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after the independents war of zot109land and a peroid of discussion to open the borders for matrials from other country's the borders are finnally open for rebuild the villaga's and major city's and build embassy's and a satue of :hail: the almithy dictator zot109

[OOC; I would be able to take you much more seriously if you could spell and use proper grammar, as well as give us more than just one line of description of the event. What do you even want us to do?]

ooc: LAWL hes worse then roef, no offense roef, but this guy makes you look awesome.

[OOC; I utterly agree. They should form the '00ber Bad Grammar' alliance. Although frankly, you're not one to talk much Kewen.]

ooc: LAWL hes worse then roef, no offense roef, but this guy makes you look awesome.

OOC: That's harsh. Ouch.

ooc: what i like to do whit you is that you help whit rebuild my country and give you get a chance to build embassy's in my capital Antwerpen i can't spell propperly in english because i am from belguim

ooc: what i like to do whit you is that you help whit rebuild my country and give you get a chance to build embassy's in my capital Antwerpen i can't spell propperly in english because i am from belguim

OOC: Why is it that the longer I spend here, the faster my faith in Europe dissipates?

OOC: Why is it that the longer I spend here, the faster my faith in Europe dissipates?

mayby are you such a big american nationalist that you gonna think that america is better than all the rest and i gonna tell you america is not better than all the rest we are all equality

ooc: ah yes, i never said i was perfect my grammer and spelling is also quite bad( im from Thailand FYI and proud of it!)

but meh

IC:

To the Leader of Zotland(i refuse to use a number in your name!)
From : Leader of Marts - r - us
Greetings, i am Keelan keelan, current head of the Marts r us Corperation, we are interested in building your country, specific TaC applies, but basically, we pay to fix parts of your country, and in return we own 50% of what we fix.

If you accept this deal, please respond as quickly as possible, if not good day.

ic:
to the leader of marts-r-s
from:the leader of zot109land
good day mylord
your proposal is dienied in that form i will repay the cost of the matrials, workers, transport,... and give you a free embassy but not terrytory plz response quick

No thank you, if you can repay the costs, why not rebuild yourself.

OOC: You should accept his offer zot109, i would do to...
Kewen, is a (for me) friend, and i trust him, more than the other players. I would accept, he is a good guy.

To: Zotland
From: Empress Catalia of the House of Cats

We are willing to consider helping with the rebuilding. However, we will not do so for free. If your nation agrees to tithe a small portion of its population, as well as ten percent of all natural resources that are of use to us, to our nation on a yearly basis for the next eighty years, then we will agree to help.

We would do so out of the goodness of our hearts, but we don't have money to throw around just because we can. We need to benefit from this as well. As such, the needs of my people come before and moral considerations of charging you for this.

You know that even if you're Belgian, you can still use an English spellchecker. No excuse, mate.

OOC: You should accept his offer zot109, i would do to...
Kewen, is a (for me) friend, and i trust him, more than the other players. I would accept, he is a good guy.

i mean repay in a couple years

To: Zotland
From: Empress Catalia of the House of Cats

We are willing to consider helping with the rebuilding. However, we will not do so for free. If your nation agrees to tithe a small portion of its population, as well as ten percent of all natural resources that are of use to us, to our nation on a yearly basis for the next eighty years, then we will agree to help.

We would do so out of the goodness of our hearts, but we don't have money to throw around just because we can. We need to benefit from this as well. As such, the needs of my people come before and moral considerations of charging you for this.


from: the dictator of zot109land
to:Empress Catalia of the House of Cats
i agree your offer!
but may i ask something???
what do you think of a free embassy in my capitalcity???

You know that even if you're Belgian, you can still use an English spellchecker. No excuse, mate.

ooc: i use a translationsite for the words i don't know but the translationsite's are bad

To: Dictator of Zotland
From: Empress Catalia of the House of Cats

We think any embassy established within your nation would be burned to the ground, along with parts of your government, once your citizens learned their government was willingly trading some of them into slavery and giving that same foreign power a significant amount of resources. As such, we feel it is in our best interests not to accept.

However, we are currently organizing our aide crews. Expect them within one standard month.

to:Empress Catalia of the House of Cats
from:the dictator of zot109land

i don't sell them.
i pay them to go to your country . every month i pay them a little wage for the work they do at your country and my military will defend all embassy's (and the country) till death

ooc: i use a translationsite for the words i don't know but the translationsite's are bad

Add an English dictionary to your browser, or Microsoft Word and it'll pick up at least some of your errors. Initials (e.g. "ooc") should be capitalised (e.g. "OOC"), as with the letter "i" when talking about one's self :P

OOC: I use a translation-site for the words I don't know but the translation-site's poor.

The "[apostrophe]-s" after the second "translation-site" signifies the word "is" in this case (I'm presuming), so there's no need for "are" as well. If you add things like the British English Dictionary to Mozilla Firefox (which really should be your browser) then you'll get far better responses from other players, plus it'll help you develop your written English further with less effort on the part of yourself.

[EDIT: Oh, and I'm far from perfect half of the time myself, but meh...]

To: the Dictator of Zotland
From: Empress Catalia of the House of Cats

I think you misunderstand the meaning of the word "tithe" when used in application to your populace... But, no worries. We promise that any citizens sent to our nation will be well taken care of.

ooc: you know, your using your mastery of the english language to trick this person into something he may not like. i like. Cat person! this is awesome.

to:Empress Catalia of the House of Cats
from:the dictator of zot109land

yes i misunderstand that but they don't gonna worry thats not make a difference to they home's they are almost slave's in here

ooc: you know, your using your mastery of the english language to trick this person into something he may not like.

He wouldn't like to develop his English skills further by doing less? He wouldn't like the opportunity to have others take him and his roleplays more seriously? If I recall correctly, spelling and grammar is part of the Stickies that all newbies are directed to read (you will find them at the top of this forum).

But if he doesn't want any help and is happy with his spelling, then fair enough. But others will probably still pick up on it every time he posts.

[EDIT: http://forums.jolt.co.uk/showpost.php?p=6876385&postcount=1]

OOC: Kewen, the sad fact is that, given the latest post, being sold into slavery in Forensatha will actually be an improvement for those sold.

IC:

To: Dictator of Zotland
From: Empress Catalia of the House of Cats

No problem. We will begin the transaction as soon as relief ships arrive. Our nation is small, but we can do amazing work if left to it.

an why would we help a snot nose dictator who would just take the money for himself then to use it to rebuild

to:Empress Catalia of the House of Cats
from:the dictator of zot109land

thanks my people are grateful to yours for the help (also the people who sold to you they want to move to the foreign country) there are 1000 people waiting for you for shipping at here new home .
the goods i promised are transported by means of air

an why would we help a snot nose dictator who would just take the money for himself then to use it to rebuild


:because i am a dictator who
the bests for have whit my people

OOC:because i am a dictator who
the bests for have whit my people

occ :rolleyes: that was a ic post not a dam ooc one

i have edit that post

the workers have started with rebuilding but are still look up to new matirial

OOC: Why is it that the longer I spend here, the faster my faith in Europe dissipates?

OOC: Are you trying to imply that if you don't speak English well, you shouldn't come on here?