NationStates Jolt Archive

In an attempt to become the Regional power, the Atheist people have launched a full out war on the waffle warriors! The first battle eneded in a defeat for the waffle warriors, as they were taken by surprise, and the support the waffle warriros led to the Zeharen civil war has evened the odds out. (Small war, plz dont' send like 50 million people)

Waffle warriors forces:
200 Tanks(mounted flamethrowers machine guns)
4 squads of b-52 bombers
200 infantry battalions(RPG-7, m4a1, wenchester(shot gun), m60(machine gun))

Atheists People forces:
190 tanks(mounted machine guns)
3 squads of b-52 bombers
1 squad of f-15 eagles
180 infantry battalions(RPG-7, ak-47, brend(beast british machine gun)

I SEND LIKE 50 MILLION PEOPLE TO ATTACK U BOTH HAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA!!!!!! JK :fluffle:

You two, please read the stickies at the top of the forum before posting: it might help...
(post 1 rating - 6.5/10)
(post 2 rating - 1/10)

Posts one and two and a rateing of 1 to 10: -10 (and it is a Minus)

um...i read them and i honestly do not see what i did wrong...so plz instead of just insulting it y don't u help out and tell me wat i did wrong? hows that sound?

Not that I'm trying to be mean, but I will list what I believe is wrong: Grammar, Godmodding (you can't state your opponent's forces), and maybe you could have put it in a different format, like a letter to the world, or a newspaper clipping. This is your post. Though, for a new member it's pretty good, I have to admit.

TW's post, A. No SMILIES! B. Grammar problems. C. Just plain insane.

That is a major problem.

You can if the forces are RPed by you... >.> Atheists isn't a nation, I don't think...<.<

oh omg i am so sorry! i am atheist poeple. i am that nation. i have two. i figured it only said u weren't allowed to have 2 un nations, so i decided to make another u no give it an extra element....yea sry grammer well...i got no excuse for that one lol. um can we liek delete all these posts?