NationStates Jolt Archive


The Rebel Offical

FH Incorporated
22-07-2006, 03:17
Story: A rebel offical kidnaps a daughter of the head of FH Inc to try to get the head to give control of the company to him. Feel free to join in, but tell me what you want to be first.


Maria was in the Home Gardens, smelling the flowers and walking around. This young girl, a daughter of Juan Melendez (FH Inc Head) would play a part in this story.

A man, hired by the rebel offical, Mr. Buchanan, lurked in the shadows. Sneaking up on Maria, he grabbed her and placed chloroform on her, making her go out. When she woke up, she would be in a dark room.

People began looking for Maria but could not find her. Was she kidnapped?
The Aeson
22-07-2006, 03:20
OOC: Why does everyone do this? I'm the kidnapper here. Come on! Three kidnappings. Provoke a war, hijack a government, make them send evidence. This is my bag!
FH Incorporated
22-07-2006, 03:21
OOC: Why does everyone do this? I'm the kidnapper here. Come on! Three kidnappings. Provoke a war, hijack a government, make them send evidence. This is my bag!

Want to be the kidnappers then, Aeson? You could be Mr. Buchanan or the kidnappers. Since you've done that, I would like it if you, who is experienced at these things could join.
FH Incorporated
22-07-2006, 03:28
OOC: Why does everyone do this? I'm the kidnapper here. Come on! Three kidnappings. Provoke a war, hijack a government, make them send evidence. This is my bag!

Do you want to be the kidnappers, Aeson?
The Aeson
22-07-2006, 03:30
Do you want to be the kidnappers, Aeson?

OOC: Nah. I'm just ranting.
FH Incorporated
22-07-2006, 03:32
OOC: Nah. I'm just ranting.

Ok. But could you perhaps be them? I would like to have experienced players in this, not to be rude to people or anything.
Jaredcohenia
22-07-2006, 03:41
A certain Jaredcohenian organization (running strong even with the national chaos) can do this kidnapping if you wish.
The Aeson
22-07-2006, 03:42
A certain Jaredcohenian organization (running strong even with the national chaos) can do this kidnapping if you wish.

OOC: National chaos? I missed something. And don't extreme underwater skydiving basket weaving enthusiats preform best in chaos?
Jaredcohenia
22-07-2006, 03:43
Find my "A Rememberance, A Revolution" topic. :P
FH Incorporated
22-07-2006, 03:43
A certain Jaredcohenian organization (running strong even with the national chaos) can do this kidnapping if you wish.

Sure. If Aeson, not to be rude, is not up to doing it, then sure, you can do it with the Jaredcohenian group. Just post them in a room with the girl or something, you can now if you want.
FH Incorporated
22-07-2006, 03:52
A certain Jaredcohenian organization (running strong even with the national chaos) can do this kidnapping if you wish.

Are you going to join in? Also, can you go in the service of Mr. Buchanan, the group in his service? If not, we can discuss it or something.
Jaredcohenia
22-07-2006, 04:02
I dunno, my guys don't work for anyone. Unless they're paid a high fee.
FH Incorporated
22-07-2006, 04:03
I dunno, my guys don't work for anyone. Unless they're paid a high fee.

How much would they want?
Wanderjar
22-07-2006, 04:03
OOC: Why does everyone do this? I'm the kidnapper here. Come on! Three kidnappings. Provoke a war, hijack a government, make them send evidence. This is my bag!

LOL! Poor Blackhelm......
Jaredcohenia
22-07-2006, 04:18
At least a mil US
FH Incorporated
22-07-2006, 04:23
At least a mil US

Consider the money wired to you, Jaredcohenia. The group has been paid. Now, you can continue. Have them in a dark room with the girl or you can redo the kidnapping, I guess. I sent you the money, now let's get this going.
Jaredcohenia
22-07-2006, 04:28
A man was sitting in a chair, the girl was chained to a chair opposite from him. It was Iosef Ivanovich, Jaredcohenian Mafia, or the Extreme Underwater Knitting Club's chief knitter.

"They still haven't killed that damn Novoborsk...wow. Oh, you're up." He closed his newspaper and stood up. "By obligations of many organizations, I'm to tell you you're now kidnapped. But be glad, you just made me some money. Would you like some candy?"
FH Incorporated
22-07-2006, 04:31
A man was sitting in a chair, the girl was chained to a chair opposite from him. It was Iosef Ivanovich, Jaredcohenian Mafia, or the Extreme Underwater Knitting Club's chief knitter.

"They still haven't killed that damn Novoborsk...wow. Oh, you're up." He closed his newspaper and stood up. "By obligations of many organizations, I'm to tell you you're now kidnapped. But be glad, you just made me some money. Would you like some candy?"

The girl looked at Iosef and was nervous, finding she was chained to the chair. ''Where am I? Where is my mom and dad?'' Maria said. The girl looked at Iosef and at her chains.
Jaredcohenia
22-07-2006, 04:32
"Hmm...you're in a cellar and your mommy and daddy aren't here. Any other questions?"
FH Incorporated
22-07-2006, 04:34
"Hmm...you're in a cellar and your mommy and daddy aren't here. Any other questions?"

Maria looked at Iosef and she asked ''Why am I here? Are you going to hurt me?'' She was still nervous, being kidnapped like this would contribute.

OOC-I could not really get a good reply in my head.
Jaredcohenia
22-07-2006, 04:35
"You're hear because someone paid me a pretty penny to be here, and do you want to be hurt?"
FH Incorporated
22-07-2006, 04:36
Would anyone like to help in finding the girl? If there is interest for this role, I may allow it.
FH Incorporated
22-07-2006, 04:37
"You're hear because someone paid me a pretty penny to be here, and do you want to be hurt?"

''I don't want to be hurt.'' Maria said. ''May I have a drink? I am thirsty.'' Maria said nervously but nicely. She looked around in the cellar for a bit before going back to Iosef.
FH Incorporated
22-07-2006, 04:42
Thanks for joining in, Jaredcohenia.
Jaredcohenia
22-07-2006, 04:46
''I don't want to be hurt.'' Maria said. ''May I have a drink? I am thirsty.'' Maria said nervously but nicely. She looked around in the cellar for a bit before going back to Iosef.

Ivanovich pistolwhipped the girl. "That's what you get for saying you don't want to be hurt, the only drink we have is water, is that fine?"
FH Incorporated
22-07-2006, 04:48
Ivanovich pistolwhipped the girl. "That's what you get for saying you don't want to be hurt, the only drink we have is water, is that fine?"

Maria cried or something when she was pistolwhipped. ''Water is fine.'' Maria said, not wanting to be hit again. Maria looked at her chains and then looked back at Ivanovich.
FH Incorporated
22-07-2006, 05:03
Jaredcohenia, thanks for joining in this.
Jaredcohenia
22-07-2006, 05:19
He whistled and some other men came in, with a dog bowl with water. "Drink up." He put the pistol back in his holster.
FH Incorporated
22-07-2006, 05:28
He whistled and some other men came in, with a dog bowl with water. "Drink up." He put the pistol back in his holster.

Maria looked at him with a look but not wanting to get hurt, she said ''May I get out of these so I can drink?'', motioning to the chains.
Jaredcohenia
22-07-2006, 05:30
"No, you can't. If you want us to knock the chair to the ground so you can drink, we'll do that."
FH Incorporated
22-07-2006, 05:32
"No, you can't. If you want us to knock the chair to the ground so you can drink, we'll do that."

Maria nodded, she seemed to accept it. They could knock the chair down and let her drink the water that way. Maria nodded.
Jaredcohenia
22-07-2006, 05:34
The large Ivanovich pushed the chair over, making a loud THUNK. "Drink up." He went back to his chair and read the newspaper again.
FH Incorporated
22-07-2006, 05:36
The large Ivanovich pushed the chair over, making a loud THUNK. "Drink up." He went back to his chair and read the newspaper again.

Moving her hands a bit, she held the bowl and held it up to herself to drink, when she drunk it all, she placed it down and said ''Thank you for the water.''

''May I have the chair back up please?'' Maria asked.

Note- Her family is looking for her and that too.
Jaredcohenia
22-07-2006, 05:38
"No. Any other questions?"
FH Incorporated
22-07-2006, 05:40
"No. Any other questions?"

Maria looked up at Iosef, though she could mainly see the floor, due to the chair being down and that. ''Why did I have to drink out of a dog bowl?'' Maria asked nervously, in case he would hurt her.
Jaredcohenia
22-07-2006, 05:46
"Because it's funny seeing a little girl drinking out of a dog bowl, and we have no cups left."
FH Incorporated
22-07-2006, 05:47
"Because it's funny seeing a little girl drinking out of a dog bowl, and we have no cups left."

''How is it funny to see that?'' Maria asked nervously. She hoped he would not hit her if she asked.
Jaredcohenia
22-07-2006, 05:50
He kicked her in the face, "because it is. Don't question my sense of humor." He stood up and walked away, "Why am I even doing this..."
FH Incorporated
22-07-2006, 05:54
He kicked her in the face, "because it is. Don't question my sense of humor." He stood up and walked away, "Why am I even doing this..."

''Im....Sorry.'' Maria cried to Iosef from where she was. She looked at him, why was this going on?

A man came into Iosef's place and said ''Mr. Buchanan wants you to send the ransom. Remember, the company is the ransom.'' to Iosef.

OOC-Perhaps, if Iosef does not like what he is doing, he can betray his boss and help Maria and her family? Just an idea.
FH Incorporated
22-07-2006, 06:04
Jaredcohenia, you can write the ransom. If they want the girl back, the ransom is Juan's company.
Jaredcohenia
22-07-2006, 06:04
"Tell Mr. Buchanon that he can send his own damn ransom."
FH Incorporated
22-07-2006, 06:06
"Tell Mr. Buchanon that he can send his own damn ransom."

''He did ask you to but ok.''

Later, the man came back and said ''Mr. Buchanan now sent it, though he did want you to do it.'' (so he would not known for Maria's kidnapping, I guess)

The ransom came and it was that for Maria to be returned, Juan would give Mr. Buchanan his company. Juan would think it over, hoping to get Maria safely.

The man gave Iosef a camera or something. ''Perhaps you could send them a tape or something, to let them know their child is ok.''
Jaredcohenia
22-07-2006, 06:37
"Umm...I don't understand. You want me to film her?"
FH Incorporated
22-07-2006, 19:13
"Umm...I don't understand. You want me to film her?"

''You could, and make a tape or something to let the family know she is ok.''
The Aeson
22-07-2006, 19:18
''You could, and make a tape or something to let the family know she is ok.''

OOC: Actually, JC my buddy, that's not a bad plan. Proves you have her. And if they don't pay up, you can film her being hurt. Worked well when I kidnapped Griffencrest's brat.
Jaredcohenia
22-07-2006, 19:25
OOC: Actually, JC my buddy, that's not a bad plan. Proves you have her. And if they don't pay up, you can film her being hurt. Worked well when I kidnapped Griffencrest's brat.

OOC: Never planned on it.

IC: "I'd rather not do it, tell them, that in addition to that ransom he sent, I'd like 25 million bucks."
Liberated New Ireland
22-07-2006, 19:26
OOC: Actually, JC my buddy, that's not a bad plan. Proves you have her. And if they don't pay up, you can film her being hurt. Worked well when I kidnapped Griffencrest's brat.
OOC: Aeson, I thought you were a protagonist nation... Are you just morally ambiguous?
The Aeson
22-07-2006, 19:27
OOC: Aeson, I thought you were a protagonist nation... Are you just morally ambiguous?

OOC: I'm completely protagonist. I just make the morally ambiguous decisions to protect my allies' innocence. Plus, she was annoying.
FH Incorporated
22-07-2006, 19:29
OOC: Never planned on it.

IC: "I'd rather not do it, tell them, that in addition to that ransom he sent, I'd like 25 million bucks."

''Are you sure they would send you a ransom as well? That was not part of the original plan.''

Maria looked up to see the two talking, she was still down on her chair.
FH Incorporated
22-07-2006, 19:30
OOC: Never planned on it.

IC: "I'd rather not do it, tell them, that in addition to that ransom he sent, I'd like 25 million bucks."

OOC-It would be a ok idea though possibly.
FH Incorporated
22-07-2006, 19:30
OOC-Jaredcohenia, does he want 25 million from Mr. Buchanan or from Maria's family? Just want to make sure of things.
FH Incorporated
22-07-2006, 19:50
Jaredcohenia, what organization does Iosef Ivanovich hail from?
Jaredcohenia
22-07-2006, 19:51
OOC: He's the Jaredcohenian Mob boss, head honcho. They want 25m from the family to guarantee her safe return.

IC: Ivanovich took out his pistol, spinning the barrel. "I'm sure they want a daughter and not a nice red wall, right?"
FH Incorporated
22-07-2006, 19:55
OOC: He's the Jaredcohenian Mob boss, head honcho. They want 25m from the family to guarantee her safe return.

IC: Ivanovich took out his pistol, spinning the barrel. "I'm sure they want a daughter and not a nice red wall, right?"

OOC-Mr. Buchanan wanted the family to give him his own ransom, I don't know if both can be arranged.

The man looked at Ivanovich with a look. ''You are not going to kill her, are you? They would want a living daughter, not a dead corpse.''
Jaredcohenia
22-07-2006, 20:00
"If they want their daughter alive, they will pay me my 25 million."
FH Incorporated
23-07-2006, 00:42
"If they want their daughter alive, they will pay me my 25 million."

''The ransom is only supposed to be what Mr. Buchanan wants. You can not include the 25 million, I guess.'' the man said. ''Would you really...kill her?''
FH Incorporated
23-07-2006, 00:52
Jaredcohenia, is Iosef planning to kill Maria?
FH Incorporated
23-07-2006, 01:35
Jaredcohenia, you said your nation is in national chaos?
Jaredcohenia
23-07-2006, 01:40
"I might, I'll spare her for...tell them 5 mil."
FH Incorporated
23-07-2006, 01:50
"I might, I'll spare her for...tell them 5 mil."

''They are only supposed to give Mr. Buchanan ransom. I don't know if you would get anything.''

''Are you going to..kill her?''
Jaredcohenia
23-07-2006, 02:03
"Tell them I want my damn money. Plain and simple."
FH Incorporated
23-07-2006, 02:05
"Tell them I want my damn money. Plain and simple."

''That was not part of the plan.'' the man said. The man glared at Iosef. ''We should stick to the plan.''

The man would, if Iosef threatened to shoot him, go and send the II Ransom.
Jaredcohenia
23-07-2006, 02:06
Ivanovich shot the man as expected, in the leg. "I want the damn money."
FH Incorporated
23-07-2006, 02:10
Ivanovich shot the man as expected, in the leg. "I want the damn money."

Maria looked to see the man, limping, she had heard the shot and she'd seen Iosef shoot the man. ''At least put her chair up.'' the man said, leaving to send the 2nd Ransom. Would he shoot Maria? Time would tell later.

Juan recieved it and said ''Now the kidnappers want another ransom.'' He went to think a plan out.

OOC-Soon, I may have Juan ask other nations for help. Also, you could do the filming, like Aeson and I said earlier, if you want.
Jaredcohenia
23-07-2006, 04:41
Ivanovich took the camera and began filming. "Welcome to another issue of your daughter has been kidnapped." He put the chair in the right position. "Here is your daughter, Maria. Whatever. Now, if I don't get my twenty five..." He fired a bullet, grazing the girls face. "I will kill your daughter. Thanks."
FH Incorporated
23-07-2006, 04:51
Ivanovich took the camera and began filming. "Welcome to another issue of your daughter has been kidnapped." He put the chair in the right position. "Here is your daughter, Maria. Whatever. Now, if I don't get my twenty five..." He fired a bullet, grazing the girls face. "I will kill your daughter. Thanks."

OOC-Does Maria say anything in the tape? Just wondering is all. If she can, I can edit my post to have her say something or what not. And I hope this post is an ok one.

Maria cried a bit when the bullet grazed her face, she could have been killed. Maria looked at Iosef with a nervous and bit scared look, would he kill her? She then looked more into the camera, to show that it was really her.

The tape would soon be sent.
Jaredcohenia
23-07-2006, 22:32
Ivanovich took out a crayon from his pocket and began to write the message, an encrypted code.

We have your daughter. For ransom, we request 25 million dollars in unmarked bills and we want a Mr. Juan's company. Thank you for your time.
FH Incorporated
23-07-2006, 23:51
Ivanovich took out a crayon from his pocket and began to write the message, an encrypted code.

We have your daughter. For ransom, we request 25 million dollars in unmarked bills and we want a Mr. Juan's company. Thank you for your time.

Maria looked at Iosef and asked ''May I have these chains removed please?'' Maria was nervous and scared somewhat, after almost getting a bullet to hit her.

When Juan recieved the letter, he was shocked. First his company, now that and 25 million. He told the others and police, etc were planning to continue the already ongoing search.
Jaredcohenia
24-07-2006, 00:03
Iosef sighed, "No. Once I get my money I'll let you out of the chains. I promise."
FH Incorporated
24-07-2006, 01:09
Iosef sighed, "No. Once I get my money I'll let you out of the chains. I promise."

Maria nodded and said ''May I have something to eat?'' She was getting a bit hungry now, a drink could be given as well.
Jaredcohenia
24-07-2006, 02:12
"No, you can't have anything to eat. Haven't you ever been kidnapped before?"
FH Incorporated
24-07-2006, 02:44
"No, you can't have anything to eat. Haven't you ever been kidnapped before?"

OOC-Could not think of a reply.

Without enough thinking, she said nervously ''But I am hungry.'' Maria said. ''May I have another drink then?'' she asked nervously but nicely.
FH Incorporated
24-07-2006, 05:02
Where are they at, Jaredcohenia? In your nation? Also, I am thinking of a rescue attempt or something. I could send someone to do an ''exchange''.
FH Incorporated
24-07-2006, 05:46
Where are they at, Jaredcohenia? In your nation? Also, I am thinking of a rescue attempt or something. I could send someone to do an ''exchange''.

Jaredcohenia, what do you think?
Jaredcohenia
24-07-2006, 05:50
OOC: I'm thinking they're in your nation.

IC:

"Fine." He yelled something in Jaredcohenian. "Go get this girl some McDonalds or something. And bring me back a large coke and fries while you're at it. The food will be here shortly."
FH Incorporated
24-07-2006, 05:53
OOC: I'm thinking they're in your nation.

IC:

"Fine." He yelled something in Jaredcohenian. "Go get this girl some McDonalds or something. And bring me back a large coke and fries while you're at it. The food will be here shortly."

OOC-They could be in your nation. How should I get them to get the ransom to you?

''Thank you.'' Maria said nicely, as he said to get her some food. Maria looked around and thought to herself. Here was a young girl trapped in a cellar with a Jaredcohenian Mafia leader.

''Can I get out of my chains to eat my food?''
Jaredcohenia
24-07-2006, 05:55
OOC: Jaredcohenia is in a civil war, can't risk it.

IC: Ivanovich shackled the girl's legs to the chair and unshackled one arm. "There."
FH Incorporated
24-07-2006, 06:12
OOC: Jaredcohenia is in a civil war, can't risk it.

IC: Ivanovich shackled the girl's legs to the chair and unshackled one arm. "There."

OOC-Ah. Well, what do you think of an exchange or rescue attempt or what not?

''Thank you.'' Maria said, moving her one arm. What food would she get? Could she eat a burger with one hand? Maria looked at him and said ''Thank you for getting me some food.''
Jaredcohenia
24-07-2006, 06:28
The man came back with a bag, Iosef took his stuff out and chucked the bag at the girl. "Knock yourself out."

OOC: Have the family wire the money to a bank account, then he'll disclose the info as to where the cellar is.
FH Incorporated
24-07-2006, 06:30
The man came back with a bag, Iosef took his stuff out and chucked the bag at the girl. "Knock yourself out."

OOC: Have the family wire the money to a bank account, then he'll disclose the info as to where the cellar is.

OOC-What is in the bag? Also, I can do that but perhaps you'd like a rescue attempt or something or a meeting in person? If not, then we can do the bank account thing.

Maria found a happy meal in the bag. She ate some of her food. ''Thank you.'' she said to Iosef. ''Can I have my other arm out of these chains so I can eat better?''
FH Incorporated
27-07-2006, 22:22
OOC-Sorry for my lateness. Jaredcohenia, are you still interested in this? Also, do you want the money wired or brought to Iosef by a person?
Jaredcohenia
27-07-2006, 22:37
"No way girl. What do you think I am, stupid?"

OOC-wired to a bank account
FH Incorporated
27-07-2006, 23:19
"No way girl. What do you think I am, stupid?"

OOC-wired to a bank account

''I'm not saying you are.'' Maria said.

OOC-Very well.

A man came in and said ''The money has been wired to your account.''
Jaredcohenia
27-07-2006, 23:24
"Hmm...25 mil richer." He shot the man in the chest. "Ha." In the cellar was a generator that one would use to power a house, Ivanovich turned it on and unshackled the girl. "Very well then, I must be on my way." He said as he left the room, locking the door behind him. "I do hope her family finds her."
FH Incorporated
28-07-2006, 00:19
"Hmm...25 mil richer." He shot the man in the chest. "Ha." In the cellar was a generator that one would use to power a house, Ivanovich turned it on and unshackled the girl. "Very well then, I must be on my way." He said as he left the room, locking the door behind him. "I do hope her family finds her."

OOC-I thought he would tell her family, well perhaps they could leave clues or something?

Maria was amazed and shocked when he shot the man. She made some noise for it.

Maria began to look around, she could tell he locked the door. Maria tried to see if she could pick the lock, she hoped she could. She ate some of the food and found a book, the Illiad by Homer, it seemed Iosef was into the Classics.

She sat down and read it, hoping that someone would find her. She did see the man and tried to help him, he was still living somewhat.
FH Incorporated
28-07-2006, 23:12
Jaredcohenia, what are bumps used for again?