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One Dirty Deal Too Many (a story)

The Crystal Mountains
11-07-2007, 01:03
One Dirty Deal Too Many


Chapter 1

Setting:Highland, a resort city of 1 and 1/2 million people in the sea-side highlands of the Commonwealth.


Erin Hughes, Detective of the Criminal Investigations Division, Commonwealth Militia arrived at the crime scene a little after 1 a.m.

A number of Militia HMMVW's and a crime scene unit [CSU] van were parked on the perimeter of the property. The Militia's Patrol Division had cordoned off the upscale house in the fashionable Seaview Ridge neighborhood on Skyline Drive and curious neighbors had gathered in their yards but were keeping their distance.

Hughes parked his unmarked car behind the CSU van, put his badge on his left front coat pocket and approached the scene. A young patrol officer challenged him at the tape but saw his badge and waved him through.

Hughes asked the rookie, "Who is the senior officer on scene?"

"That would be Sergent Sullivan sir. I think he's making the rounds with the neighbors. If you want, I'll get him on the radio."

"Please."

The rookie keyed the mike on his radio, "This is One-Lima-nineteen to Supervisor: see the CID man at the crime scene, over."

There was a brief pause and a gruff voice crackled over the radio, "Roger that."

Hughes said, "Thanks kid." and gave the rookie a pat on the shoulder. He thought to himself, Either the rookies are getting younger or I'm getting older. In any case, they shouldn't have freckles.

While waiting for the Patrol Supervisor to arrive, Hughes did a walk around of the front yard. It was immaculately landscaped with layered rows of flowering hedges around the house and two small wind swept oak trees on either side of a brick walk up to the front door. There was a small rose garden around the front door split into symmetrical half's by the walk; neatly lined with pine bark mulch without a weed in sight.

Hughes looked up and down the front of the brick house. There was a circular driveway with a late model BMW parked in plain sight. The two garage doors were closed. There was a basketball goal on the side of the garage and a nice mountain bike propped against the house.

He was about to go around to the back of the house when the Supervisor arrived slightly out of breath, "Detective?"

Hughes turned around to see Sergent Sullivan waddling up the driveway. "Sully! It's good to see you. What have we got here?"

Sullivan's face was grave. The fifty-something year old patrol cop was visibly shaken. He walked up to Hughes, shook his hand and said quietly, "Erin laddie. I'm relived that the CID sent me a Detective I can work with. We've got a bad one here boy-o. One of the worst I've ever seen."

Hughes said, "Well- let us start at the beginning, shall we?."

Sullivan said, "Alright. I don't mind telling you this one shook me up. We got the call about 12:20. The house belongs to Minister Colin Brennan of the Ministry of Tourism and his family. One of the Brennan's kids failed to answer the phone when his best friend called. The kid knew they were home and came over. There was no answer at the front door so he went around back. The back door was open and he could see two members of the Brennan family down and bloody. He ran home and called the Militia. We got here a little after 12:30 and cordoned off the area. We haven't been inside. That's the CSU's job and we don't want to get in their way. I talked to a few neighbors. Nobody heard any shots."

"Good job Sully. You followed protocol to the letter." Hughes said.

Sullivan sighed and said, "One more thing Erin."

"What's that Sully?"

"Get this kid killin' bastard."

Hughes just nodded and walked up to the back door. It was standing open with crime scene tape crossing the portal. He reached in his pockets and pulled out a pair of latex gloves and plastic covers for his shoes. Once he had those in place he pulled out a mag light and a digital camera.

He immediately noticed that there were large muddy footprints on the redwood poolside patio that lead up to the back door. He took pictures of the footprints and noted that there was no mud to speak of in the back yard.

Inside the back door was a living room. The television was still on and two bodies were on the floor covered by sheets. One by the door as if one of the victims had opened it and been shot. The other was beside the sofa.

One of the members of the CSU team appeared at the top of the stairs. "Detective Hughes?"

Hughes looked up and said, "Yeah. What have we got here?"

The CSU man came down stairs and said, "Please understand that this is all very preliminary but this is how I read it. Time of death for all the victims occurred between 11:15 and 11:45. Follow me though this and see if you concur. Two of the Brennan kids are watching late-night TV and there is a knock on the back door. They are expecting the Tommy kid from next door. The girl Mandy 15 answers the door and is popped where she stood. Youngest boy Travis, 13, is on the sofa probably half asleep, is surprised and tries to run and gets two in the back. The oldest boy Michael, 16, hears something odd downstairs and looks down from the landing and gets two in the chest. Perp goes upstairs and caps Minister Brennen and his wife Sherry in their sleep."

"The gun was a silenced 9mm and fired at least eleven shots. The perp either bagged or picked up his brass. If I were to guess, I would think maybe an H&K or MP5- something like that. Big mag, easily silenced."

Hughes asked, "Is anything missing?"

"No- money is in the Minister's wallet. Valuable electronics are sitting around in plain sight. There is one thing."

"What is that?"

"The Minister's ID card is missing from his wallet."

Hughes snorted. "Are you thinking what I'm thinking? This looks like Special Branch stuff to me."

The CSU Supervisor nodded his head. "This looks like a professional hit and a very ugly one at that. Sammy O'Shea's mob or any mob that we know of operating in the islands have ever gone after a whole family."

Hughes handed the CSU supervisor his card. "Thanks for the walk through. Do a full forensic work up on the house and forward your report to me at CID. I doubt you'll find much though. Easy money the shooter was a Pro."

Hughes exited the Brennan House out the back door. He followed the muddy footprints back down the hill. The yard ended with a sharp drop off of about 40 feet of steep rock to a service road below. On the shoulders of the road: a still, muddy creek.

He walked back up the hill and took his cell phone out of his pocket. He pressed the speedial for the Militia's Special Branch office downtown.

The Special Branch switchboard rang only once when a crisp, professional voice answered, "Special Branch, Duty Officer Bell, how may I help you?"

"This is Detective Hughes of CID. I responded to a multiple homicide tonight at the home of Minister Colin Brennan of Tourism. His entire family was killed in what looks like a professional hit. The Ministers ID is missing."

Bell replied, "Thanks for reporting this Detective Hughes. Would you mind coming in to Headquarters? We need to get a report on anything that involves Ministry Officials."

Hughes groaned inwardly but said, "Of course. Everything I've got is very preliminary but involving Special Branch is protocol in a case like this. I'll be there in about thirty minutes."

He had a word with the Patrol Supervisor and the Crime Scene Unit who would be working the crime scene until well into the next day before he left the scene. Thankfully the press hadn't gotten word of the Brennan murders yet so it would be noon at the earliest before the press got hold of it.

Detective Hughes got in his car and headed downtown to have a dreaded discussion with Special Branch which he knew meant that he was obligated to tell everything while they were obligated to share nothing.
The Crystal Mountains
11-07-2007, 22:05
One Dirty Deal too Many

Chapter 2


Detective Hughes drove down Skyline Drive and took the Commonwealth Freeway downtown. Ordinarily the rolling landscape of the city of Highland was a pleasure to drive but he was alone with dark thoughts of a slaughtered family.

Hughes wished that his partner Vic was along for this ride. Vic's daughter Joy just graduated from Uni at Port Charles so he had taken the family on a month long holiday to the beautiful island Paradise of Toulavan 300 kilometers to the South.

He was just taking the downtown exit when his police radio went crazy:

"This is Sierra-Bravo two-one: shots fired, shots fired, officers down 1 Government Plaza- I'm code 7 and I need backup and med-evac immediately."

"Highland control to all available units: respond to code 7 at 1 Government Plaza. We have shots fired, officers down and unknown number of suspects."

"This is Air-3 responding to code 7- I'm 2 minutes out."

"This is 1-Lima 2-2 responding to Code 7."

Hughes picked up his mike, "This is Charlie-India zero-seven responding to Code 7. I am on Commonwealth Drive and 20 seconds out. Switching to tactical frequency."

He punched the accelerator and flipped on his blue light. He left the siren off- no point in warning the bad guys that the calvary was here. His cruiser raced ahead on the empty streets.

He turned into 1 Government Plaza as he was slipping his vest on. He pulled into visitor parking while jamming his portable radio into his belt and flipped it on. He turned off all the lights on his cruiser, popped the trunk and ran around to the boot of his cruiser.

Hughes heard gunfire coming from somewhere inside the neat complex of buildings: the familiar pop-pop-pop of 9 millimeter, the booming of shotguns and an unfamiliar rattle that he knew had to be a fully automatic weapon.

He had a standard issue Browning Hi-Power 9mm in his shoulder holster and a Walthers PPK for a backup piece. Whatever was going on tonight required some serious firepower.

He keyed in his personal id code into the gun lock and released a FN-FAL assault rifle. Hughes grabbed three thirty round clips, jammed one into the rifle and pocketed the other two clips. He primed his gun, closed the trunk and began moving.

When he got to a position where there was some cover he pulled out his radio and said, "This is Charlie-India zero-seven, I am onsite. Where do I need to be, over?"

"This is Seirra-Bravo two-two. We have the shooters bottled up in the courtyard between the Commerce and Tourism Ministry Buildings. If you approach behind the Science and Technology Building, we'll have them surrounded."

Hughes replied, "Roger that. Keep them busy." Without thinking he broke off into a sprint passing the Ministry of Industry. Sierra-Bravo. Special Branch. Some idiots were taking on Special Branch on their home turf and were apparently fighting them to a standstill.

He sprinted along quietly behind the Science and Technology Ministry. When he got to the corner, he keyed the mike and said quietly: "In position."

Carefully, he looked around the corner of the building shielded by a carefully pruned bush. The shooters were using the concrete landscaping of the quad between building for cover. He could see four of the shooters from his position. As they were exchanging automatic weapons fire with several Special Branch officers on the opposite side of the quad, switched the FN-FAL to fire burst of three rounds each.

Hughes picked the shooter with the heaviest weapon, drew a bead on him and let fly a burst of three 7.62mm rounds which practically tore the first shooter in half.

The FN-FAL's report was loud and authoritative and told the shooters that they had someone behind them but the flash-suppressor and cover gave them no obvious target.

Two shooters turned to engage a target that they couldn't see. One sprayed the general area with 9mm fire from an MP-5. The other pumped off a couple of shotgun rounds in the Detective's general area.

Calmly Hughes took aim at the shooter with the MP5 and squeezed off another burst of fire which shredded the shooters chest. The man with the shotgun seemed to have finally found his location when Hughes loosed another burst which took the third shooter head off.

The last shooter, seeing that his rear was compromised, tried to find new cover but was taken down by fire from the Special Branch officers on the opposite side of the quad.

<to be continued>
The Crystal Mountains
12-07-2007, 18:45
Hughes keyed his mike, "Sierra Bravo two-two- this is Charlie-India zero-seven. I don't see any more shooters from my side. Are we clear, over?"

"Charlie India zero seven: hold position. A lot of help is on the way. Let's wait until we've got some backup before we advance on the quad. Over."

"Roger that Sierra Bravo." Hughes lay on his belly looking down the iron-sites of this FN-FAL scanning the quad for more shooters using the bush and corner of the building for cover. From his vantage point, it looked like it was over but there were too many places in the quad for people to hide.

His radio announced: "Air 3 arriving. I'm going to illuminate the quad with a spotlight."

The sleek quiet new police helicopter announced its presence with a brilliant spotlight. There was no further movement.

"This is Sierra Bravo two-two: be advised that a Special Branch tactical unit has arrived and is moving in."

Hughes couldn't see any of them but he wasn't surprised. You aren't supposed to see those guys coming.

A new voice came over the radio, "This is 1-Lima 2-2 arriving. I am in front of the Commerce Building. Request instructions, over."

"This is Sierra Bravo two-two in tactical command. Go between the Commerce and Science and Tech Building and join Charlie-India zero seven. Make sure nobody gets out that way over."

Hughes keyed his mike, "This is Charlie-India zero sever: I'm on the corner of the Commerce Building with an Assault Rifle in plain clothes. Don't shoot me."

"Roger that Charlie-India zero seven."

Things went very quite for what seemed like forever until Hughes heard two patrol officer approaching from behind. He flashed on his mag-lite so the two officers would see him and then raised his hand to indicate approach slowly and quietly.

The two patrol officers were armed with shotguns and had on their vests. They took a que from Hughes prone position and crawled up beside him. He recognized the senior of the two patrol officer.

He scanned the carnage on the quad and said softly, "Jesus Hughes, what is this?"

Hughes replied, "Not sure Collins but I think it has something to do with a case I caught earlier tonight."

Collins nodded. He keyed his mike and said, "1-Lima 2-2 in position."

Sierra Bravo two-two's voice came over the radio, "Roger that 1-Lima 2-2. Sierra Bravo Tactical teams Alpha and Charlie Go-Go. Teams Bravo, Delta and Echo sweep the underground parking garage. Team Foxtrot: use the dogs and sweep the Tourism building."

The Special Branch tactical teams swept over the quad in seconds. Hughes could see the hand signals for clear before the team leaders put the call out over the radio: "the Quad is clear."

Hughes and the two patrol officers stood up- a little stunned at the destruction left by the pitched battle that took place outside the tourism building.

Hughes said, "Collins: get the crime scene tape out and make a perimeter around these four buildings. That'll be our outside perimeter."

Collins nodded and he and his partner headed off to their car.

Hughes advanced down to the quad with his FN-FAL slung over his shoulder. He walked down to the courtyard where the three shooters that he had just shot were laying motionless.

He walked over to the mutt that had the MP-5 and took careful notice of his muddy boots. He slipped on a pair of latex gloves and went though the dead man's pockets. Wallet, keys, smokes, lighter and one ID card for former Tourism Minister Colin Brennan.

Well Sully, I got the bastard but I've still got no idea what this is about.