NationStates Jolt Archive

Last night a terrorist group had attacked Unity and Hope.

Unity and Hope has responded by enganging a full on Conflict with these Terrorists by rallying the Tanks and moving them down the Street's.

Unity and Hope was able to kill most of the Terrorists yet there were a few who had got away.

OOC: What was the scale of the attack? How many people killed/injured? What was the motive of the group? Is the government response equal to the damage done or way over the top?

OOC: What was the scale of the attack? How many people killed/injured? What was the motive of the group? Is the government response equal to the damage done or way over the top?

The Motive of the Group is to Over throw Unity and Hope and replace it with a strongly Anti-Revisionist/Stalinist Dictatorship.

A bomb went off inside a Worker's Commune killing atleast 500 of our people.

I feel we responded goodly.

OOC: I hate to be the person who says this, but I strongly recommend you improve your creative writing before continuing. You don't give enough detail or depth to make an RP interesting. Perhaps you should sign up with the NS trainer scheme. I hear it is really good, not that I have used it. Or do an RP with a more experienced RPer just write as much detail that comes to your head. Even if it takes a couple of hours a good post a pleasure to read even when it is bad for your character or nation. Just keep practicing your writing, I found that writing about peaceful things before military things helps improve your skills.
Good Luck,
Whisk