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The Introduction of a new Nation

Zebharia Sitchin
12-04-2007, 02:42
{ooc; okay, this is my first post on the forums. I’m a little nervous about it because I’m not sure if it’s any good, but I’ll let you be the judge of that. I'm willing to learn how to do things properly, i hope you can work with me. }

History
Zebharia

Off the coasts of industrial cities, isolated by water and free of concrete jungles is the island of Zebharia. It’s a relatively large land mass, measuring about 300 miles long, in the curious shape of a spear. Its geography is just as rough and unconditioned as its inhabitants, with mountainous regions and rocks instead of soil. At the foot of the Great Pymonte, the biggest mountain in the area (its peak measuring 20,932 feet from sea level), is the main village. The Chief of all of Zebharia resides here in a modest hut, not unlike the other small houses in the quaint village, with only a door and a higher roof to indicate someone important lived there.

She was hunched over her small desk, made of bamboo and twigs, reading a document addressed to her and her Head Ladies. Her beautiful countenance was contorted into a look of anger and fury. The many gold bangles she had were making soft musical noises as her hands shook the paper, unsure if what she was reading was correct. Her Main Lady stood still as she waited for what was sure to come; a ferocious outburst from her Chief. Thinking fast, the Main Lady cleared her throat and began to speak.

“Neda, Sitchin must be mistaken if they think they could own the land bridge. Our elders made a pact that it indeed belonged to both our nations-“

“Lira, Sitchin has always been mistaken when it comes to national negotiations. I am positively sick of them always having their way, just because they are the weaker nation! I still cannot believe that they consider the land bridge between us as-“Chief Neda looked back at the document “as theirs because ‘of its extraordinary soil, and their birthright to use as means of farming.’ I will not have this. I cannot.”

Main Lady Lira looked down at the floor. Her white cotton gown swayed in the wind. She was contemplating whether she should speak. Chief Neda was ruthless, and often acted out on impulse, and it sometimes caused her Head Ladies to doubt her ability to rule Zebharia.

“Chief Neda, I suggest perhaps we let them take the bridge. Sitchin provides us with food and cotton, and many raw materials we cannot attain on our own. Perhaps it’s best for both economies if we just let them use the land bridge for farming purposes…” A chuckled escaped the berry-stained lips of Neda.

“Oh, Lira, don’t you see? It has nothing to do with that.”

“No, Chief?”

“Of course not! This has to do with honor! Sitchin claims of being the more peaceful of us two, and yet they get everything they want on a whim! Slowly we are losing family villages because they prefer to settle in Sitchin! I am not letting them attain that land bridge. I want all my finest female warriors to be ready to fight by dawn.”

“But Chief-“

“I am not going to argue, Lira. Unless you would like to lose your position AND your head, I suggest you do as I say. I’m your leader, not your conscience.”

In addition, with those venomous words, Neda nodded and sent her Ladies away to do their job. When all had left, Neda locked her door and lay down on her mat next to her burning fire. Her amethyst eyes closed along with the blinds that her servant began to draw. Tomorrow there will be a battle to end all battles.

Sitchin

Connected by a 3 mile long land bridge to Zebharia is the small island of Sitchin. Much smaller than its sister nation, Sitchin was 100 miles long, and in a circular shape that resembled a Phalaenopsis flower, which coincidentally grew in abundance on the little island.

The island was rich and luxurious, surrounded by sandy beaches with sand as white and powdery as ground diamonds (which in fact is a legend on the island). Towards the center of the island there was a jungle region, rich in wildlife and plants, as well as fruits and medicinal sources, which the doctors relied on.

The sun was barely up, as the Chief of Sitchin stared out into the placid ocean. His cinnamon hair ruffled lightly in the wind as his ice blue eyes searched the horizon for unknown answers. His nation was peaceful, and he never wished for confrontation. His warriors were not fit for fighting, as many of the village families focused more on farming, fishing, and scavenging for fruits in the jungle. He was being ignorant when he sent the letter to Chief Neda, and it was now that he began to regret it. Zebharia was more military centered than Sitchin, and if Neda decided to attack, surely Sitchin would lose. Oh what in the name of The Goddess was he thinking?

His large house of redwood was located on the edge of the beach. The fire his servant had prepared for him a couple of hours ago had died out, and had failed to warm him.

“Chief Lorenz?”

Lorenz turned his head tiredly to his left as he saw his faithful Master of Land, Oren, approach him.

“Oren, thank the Goddess. I was worried I was the only mad man up at this hour…”

“I was meaning to talk to you, sir.” His tone was urgent and his honey brown eyes were vivid.

Lorenz stood up from his mat with a worried look on his handsome face.

“Is something the matter, Oren?”

“I’ll say! Chief Neda of Zebharia is gathering her warriors as we speak! They mean to attack us, sir! They mean to pillage our towns and murder your men!”
Chief Lorenz stayed rooted on his feet, unsure of what he was hearing, debating with himself whether or not to believe it. After a moment of shock, Lorenz shook along with the spring breeze and sighed.

“Prepare our men. We have a long day ahead of us. If it is now that they began their march, then we have until the sun hits its highest point in the sky to prepare. Tell my other Masters in each village that they must attain every boy old enough to carry a spear. We’re going to need it…”

With that said, Oren wasted no time, and ran off the beach and disappeared into the trail.

Battle

The female warriors of Zebharia were one of the most legendary. Trained from the tender age of 5, the girls were not taught such things as compassion or caring, but how to gore a man and kill him in less than a minute. They were feral, with agility and ferocity that matched a leopard. Another thing was their beauty, almost as legendary as their war skills. In combat, it is what first stuns their male opponents. For that split second that they are frozen, the warriors have the upper hand.

The fateful battle between Zebharia and Sitchin lasted a mere 4 hours before the victor was announced.

The warriors of Sitchin met Zebharians the minute they got off the land bridge. Adopting the Phalanx from the Greeks, the Zebharian warriors were a lot more organized than the Sitchians. The head Warrior, Karena, smirked under her solid bronze helmet. Her sun-kissed skin gleamed under her armor as she turned to her women.

“FOR THE GODDESS AND FOR THE CHIEF!”

“FOR THE GODDESS AND FOR THE CHIEF!” repeated the army of 600 women as Karena led them into a battle that had already been won.
Outcome

The army of Sitchin had been completely massacred that spring day. Chief Lorenz was forced to surrender to Chief Neda’s demands, which were quite demanding.

Zebharia took control of the land bridge, and put all of Sitchin’s trading under its power. Sitchin could not do anything without first getting Zebharia’s permission. Chief Lorenz tired of this, and asked many times for Chief Neda to lessen her hold on his nation. Chief Neda only laughed at his appeals and went back to her work. Little did she know that Lorenz was harboring an army of rebels against this new order.

This army consisted of Lorenz’s faithful followers, noble Sitchian families, and a few poor Zebharians who blamed Chief Neda for their poverty. Their main goal was to completely sever Sitchin from Zebharia, and to overthrow Neda from power.

One day a Zebharian scribe let loose to a friend of Head Lady Lira that he had a meeting to attend. When he realized what a fool he had been, he was anxious to be rid of the woman, whose name was Jasmine.

Jasmine, who was as loyal to the Chief Neda as if she was the grand Goddess herself, was instantly suspicious, and followed the man named Lyre towards the cave situated besides the entrance to the land bridge. When Jasmine saw Chief Lorenz, she knew what was happening and she gulped and ran off to tell Main Lady Lira.

When informed of what was happening under her very nose, Chief Neda was livid. She met with Chief Lorenz and tried to be as civil as humanely possible.

“Lorenz, I thought you a smart man. Weak, but smart. Yet what you have done in the last few months make you look like a fool.”

Lorenz looked at Neda and then back down at his bare feet. He did not speak. Neda continued.

“I want all Sitchian men and women and children in you rebelling army executed. I want you to tie their feet to bricks, and I want you to take them to the middle of the ocean and drop them. I will not have disloyalty.”

“They were not being disloyal. They are MY people. I do with them as I please.”
Neda stared blankly at the man in front of her.

“You know, I figured you’d say that.”

Neda snapped her fingers as her guarding warriors locked the doors and shut the windows. The only other people in the room were her 6 Head Ladies, all of whom had an uncomfortable look on their faces. An exceptionally gorgeous guard warrior approached the Chief Neda and bowed. Neda nodded her head, and the warrior withdrew a dagger made of whalebone, shell, and held it up to Lorenz’s neck before he could even realize what was happening.

“You see, Lorenz,” Neda continued, “I want our two nations to become one under my rule. Therefore, then, your people WILL be under my power. And you won’t have to feel so guilty…” she smiled. “Just sign this pact, Lorenz, and all will be fine. I’ll let you go, and I’ll make you my advisor.”

“And if I refuse?”

“Surely you remember I have one of my fiercest warriors holding a dagger to your throat?”

Lorenz gulped as he felt the cold material of the weapon on his neck. He looked around the room, beautiful blank faces, no sympathy nor kindness. He could not imagine giving up his country like this. After ruling for over 20 years, since he was 22, it was difficult. Nevertheless, he needed to live!
In a moment of quiet desperation, he let out a gasp of breath.

“I will sign.”

“Very well. Lira, the paper.”

Lira bought forth the long slip of parchment that Neda laid in front of Lorenz. She took a plume of crane feather dipped in octopus ink and handed it to Lorenz. Lorenz reluctantly signed and dropped the pen.

“There. May I go free?”

Neda looked at the parchment in front of her, and smiled. The two nations were now joined under her singular rule.

“Free? Lorenz I never said I would let you go free. I can’t have you running around, causing even more rebellions now can I?”

“But you said-“

“Take him to the top of the Great Pymonte and kill him. Make sure no one follows you.” Neda said very business-like to the guard warrior.

“WHAT? NO!” screamed Lorenz frantically.

“Oh, do quiet him first!” said Neda exasperatedly, as the warrior smiled and picked up a large stone from the fire.

And so it was that Zebharia and Sitchin joined. The spear of battle and the flower of peace became one.

Modern Day
Chief Ava yawns quietly in her office located at the very base of Pymonte. Her green eyes are lined in black kohl, and her delicate features show signs of fatigue and weariness. Her long and straight ebony hair frames her lightly freckled face, as she looked over the many papers on her desk.

Chief Ava and her 10 advisors, all of whom are female, today rule Zebharia Sitchin. It is a matriarch society, and the military is mostly female. In a household, the woman works and is the glue in a family.

The economy is doing fine, but not so much, since it is only up until recently that the nation began modernizing. The people are happy, and are ruled under a socialist government with liberal ideas. The military that Zebharia was once known for had declined into history, and was now obsolete. Lack of war and battling had softened the once harsh nation, and no longer did they pay much attention to fighting, but to maintaining peace and their exports of food to other nations.

Chief Ava is of direct descent of Chief Neda, but has not inherited her thirst for power. She is a mediocre leader, and is often doubter by her advisors. Her closest advisor was Rosa, who was also the leader of the Sparrows, an underground society of rebels bent on overthrowing chief Ava.

Aside from impending civil war, Zebharia Sitchin was well situated. The youth are given a wonderful education, and are taught the basic skills for whatever they choose to become. Everything is peaceful on the exterior, for now, at least.
Allanea
12-04-2007, 20:09
Somewhere in orbit

High, high above, a tiny CubeSat glints suspiciously. It does not do anything – yet. It merely watches. Watches, and transmits data right back to Allanea.

“These Zebharians... they are interestiing. Perhaps they would be a good place to open trade with?”

“Quite possible, Quirrell. Phone them up and ask if we can establish an embassy this them.”

“Yes, Sir. That shall be done.”

OOC: Sorry for the short post. Way to go on yours, though.
Crookfur
12-04-2007, 23:02
OOC:
very ncie first post and very interesting.

Oh and i appologise in advance for the likely many typos in this post, i will try and get it sorted tommorw.
IC:
Like msot big antions, the Kingdom of Crookfur did a soemwhat substancial orbital infrastructure with an entire conselltation of satllites more or elss dedicated to discovering new antions. Of course a chain of satellites has to be run by someone and in unfortuntly in this case it was run by an underfunded department of the Office of geographical studies in conjunction with a a very well funded but slightly disorganised charity group and so often many new antions slipped through the net, orbital fottage and data abotut hem sitting in an archive until someone could be finds to sort though the back log. Soedays how ever the department was on the ball and a dossier on Zebharia Sitchin was quickly forwarded to the Foreign Office where a discussion took place.

"Oh look a new nation, better get the boss to sign off one of the usual "welcome to the neighbourhood" cards and get the customary fruit and guns basket dispatched ASAP!"

"HHmmm says here they appear to be some kind of matriarchal scoiety..."

"Well that will go down with well with Ms Alexander, she might actually want to visit them and see if she can learn some new ball busting techniques."

"Do you think we should maybe take some steps to perhaps reduce the prominance of the whole "Kingdom" thing. I mean they might not take to it..."

"who cares, they will be getting in contacts from a fair few equal opertunities nations and likely a good number of patriarchal scoeities too, so they might aswell get used to it, anyway we can always make out that the Kingdom thign is entirely gender neutral, after all it was still the Kingdom of Crookfur udner at least4 different Queens and under King Edmund the effeminate. As logn as they aren't the sort to go aroudn callign themselves womyn or whatever the man free spelling is i really don;t see it being an issue."

"Oh ok, if you insist..."

A few days later the government of Zebharia Sitchin woudlr eceive a package from the Kingdom of Crookfur containing a mix of delicious friut, a bundle of advanced firearms (along with an embossed leatherbound version of the current Crookfur Arms catalogue) and a very ncie note From Jennifer Alexander, the Crookfur Foreign Secretary offering Zebharia Sitchin greetings and regonition on behalf of the People and Crown of Crookfur.
New_Brittonia
12-04-2007, 23:10
“Well well”, said Foreign Minister Sarah Lynch, “a new nation I have to talk with.” Normally, Prime Minister Flower would have came to see this, he likes to do the hands-on diplomacy by sending himself to places instead of aides, but he was away greeting the government of the Sub-Antarctic Islands. And with Deputy Prime Minister Mohammad Javaid taking the reigns for his first time ever since the assassination, Sarah decided to take New Brittonia’s first steps onto this new nation. She went boarded International One Foxtrot ,the Boeing 737 that is used by New Brittonia’s Foreign Minister, to go have a special diplomatic visit with Chief Aiva of Zebharia.
Gopania
12-04-2007, 23:42
The leather boots of the foreign advisor clacked upon the marble floors of the Imperial Palace, he slid to a stop in front of the Ivory Gold throne and knelt before the Emperor, "Je prie votre empereur de pardon, j'apporte votre attention à une nation plus grande que nos propres avec qui nous pouvons souhaiter chercher le commerce." The Emperor motioned for the foreign advisor to rise and he slowly got to his feet.

The Emperor was frail and his capacities limitied but still he led the Empire in holy glory, expanding the list of allies the Holy Empire could rely on was priority, "Laissez lui soyez ainsi conseiller Loufre."

The Advisor bowed as he moved towards the back of the Marble hall, "Merci beaucoup." He said edging closer to the door and continously showing his gratitude.

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From the Desk of the Holy Emperors personal Foreign Advisory Staff of Gopania.

To whomever it may concern amongst the nation of Zebharia Sitchin

If it is within the reason of your nations capacity we should like to open trade and relations with your nation who we know to have a wonderful history.
Should this be allowed we would like permission to have an ambassador visit your nation to further the connection of freindship possible between our nations.

Merci Beaucoup
Questers
12-04-2007, 23:44
(OOC: Too lazy to post, but very nice intro. Consider this a tag+compliment at the very least.)
Kahanistan
13-04-2007, 00:08
Official Announcement from the Free Havenic Republic of Kahanistan
Ministry of Foreign Affairs

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The Government of Kahanistan is most eager to establish trade and diplomatic relations with the United Socialist States of Zebharia Sitchin.

We hope that your nation and its people walk the path of freedom and democracy for all time. We invite your Minister of Foreign Affairs or designated official to establish relations with our nation.

Signed,
Rachel C. Levitt,
Minister of Foreign Affairs
Droskianishk
13-04-2007, 01:39
High above the island satalites, then spy planes, then lower flying unmanned probes had been watching the people for the past several months trying to gather as much information on the people as possible.

"So as you can see Consul they are still a rather primitive people" stated the Foreign Liason Kol Noak

"I see, do you believe we could communicate with them?" replied the Consul of Droskianishk Sikako Kutz

"That sir is something I don't know, the language of the island is largely unknown from what we do know though, some of their traders speak English" replied Noak hesitantly.

Very well Liason, you have my permission to air drop leaflets and communications technology, let us hope they know how to use it.

A few days later...

C-130's roared over the skies of the large island bearing the Droskianishk flag on their tails, "I sure as hell hope this works" shouted a tech sergeant as they began dumping canisters full of communications tech and leaflets with a message in english saying

"To whom it may concern,
The Consul of Droskianishk wishes to offer peace to your government and her peoples as well as a hand of help to speed along your modernization process, please use the communications technology... (instructions on how to use said technology).

Consul of Droskianishk
Sikako Kutz
Groznyj
23-06-2007, 06:38
[ooc: awesome first post]

The Republic of Groznyj

Official Communique to the United Socialist States of Zebharia Sitchin

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Long Live Nokhchichoo

From the Office of the President,

On behalf of my nation I welcome you and yours to the international stage. My nation is one interested foremost on peace and trade. I hope you will accept this yacht as a sign of goodwill for future diplomatic dialogs. As we speak a small naval detachment is just off your territorial waters bearing with it the gift.

Sincerely,
Ramzan Urmev,
President of the Republic of Groznyj
Kraesetshia
23-06-2007, 09:18
*move the eyes from the official paper to monitor with the face of the Minister of Foreign Agffairs*
Prime Minister Andrei:"Cazjnski, a Matriarchal society? Sounds intesting!"
Min. Cazjnski:"It's quite rare P.M. it's importante piece of ther history, but I think it's not a problem indeed"
*P.M. agree moinvg the head*
P.M. Andrei "Absolutly. Let's present to Zebharia ... any idea?"
Min. Cazjnski:"I'm wating the response from the United Kraesetshian Logistics for arrange the transoprt, in a pair of days we should have all the details.
P.M. Andrei:"Good. Send a official presentation to Zebharia and ask if we can send there the delegation. Obvoiusly wait for their response before book the travel"
Min. Cazjnski: "Obvoiusly Andrei, Cazjnski Out"

A diplomatic arrives to Zebharia to presnet herself and Kraesethia, delivering the official message from our Nation.


The Protectorate of Kraesetshia

Greetings from the Prime Minister Andrei Pomes and all the people of the Protectorate.
A new world of possibility is now opened; all the world is wating to have contact and trade with You. Select wisely your company for one of the most important travel for Your Nations.

All details is going to be explained by Mrs. Tarnalia

Signed
Andrei Pomes
Prime Minister


Sergiei Cazjnski
Minister of Foreign Affairs
Zebharia Sitchin
28-06-2007, 02:59
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Message From Zebharia Sitchin bureau of International Affairs

To: Allanea
From: Zebharia Sitchin
Subject: Establishing embassy
Our Chief Ava has received your phone call wanting to establish an embassy with our nation. We would be very happy to set it up with you as soon as possible. Thank you.
Signed,
Rosa Killentϋrk

To: Crookfur
From: Zebharia Sitchin
Subject: Thank you
On behalf of our Chief Ava and the people of Zebharia Sitchin, I would like to thank you for the firearms and fruit. We were very impressed by your advanced weaponry and would like to establish a trade between you and ourselves in order to expand our technology. Once again, we thank you.
Signed,
Rosa Killentϋrk

To: New Brittonia
From: Zebharia Sitchin
Subject: Welcome Foreign Minister Sarah Lynch

Thank you for wanting to establish a meeting with our Chief Ava. She has ordered that her schedule be made free especially for your meeting. She is hoping that that this visitation will help establish peaceful relations between our nations.
Signed,
Rosa Killentϋrk

To: Gopania
From: Zebharia Sitchin
Subject: Establishing an Embassy
A trade exchange would be most welcome by our people and our gracious leader, Chief Ava. We would like to expand any fledgling friendship between our two nations, and maintain a peaceful and mutually helpful relationship.
Signed,
Rosa Killentϋrk

To: Kahanistan
From: Zebharia Sitchin
Subject: Response to Minister of Foreign Affairs
The nation of Zebharia Sitchin would greatly appreciate a trade and diplomatic relationship with your country. We also appreciate your concern for our freedom and privileges, but we do not plan to become a democratic nation in the near future. Chief Ava is open of course, to what is best for our nation. We thank you for your good intentions, and an embassy exchange offer between our two nations is still open. Thank you, and may your days be blessed.
Signed,
Rosa Killentϋrk

To: Droskianishk
From: Zebharia Sitchin
Subject: We would like to thank…
Your leaflets the other day rained over our farmers and citizens. Upon reading said leaflets and using said technology, they acquired a thirst for more. On behalf of Chief Ava, we would like to open trade and an embassy with your nation. There are many things we could learn and gather from one another.
Signed,
Rosa Killentϋrk

To: Groznyj
From: Zebharia Sitchin
Subject: A Sincere Thank You
Our Chief Ava and her advisors accept your present and offer of peace and trade. We greatly appreciate your gift and hope to have further contact with you and your nation as time goes on.
Signed,
Rosa Killentϋrk

To: Kraesetshia
From: Zebharia Sitchin
Subject: In Response to the Letter
Our leader and our people would be most honored to have you come to our nation. We wish to establish a peaceful relationship, and open trade. We shall await the details, and your time is appreciated.
Signed,
Rosa Killentϋrk

{ooc; thank you all so much for the nice comments! }
Vanek Drury Brieres
28-06-2007, 13:52
OOC: nice, my first post was about Paris Hilton-not the way to go. :)

(Mokastan City, Mokastan)

The Princes were there for a meeting. However, no one showed up as of today. So they had a little free time and checked their emails.

"Oh, look at this!" cried Thomas Vanek (TV). "There's a new nation that's been discovered!"

"Well, you know the first thing to do." said Chris Drury (CD). We need to meet with Chief Avia and ask for an embassy and offer her an embassy and open up trade between us."

"Wow, that's a mouthful," replied Ryan Getzlaf (RG). "Yes, i quite agree with you, though. Also, we should send someone to go to the home front and someone to go meet Chief Avia. Personally, i'm homesick."

"So, I'll go to Zebharia Sitchin and meet with Chief Avia." responded Daniel Briere.

"Okay, so me and Chris will stay here." said TV. "We'll prep our helicopters. And, guys, please email and video conference us, kay? Well, hopefully we'll see you sometime in the future."

"So, Thomas Vanek and Chris Drury will stay here in Mokastan, I'll will go back to VDB, and DB will go to ZS. Cool." said RG. "Well, bye guys."

"Bye!"
Pan-Arab Barronia
28-06-2007, 15:10
OOC: Awesome first post. Nicely done.

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Hail, and Greetings from us all in Pan-Arab Barronia.
It's always pleasing to see new nations springing up, and as such, we would like to offer you the chance to establish an embassy in our embassy, and wish to ask for the chance to establish an embassy of our own in yours.
Naturally, we would also like to offer various trade agreements - Barronia, owing to it's favourable location, is built upon large oil deposits, which we fully utilise.
We await your reply with all earnestness.

Best wishes,

Armen Zeroun
Foreign Affairs Minister for Pan-Arab Barronia
British Londinium
28-06-2007, 15:32
The People's Sovereign Republic

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Official Communiqué

To Zebharia Sitchin:

Welcome to the world of international politics. I am confident that Aequitas looks down upon your nation with a smile. Seeing that you are a new nation, the People's Sovereign Republic would like to, first of all, construct an embassy in your nation. Also, we are a major exporter of petroleum and motor vehicles, and we seek permission to send these to your nation.

Good luck.

Sincerely,
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The Rt. Hon. Sir Alistair Davidson (http://upload.wikimedia.org/wikipedia/commons/thumb/8/8d/Dominique_villepin.jpg/165px-Dominique_villepin.jpg), MP
Consul of British Londinium
Vanek Drury Brieres
28-06-2007, 15:47
OOC: are we gonna have a war here or just welcome Zebharia Sitchin-both are equally fun! True.
Neo-Erusea
28-06-2007, 16:41
The female warriors of Zebharia were one of the most legendary.

OOC: Because EVERYBODY's warriors are one of the most legendary...

But otherwise you are off to a very good start... Very cool intro thread. What tech level are you, may I ask?