NationStates Jolt Archive


“Mi hija…” [open/MT/ATTN: TP & World]

Syba
10-02-2008, 07:33
[OOC: I’m gona let the story explain what this is about, but let me say that the conversation would have taken place solely in Spanish, but for the reason that I only know a little Spanish and I don’t feel like writing this twice, I will write it in English. However, some words and phrases are left in Spanish for stylistic purposes. If it bothers you that you do not know them go here: M-W (http://www.merriam-webster.com/) and use the Spanish-English dictionary.]

El Sábado, outside of La Plata, Argentina Territory, Syba

A daughter and her father are arguing, It has long been the daughter’s, Kaylee, dream of leading a communist revolt in Syba and getting rid of the emperor. She had recently come graduated and come home from college and has decided to truly try to lead the revolution. She has confronted her father with her leaving.

“Mi hija, no puedas conducis una revolución.” Said Adán, a leader of the village and Kaylee’s father.

“¿Por qué, papa, por qué?” said Kaylee, contemptuously.

“¡Porque tú estas tú! Tu nombre es ingés, estas una mujer, porque tú está mi hija, mucha razónes.” Yelled Adán in response.

“Papa, look around you, what do you see?” replied Kaylee.

“A village. Our village.” Said Adán not understanding.

“No, papa, you see people suffering. When is the last time you could drink water without boiling it? ¡Nunca!” retorted Kaylee.

“You think el comunismo would fix it? You think it would fix anything?” Questioned her father, trying to break her.

“Sí, mi padre, sí. Communism would fix everything.”

“My daughter, you have the strongest spirit I have ever seen. I have been telling you not to do this since the day you got the idea in your head all those years ago. You have wanted to do this since you first heard about communism in school. You are now independent. You are an individual, I will not stop you any more; I cannot stop you anymore. If this is what you truly wish to do with your life, then do it.”

“¡Gracias! Padre, ¡Gracias!” she turned to leave the room. As she stepped away, her father made one last comment:

“Buena salud y buena suerte”
Kaylee packed her bags and told everyone in the village that she was leaving and exactly what she planned to do. Few believed she actually could, but there were some who believed she could and that it would be a good thing for the nation. She left the next day.

Buenos Aries, one month later.

The time had come for revolution. The time had come for change. Now was the fall of the empire.

Kaylee Adrián had rallied support in the city over the last few weeks. The Sybe government had never had a very strong weapons control policy, and getting semi-automatic AK-47’s had been quite easy. Finally, the time had come, Saturday the 9th of February 2008, a day history would remember.

As the sun rose over the city, the sound of a bomb going off shattered the still sleeping city. Two more explosions ripped at the Emperor’s palace. The security scrambled frantically, shooting at air, sometimes at each other. The Communist rebels waited and watched. From the rooftop of a nearby skyscraper, a communist sniper sat with a KSVK 12.7 mm sniper rifle. His radio clicked on, and he got the order giving him permission to fire. The air filled with the cracks of the rifle. Guards began to fall.

Five minutes after the initial explosion, it was decided that enough security had been killed that it was time for the main assault. A RPG-7 ripped out from a nearby building. It blew open the front of the palace. Then, 200 communist rebels laid siege the palace with AK-47’s in hand. The staccato fire of assault rifles rang in everyone’s ears.

Kaylee, and several other rebels arrived in the emperor suite in the palace. Kaylee pulled out her .50 Caliber Desert Eagle pistol as two of her followers opened the door, and was about to pull the trigger with the pistol leveled at the emperor’s throne. Suddenly, there was no emperor to be shot.

“¡Cabrón!” Screamed Kaylee. She fired at the throne anyway to get her rage out. “Search the palace. Find that fat dictator pig!”

Her followers dispatched to carry out the orders; save for a few she kept close to her for security.

“It is time to announce out victory.” Said Kaylee to a comrade who she knew to be very good with electronics. “Get me a broadcast station to the nation and to the world.”

“Are you sure, Kaylee? We have not even gotten rid of the emperor yet.” Responded the comrade.

“True, but we have taken over what we need to. He is in hiding, he can no longer lead the people, if he coughs out loud, we’ll know about it and kill him. We lead this country now.” She said staunchly.

“Yes, Señorita.” Said the comrade.

*Video Broadcast*
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First appears the flag of the communist revolution in Syba. Then the anthem of Argentina plays. Then the image of the young leader, Kaylee, appears on screen.

*translated*

“People of Syba, I have come to inform you that you have been liberated. No longer are you subject to the dictatorial polices of the former pig emperor! Today, we are free. We are one nation, united by our hopes of a better future.” A dramatic pause.

“I am Kaylee Adrián. I have helped lead this liberation of our county. I am interim president of Syba until we can successfully hold elections. I and my comrades have lead this revolution to save the people of Syba from continuing down the dark path we were heading. Capitalism was helping the rich and shirking the poor. Only the emperor-dictator was wining under our old system of government. The time had come when millions were suffering, more and more people were dying of starvation or easily treatable disease. The government was oppressing us, politically, socially, and economically, and the time had come for vast change. As a concerned citizen of Syba, I made it my priority to find other concerned citizens and create change.

Today will go down in history as the day that Syba began turning around towards a better light. The day Syba began anew and began moving toward the right path for its people. For today is the day that the failing Empire of Syba falls, and the day that the Federation of Syba begins, and today is the day that we move toward equality in all matters, today is the day that we begin with a communist form of government, today is the day that everyone in Syba wins!” She said with intense enthusiasm.

“The changes we want to bring about are so large that they will take some time to implement, however, we will make the changes fast enough that the world will notice, and that everyone in Syba will begin to live better, more equal lives. I will continue to inform you all of the progress made by the government, but it is my strongest hope that the progress of this new government will be self evident in the lives of every Sybe in this nation.”

*End Video*

Kaylee knew that this would be no easy job, she was running a country now, and the lives of millions were in her hands. She now had the arduous task of reigning in the giant corporations that the emperor had let get so large. She realized that Syba was not ready for a full on front of state ownership of everything, however, she herself did not believe this was the perfectly correct way to go. Once the welfare had been handed out, she had plans to let very small and local free enterprises take hold. Kaylee was well educated; she had a bachelor’s degree in international politics and had seen the troubles of absolute communism and socialism. She would not let her administration fail in brining hope and help to her people, even if it meant letting some capitalism slide. She now realized why the stresses of politics aged men so quickly. She was just thinking of the tasks at hand, and she was stressing.

‘No,’ she thought to her self. ‘I must not let this overwhelm me. Take it one step at a time. The first acts to make are to tax the rich. That is the first thing I need to do. Once I have the money, then I can worry about what to do with it.’

It was odd, now the adrenalin of the shooting part of the revolution had worn off as had the adrenalin of speaking to the world, and now, there was an eerie silence to the palace. The elaborately decorated walls made the room feel regal, it was tricked in what Kaylee liked to called ‘Argentine blue’ and she liked the color a lot. That is why she had kept it in the new flag. ‘Flag,’ she thought, ‘the emperor’s flag is still flying in the plaza.’

“¡Agustín, José! Go take down the old flag from the plaza flag pole.” The two armed men scurried away.

Now only two guards remained. The leader of the new nation felt lonely, and some what lost. She did not know what to do next. It did cross her mind that perhaps her father had been right. Maybe she couldn’t lead a revolution. She quickly pushed that thought to the back of her mind. She found a piece of parchment and began scrolling down the first laws of the Federation of Syba. “Act One” she wrote. And she continued to make out the paper to work in a new tax system for the nation. At the end, she signed it into law. No one to enforce it yet, but in her mind it was law.

Seemingly out of no where, a General walked in the door. The two guard immediately drew their weapons and almost fired.

“No, no, Kaylee, or Ms. President, should I say. I am not here to harm you, please tell your men to lower their weapons.” Said the general smoothly, in a way, romantically. Kaylee made a motion and the guards lowered their weapons. “Good” he said. “In fact I have come to tell you that you can be assured the military’s full support in your affairs. I am General Alejandro Alejo, former Supreme Commander of the Empire’s armed forces. In other words the General of Generals and Admirals, every single person in the military is subordinate to me. Be glad that you have me on your side, you now have the assurance that the Sybe military will fight for you and enforce your laws.”

“I could not have asked for more.” Said Kaylee with a smile. The general was far too old to interest her, but if it would be advantageous for her to flirt with him to get him onboard with her administration, she would flirt with him.

“In that case, Ms. President, I must go inform the joint chiefs of my decision and issue the order to listen to you and not the emperor or his supposed successors. Goodbye and good day.” With that the Supreme Commander strode out of the chamber, his shoes clacking down the marble floors of the palace halls.

Agustín and José re-entered the room. Agustín held the folded flag of the emperor in his left hand. “We are finished.” Reported Agustín.

“I would hope so.” Said Kaylee smoothly and gently. “Come with me.” She interjected as she stood. She walked casually out of the throne room and towards the outside of the palace. She looked up at the plaza flag pole and saw the flag she had designed waving in the wind. The sun was just at the angle where it shown over the top of the skyscrapers around the city, it glared right at the flag but not so directly that it hurt her eyes. Agustín, who was standing to her left, had had a camera for he was a photo journalism student from a nearby university before Kaylee had recruited him, and he still loved to take pictures. As Kaylee stood there, in awe of her success and achievement, Agustín snapped a picture. He caught the perfect frame of Kaylee’s young and vibrant face illuminated by the sun and the flag filling most of the background. It was a shot that would circulate around the country for a long time to come.

Kaylee then left her attention toward the flag and moved back in to the palace. She returned to the throne room and pondered her next move in this elaborate game that was politics.
Nova Boozia
10-02-2008, 12:08
OOC: Note that in my MT capacity, I am always "Germany" or "the German Empire", never "Boozia".

Regarding foreign languages, what I usually do is have characters use a few italicised well-known phrases ("el communismo," "zu befehl") and proper knowns to remind everyone that an English speaker won't be able to readily undertsnad them, and then translate the rest to English.

IC: Office of Foreign Affairs, German Imperial Chancellory, Berlin

The Secretary of State for South-Central America stood up before the suits and uniforms arrayed before him and gave his tie a pat. A confident pat, which betrayed no nervousness, only a desire to look at his best. He's been practising that for years.

"Meine Dammen und Herren, you are all briefed on the events taking place in Syba?"

There was a bobbing of neatly combed hair and flat caps.

"These events are of interest to us owing to thirdly standing orders in Imperial policy: Firstly, that the Empire immediately act to protect the lives of German, Lithuanian, Czech and Polish citizens in any foreign country at a time of violent upheaval.

"Secondly, that we must act on behalf of our citizens to secure their capital investments in any country undergoing rapid socialist change."

"Thirdly, that we do our utmost to prevent the spread of communism in any part of the world, to prevent the re-emergence of an eastern communist to the freedom and security of Germany and her allies."

The suits and uniforms knew all this, of course, but the Secretary had learned to state his reasons for endorsing anything clearly and have his exact words written. It could come in useful later.

"It is usually our policy to restore a legitimate democratic government by any means. Our military backing of the elected president of Kansiov appears to have vindicated such policy to an extent, but circumstances in Syba are radically differant.

"For one thing, this revolution is actually appearing to gain the support of much of the population including the military. Given the dictatorial nature of the previous government, it would be highly unwise to act against what is it this time a genuine popular movement.

"For another, we can fight a war against Molotov throwing rioters in Russia easily. A war against an actual armed force in Argentina is unrealistic.

"Finally, ordinary Germans understood the Kansiov operation. Russian communism is a kind of national bogeyman. A battle against Argentine semi-communism is unlikely to make it through parliament.

"On these ground I'd like your approval for the procedures outlines in the memo I sent out earlier today."

Nod, nod, nod. Excellent.


Buenos Aires, the Ro de Plata waterfront

The deck of the SMS Hindenburg was a hive of activity as sailors dashed this way and that, making everything ready for a quick getaway. The destroyer, the biggest German vessel on the South Atlantic station, had arrived earlier in the day, declaring no hostile intent some people would consider that a lie. But they weren't planning to hurt anyone.

Attention, government of Syba. We are a hip of the Imperial German Navy. In attack upon us will be considered an act of war. We still have absolutely no intention to harm or abduct any of your citizens, damage their property, or interfere with your government.

We're here for what's ours. Please do not intervene. We'll be gone soon if you sit tight.

As soon as the message was sent, the ship's helicopter was off, making maximum speed for the German embassy.

"All German citizens, please make your way to the embassy. Repeat, all German citizens, please make your way to the embassy. If you are in any way obstructed, contact the German government immediately."

If never went wrong, it would be quick, benevolent demonstartion of power. If nothing went wrong...


To the Syba government

We congratulate you on you assumption of power. We must inform you that we always take draconian measures to protect our citizens in the event of a violent upheaval. The destroyer on the Plata has nothing against you.

We would like to begin talks immediately on the subject of official recognition. Here are our conditions for our declaration of recognition of your new government:

1)You guarantee a fair trail by an impartial court of all those involved in the previous government.

2)You guarantee the eventual re-payment of all German investments in Syba. They are not massive, but we can't let our citizens property be nationalised on our watch.

3)You guarantee to begin unrestricted democracy in six months. This is defined as suffrage for all above 25 at the higest, secret ballot, minimal party limits, seperation of powers, and equal constiuencies or proportional represntation.

In return, we offer full recognition of your government, a low-interest loan, unconditional humanitarian aide, and a guarantee to comply with any request to evacuate or expatriate Syba citizens in Germany.

Please note that we are acting on behalf of our allies Lithuania, Poland, and Bohemia as well as ourselves. Owing to our joint citizenship arrangement with these nations, this changes very little
Syba
10-02-2008, 18:50
OOC: I am called Syba in rp b/c I am actually Argentina and Chile combined, but the nation is more similar to Argentina. Syba defines the super state, however many people still see themselves as Argentine or Chilean. Needless to say there is some serious alternate history in my nation.

IC:
Kaylee’s appointed Sectary of State strode in the door; in his hands he carried several German Communiqués. He handed them to Kaylee.

She took the time to read them thoroughly. “So Deutschland either wants war or democracy, I say we give them democracy.”

“¡Oye! Sí.” Replied the Sectary.

“Yes indeed. The last thing we need now is a war that we would easily loose.” Responded Ms. President.



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Official Communication
From
The Government of the Federation of Syba
To: The German Government

On the orders you have given, the Sybe government will have no qualms with full compliance with them. I had envisioned for my nation a very similar scenario of laws and elections. As soon as the first taxes of the new Federal Republic’s citizens come in, I will begin repaying my nation’s debt to Germany.

On the note of German Naval Assets in Syba, you have my personal promise that they will not be disturbed. I will implement the same policy with German and all other foreign citizens.

Sincerely,
Kaylee Adrián
Interim President of Syba


Kaylee sent out the memo to the German Government. There wasn’t any particular need to issue the order to her own troops, why would they mess with some Germans running around outside. She did pass the word along to Admiral Hidalgo though, he commanded the Sybe navy in the bay. She wanted to make sure he did not go hailing German ships and demanding they leave Sybe waters and such. Not that he would to begin with, but better safe than at war.

Kaylee again lamented the size of her tasks; she had to ready a nation for elections in six months or less that had never had elections in its history. She had to form some kind of political parties. They were a foreign idea to her, a scholar in international politics; how would the rest of her nation react? She assumed she would know soon enough.

Kaylee realized that her government was currently broke. She needed money to make change. Taxes were not coming in fast enough. Then she thought of the fact that the emperor had to store his funds somewhere. She entered the emperor’s old personal office. She rifled through some files and soon enough found a password and a user name. She logged on to the nearby computer. She was soon able to access the old bank accounts and she transferred the emperor’s money to her personal account. Things could start now.

Kaylee started looking up the addresses of the most impoverished people in the country. Especially those in her home town, she then printed out several thousand welfare checks and had her assistants place them in envelopes. She had them loaded into a truck and taken down to the office of, ironically, a private package service, so that they could be mailed out to the people who needed them most. She knew this was only the first step in her government, but people always liked people who gave them money. It was a start.
The World Soviet Party
10-02-2008, 19:09
OOC: Sorry to interrupt, but your Spanish is... pitiful. No offense meant.

However, I, being from Argentina, would like to offer my services as a translator. Just TG (in English) me with the texts you'd like to have in Spanish and I'll do the rest.
Colstream
10-02-2008, 19:10
OFFICIAL COMMINCATION FROM THE REPUBLIC OF COLSTREAM

To: Kaylee Adrián
Interim President of Syba

The Colstream Government wishes to help your young government in trying to help your citizens. We are glad that the former government that was immoral and corrrupt has been removed. We hope to help in any way possible. Please ask if you need anything.

Sincerely,
James Parker
President of the Republic Of Colstream
Syba
11-02-2008, 01:42
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Official Communication
From
The Government of the Federation of Syba
To: THE REPUBLIC OF COLSTREAM

We are in most need of monetary aide. Any moneys donated would go to the cause of bettering the lives of all citizens of Syba.

Sincerely,
Kaylee Adrián
Interim President of Syba


ooc: TSWP, could you TG me the mistakes I made. I'm sure I made some, I didn't check behind myself very well, and like I said, I only know what I've been taught in Spanish I. Thanks for your offer.
Mokastana
11-02-2008, 05:35
OOC: tag for later
Colstream
11-02-2008, 15:54
OFFICIAL COMMINCATION FROM THE REPUBLIC OF COLSTREAM

To: Kaylee Adrián
Interim President of Syba

The Colstream Government is willing to give you 3 Million Colstream Pounds to fund your new government. We hope you use this money wisely.

Sincerely,
James Parker
President of the Republic Of Colstream
Mokastana
11-02-2008, 16:25
OOC: if you are chile and argentina do you mind if we share your northern border, Mokastana is a nation that spreads from Peru to California....

IC:

FROM: The People's Armed Republic of Mokastana
TO: the new Government of Syba

Congratulations on the success of your revolution. As a fellow Hispanic nation we would be more then willing to assist your people however we have just recovered from a massive civil war that devastated the region of Mejico. However we off you a hand of friendship from your neighbor to the north. We also invite you to our alliance of the Fergosian Union. (http://z15.invisionfree.com/The_Fegosian_Union), or perhaps a personal alliance between us two. Either way we would like to have further relations with you.

Thank you

President Adam Jackson,
Foreign Adviser Nicolas Villa
Nova Boozia
17-02-2008, 19:33
OOC: Forgive my long absence. I have been in a foreign land, far from the interwebs. Also, an apology for the rather poor quality of my previous post. I was leaving for the airport as I wrote it. Argentina stuff duly noted. Being the Kaiserreich, 2008, I also deal in alternate history.

IC: SMS Wuerttemburg was the biggest German vessel in the Atlantic. That had nothing to do with being anywhere near Argentina. In fact, it was in Bremen. But Admiral von Reutlitz was the highest authority for ships in that half of the globe, and the Hindenburg operation was important enough to reach him.

"Basically everything's gone according to plan. About half of our evacuees are planning to return to the country. In any case it would appear that the recent events were a genuine coup-de-etat. No street violence."

Reutlitz nodded, doing nothing to conceal his personal satisfaction. He had reckoned that to be the case all along, and had authorised the operation more to overawe the communists than out of any real fear that German citizens were put in danger by the revolution.

"Excellent. Sent those who want to go back off, take the rest to Wilhelmshaven. I'll get in touch with the FO and have somebody look in to sorting out their affects in South America. When the Hindenburg gets back, but it on North Sea station. Send the Winterfeldt to replace it on the South Atlantic."

"Immediately, admiral."


From the office of the German Imperial Chancellor

We thank the government of Syba for their spirit of co-operation and apologise for our forceful conduct in acting to ensure the safety of our citizens.

As our thanks and apology, we would like you to accept a wipe-out of debts owed directly to the German government. We are also endeavouring to purchase some of the private debt owed to citizens in order to wipe that out as well, and are laying the groundworks for a direct humanitarian operation in your country.

There is a single string attached: we require a public condemnation by your government of all aspects of the Stalinist legacy and of the communist movement in Kansiov.

This is a matter of extreme importance to our security and I beg you to accept,

Chancellor Friedrich Glogauer
Red Tide2
17-02-2008, 20:31
OFFICIAL STATEMENT FROM TSRT GOVERNMENT!
"The Totalitarian State officially condemns the communist hordes who have illegally seized control of the Nation of Sybe and refuses to recognise this rabble. We issue an ultimatum to these communists: restore the rightful government, or the State Guard will come for your heads..."
End Message

Totalitarian State of Red Tide

No sooner had the statement been released, then did the mobilization orders go out. A Dreadnought Battlegroup began to sortie and a Guards Field Army recieved orders to move to the closest port and load onto awaiting transport ships.

Red Tides interests, however, ran deeper then returning the current Emporer to power. It was also interested in expanding its influence. It was calculated the Syba would make a useful puppet regime to Red Tide, as a base for expanding its influence in South America.