The Crimm
08-10-2007, 17:54
Rayden Vorder, a Colonel in the newly merged Brotherhood Marines, stood watching as Marines in what was once designated Trooper armor. They took to the suits well, enjoying the simple HUD and the advantages of the full body covering, rather than the minimalistic armor they had once worn.
Vorder was about to turn around and continue his reports on the new Civil training regimens when he realized he wasn't alone in his office. The sounds in the room had subtly shifted, as if bouncing off another person. He slowly looked back over his shoulder and saw a man in a suit standing several feet away, on the other side of his desk. The Colonel frowned. "Who are you?"
The man, who appeared to be in his late 50's, tilted his head. "A guiding light for men who have the guts to take what is offered. I've looked over every Marine Colonel and General's record. You're the most promising I've seen."
Vorder turned fully and walked up to this... man. "Who are you?" he asked again, with more force. He wasn't about to be spoken to like a recruit.
The man tilted his head the other way. "Agent 283 of the Crimmond Black Staff. The most dangerous man on this base and one of the most dangerous in the nation, should I choose to do something destructive."
Impossible. The Black Staff was merely a dark chapter in history. Nothing was left of it, supposedly... "The Black Staff is dead. Delta killed it."
"Yes, yes he did. But he didn't kill me... And training doesn't go away. I'm here for a reason though, sunshine. You're the best of the best, in the upper echelon of officers. Omar's in charge right now, but one day he'll need a replacement. Someone with enough balls to do what's needed and enough sense to hold the Brotherhood together. You might just be that man, son." He looked at the awards on the wall. "Now I'm not telling you to go out and kill anyone or depose our esteemed leader, seeing as he's doing a fine job at the moment. I just want to make sure that an heir is groomed and ready, should the time come for a new ruler. Be it Omar stepping down or death or whatever else might happen."
Vorder eyed him carefully. "You speak of conspiracy."
He sighed. "Now why is it any time someone even breathes of a dictator not being there forever, it's a conspiracy? It's called planning ahead, kid. You could be the next Kane, shepherd of the Brotherhood. Or you can be a sheep all your life. Your choice. I'm just telling you that I would rather have you in charge than some of these Generals that Omar has under him." At that, 283 turns and walks out. "Good luck, kid..."
Vorder watched him leave and had a tail placed on the old agent. After three minutes, the tail reported that the Agent had simply vanished into a crowd of Civils somehow. The Civils claimed to not know where he had gone. Training never went away, it seemed. And experience brought it's own rewards. The fact that the Civils either didn't know or were denying knowing troubled him. They were top hunters. They should have tracked the man easy... that meant they did know and were denying it. Being that Delta and the Black Staff developed the Civils, they must have some sort of respect for the last remaining Agent. Respect that could be a tool or a danger.
283's words kept going around in Vorder's head for hours after the meeting. 'You could be the next Kane, shepherd of the Brotherhood. Or you can be a sheep all your life. Your choice.'
"My choice...."
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Agent 283
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Three months later.
General Vorder sat at the large table of assembled commanders. He had be promoted a month ago, due to the sudden resignation of his superior. Someone had exposed the General's extra-marital affairs with three women at the same time to the nation, making him an embarrassment to the Corps. Vorder was chosen to take his place, being the most senior Colonel under him. Vorder had never doubted that it was 283 that had exposed him. A little boost to get the new General going in the direction he wanted? Fine. Vorder wanted it as much as 283.
The meeting was to discuss training, deployments, leave schedules, rotation of commands and other things that were important, but very, very boring at times. At the head of the table sat a video screen, Omar Pace on it. Being in Avalon, overseeing the war, he had to conduct this meeting remotely. At the moment, he was listening to a report about Civils being deployed to Africa to combat increased attacks on cities by rebels. The attacks were starting to become an embarrassment, as several squads had been overpowered and taken hostage by militant groups. The attacks were also well planned to hurt the Brotherhood to the maximum degree at minimal risk to the rebels.
Vorder spoke up as another General finished the report. "My command has the largest amount of Civils at the moment. If authorized, I can deploy a brigade to Africa within a week and begin operations to keep the rebels out of the major cities." The other general scowled. He was trying to convince Omar to send his forces. Several others looked at Vorder as if he was insane.
Omar nodded slowly. "General Vorder... you have your authorization. Oversee the deployment yourself and give me a report in one week on the progress. Then a report a week later on your plans and progress at that point." Vorder nodded and stood, walking out quickly. What he had just done was dangerous... in the Brotherhood, power was everything. You take as much as you can... but step on the toes of anyone more powerful than you and you risk your career. And the general he had just stolen a major deployment from was very powerful. That would not matter much, if Vorder was successful at routing the African rebels, though. The sway that he would gain with the leader of the Brotherhood would null what the other man had, for a time. And with continued success... Omar was bound to take a liking to Vorder.
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General Omar Pace
Leader of the Brotherhood
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General Rayden Vorder
Vorder was about to turn around and continue his reports on the new Civil training regimens when he realized he wasn't alone in his office. The sounds in the room had subtly shifted, as if bouncing off another person. He slowly looked back over his shoulder and saw a man in a suit standing several feet away, on the other side of his desk. The Colonel frowned. "Who are you?"
The man, who appeared to be in his late 50's, tilted his head. "A guiding light for men who have the guts to take what is offered. I've looked over every Marine Colonel and General's record. You're the most promising I've seen."
Vorder turned fully and walked up to this... man. "Who are you?" he asked again, with more force. He wasn't about to be spoken to like a recruit.
The man tilted his head the other way. "Agent 283 of the Crimmond Black Staff. The most dangerous man on this base and one of the most dangerous in the nation, should I choose to do something destructive."
Impossible. The Black Staff was merely a dark chapter in history. Nothing was left of it, supposedly... "The Black Staff is dead. Delta killed it."
"Yes, yes he did. But he didn't kill me... And training doesn't go away. I'm here for a reason though, sunshine. You're the best of the best, in the upper echelon of officers. Omar's in charge right now, but one day he'll need a replacement. Someone with enough balls to do what's needed and enough sense to hold the Brotherhood together. You might just be that man, son." He looked at the awards on the wall. "Now I'm not telling you to go out and kill anyone or depose our esteemed leader, seeing as he's doing a fine job at the moment. I just want to make sure that an heir is groomed and ready, should the time come for a new ruler. Be it Omar stepping down or death or whatever else might happen."
Vorder eyed him carefully. "You speak of conspiracy."
He sighed. "Now why is it any time someone even breathes of a dictator not being there forever, it's a conspiracy? It's called planning ahead, kid. You could be the next Kane, shepherd of the Brotherhood. Or you can be a sheep all your life. Your choice. I'm just telling you that I would rather have you in charge than some of these Generals that Omar has under him." At that, 283 turns and walks out. "Good luck, kid..."
Vorder watched him leave and had a tail placed on the old agent. After three minutes, the tail reported that the Agent had simply vanished into a crowd of Civils somehow. The Civils claimed to not know where he had gone. Training never went away, it seemed. And experience brought it's own rewards. The fact that the Civils either didn't know or were denying knowing troubled him. They were top hunters. They should have tracked the man easy... that meant they did know and were denying it. Being that Delta and the Black Staff developed the Civils, they must have some sort of respect for the last remaining Agent. Respect that could be a tool or a danger.
283's words kept going around in Vorder's head for hours after the meeting. 'You could be the next Kane, shepherd of the Brotherhood. Or you can be a sheep all your life. Your choice.'
"My choice...."
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Agent 283
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Three months later.
General Vorder sat at the large table of assembled commanders. He had be promoted a month ago, due to the sudden resignation of his superior. Someone had exposed the General's extra-marital affairs with three women at the same time to the nation, making him an embarrassment to the Corps. Vorder was chosen to take his place, being the most senior Colonel under him. Vorder had never doubted that it was 283 that had exposed him. A little boost to get the new General going in the direction he wanted? Fine. Vorder wanted it as much as 283.
The meeting was to discuss training, deployments, leave schedules, rotation of commands and other things that were important, but very, very boring at times. At the head of the table sat a video screen, Omar Pace on it. Being in Avalon, overseeing the war, he had to conduct this meeting remotely. At the moment, he was listening to a report about Civils being deployed to Africa to combat increased attacks on cities by rebels. The attacks were starting to become an embarrassment, as several squads had been overpowered and taken hostage by militant groups. The attacks were also well planned to hurt the Brotherhood to the maximum degree at minimal risk to the rebels.
Vorder spoke up as another General finished the report. "My command has the largest amount of Civils at the moment. If authorized, I can deploy a brigade to Africa within a week and begin operations to keep the rebels out of the major cities." The other general scowled. He was trying to convince Omar to send his forces. Several others looked at Vorder as if he was insane.
Omar nodded slowly. "General Vorder... you have your authorization. Oversee the deployment yourself and give me a report in one week on the progress. Then a report a week later on your plans and progress at that point." Vorder nodded and stood, walking out quickly. What he had just done was dangerous... in the Brotherhood, power was everything. You take as much as you can... but step on the toes of anyone more powerful than you and you risk your career. And the general he had just stolen a major deployment from was very powerful. That would not matter much, if Vorder was successful at routing the African rebels, though. The sway that he would gain with the leader of the Brotherhood would null what the other man had, for a time. And with continued success... Omar was bound to take a liking to Vorder.
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General Omar Pace
Leader of the Brotherhood
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General Rayden Vorder