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Bad Eyesight, Diplomacy and Ironic Prefixes (MT Intro)

Lynxhannesburg
20-04-2008, 21:30
OOC: My intro for this MT nation. Open to general comments, diplomatic responses and the like. Hope you enjoy.

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“Ladies and Gentlemen; the Guardian and Protector of the Free Land of Lynxhannesburg, Generalissimo Maximillian Steel!”

The crowd of roughly several hundred clapped loudly, with half-hearted cheers from several in the crowd as they gripped long coats around their necks against the dying heat of the day. Along either side of the boulevard that led to the Generalissimo’s Palace, keeping their beady eyes on the crowd’s movements, infantry from the unified military force of the Lynxhannesburg City State, the Free Land Surculus Nex Exercitus, stood at attention behind stern gazes and tightly-gripped machine guns. A vague gesture by several infantrymen caused the cheers to amplify considerably as members of the crowd decided that cause and effect was somewhat important where automatic weapons were involved. Pavlov may have made dogs drool with a bell, but an AK-47 would have had the animal leaping somersaults through a hoop.

Satisfied with the increase of noise, the Generalissimo of Lynxhannesburg strode purposefully into view from one side of the hastily-erected wooden platform. He paused for a moment before the podium with a practiced sneer that mixed the perfect amount of haughtiness and elitism, looking across the forced smiles of the crowd before him. Dressed head-to-toe in a uniform of black, his breast pocket carried enough medals to make Idi Amin drown in his own saliva. Behind him and adorning the podium, the flag of the Free Land of Lynxhannesburg was lit proudly by several high power spotlights. The white circle upon a red background held the silhouette of an Eagle diving, talons outstretched, towards a small mouse below it. The flag had been commissioned one hundred years before by Marcus Cane, the first Generalissimo of Lynxhannesburg, also known as the “gentlemen Generalissimo” due to his belief in good manners, such as allowing political opponents a final cigarette and a bathroom visit before being summarily executed. The symbolic animal of the Lynxhannesburg government bearing down on the weaker party; the original dictator of Lynxhannesburg had maintained a disturbing appreciation for truthful humour and symbolism.

As the cheering gradually died to an uncomfortable silence (the population of Lynxhannesburg had quickly realised that cheering for as long as possible was normally wise on state occasions), Generalissimo Steel cleared his throat and glanced down at his speech. He squinted; the all-powerful, strong-willed leader of the Free Land had a problem with his sight, but refused to accept the fact. Opticians had long given up telling him in the truth about the condition of his vision, as reports of anything less than perfection normally resulted in the messenger being more than metaphorically shot.

“My fellow citizens of the Free Land,” Steel declared after a moment of studying the paper. “Today is an austere…no, wait…” He stopped, squinted again at the paper. “…auspicious occasion. The great triumph of the Free Land has been the management of an internal…erm…interspecies…” The Generalissimo held the paper up to his eye-line, nose almost pressed against the parchment as he muttered possibilities to himself. There were a few embarrassed coughs and a general shuffling of feet. One soldier was dozing quietly against a wall.

“Independent!” Steel declared, waking the soldier from his sleep and causing several members of the crowd to jump. “An independent national economy, free from…extreme…existential…external! External infl…erm…”

The crowd collectively sighed, and several governmental officials settled into more comfortable positions in their seats at the back of the podium. Two hours later and eighty-five minutes over the original length planned for the speech, the general message as understood by the crowd was as follows; after a century of trying to maintain a self-sufficient economic system, the economic advisors of the Lynxhannesburg state had finally brought up the courage to tell the Generalissimo that his paranoid delusions regarding a completely independent economic system were not only economically infeasible, but the cause of quite a few unintended civilian deaths. The Free Land was broke and starving, and industry within the city-state was still mastering the marvels of using computerised production lines run by Sinclairs. Farming in the outlying areas of the city-state was not so much self-sufficient as self-managing, with government quotas being completely ignored and farmers simply trading between each-other. Nobody in the high levels of government knew about this because, quite frankly, nobody was brave enough to mention it.

And so a momentous decision had been taken, and a very reluctant Generalissimo Steel had authorised some of his more competent civil servants to begin organising diplomatic relations with other countries to bring basic necessities to the population of Lynxhannesburg. Initially, Steel had been completely against the idea, being a graduate of the school of paranoid nationalism and believing foreigners to be not only irritating but the actual devil. His mind had been eventually changed, mostly after someone pointed out that, irregardless of the malnourished population, food was getting scarce for the army, and when the army got hungry in Lynxhannesburg it had a tendency to voice its annoyance at the situation with bullets, bayonets and burning things.

And so the speech was broadcast internationally, the newly-formed Ministry for Dealing with Foreigners and Other Miscellaneous Situations utilising the somewhat dated communication relays of the city-state to send out the message.

The Free Land of Lynxhannesburg was not open for business, but had poked its head around the door to peek out at the world. God help the world.
Lynxhannesburg
21-04-2008, 13:41
The World Encyclopedia

A Brief History of the Free Land of Lynxhannesburg

Few countries have been as ignored and regarded as a nuisance by its neighbours, other nations and various international bodies as the Free Land of Lynxhannesburg. Once described as "the most unpleasant place you'd wish to take a shower", the Lynxhannesburg city-state is dirty, poor, and subject to frequent power shortages and rodent infestations.

The current incarnation of Lynxhannesburg, in keeping with the tradition of governments naming their countries in total contradiction to their actual governmental system, is the 'Free Land of Lynxhannesburg; a pseudo-totalitarian state ruled by an inept dictator who was bullied once too often at school. To call the regime a Fascist state would be lending far too much to any idea of ideology behind the rule of the government, and a closer comparison with a neighbourhood run by a somewhat incompetant street gang would be wiser.

The Free Land replaced the Republic of Lynxhannesburg a century earlier with the 'Glorious Revolution of National Salvation and Restoration to Former Imperial Glory of June 17th', when a politican named Marcus Cane conspired with various military officers to overthrow the democratic system and place themselves at the top of the food chain. Cane became the first Generalissimo of the Free Land, and ruled with an iron fist for the next fifty years. His rule ended during the 'Great Blimp Disaster of April 12th, 1958', when a Zeppelin of the Free Land military developed a puncture and crashed directly into the podium where the Generalissimo was watching the military parade. His rule was swiftly followed by Generalissimo David Ashcroft, an elderly man who tended to doze off at Cabinet meetings and left most affairs of state to his deputy, Maximillian Steel.

The rule of Generalissimo Ashcroft, the "Grandfather Generalissimo" known most fondly for his frequent naps and subsequent lack of population purges was replaced by Maximillian Steel, the current Head of State, Head of Government, Head of Armed Forces and Head of Everything Else in the Free Land. According to official records, Generalissimo Ashcroft "died peacefully in his sleep whilst accidently cutting his head off with a shaving razor." Fortunately, Generalissimo Steel "was walking past the room at the time and managed to enter the room in time to hear Ashcroft decree Steel the next leader of the country for life" before medical personnel arrived.

The rule of Generalissimo Steel has been somewhat unpleasant, with frequent paranoid police raids against suspected dissidents, potential dissidents and people that look at him funny. The economy has collapsed by most standards of measurement due to Steel's obsession with attempting to develop an independent, self-sufficient economy and the complete reluctance of government economists to have their heads nailed to a big rock by contradicting him.

Generalissimo Steel's rule is largely tolerated by his top military officers, who mostly keep Steel in power because he takes all the flack as Head of State whilst the Army can get on with the actual business of running their own affairs. The Free Land 'Surculus Nex Exercitus' (literally: 'Shooting Death Army') comprises both the military and police force of the country, and is more closely compared with a Mafia group than an organised military force, with various infantry and armoured divisions running their own illicit profit-making businesses in areas of territory surrounding their individual military bases, each organisational unit as much inclined to kill each-other as the population over turf wars. The Generals of the High Command tolerate this basic state of military anarchy due to having their own personal military units that act as a bodyguard force, and the tense agreement between themselves and their lower-ranks to gain a cut of the black market in exchange for not indulging their access to the Free Land's stock of chemical weapons.

The other major player in this loosely-defined 'organised' city-state is the Black Guard. The closest thing to stability in the Free Land, the Black Guard was set up by Generalissimo Cane as both a domestic and international intelligence network and his personal bodyguard service. With their own military force and better equipment than the main Army, the Black Guard simply decided to stop following the orders of the government when Generalissimo Cane passed away, and have largely maintained their position as an active agency within the state through a combination of selling their intelligence and military services to various factions and the fact that everyone else is petrified of them. The Black Guard use this situation to play off the government and the military against eachother and themselves, keeping the Free Land in a state of 'organised anarchy' that allows them to conduct their own business and actually keep an eye on what is happening in the rest of the world.

Welcome to the Free Land of Lynxhannesburg. If you're heading towards it, you're generally going in the wrong direction.
Lynxhannesburg
21-04-2008, 14:19
OOC: Bump
Lynxhannesburg
22-04-2008, 02:19
ooc: bump
Lynxhannesburg
22-04-2008, 11:50
OOC: Bump
Lyras
22-04-2008, 12:14
For some years, Lyran Intelligence had been seen - or not seen - as a rather non-descript entity. Quietly efficient, seldom messy, and generally not prone to spectacular success. Well run, moderate, apolitical.

As such, they, like most of the world, had barely had any idea that Lynxhannesburg existed.

That situation had just changed. The communication recieved by the Diplomatic Corps had been forwarded to Intelligence and, under the direction of Field Marshal von Helmgart, they were to prepare a brief, prior to the Diplomatic Corps composing a response.

Perhaps, along the way, someone might even bother to notify Warmarshal Krell.
Lynxhannesburg
23-04-2008, 11:41
OOC: Bump. Thanks for the interest. :)
Lyras
23-04-2008, 11:51
OOC: Is there anywhere you want to go with this? I'm happy to try to nudge you in the right direction.
Notquiteaplace
23-04-2008, 13:30
OOC: I like your style, just the right amount of humour in there. Again, I'm looking to get involved in things and my nation is pretty hefty militarily. But it'd take a large number of people begging us to help them, or direct threat to us or our allies (non existant, yay hiatus) to act. And of course developing relationships with other nations can't hurt either. Notquiteaplace HOWEVER is very money grubbing and will accept free trade agreements, however things will go sour as the way your country runs gradually comes to light, assuming you don't change further or make efforts to cover up. So... it's up to you where you go with this...


IC: Notquiteaplace's economy was as usual, growing, fast. With an income of $55000 per capita, and a generous welfare program, that somehow *didn't* remove incentive for achievers and industrial giants to do their thing, everyone felt rich. Because, they were. However today was no ordinary day. The stock market was up (more than usual) because there were rumours of a new nation to sell to. This was as close to overjoyed as notquiteaplace got aside from on it's handful of national holidays (which many people worked through, but at triple pay, which is why they were overjoyed).

Albert Narth had almost finished the telegram, when the new reached him. It amazed him how this all got out, but he figured he better finish it before the other nation found out.


Greetings Esteemed Generalissimo Steele,

Notquiteaplace has always sought new trading partners and through mutuallly benificial trade with many nations has developed stable international relations and a booming economy. It has come to light that your nation may require goods and services, and our nation has many firms interested in trading, or even setting up in your nation.

Obviously, we would require a little assurance that you would approve of these investments, and that there would not be many undue obstacles to creating them, before we act.

If you wish to know more about potential investors or even our nation, don't hesistate to ask.

Albert Narth



He added the last paragraph and hit send. Before realising he hadn't spellchecked it. Though judging by the already youtubed videos of the clumsy speech, this wouldn't be an issue.
The Macabees
23-04-2008, 14:43
'Interesting speech,' Daví Lokén tried to be amicable with the Lynxhannesburgi soldier escorting him, in a luxurious black sedan, to the Golden Throne's newest embassy building. The soldier didn't respond, but Daví didn't mind since he had other things on his mind. He was to occupy the new building before his staff arrived, which meant that he would have to do everything himself the first day - cook his own food, make his own bed, et cetera; he hadn't done such things since he left basic officer's training during his military service! At least the new embassy was a fairly pleasant location inside the city, flanked by beautiful historic buildings. The string-pullers in Fedala had specifically requested an embassy building in the historic center of the Lynxhannesburgi capital, as the Second Empire of the Golden Throne could have nothing else! The ambassador took a look at the soldier and asked, 'Do you know any good Macabee restaurants around here? I think I'm going to order out tonight.' The ambassador chuckled, but the soldier's face remained expressionless, 'Why are you so quiet? Wow, young enlisted servicemen are always so serious about their work. Whatever, I don't want to talk to you either.'

The rest of the short trip from the airport was done in relative silence, which allowed the ambassador to think about his own things. Soon enough, fortunately, the car pulled into the embassy's grounds, leaving the guard at the gate to close it. All security, for this one day, was to be private, until Macabee soldiers were allowed into the country the next day. The embassy was to be protected by a total of one hundred men, including an armored eight by eight wheeled vehicle for riot control. The empire's view on Lynxhannesburg, admittedly, was substantially biased and perhaps a bit unfair, but the country's policies had not lent themselves to forge a better image. The generalissimo's attempt at 'juche' had failed and now Lynxhannesburg found itself in a position where it would have to cater to larger, more powerful nations for the sake of economic and political recuperation. For all intents and purposes, the capital could not even extend its control over certain areas of the country, because these were more wealthy than the actual centralized government. Lynxhannesburg had fallen into a state of disrepair, and was more a confederacy of almost completely autonomous states than a unified nation.

But, this wasn't necessarilly bad, at least for the requirements of the empire. The empire, recently victorious from the War of Golden Succession [see: A Passion Play (http://forums.jolt.co.uk/showthread.php?t=439156)], was tired of always working behind the scenes in the international spectrum. The end of the war allowed the empire, especially led by the young and ambitious Fedor I, to seek international recognition. For this purpose, there was no better prey than Lynxhannesburg. To be fair, the definition of 'prey' is considerably less horrible than it sounds. The empire has and never will be the type of nation that sucks the blood out of 'lesser beings', but instead has always looked to enjoy a healthy 'vassal relationship' with 'client states', where the 'client state' has considerable freedom, but should always know where its place is at. Admittedly, no such relationships were ever established, but it was always been an imperial dream. Perhaps, just maybe, Lynxhannesburg could be the first! For this reason Daví Lokén had been sent to Lynxhannesburgi territory, and as soon as the next day the 'official talks' would begin.

The empire's intentions were not malign; the empire was a true believer in fair trade, as could be seen in the recent creation of the Fedala Accord (http://forums.jolt.co.uk/showthread.php?t=554863) - an alliance based on the creation of fair trade and the protection of mutual trade routes. But, the empire was neither stupid. It was looking for the best of both worlds - a political partner, but at the same one that was dependant on Fedala. The empire had found that allies that were independent could be quick in changing their priorities, and so the empire had found less fair methods of guaranteeing nation's allegiance with it. In fact, it should be remembered that the War of Golden Succession turned into a global war when Safehaven - a former imperial ally - turned against its northern neighbor and invaded the provence of Ruska. It should be said that the empire's politics are naturally confusing, and policies are often contradictory, but that's what made the empire so politically successful. Lynxhannesburg's greatest advantage was that its current political state made it easy for the empire to fashion it into a more successful unified nation, to the image of the empire. This wasn't to say that the empire was looking for a vassal; again, it was guaranteeing itself an economic and political partner.

The terms Daví Lokén would propose the following day were favorable, given that the empire was large enough to provide Lynxhannesburg what it needed and what it wanted. The empire could export food, armaments, finished goods, raw materials, et cetera. But, the most important thing it could export was money - the Macabee ambassador was there to present Lynxhannesburg an economic aid program which would promise the nation's population a healthy lifestyle and would promise the generalissimo power (the ability to take control of his nation, once again). In return, the empire wanted an ally and the promise of free trade when Lynxhannesburg was able to do this fairly. More importantly, the empire wanted to sell its name - Fedor wanted each and every Lynxhannesburgi citizen to know who he was and what empire he ruled. But, alas, all of this would have to be left for tomorrow...

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Communiqué to the Lynxhannesburgi Government

Greetings,

I would like to personally thank Lynxhannesburg for its quick establishment of a Macabee embassy in this beautiful country. I hope that Lynxhannesburgi representatives can meet with our ambassador, Daví Lokén, tomorrow evening for dinner. There he can discuss future relations between Lynxhannesburg and the Second Empire of the Golden Throne. I have a feeling that these discussions will be most proporous!

Again, I send my appreciations for everything your nation has done for us,

[signed]His Imperial Majesty Fedor I