temple passing through his brain severing his nerons that allowed him to control his motor functions. This was followed by a bright red spray out the right side of his head.
As he spun to his right the snipers second shot pearced his neck bewteen the first and seecond verterbre. This paralyzed him from the neck down. this was followed by the bullet going through the front of his neck entering the floor just below him.
The total time it took from the first shot to the Terrorists hitting the ground was less than 2 seconds. When it was all over the copse laid on the ground bleeding profusly.
The General of the Spaceport came down and looked at the body.
"Finsih the security inspection and send the ship to endora if all is cleared. Get this messed cleaned up"
He looked at the Lt. Commanding the Federation Soldiers
"Good work"
"Thank you sir"
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Greensun Wirtes back
((Hey, um, he's technically my character and MY ship, so I would RP him, not you. And UziCorp might be a little ticked taht one of their ships was boarded.))
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Is this godmodding or isnt it......although we have worked it out so we arent arguing i dont belive this to be godmodding
But id like an expert opinion thanks.