NationStates Jolt Archive

OOC: Guess who?

IC: They thought they had destroyed them all.

They thought They were gone.

They were dead wrong.........

The Invaders lost in fact, lost in knowing. The Hatarian Empire may have been gone, but it's people were still around.

among them were The Nomads of The Hatarian Steppes. Escapeing over The Eastern Boarder, the Tribes were now not in Hataria anymore, but in Magic Sorcery and other Near by Nations. The Ryou Tribe, a Sea fareing Tribe was now heading for Kurona.

These Tribes were known as The Steppe Empire. more of a Confederation then a Empire.

They had one hope of one that, takeing Hataria back and Wipeing out The Invaders for all time, and bringing back The Species Home Lupis back to power in The world.

OOC: Just a heads up, Hat, but the mods have banned any threads having to do with your old nation, AFAIK.

Bump

Lol, hi.

OOC: Hello, Hataria. A few things - you misspelt "border", "escaping", "sea-faring", and "wiping." You miscapitalized "they", "tribe", "the invaders", "confederation", "empire,", "the", and "more". The phrase "more of a confederation than an empire" is not a sentence, but a fragment. If you could correct these, I would appreciate it, and might reconsider nuking your pathetic, nomadic, hunter-gatherer society.

OOC: Hello, Hataria. A few things - you misspelt "border", "escaping", "sea-faring", and "wiping." You miscapitalized "they", "tribe", "the invaders", "confederation", "empire,", "the", and "more". The phrase "more of a confederation than an empire" is not a sentence, but a fragment. If you could correct these, I would appreciate it, and might reconsider nuking your pathetic, nomadic, hunter-gatherer society.

OOC: Just a note, I am in Magic Sorcery, since you took over Hataria.

OOC: Meh. Did you even bother to ask Magic Sorcery if you could RP a civilization based in his nation? Knowing you and your godmodish tendencies, probably not. Regardless, I just want your horrid grammar fixed.

The Nomads were powerful, even though there were five million of them. Their Army had 10,000 Warriors on Foot of all classes, 29,000 Horsemen, 2,000 Moble Artillery, 9,000 War Mastodons, 1,000 War Allosaurus, 2,000 War Mammoths and 6,000 War Hatariphants. All Nomads were trained to fight when They learned to hold a sword.

The Weapons of these Steppe Warriors ranged from spears and swords to more modern weapons like machine guns and RPG launchers.

They were under the leadership of the last Nakagishima, Basi, over the 25 years (OOC: yes, this is 25 years after The Downfall of Hataria.) she had grown into a young woman, still a virgin, and a powerful Warrior.

she was going to restart the Hatarian Empire, even if she would die to make it happen.

OOC: Sorry, hate to butt in, but a few more errors caught my attention. You miscapitalized "nomad", "army", "warriors", "foot", "horsemen", "moble (sp)", "artillery", "war mastodons", "war allosaurus", "war hatariphants", "war mammoths", "they", "weapons", "steppe warriors", "the", "downfall", "warrior" and "she". You also misspelt "mobile".

The Invaders lost in fact, lost in knowing. The Hatarian Empire may have been gone, but it's people were still around..

No, they're not. The Hatarian population died with the nation. Your old nation is gone. End of story.

British Londinium, if you start with the dogpiling from the word 'go', you'll be joining Hataria in ex-nation land. Clear?

OOC: Hate to butt in, but BL may be a sarcastic ass, but Hataria/TSE: You are starting with a blank slate. I encourage you to use spell check this time around. It makes your posts much more intelligible, and automatically makes you look like a competent RPer.

I realize Microsoft word is expensive, but there are free online checkers, such as http://www.spellcheck.net/. Hope that helps, and good luck.