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Private jonathan smith landed with his small war-ship. The ship dropped some food, and than it got away. The private was send to make some reports about this unknown island. The island, was claimed by Roef, and was ment to become a Sergeant HQ. The private, was planning to look around, and snap some photo's. In return: He woud become an sergeant...
After about an hour, the private founded his axe in the package. Than he moved toward some tree's, and started to cut them. After about a few minutes, a monkey jumped out. For about an hour, nothing happend.
Than the tree was cut and broke down. The private was very pleased with himself, and started to cut the wood and some roots. With this, he was planning to build a big house. These other tree's, where ment to build a next building, than a camp, than a town... That town, was planed to become a training place for sergeants.

Jonathan had cut about 35 planks. Than he started to set them as a house...
After an hour or two, the house was done. Than he pulled a 9mm gun, and hang it on the wall he just build. He got his sleeping back, and fell asleep...
The next morning, he woke up, and pullec on his war uniform. He took his gun from the wall, and started to hunt some meat. He cut some logs the day before, and had set them as a fire. There was no fire yet, but anyway...
He founded a bunny in the woods, and shot one of his 450 bullets at him. The bunny was killed, than he took the dead bunny to his house. He cooked the bunny, and eat it. Than he was off to hunt some more meat...

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Yes?

OOC: Dude...I don't think there is any more help I can offer because you never listen to people.

OOC: Look, I'm just throwing this idea out here, and it could be totally wrong, but...I know Roef and Canedian Army are brothers, so if this is actually CA using Roef's account (way too many similarities at this point), just quit it. If this is actually Roef, don't slide down the CA slope.

OOC: Cant we just do something with this topic?

OOC: Well, considering it's not really an RPable topic, or at least has no RP-hooks, it is not likely to go anywhere.

This more like an Internal Affair event, or story more or less.

Again, if you need help, I'm here.

OOC: Here's my suggestion, why only send one guy? Not only does it make no tactical sense but it makes for a much less interesting story (unless you are an excellent writer).

OOC: No, this is the frist one, later more will arrive, but i will sooner it...

IC:
22 more private's arrived. Jonathan waved from the beach to them, and was happy to see more other soldiers. The soldiers got of there ship, took the food and water, and than moved everything to the camp. The camp, was builded of 3 houses now, a fire in the middle and even a weak wooden wall.

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OOC: Dude...I don't think there is any more help I can offer because you never listen to people

OOC: A more correct point could not have been made. ;). Here is my advice. Take it or leave it, but at least read it.

Don't continue making these threads which appear to have no RPable plotlines. Try joining an RP and read other threads for some pointers on how to be a better RPer. Another good point would be to choose a time period for your nation and possibly write a factbook that shows important information about your nation. See the link to my factbook as an example - Just don't copy it.

For Reference - Time Periods
PT - Past Technology
MT - Modern Technology
PMT - Post-Modern Technology
FT - Future Technology
FNT - Fantasy Technology

Also, a note on custom weapons. If you want to use them, it's best to create some statistics. If you want it to be really realisitic, try running it by the NS Draftroom. While some complain about them for being too rigid to reality, they are after realism. You don't have to run the stats by them, but some players will utilise the I.G.N.O.R.E Cannon when confronted by unreasonable weapons.

OOC: Now that is good advice.

OOC: Is English not your first language or do you just not care about grammar at all. If enlgish is not your first language, completely ignore this post as I can't do even half as good as that with languages i'm learning (french) but if english is your first language buy a dictionary.

No, its not my first language, i am dutch.

FNT - Fantasy Technology[/I]


ooc it's just been class as FT as well not FNT,unless i miss the email of the change

ooc it's just been class as FT as well not FNT,unless i miss the email of the change

Is it not? I thought it was.

OOC: Now that is good advice.

Thank you Falkasia. I've been trying to help Roef a few times too, but no luck so far. Having just seen some of his tanks, i think my best advice was this:

Just don't copy it.