NationStates Jolt Archive


the empire of adolf

Changhow
03-09-2006, 16:19
this nation needs to stop hitler was evil he killed some of my family pass sanctions against this country in the un
Phalanix
03-09-2006, 16:37
OCC:
Hi and welcome to NS.
I'd like to offer you some tips on better RPing if you don't mind.
First of all I'd like to suggest that you have longer more indepth posts. Like why else does this nation need to be stop, be descriptive as to what exactly went on.
Second use proper grammar, sentence structure, and spelling, take a look at what a few seconds to proof-read can do.
Before: this nation needs to stop hitler was evil he killed some of my family pass sanctions against this country in the un
After: This nation needs to be stoped, Hitler was evil and killed some of my family. We must pass sanctions against this country in the UN.
See the difference?
I hope those two little tips help.
As well I suggest reading over some other other thread to get an idea of what to do as well as reading The Euroslavia Series of Helpful Hints (http://forums.jolt.co.uk/showthread.php?t=408855) sticky (it's loaded with very good information.)
I hope these little bits of advise help you along to become one of our beloved comunity members.
Skgorria
04-09-2006, 15:49
OOC: first off, welcome to the forums :)

IC:

Skgorria City, Leader's Bunker

"The Empire Of Adolf eh?" mused the Leader as he reclined in his huge leather chair at the head of the conference table, a large flag of the coat of arms of Skgorria behind him. "Why are they under threat?"

A figure to the immediate right of the Leader spoke "It seems that the leaders of Changhow have something personal against our ideological forefather." The man wiped his hands on his suit trousers after he spoke, cleaning his hands of the nervous sweat.

"WHAT?" exploded the Leader, "why at every turn must we find ourselves and our ideological bretheren opposed by such....Untermensch?"

"The appearance of this nation does show that the International Crusade against Zionism and Bolshevism begins to form" motioned an SS general

New Nuremburg

Preperations were already underway for the rally, this would be a huge one indeed...