NationStates Jolt Archive

ooc: even tho im just new i feel my old nation had some bad kinks and stuff some im hoping well praying that this retcon will allow me to rectify this kink and lemme explore other areas of stuff.... so let the retcon begin.
IC:

In a Pocket of space soon to be know as the Wastes lay a small expanse of turbulent and rough nebulas these could be navigated, and indeed some brave humans aliens and others have managed to navigate the feirce Ion storms and radiation clouds to find a handful of systems hidden behind it all a Eden of sorts on the 4th planet in the 2nd system lay a aboslutly miraculs planet, the southern Hemispher of the planet was covered in vast pools of metalic silver while the north side was covered in rocky hills and small but visible primitive dwellings...

The Southern side of the planet held host to the Silviler a race or more specfifc a substance of semi-sentient liquid metals while the northenhemisphere nurtured a Race called the Kewvenger far' or Kewen to be short who resembled Gold snakes about a meter or two long...

For along time on this planet there was nothing but them two untill the Silviler link started to collapse noone knew why but it just did the Silvlier needed to work togethor or be part of a large group to remain sentient or semi-sentient, the Kewen had emited faint traces of PK abilities, probably in the most humanish act doneo n the planet they batered untill the unification of the race was complete the Silvlier were now part of the Kewen and vice' versa were once was two now is one. The Golden kewen were the core of the body directing,nurturing the Outer Silvlier they now resembled small fralie beings but in truth they were capable mostrosities melding into and assuming the fuctions of allmost anything Theycould adapt to anyplanet by assuming the form of a tree and living for awhile the live spans were extended a hundred fold and soon they began to develop technologies.

About a million years after the Unification Grand Link Zassssssuk had died, and a new Link and era was ushered in his first act of office was to explore the handful of systems in the Wastelands were ours now they wanted more. A Handfull of Massive podships equiped with weapons and tech salvaged from wrecked ships from the nebula(they look like the Mon calamari crusier "Home one" from starwars) began there journey.

The first ever Kewen ship exited the Wastelands its massive bulk lined with weapons unsure of what to do they sat there for awhile before engaging their experimental FTL drives the went away the ships fading into nothingness.

The ships arrived completly offtarget far away from where they were the laws of space and time were different here thought the ship's space was "lighter" one suggested. they had arrived in what seemed to be a partly occupied system with many different crafts in here unsure of want to do the three massive Podships just sat in space watching learning.. changing.

The last of the Podships arrived in the system bring the total number up to four also bringing with it a part of the Waste lands a large radiation spike would of been picked up by anyone but the podships thought that standard.

warShip Noh’Alamo (http://www.atddm.com/warship.jpg) thought the spike interesting - along with the appearance of ships not in his very extensive data banks.

His patrol for the nonce included Rhukbat, one of the outer rim systems of the Tanaran Empire and long if modestly settled. It only had two system defense fortresses and the strangers had come in right at the point it would take either of the SDF the longest to reach. Neither was equipped with a DST.

So Alamo lightshifted and placed himself between the strangers and the occupied planet of the system

“Greetings this is the Rhukbat system of the Phoenix Empire of Tanara. I am the warShip Noh'Alamo. What are your intentions?” he broadcast in the widest spectrum possible. His shields were up and his weapons active but few sensors could discern that, as they were within his living flesh

The Pod ships watched the new arrival with interest the kewen had never needed communications as being bonded with the Slivlier gav them access to the link and ergo FTL communication over most distances.. but something was strange different even this "outsider" was speaking through the link a flurry of words were sent through more.. private parts fo the link before a message was sent back through the link not words as such but thoughts..

The feelings sent back implied a feeling of lost and unfamilerness of this place along with peaceful intentions of kindness and such but in case anything would go wrong or they would be misinterperated the Podships rasied there sheilds and a shimering slightly visible feild flickered into life around the ships

ooc: http://spaceship.brainiac.com/Galoob/galoob-mon-calamari.jpeg <-- podship

Noh' Alamo was pleased, emotions were very hard to fake and he was an old enough warShip to have long ago learned how to discern such falsity

Then he radiated a reply, and an offer. Alamo would gladly transmit a burst packet, a language pack, telepathically. It would let the strangers learn instantly the whole of the language, and not only make for easier communications, but more detailed ones.

The ships and their crews were delighted at there offer a chance to learn for long ago had the kewen mamanged to find abosrb and learn everything they needed in their own space and they wanted morewhat could either be said as Happiness ot agreement the feeling was pushed towards the ship

Noh' Alamo was very pleased that they newcomers had agreed. He had never had a first contact before, but it seemed as if he wasn't doing too badly. Taking a long moment he made sure all the data was properly encoded, nothing incomplete or miscoded, then he transmitted in one immense packet.

For you see a language, any language tell an immense amount about the culture, the people, that use it. And so to use the language properly you must know at least the most basic and relevant bits about a culture - it's past, present and hints as to it's future direction.

This was an immense amount of data, not easily evaluated and integrated all at once. According to what Alamo have been taught when he'd learned the rudiments of First Contact, was to let the new comers have time to assimilate after receiving the information.

He was a warShip, and his patience was nearly infinite. Waiting is...

The Package was recvied when it was found to be too big which was conincidently when it was recvied it was sent through the lin distrubited over the whole population then mixed till everyone had it all and learned it all, all this took onl amatter of seconds as the proccesing power of millions of kewen was better then that of a super computer.

Parts of the Lead pod ship reformed and the nose cone turned into a Silvery liquid before reforming into a large it quite comdecially overside radion till it settled into a nice dull yellow it swivled and locked onto the Alien ship forsending a message which best represented the feelings of the Kewen as a Whole

"Celestial Salutations, fellow star bretherin from distant lands yonder"

Noh Alamo chuckled to himself he had seen the Kewen the Tanaran logos, and they'd chosen the more formal route. Which was actually quite acceptable to him as it was a very involved almost convoluted language and culture.

"Greetings. Are you just now come to explore the wider universe, or are you lost?" He enquired.

The Lead pod ship replied
"A bit of both, we sought to explore our neighboring systems but instead we went to far, space here is lighter and not heavy it is easier to move thorugh"

OCC: my race is a scientific-military dictatorship made up of mostly clones that run almost everything including the goverment, which's army and space force fly around observing speacias, dissecting, experiments, pets, large space zoo's anyway id fit in?

ooc: its open find a angle and jump in claim the massive rad spke.. its nto a normal rad spike.. a new type or rad spike i will reveal later for i come from Heavyspace! and this is open NC so come on in >.> <.<

The Observer Oddyssey jumped out of hyperspace, the blue glow lite up space as the white ship exited. It sensors immedialty began to pick up radiation and others vessels. Its sheilds and weapons remained dormant, until provoked. It messaged a hail through space and into the first contancs:

" Halt animals, what is your name, your origin, purpose...."

ooc *blink* saw nothing wrong with the other race

ooc: well.. i know things you and everyone dosnt

One of the Kewen Pod craft broke off from the formation turning very quickly before slowly moving towards the newcommer stopping about 6km from its bow the Pod craft didnt know what to say and its thoughts were echoed by the crew untill someone thought to say hi

"Greetings"

A Greal battleship, the Pain, appeared in the system. It detected other vessels nearby. A lot in fact. Probably from several different nations. The Pain halted its engines and increased its shields. It sent a message to the vessels. Sensors began scanning the ships as a message was sent out.

"This is the battleship Pain. We are from the Galactic Empire of Greal. Please state your intentions."

ooc: o.O dosnt anyone have galatic maners this i s Tanara controlled space and everyone is demanding what the other is doing >.> <.<
IC:

When another new ship appeared the third Pod Craft broke formation and moved till it was 4km from the Bow of the new ship before hailing it
" Greetings, we are the Kewveng`er or kewen for short we are in peace"

Noh' Alamo raised an eyebrow so to speak. This was a system long claimed by the Phoenix Empire of Tanara, and it really wasn't at all hospitiable for other nations starships to come in and act as these two nowcomers have.

The nearest system defense fortress would be here shortly for back up and that suited him just fine. However for the next minute or so he was the warShip on the spot and he'd handle this...

To The Greali Battle Ship Pain

Attention Greali Vessel. Greetings. This is the Rhukbat system of the Phoenix Empire of Tanara. I am the warShip Noh'Alamo. State your intentions and be aware that while no state of hostility exists between our nations at this time, that can always be changed.”

To the North Calaveras Observer Oddyssey...

Attention Observer Vessel. Greetings. This is the Rhukbat system of the Phoenix Empire of Tanara. I am the warShip Noh'Alamo. State your intentions and be aware that while no state of hostility exists between our nations at this time, that can always be changed.”

Noh' Alamo also fired off a FTL message to the nearest Tanaran Fleet and Naval HQ. The fleets DST would have them here in minutes from recieving his report. And between Alamo and the SDF's they'd blow those two interlopers to hell if they tried anything. The fleet was incase this was the beginning of some sort of poorly planned invasion.

Neither Greal nor North Calaveras had good relations with the Phoenix Empire of Tanara. In fact the Greali had recently killed an Xiscapian ambassador, a terrible breach of inter national ettiquite.

Alamo never lowered his shields and his targetting systems began ranging the two vessels. He did not trust them in the slightest....especially those that called others animals...

ooc: o.O dosnt anyone have galatic maners this i s Tanara controlled space and everyone is demanding what the other is doing >.> <.<
IC:

When another new ship appeared the third Pod Craft broke formation and moved till it was 4km from the Bow of the new ship before hailing it
" Greetings, we are the Kewveng`er or kewen for short we are in peace"

" Greetings, we are the Kewveng`er or kewen for short we are in peace"

The Pain's commander, Jacklin, immediately prepared a response for the Kewen ship. he was aware of the Tanarn ship nearby. They never had any good relations with them. Jacklin sent a message to the Kewen vessels.

"Greetings Kewen, this is Captain Jacklin of the Pain."

A message was sent to the Tanarans

"Greetings, we had no idea this was a Tanaran system. We were looking for small moons with Dixer crystals."

"Greetings, we had no idea this was a Tanaran system. We were looking for small moons with Dixer crystals."

Alamo didn't believe that for a second. Rhukbat was far and a way from any Greali held system, close to 600 million LY...but he'd be diplomatic for the moment.

The reply to the Pain

"If you will make formal application to the system manager, I am sure they can tell you if those elements exist within the system, or in nearby unclaimed systems. And the proper procedure to apply for mining rights within the Rhukbat system.”

His sensors showed him that the system defense fortresses were taking up flanking positions. Both of the newcommers the Greali and the Observer vessel would be under the SDF's guns.

Reply to Tanara Empire

This message was truthful at the Calaverians intentions.

" We are here to Observe worlds and collect speacies as sampels towards the bettering of science towards our people. Your warning has been noted."

The Oddyssey's shields and weapons came online, the huge energy signature could be picked up by other ships seeing as they were so close. She immediatly cloaked, and awaited further transmissions.

Alamo didn't believe that for a second. Rhukbat was far and a way from any Greali held system, close to 600 million LY...but he'd be diplomatic for the moment.

The reply to the Pain

"If you will make formal application to the system manager, I am sure they can tell you if those elements exist within the system, or in nearby unclaimed systems. And the proper procedure to apply for mining rights within the Rhukbat system.”

His sensors showed him that the system defense fortresses were taking up flanking positions. Both of the newcommers the Greali and the Observer vessel would be under the SDF's guns.

Actually the Pain did come for crystals. A scout ship reported crystals on the moons, but Jacklin guessed that the scout ship did not report the Tanarans. he quickly sent a response.

"Okay, thank you for this information."

There was another flash, a Crystal Ship appeared. It was unarmed, but it carried enough crystals to blast apart a capital ship. Th Crystal ship moved to supply the Pain with more crystals.

ooc: hey this is about meeeeee ; . ; *pouts*
IC:

The first pod speaking with the Tanaran Vessel sent a message to all three ships in system
"Greetings beings of this universe we require help, we set out from our home system to explore space but instead we came too far what we say best describes what happens you space is "lighter" then ours and we went tofar when our space is "hevier" then yours we woulld of gone the right distance please we do not know this area and we want to go home or continue our journey you may come with us if we do get home as right now we are not equiped to hand with these events"

"Greetings beings of this universe we require help, we set out from our home system to explore space but instead we came too far what we say best describes what happens you space is "lighter" then ours and we went tofar when our space is "hevier" then yours we woulld of gone the right distance please we do not know this area and we want to go home or continue our journey you may come with us if we do get home as right now we are not equiped to hand with these events

"I know that the Tanaran's would be willing to work with your navigators to help you get back home. Though I have never heard of space being lighter or denser. That is a very interesting concept though." He thought for a moment "Can you send me the data on your stellar primaries emission lines? That will allow me to locate your star"

Thelead podship sent data but not the requested data it sent the emissions of the Nebulae surrounding the Kewen Systems quite sure there were none like it within this universe yet...

"Hmmm, not what I asked for but still, very useful." Given that Alaqmo did not exactly live at lightspeed, as a C.S. would have the comparrisons took a bit longer. But enevtually, given the enormous scope of his knowledge he was able to provide a match.

He overlaid and projected this to the Kewen. "Here is where you fcame from" He highlighted their home and this is where you are now."

The kewen compared the chart to theirs comparing the very limited data
one of them smiled
"Thank you, This is our home" said a voice over the comms
"We thank you for your help"