NationStates Jolt Archive


Free People/Evil Empire War

Blottsland
17-10-2008, 20:51
Blottsland's King Blotts recently made a statement saying that democracy is the way to go, and all dictators and tyrants are dispicable power hungry freaks.

He got so mad that he went on a rampage, ordering troups to bomb any countries classified as such.

You are the dictatorship/tyranny and you have just declared war on Blottsland.
Or you are another free people country that is on Blottsland's side.

Joining the war is open, there is an unlimited amount of countries allowed. War starts as soon as first dictator/tyranny country declares war.
Kirav
17-10-2008, 21:26
Welcome to NS International Incidents, or, as we lovingly call it, II.

There's a few things about your post that would deter other players from wanting to participate in this RP.

■ The first and biggest is that you declared war on multiple countries that you don't yet have contact with, for a flimsy reason.

-On II, you cannot 'take over the world', or declare war on every monarchy or dicatorship out of the blue. This is principally because the size of your military is determined by the size of your population. It's generally accepted that only 0-8% or so of your population can be in the military without your economy crashing through lack of a workforce. Right now, I'm guessing, you have ≤20 million people in your country, while I have over four BILLION, and AutoMagFreek has over ten billion. At this rate, there are countries with militaries larger than your entire population.

Also, your military budget is determined by your economy and rate of taxation. You can find out the exact numbers on NSTracker (Just search it on Google).


■ You need a better reason for war. It would be stupid for an actual ruler to declare a war on all states that didn't function his way. It would drain rescources for no practical gain. It is, however, acceptable to invade a nation because it doesn't fit your ideology (Most often, it is Capitalism vs. Communism), but you would need to target a specific nation or nations, and have an IC incentive for doing so.

■ You are mixing IC (In-Character, or In-Universe, where your writing is narrating the story) with OOC (Where your writing is aimed at communicatign with other players, not their nations or characters). This is very confusing to the reader.


Now, I'm sure by the time I've posted, you've been reprimanded by several players already, or beaten on for 'n00bery'. I believe that new players are valuable, and that they can improve once they learn the rules.

Have fun!

-Kiravius [The man behind Kirav, Xirya, Hibernia, and Kexarin]
Chernobyl-Pripyat
17-10-2008, 21:38
[ooc: well, since I've got a few minutes to spare..]


Murska AB


After intercepting an incoherent message, The Air Defense Force, not having a government to report to at the moment, decided it would test it's heavy cruise missiles. A squadron of Tu-160M were being fueled and loaded. They would be escorted by Su-30 fighters, and would target the nation of Blottsland's capital city and major military instalations.
Blottsland
18-10-2008, 20:45
Blottsland evacuates the capital city for further safety and sends soldiers into Murska AB to patrol the cities and shoot government officials.
Kirav
18-10-2008, 20:50
Blottsland evacuates the capital city for further safety and sends soldiers into Murska AB to patrol the cities and shoot government officials.

Did you read my first post?

Also, how did your forces instantly occupy an aiforce base operated by a nation several times your size?
Zoingo
18-10-2008, 20:56
-Kiravius [The man behind Kirav, Xirya, Hibernia, and Kexarin]

ooc: I knew it!

But anyway, everything that Kirav just said....Is absolutely true.
Blottsland
18-10-2008, 21:40
Yeah I read it. But I want to do this anyway if people don't care.

And the part about the airforce? Was that to me?
Tanuri
18-10-2008, 21:44
you cannot 'take over the world', or declare war on every monarchy or dicatorship out of the blue. This is principally because the size of your military is determined by the size of your population. It's generally accepted that only 0-8% or so of your population can be in the military without your economy crashing through lack of a workforce.
Also, your military budget is determined by your economy and rate of taxation. You can find out the exact numbers on NSTracker (Just search it on Google).

Don't let Isa see this...;)