NationStates Jolt Archive


The Gotlark Revolution (Communist Rebelion)

Greston
12-10-2007, 22:15
Robert Glankove awoke suddenly from the loud screaming of an alarm clock next to his ear. He hit the clock and sat up in his bed, his long dark brown hair hung below his eyes coverning his eye sight, but even if he could see without his hair in the way, he had such a blurred vision that he could see across the room which wasn't that far away. He sighed and leaned back onto his wet bed. It was wet because last night not only did he brother die out in some war but his girl friend who had been with him for the past four years dumped him so he sat there sulking until he fell asleep. But today was another day so he got dressed brushed his teeth and walked outside waiting for the bus until it came at 6:16.

When Robert was still at his locker the late bell rang giving Robert 40 seconds to get his paper, close his locker run halfway across the school sneak into english and sit down. Obviously this was impossible so he instead got lunch detention.

"Robert your late," the teacher pauses here then continues," once again. Third time this week sonny, why are you always late?"

"Because fucking assholes like you and that damn QB, what his name, oh yea Dick Harold is always on my back." was Roberts reply.

"Robert! You have insulted me, disrespected me, come late to my, and now make fun of one of my star students and my self now you can have ISS for the rest of the month and all of the next!"

"Dick is only one of your star students because you're screwing his mom!" Robert then sits down after handing the teacher his essay that was due yesterday. The teacher then looks at Robert goes ehem, crosses his arms, and starts tapping his foot. Robert got the message and left the classroom walking towards the detention room.

Later that night Mr. Biggens the teacher who had given Robert ISS sat at his desk with a small lamp on as he read all of the essay's. He finished one and then came to Roberts.

Robert Glankove
10/10/07
English; Story Essay
Gotlark High School

Two men walk into school one day,their black trench coats are stuffed and the men walk slowly as if something is slowing them down. They walk into the library and pull out the things weighing them down. They were automatic rifles. They fire upon the students and librarian until they don't have enough of their body still together to shoot. As they splatter the other bullets hit the books and they rip and fall to the ground. Screams of terror echo through the school because they heard the gun shots. The two assasins walk out the back entrance of the library and go over 11th grade english and unleash another volleyof bullets upon the people, the spoiled, rich, people. The jocks, the cheerleaders, the geeks, the morons, everyone died. they had to. The two men walk over to the office shooting any person they see running down the hall. Through the glass window to the office the emn were able to see the secrataries running away and the principal grabbing important documents. The principla seesthe men coming so he drops the papers then stands there. On of the men then fires the last of his rounds at the window and the principal. In short the principla dies. The two men plant bombs on each level in every corner as blow it up killing themselves and anyone still in it.

After the last sentence there were pencil marks and half written letters, as if Robert was going to write more but decided not to. Mr. Biggens goes to school the next day and shows that strory to the principal. Mr. Biggens walks over to his classroom and sets up for when the 2,600 students that make up Gotlark High where to show up.

Eventually they did show up. Amongst them was Robert Glankove, wearing a long black drench coat, which was stuffed to the rim with things nobody knew about. Robert went to his locker as he did every morning, but this morning some one was waiting there for him. Itwas Dick Harold Quarter Back for the Gotlark Bulldogs. When Dick saw Robert he grabbed him by the shoulders and shoved him into the lockers. Robert got cut from the lock parts of all the lockers he was shoved into. The surrounding students saw this occur so they started chanting "FIGHt, FIGHT" Dick followed their orders and punched Robert in the face, and then kneed him in the gut. As soon as his leg left Roberts stomach, Dick started a speed pucnh on him and did six uppercuts into his stomach before Robert pushed him back far enough away that Robert could pull out a flag with the communist symbol on it and ran behind Dick, and put in on his neck and pulled choking Dick. Dick punched Robert in the nuts so Robert let go. Dick backed up so he could run into Robert and push him into the lockers but as he did Robert pulled out a 9 mm pistol and shot two rounds of it into Dicks chest and stomach. A large burst of air and blood came out of Dick"s mouth as he fell to the ground.The crowd that was around them started running away so Robert pulled out of the back of the drench coat an AK-47 and shot a volley into the crowd then turned around and did it to the other part of the crowd. Robert then pointed both the 9 mm pistol and the AK-47 at the crowd and shot until both where out and until most of the people left. After they all left, there was 23 students lifeless upon the floor. Robert threw the two empty weapons on the floorr and pulled out two more pistols one 12 mm and one 15 mm. he travelled over to the english room where the last few students left where jumping out the window with Mr. Biggens helping them. Robert shot the hinges and then kicked the weakened door down now the remaining students where going as fast as they could to get out but one especially stupid, and fat student was trying to jump as was scared he could hurt himself he jumped down 2 feet. So Robert shot the kid hanging on the window, shot the other three remaining students then pointed his gun at Mr. Biggens. Mr. Biggens picked up anything near him and threw it at Robert most missed but one stapler hit Robert on the head and Robert fell back, but he caught his feet looked up and saw Mr. Biggens climbing out the window. He the shot a bullet which hit Mr. Biggens straight through the head and Mr. Biggens fell out side. Robert walked over to the office and shot aimlessly but as one bullet his a desk a loud cry of pain came out. Robert jumped over the desk and looked under. Principal Pal sat there in a scared position dead. Robert stood up and kicked the dead man in the face he planted a large peice of explosives upon the desk, then walked up to the rest os the levels and did the same. he was on the top floor when he heard police come into the school. Robert then ran onto the roof and took down the Grestonian flag, and put up the Communist flag. The police stationed outside saw him lower and raise the two flags so all of the police that weren't out side aimed at Robert. Robert quickly threw a communist flag and hung it on the school in the middle, and then pressed the button setting off the explosives, but he didn't do this until he spoke these words:

"My communist friends fight these swine! Rebel! This is the revolution, which will start on this day! Here ontop of Gotlark High School! Start the fight where the naziest army did! In Easen. Good bye."

He then blew up Gotlark and all of the things inside, the explosion ended up, as an added bonus, taking out half of the police stationed outside.
Greston
12-10-2007, 22:59
bump
Lord Sumguy
12-10-2007, 23:02
OOC: so, is this a character RP, or an internatonal affair?
Greal
12-10-2007, 23:03
OOC: Seems like more and more Communist rebellions are springing up everywhere.
Greston
12-10-2007, 23:27
OOC: This will start out a character RP and if it evolves enough it can turn into an international affair