NationStates Jolt Archive

Trilon Defense Inc. is now testing Cormorant, a stealthy autonomous spy jet that starts and ends its mission 150 feet under water. Launched from Ohio-class submarines, the four-ton aircraft is designed with folding wings that allow it to fit inside a Trident missile tube, which is about 48 feet long but just 7 feet wide. The stealthy drone quietly floats to the surface and goes about its business of putting the hurt on those who hate Imbrinium, and then when all the killing is done, slips back under the waves to be retrieved by a sneaky robotic underwater vehicle. Testing should be done by September, and full production should start by November. This project also brings new life for the aging Ohio-class subs which some were to be moth-balled later this year. The first of Imbrinium's Ohio-class converted subs should be in service later this year with the Royal imbrinium Navy.

The price for the complete system is 45 million

The price includes the cost to convert your launch tube to carry UF-12 Cormorant and for the plane itself.
http://i244.photobucket.com/albums/gg16/grimreaper061/Kingdom%20of%20Imbrinium%20NS/Navy/navyplane.jpg

OOC: Although I hated it when people did this to me, I finnaly understand Why.


No. Just no.

what's wrong?

1) You need more stats on this, preferably.
2) It's totally unoriginal, as you've stolen the name, concept, picture, et cetera. I can see you making your own, but please make it your own design, name, and all that other fine stuff. I can see not doing that, but still.
3) Your retrieval method isn't too nice. First of all, it should only be launched from the sub, not having any sort of water-propulsion method of it's own. To save on space, for retrieval by a submarine, it should parachute to the water for a rather safe landing.

stolen the concept? thats like stealing the concept for the tank. if you want more stats just ask. if your not interested in buying it buss off.

stolen the concept? thats like stealing the concept for the tank. if you want more stats just ask. if your not interested in buying it buss off.

No, what you did is paraphrased an article on it and used the same pic.

well all of my unmaned aircraft have the uf or ub in front to mean unmaned i have no idea if thats used in real life or not, i know the UAV's my unit used and uses dont have that prefix

besides your going to tell me everything that is bought and sold on this game is someone orginal idea. i know for a fact that isn't so

well all of my unmaned aircraft have the uf or ub in front to mean unmaned i have no idea if thats used in real life or not, i know the UAV's my unit used and uses dont have that prefix

besides your going to tell me everything that is bought and sold on this game is someone orginal idea. i know for a fact that isn't so

I'm not saying everything is. I'm saying that most people don't take something straight out of Real life and claim its original. Give credit where its due.

the only thing i used was the name cormorant and the ohio-class which i already claim i aready have. and UUV to recover the plane. but intended to drop that before it went into production the aircraft would more than likely not be recovered. i thought it was a great idea but wouldn't in real life ever make it out of test stage

Normally we would purchase some units for testing, but not enough information has been supplied. Look into some other storefronts, or prototypes to see how they have been presented.

Signed,
President John Smith

bump bump

Your new to this I'd wager.
You really should try a bit harder before entering into the world of Nation States
International Incidents Arms deals.
Most people want to see some very detailed threads.

What are it's dimensions?

How much does it weigh?

What is it made out of?

What is it's sensor suit like?

What kind of communications systems does it boast?

does it possess any counter measures?

How many times can it be used?

Is it repairable? How easy is it to repair ?

What is it's life expectancy ?

These are some of the questions which people will demand to know.
Especially if they use these things in the forum.

well i didn't mean to bump this one but i was bump old stuff before i let it fade this is old but i had more info on it

Your new to this I'd wager.
You really should try a bit harder before entering into the world of Nation States
International Incidents Arms deals.
Most people want to see some very detailed threads.

...

These are some of the questions which people will demand to know.
Especially if they use these things in the forum.

OOC: Before you say anything, you should probably try selling something that wasn't designed by Lockheed Martin et al.

You should post all the info you have on an item if you really want to spark that
OOOH! LOOK! in people's minds.
Only if it's an established object ( F-15's or something "stock" ) where people know
all they'd care to about it.
Some times if you're selling dozens of items you post the short list of their names and
costs. Then link in a longer thread to which you've posted all the gritty details on each
vehicle / ship / missile what ever.

like i said didnt mean to bump this one meant to let this one die out. learned lesson from first time i posted it.