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Cryhiathva, 30 Second civil war (FT)

Cryhiathva
28-02-2007, 06:22
"move move" shouted the police offecer "move now you scum you need to be regestered now"
The line of people streched far as the eye could see, al the way up to the presedential palace. It was a dark day and was about to rain, a thunder clap could be hered in the back round far away. The palace it self was not something special just a very large house, but the new appointment of lords by the presedent didn't go down well with the local people, it sertenly did help the economy wich was now granted with extra powers. The people of Cryhiathva city did not know what was happening in other citys because they had bean cut off until they were regestered under (a new act brought in by the presedent) and have there identification cards given to them. "my loyal subjects, this is lord noverbard of the city and seat of cryhiathva city the presedent has relived you of your duty to voat in local, state and planetary elections and has cut down your responsabilty to voat every 4 years to every 20 years this will bring a new age of prosperety and order to the grate nation of cryiathva long live the presedent."
((ooc: again please exuse the spelling i realy am not very good at it ))
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The captain of the nevermoon heared the news over the transmiter in his cabin

"Tffftt captain fargo of the Nevermoon your are instructed to returen top home emediatly to be rgestared under our new government from the captain lord of the presedential fleet over Tffft"

The captain was concerened, the last time he remembered the presedent hated and despised lordship why would he do a backflip like this
the captain walk up and down " he would never do this he led us out of the time of lords not 2 years ago out of the out dated fudal system he must be crazy he has to be why would he so this "

The captain moved over to the contole panal next to his bed

"atention workers we have recived new orders from home we are to return emediatly for regestration over "

10 seconds later the nevermoon was in orbit of erethrhia the centeral planet of the home system "remove your shild nevermoon" spoke the controle panal in The captain room

The shiled roled back over the ship in about 5 seconds ,sudenly about 8 flashes erupted from the serface of the planet 15 their corse destined for the ship now veunerable 14 "The shilds dambit the shilds turn them on" 13 as he stubled over the contole panal 12 " gah dambit press the damb button" 11 shouted the captain "i new eating jam in hear was a bad idea" 10 finaly the captain mamaged to press down the button 9 "activate the shilds ACTIVATE THE SHILDS" 8 the shlilds blue haze began to apear around the end of the ship 7 it painstakingly started to move over the ship 6 "come on dambit come on" 5" Increase power"4 the shilds sped up but by that time it was proberly to late 3 " come on come on" the captain was biting his fingers 2. 8 expliosions propeled them selves drom the side of the ship all of them in cripleing posistions 2 fore eace engine 2 for each LSGs (Light speed generators) 1 fore the oxygen chamber 1 for the gravety generator 1 for the food bay and finaly one for the brige ,the final nail in the cosmic coffin

"mr presedent the trator have bean anhilated"
"good good it will show out citizens that we meen bussiness"
" but sir was it raely nesesary to destoy out first ship couldent we have used it "
The presedent had a discusted face
"now listen hear boy and listen good, that ship and its crew were tratiors even thought they did not know it thay had the intention of betaraying me deep in their haerts and i will not have that , understand "
Taledonia
28-02-2007, 06:27
(OOC: If I may offer a friendly piece of advice? Your stories seem good enough, however I always have reservations about joining because you have horrid spelling mistakes. Not sure if these are typos or not, but maybe it would be wise to run your posts through spell checkers before actually posting them. Just a friendly suggestion. >.< )