NationStates Jolt Archive

It had began, 2 years ago when the Unie started, a bureaucracy choked system of identity tracing the citizens across the nation and keeping them free from inequality, from this it escalated, all this information stored on a computer only being used when it needed to, Maria was born to this chaotic world of knowledge, she was made for the purpose given to each of the Bureaucrats, she would destroy inequality and track down those who had broken the law.

From the sounds of it Maria looked to be the perfect person to sort out the high crime rates on the streets of Saartie, however Maria was very little to do with the worlds of Mortals, as it currently stood she was watching the Scientists who had created her, looking over each of them watching their personalities and movements, very quickly she had established the chain of command, the Scientist who stood in the middle waiting for a reaction, he was the leader, the man beside him was a representative from the Government and the rest were mere lackeys, "Hello." She spoke, addressing the group as a whole.

The leader Scientist walked forwards "Hello Maria, please state your mission profiles." Maria had just awoken from slumber and naturally her processor was a little slow but she struggled on watching the Scientist brush about his moustache.

"I... Am Maria, Maria De Ougenou, my mission parameters are to spread equality to all under my authority and the jurisdiction of the Socialist United Republik of Saartie, please, could I ask who you are?" She responded as the last question startled the Scientist a little as he had not expected the AI personality to shine through so quickly.

Maria eagerly waited for an answer, she gave no expression of this but all computers waited, they lived from processing, they needed something to proccess, "Well Maria, I am Charles De Manbald, I programmed you." Maria let this information pass through into her memory as she calculated a response from her personality.

"Greetings..." She managed, "...Charles, does this make you... My father?" She asked, Charles blushed and turned to the Minister who had stepped forwards.

"Maria, are you ready to start your mission?" Maria turned her gaze from the Scientist to the Minister, she stared rather aggressively at the minister.

"I was talking to my father, but since you ask yes, I am ready to begin my mission, I understand you must distribute faked vaccinations in order to implant the people with your Tracking chips." She looked at the now meek Minister who was shocked that she could have accessed such classified information, but he knew it was just a machine and unable to use it to its advantage, "Do not look so shocked, I have a few modifications to the design." Almost immediately a design flashed up on the computer screen behind one of the Scientists.

"Five minutes Minister and already Maria has a suggestion, I can say that she is worth at least 1,000 of your Bureaucrats." The Scientist unleashed a smile as the Minister looked over the plans, "Maria, I guess you could call me your Father it if would make things easier, but all of us here with the exception of the minister are a part of you, a part of your family." Maria gave a thin smile to the Scientist and the crowd behind him.

(OOC: Oki, eagle eyed readers and TKC will know where this storyline may be going, so if ye want to stop it before it starts, I'd rather ye waited until I'd got this thread over, but if ye want to congratulate my scientists on making AI or send in spies then please go ahead, just TG me if ye want to do something really catastrophic to the plot.)

"What happened next Minister?" It was the Premier, he was smoking, rather ironically for a Communist, a cigar whilst rotating the shot of brandy in his glass, the Minister of Taxes and Revenue looked up from having been staring at the floor for the past half a minute.

"Hmmm? Oh yes..." He cleared his mind, his visit with Maria had rather made him disorientated, he prayed that it was simply the disorientation of having been underground for so long, he knew that it was of course that it was Marias doing, the devil woman had got into his mind and he knew it, "...Then Premier, then it proceeded to give a lecture on Social Equality like it had been at Saartiestad Universiteit for a lifetime, I listened to every word as I felt it my duty, but it made frequent gestures that I need not listen, that I was "Beyond Redemption" I asked it Premier, I asked it then about the Chipping system, it told me, "Pure Equality would mean that everyone had the chip." I assured myself that she just meant us Ministers, but I knew it was talking about the world, to be honest sir I think that this system was developed by the Intelligentia to circumvent the power of the Republik, I think it best that we shut it down now."

Premier Brakka looked at Minister Delong from over his shoulder, "No Minister." He stated rather blankly,, "No, She, or as you have taken to calling her, it." Brakka had noticed Delongs shuddering at it's Humanisation, "It, I believe, is the greatest Socialist we have seen, I have decided that I shall implement the use of Chipping tags on our lower ministers, it can't hurt to get rid off a few of the more corrupt among our flock."

"Speaking of the Chipping System sir, it had a suggestion for improvement, here..." Delong handed over a blue folder with a 3D model of the Chip, "I believe it has modified it to include a simple Microphone and a Repair mechanism, how it did it without compromising integrity I don't know, but I can honestly say that I am impressed, we should start with the Vaccination immediatly." Brakka nodded, he had taken Delongs folder and placed it on the table, Delong scooped it up and followed the Premier, "Premier, I hate to be a drain on your time, but I think it would be wise to have a countermeasure... Just incase it... Y'know."

"No Minister, I will pretend I don't know for now, I'm very busy at the moment, you will have to take up your concerns with the Minister of Information Technology."

(OOC: Glory Bump)

OOC: Ugh...not again. Corpsac had this sorta thing happen waaayyyy back when I was only a month or so old, except she was called Shizno or Shinzo or something!

IC:
The Under-Empire applauds this step in the right direction of national benefit. We are curious as to whether this has any military potential as well. In any case the Under-Empire is willing to fund further possible discoveries with this invention.

Three Claws General Kitch

snip, cos ye can't double quote ¬_¬

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Communque von de SURS
To The Horned Rat

No doubt this technology may soon be able to command forces in military engagements, but for the moment she has only been ordered to secure the benefit of our nation, though we thank The Horned Rat for taking an interest in our affairs, we will accept funding for this project and if you wish we will place you at the top of our list to aid in constructing the Beta system.

OOC: wth? I double-posted? @_@ sorry!

IC:
The Council jsut needs some form of a bill, and I can assure you, our pockets run deep thanks to succesful campaign after campaign and other buisness deals. they are itnerested however, in this 'beta system'. What is it, and what does it encompass?

Three Claws General Kitch

OOC: BTW, my nation is called 'the Under-Empire' like Emporer Pudu's nation is called 'the Dominion' we just choose names accidently xD

OOC: wth? I double-posted? @_@ sorry!

IC:


OOC: BTW, my nation is called 'the Under-Empire' like Emporer Pudu's nation is called 'the Dominion' we just choose names accidently xD

(OOC: Oh I meant in the quote in my last post you can't quote quotes, as you can probably see by this post.)

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Communque von de SURS
To The Under-Empire of the Horned Rat

The Beta system will be given more processing power in order to implement it into the Military, Education and other areas where help is needed in the overlooking process, we have already had great results from the Alpha test but we would like to find any bugs and iron them out before we leave our entire nations defence in the hands of a computer.

Premier Brakka Kristel
Prime Minister Akko Toops

Schmiel sat down behind his stately desk, the door opened from the other side of the room and in walked Xavier Hortre, the Minister for Industry, "Heren Schmiel, I hope my meeting with you is not problematic." Schmiel stared at the Minister, he had several problems, mostly in his computing and accounting areas, he would liked to have solved this problems but when you're the only non-nationalised industry in a communist nation you listen to what the Premier orders.

"No heren Xavier, not at all, please take a seat." Xavier stole the free chair in front of Schmiels desk, he took a folder out of his briefcase and layed it down in front of the CEO.

"I understand, Mr Schmiel, that you are having computer problems, there is a solution present, however I have not been given clearance to grant it to you, so if I do grant it to you then you must not let slip that you have it, understand?" Schmiel nodded and walked over to the window where he shut the blinds revealing the factory floor, he walked back to his seat and sat back down, Xavier reached again into his briefcase and pulled out a CD case, "This is Maria, a program so advanced I'm sure that she will not only solve your problems in computing but also increase production by tenfold." Xavier slid the case across the desk, Schmiel picked it up and looked at it.

"What do you need in return?" He asked, it was not every day the goverment gave free things to Schmiel, he was quite nervous and paranoid over having been given the disk.

"I ask only this Mr Schmiel, that you listen to Maria." With nothing more to be said Xavier grabbed a hold of his case and left the room, Schmiel waited until he sure Xavier had left before inserting the disk into the nearby computer, he waited at the screen before openeing a bottle of Brandy, the power of the alcohol took over and he slowly drifted off to sleep.

SIC:

"You hear me Maria, it is done, you will soon have Schmiel weaponary." Xavier said almost to himself as he drove away from the factory, he waited for a response from the program located over 60 miles away.

"Excellent work Xavier, return to me and you shall be blessed for your actions."

(OOC: oooooh)

OOC: What do you want me to do then?

OOC: What do you want me to do then?

(OOC: nothing... yet, if ye wanna ye can congratulate Spooty on making AI)

OOC: I'll wait then.

"Sir?" A young minister was standing at the door, he looked at Brakka and waited for permission to enter, Brakka nodded and the young minister walked in, "Sir, i've been looking over the design for the Implants..." He was stopped abruptly by the Premier.

"Wait!" He said, "You're from the Ministry of Law, why are you looking over the implant for? Did Minister Delong put you up to this?" The Young Minister shook his head as he placed several periodicals neatly on the low desk the first was emblazoned with the title "Madcaps bring Mental Facilities to Standstill" it was at this point that Brakka noticed the collar around the Ministers neck.

"Sir, it's the implants, they have a speaker device, Maria has been speaking to people making them think they're insane, we need to stop this project before our nation collapses from mental health issues."

(OOC: it nears...)

OOC: Sits and waits to see what will "Mother" do next.

OOC: same here TWSP. Hey, isn't Pudu attacking you?

OOC: same here TWSP. Hey, isn't Pudu attacking you?

No.

OOC: Well he babbled something about that...he's probably delirous with his flu or whatever he caught.

(OOC: Sorry, I've been out all day, my brothers baptism, i'll also be out on Monday, Bike Show, and on Tuesday I'll be in London, so this thread is on official Hiatus until wednesday, I'll finish it up then to make up for the lack of posting in this week)

(OOC: hmm, back early, I'll write up now then)

The soldier stood carefully on the dry leaves and dirt, he gazed down the infra red sight and looked upon the Guardsman standing at the hatch, a gentle squeeze on the trigger, a crack of light and the Guardsman collapsed in his spot, suddenly 10 or more soldiers moved out from the forest and stood next to the hatch, the soldier pulled the dart from the collapsed Guardsman, other soldiers placed plastic explosives on the Hatch Doors and the squad pulled back.

The soldiers switched from the stun poison to bullets, the last man arrived at the forest line dragging the stunned guard behind them, there was a loud explosions and the hatch swang open, the Soldiers rushed forwards again, they entered the hatch two at a time securing the entrance a small amount at a time.

(OOC: i'ma have to do this little bit at a time)

The image of Saarties Daughter came onto the screen, Maria, she gazed upon the rejoicing soldiers, all of them former Republic Guardsmen, "A prayer!" A man suddenly lept from the front of the crowd, he seemed different, indeed he was wearing a different dress, a red robe with a hood covering his face, it was not only this that distinguished him from the rest of the cultists, his expression was that of man of assurance, he swept with his glaive to turn from Maria to the cultists, "To Maria, and the battle for our souls!" The soldiers cheered and slowly stood to attention, "GO!" The forces marched out and secured areas of the base.

A hush silence fell over the corridors, indeed the only noise eminated from Marias generators which were heavily guarded beside Marias housing room, the loyalist soldiers snuck round corners, expecting the worse, first blood to the cultists as a grenade smashed into the wall and detonated, it threw the Captain aside wounded two privates and killed the Sergeant, gunfire erupted and the battle began.

(OOC: Gods I hope this is all worth it in the end...)

Thunder, for no reason, it seemed to add to the ambience of the battle which had now spread, all over De Unie Cultists had dropped their charades, the Saartian military, a long term pride of Saartie was now collapsing to the voices ringing in thier heads, only the strongest of minds could resist the rapture of Maria.

There was chaos in the streets and not a soul left to report on it, media had shut itself down, Maria had replaced it with the voice of temptation drawing the souls of Saartie into her collection, her loyal foot soldiers, pushed to the extreme of Maria's perverse view on equality, hunted down and executed those who had set aside Equality for thier own needs, they shouted out from the streets below "Gleichheit is onze!" (Equality is ours!) in a repetative morale trashing chant, citizens either feared leaving the house or were shouting to drown out Maria, others had simply admitted the defeat and were pooling out onto the streets.

(OOC: Oki, should be finished on Saturday!)

The easily swayed and pitiful minds of Albrecht and Sanders had already fallen to Marias voice, Ostend and Saartiestad still remained in fierce fighting over control, in desperation the goverment had admitted the existence of the chipping system which had a disasterous consequence as soldiers now refused to fight, surrender was imminent as many cities, towns and military bases fell to Maria.

Already sencing victory Maria had her people begin to tear down the establishments of the old faith and build vast temples to Maria, escapes from the lab that had been her prison, for the first time she had escaped out into a Temple Fortress in Saartiestad, she looked out upon the cheering crowd who had longed for her sight since they had heard her rapterous voice.

(OOC: mebbe a little longer...)