NationStates Jolt Archive

Well, here it is folks. The third (and hopefully final ;p) thread in the 'Tommie's Tales' series, as I have newly named it. The plot behind this is is another 2 years after the defeat of the Monad, but I can't reveal much more than that until he is defeated IC'ly. Just the same as I cannot post a full character until it is.

Character Template:
Name/Alias: Cruoraduro (Orin)
Age: 19
Appearance(Picture if possible): There's a reason for the sudden change in appearance. (http://www.redmistcastle.com/v6/images/bigimages/bestiary/beast-lohranar-female.jpg)
Powers/Skills: Telekinesis , flight, transformation to and from her demon form (http://www.redmistcastle.com/v6/images/bigimages/bestiary/beast-lohranar-female.jpg), expert swordsman, hell fire, penance stare.
History: Orin lived a quiet life in the wilderness in Scotland, before the forest began to be cleared. When a group of lumberjacks came across her in a clearing, they assumed she was a protester and hurled abuse at her. She snapped, and the only thing that remained of the workers afterwards was an echoing scream.

Running from the law searching the wood, she stumbled upon a forgotten burial ground from the dark ages. In the largest tomb, she found a suit of black armor, an odd maroon hat and a unique sword. The sword was said to have been left by a warrior after being executed for treason. The sword wasn't in it's stand, as it evidently should be, rather propped up against the wall. Hearing the police nearing, she picked up the sword but left the armor and odd hat. She has to keep his feelings in perfect balance or risk unleashing the monster inside her. However, when she reaches a state of fear, rather than anger, she changes into something else entirely.

After saving the demon Carnage by spinning his hourglass to reverse the flow of the sands, and as such as killed and reaped by Death. However, the reaper he sent, Kain, was a friend of Orin's and gave her soul to Carnage, who revived her, and asked her to help him overthrow the demon lord Azazil. She did so and as a reward was granted the position of Carnage's right hand demon. She is not a full hellspawn but she gained many powers from Carnage when she was resurrected.

IC Plot:
The Monad was driven away.
Not killed. It is unkillable.
But it was exiled. To the Dark Space.
Things have happened since then.
People have switched sides, switched occupations, switched pulses. But the Monad still has all the hate for everything.
One man seeks to harness the power of the Monad. The man also ha a very good chance of doing so, and if he does, and the Monad finds a physical body, he will be unstoppable.
Once again, the signals show. In Heaven, in Earth, in Hell, the message echoes.
Oh for f**ks sake, not again!

Now, once again, people are being drawn. To good, to evil. In this war, there can be no neutrality.

Characters:
Orin (See Above)
Taldeer (http://forums.jolt.co.uk/showpost.php?p=13563177&postcount=2)
Chupakabra (http://forums.jolt.co.uk/showpost.php?p=13563177&postcount=3)
Julia (http://forums.jolt.co.uk/showpost.php?p=13509539&postcount=47)

Name/Alias: Taldeer
Age: unkown
Appearance(Picture if possible): Eldar Harlequin Solitaires (http://www.miniaturespace.net/images/Inquisitor/Harlequine/Harlequin%20Front%20Finished.jpg)
Powers/Skills: No real powers. Slightly phykik. Very athletic, agile and can jump very far and run very fast. She uses power weapons, a shurikan pistol and wears a mask to hide her face.
History: Taldeer is from the far off future (41st millenia) and has been transported back in time due to a brief flutuation in the webway. She is lost and isolated and is liable to lash out with out a reason to do otherwise.

She uses a shuriken pistol to kill her enimys from far away and is adept at useing her power sword to great effect due to her flexablity and athletic prowes. She also uses the extramly deadly weapon known as the Harlequin's Kiss. The Kiss appears to be a simple tube attached to the forearm, this is deceptive, as the Harlequin then drives this tube into his victim. Upon doing so, the tube unleashes a monofilament wire which enters the victim's body and injects a type of acid that boils the victims inards, causing them to violently explode, spraying any nearby people with thier boiling inards.

Character Template:
Name/Alias: Chupakabra [Chupa or Chupey
if the person in question knows him well enough]
Age:no-one is quite sure, he dosnt really age bit he has been around for 70 odd years.
Appearance(Picture if possible): unfortuneatly no pic so i will try and describe [he is my brain child after all:P] he has four legs, the front two are like claws while back two more like hooves. Two arms, one is daemon-ised so can transform [kinda like neros]. He has two horns on his head and all his senses are amped up. And finally a longish strong tail [like an Aliens but not black]. has wings with spikes on their tips just incase. Random parts of his body have daemon skin. On all fours he stands about 6 and a half feet. on his hide legs that is nearly doubled.

Powers/Skills:some daemon skills, flight [with wings], can summon smaller daemons (http://www.mattiassnygg.com/art/digitalpaintings/darkling4.jpg) [drains ALOT of energy], metal endo-skeleton makes him hard to knock down and keep him down, learns amazingly quickly.


Originaly an expirment to try and harness daemon powers for militery use. He eventually became disgusted at his own existence and tried to destory/kill himself. He was stoped and the lab he was kept in amtempted to 're-program' him. He broke lose and killed everyone and anyone in his way. He's been on the run since, learning anything he determs useful. He has become skilled in most forms of known combat and has a basic understanding of all known and even a fair few un-known forms.

Can I just play on as Julia

Of course. I was sorta hoping someone would say that anyway.

How come? You like her? :p

well after Mr Huglesnugglebugiekins raped him, its just not been teh same and he wants to explain to her

No, she's uuuuuuugggglllll-eeeee! :p

Nope, it's cos it adds a few extra things.
1) They have a rough idea of how to fight the Monad. (think karate kid-style training the others :D)
2) If more than two do, it will add extra depth. Especially if they meet Orin. (In my own special way of summing things up...: Julia: OMGWTFBBQ U HAX!!!!)

Ah. That explains it :rolleyes:

I'll probably stick with Seth and Nadoka too. You're talking about a war as the plot...so can Doomsday be going on in this thread?
(You know, seven scrolls, four Horsemen, beast, fighting, the fourty-four thousand, ect)

You can haz doomsday?
Hmmmm....
Yes, you can. In fact, Doomsday for everyone!

I take it we'll be ending the AUE thread soon? Like, in the next couple of posts?

Well, whenever the story line you have going with Nadoka finishes, we'll make our closing posts and hop the fence to this RP.

doomsday? know as a average consumer i dont understand, what does this product you offer do?

Nice cliff hangar. Nadoka asleep and Julia in total agony. :D

Well, I reckon that AUE is finished up with (only Dastardly Stench has to post an ender if he wants to) so I'll get started on the IC thread now.

http://forums.jolt.co.uk/showthread.php?p=13566414 Ic thread is up.

doomsday? know as a average consumer i dont understand, what does this product you offer do?
Oh, you know, the usual. Rivers of blood, a third of the stars fall from the sky, death, war, famine and pestalince sweep the land, a great beast arises from Hell, a war between demons and angels. Standered stuff. :p
Nice cliff hangar. Nadoka asleep and Julia in total agony.
Indeed. This is gonna be a great thread.

Could the Metal Man also continue the story?

Of course.

HOORAY! TMM is back! :)

Hey, would you mine posting links to the first two IC threads of this series? I'm interested in joining, but I don't want to ask without knowing what is going on and what I can add to the story. From appearance I guess this is a "god like rp" where everyone kicks ass to a point it isn't funny, but scary. I have a character like that, but I haven't had a chance develop her character. Yes, it a look alike of the girl from F.E.A.R. (I really need to stop playing that game) and they do share similar traits. My version of F.E.A.R. would also join along side her as well as some Mu Cephei soldiers (both of them are after her). See my factbook for more details (not much mind you).

So, if I learned more about the story could I join?

# 1 (http://forums.jolt.co.uk/showthread.php?t=549734)
# 2 (http://forums.jolt.co.uk/showthread.php?t=550937)
Basically, demon fighting in the first, not much of a story beyond that. Number two gets much more complex, with the impending End of Ze World, Horsemen of the Apocolypse, demons, angels, cyborg (singular), National Guard and everything in between.

# 1 (http://forums.jolt.co.uk/showthread.php?t=549734)
# 2 (http://forums.jolt.co.uk/showthread.php?t=550937)
Basically, demon fighting in the first, not much of a story beyond that. Number two gets much more complex, with the impending End of Ze World, Horsemen of the Apocolypse, demons, angels, cyborg (singular), National Guard and everything in between.

Thanks for the links. I only skimmed them, but I think I understand a little about the backstory. One more thing before I officially ask to join, SWAT is not that weak. Even against demons they don't just die like nothing and if they do they usually run away. lol

Void Templar, would you mind if I have a sub-plot in your rp? It won't interfere with your story, but would allow me to develop my characters for future rps. Here are the characters that would join, if I'm allowed to.

Mr. Goodmen, Jolly Joy, Michael James, Jacky Ripple, several Bobs, Mr.Unclean, Paxton, Alma, and a few of nameless soldiers who will most likely die before the day is done (see fackbook, section "Infantry" and "Characters" for details on characters).

I know it seems like a lot, but I think it will add depth to my post in the rp.

SNIP

Sounds good. Anything added to an RP only makes it better, in my opinion.

Alversia, could Orin be apprehended by the Mista?

Would they be able to get her?

Hmmm...
By get do you mean capture or kill?

Whichever you want

Capture then. I haven't had a chance to blow anything up with hellfire yet. :p

Hold on. Am I capturing Orin or Hellfire?

Orin.

Yep

Thought that Orin was going by the name of "Torment" these days...

Yep, but I didn't think it wise to reveal she was a demon in that company.

http://cache.kotaku.com/assets/resources/2006/10/Hellboy-thumb.jpg

Name/Alias: Carnage the blood-letter, his true name is unpronouncable to mere mortals
Age:Ageless as he is a deamon from hell
Appearance(Picture if possible): General apearance Imagin the tip of the lower feathers on the wings to be black and the figure to be in black, flowing cloathing. His eyes are yellow with pure black slits for pupils, he has long, talon like fingernails and loong black hair.(I really only choses that pic because of the wings).

This is Carnages true form:http://i256.photobucket.com/albums/h...getrueform.jpg.
His new true form (http://cache.kotaku.com/assets/resources/2006/10/Hellboy-thumb.jpg)

Powers/Skills: Can fly, move extramly fast and can get to most places if there is a fair bit of darkness. Very strong, telekinetic, telepathic, invulnerable to the attacks of normal weaponry and a limitless lifespan. Can change form but prefers the apearance above.
He is vulnerable to the attacks of silver and magicly charged weapons.
History:
Carnage is a fallen angel turned greater who participated in the Devils failed uprising against God and was outcast to hell along with Azaziel/ Saten/The devil where he was given his new title as Greater deamon of war and suffering.

He was belived to have been the Origional gate guadian of Heaven and was replaced by ST.Peter after his fall. He was closely linked with the greater deamon of temptation (Deciet) untill she was slain by a group of 'monster hunters' sent from the Vatican, for this reason he enjoys manipulating the world in religius wars as a sort of sick retribution.

He can take many forms but prefers his intimidating form described above as it is a sort of mockery of the angels of God.

He has twin longswords and in his human/Angel for he wears pure black armor with a flowing black cape.
He also has a a composite longbow (made of pure black metal, as are his arrows and swords) that is reinforced to withstand his strength.
He especialy despises Mista for they seek to stop his web of war between the underworld and the humans.

Since thwe AUE thread Carnage has killed Saten and taken his pwers (hence the new aperance) and is more inclined to mercy to friends becase of the Angel Juliea, possable emfatuation with her, we shall see.....