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Hello. I am a newbie with an idea for an RP, my first on NS. The idea is that I will RP as a girl named Zara, who in my nation's history became a Queen or Empress. She was in a noble family with an abusive father (which I want someone else to play) and others. This RP would go through her life, from her childhood to her rise to Royal status (I would be the Monarch and others).

I do hope this kind of RP is acceptable to do on NS. If anyone is interested, post here and we can discuss it. Thank you for your time in reading.

In the RP, I will deal with things like the settings and names of characters. Just so you don't get confused or anything, I suppose.

Is anyone interested? Also, can anyone tell me if this kind of RP is acceptable to do on NS? Thanks.

This is an interesting RP, I haven't seen this type before. I don't see anything wrong with this, so long as it stays appropriate. I'm not a mod, but I don't think a mod will have a problem with this. You might want to add her involvement in international events, so it stays in this forum.

This is an interesting RP, I haven't seen this type before. I don't see anything wrong with this, so long as it stays appropriate. I'm not a mod, but I don't think a mod will have a problem with this. You might want to add her involvement in international events, so it stays in this forum.

This will be in International Incidents. Thanks for saying it is an interesting RP. I will make sure it stays appropiate. I hope everything goes ok. Are you interested in joining by the way?

I'm sorry, I'm involved in a lot of other RPs at this time. I would if I could, but I can't.

I'm sorry, I'm involved in a lot of other RPs at this time. I would if I could, but I can't.

That is ok with me, I understand. I do hope I can have people join in this. I understand that you can not be able to join in this. That is ok, I understand.

So far 53 views. Thank you to those who viewed my thread here. I do hope I'll find people to join the RP.

I'll write the father if you like.

I'll write the father if you like.

You could RP as the father if you want to. Would you be ok doing this kind of role? I am only making sure so I don't upset you or anything.

Does she have a sibling(preferably older male but doesn't matter)

Does she have a sibling(preferably older male but doesn't matter)

I was thinking on that, I am trying to remember my setup. I can have her have one or more sibling (s). Are you interested in being an older male sibling?

Yep.

Yep.

We can do this, I guess. I would like to know:

1. How many siblings would you be?
2. What would his role be and the such? Would he hate his father for abusing Claudia?

I would like info if you have any. Also, I will think of a name, I cover the names for the characters. However, Greek (My nation has Byzantine ways in it) names can be good.

I wouldn't mind playing a fairly young bodyguard. Obviously, he ages as time goes on to eventually become an old and trusted veteran protector. (Or mabey he dies young, I don't know.)

We can do this, I guess. I would like to know:

1. How many siblings would you be?
2. What would his role be and the such? Would he hate his father for abusing Claudia?

I would like info if you have any. Also, I will think of a name, I cover the names for the characters. However, Greek (My nation has Byzantine ways in it) names can be good.
1: Would prefere to be only one.
2. Role would be that of a brother, and it would probably depend on how the father abused the sister, and whether it was just her or all the father's children.

Would Raphael, Gabriel, or Michael be acceptable names?

I wouldn't mind playing a fairly bodyguard. Obviously, he ages as time goes on to eventually become an old and trusted veteran protector. (Or mabey he dies young, I don't know.)

That seems ok with me. Do you have any more info? Also, this RP will be RPing Zara's life, just so you know.

1: Would prefere to be only one.
2. Role would be that of a brother, and it would probably depend on how the father abused the sister, and whether it was just her or all the father's children.

Would Raphael, Gabriel, or Michael be acceptable names?

Those names are ok with me, I suppose. Archangels Gabriel and Michael. Gabriel would be good.

There may be other siblings. Also, the abuse can range from emotional to physical and sexual, I may do a mix. Also, the role of Zara's mother is open, I could do her if no one wants to, though who does the father could abuse the mother too, I was planning for that, I guess. I've heard that Hitler and Stalin both had abusive fathers for example, their mothers abused as well.

That seems ok with me. Do you have any more info? Also, this RP will be RPing Zara's life, just so you know.

Fairly *Young* bodyguard, sorry. Forgot a word.

Gimme some time to write up a bio. I'll probably have this guy torn over helping Zara by putting himself between the girl and her father and his patriotic duty by serving his ruler and master faithfully.

Fairly *Young* bodyguard, sorry. Forgot a word.

Gimme some time to write up a bio. I'll probably have this guy torn over helping Zara by putting himself between the girl and her father and his patriotic duty by serving his ruler and master faithfully.

That sounds good. Perhaps her father could use him to abuse Zara too, you don't have to if you don't want to. I would be fine doing your plan. Also, it sounds familiar to something I've heard before.

Those names are ok with me, I suppose. Archangels Gabriel and Michael. Gabriel would be good.

There may be other siblings. Also, the abuse can range from emotional to physical and sexual, I may do a mix. Also, the role of Zara's mother is open, I could do her if no one wants to, though who does the father could abuse the mother too, I was planning for that, I guess. I've heard that Hitler and Stalin both had abusive fathers for example, their mothers abused as well.
If it was generalized, ie: the father abused everyone, then he'd probably be only mildly protective/only stand up to the father on extreme cases
If it was specific, ie: Just abused the sister, then more likely to be more protective

Also, wasn't her name Claudia?

If it was generalized, ie: the father abused everyone, then he'd probably be only mildly protective/only stand up to the father on extreme cases
If it was specific, ie: Just abused the sister, then more likely to be more protective

Also, wasn't her name Claudia?

Claudia? You must be mistaken. The girl's name is Zara. Also, I could have it either generalized (abuse for everyone) or just the sister. What would you prefer it to be? I can bend my nation's history to make everything good for everyone, for this RP at least.

Claudia? You must be mistaken. The girl's name is Zara. Also, I could have it either generalized (abuse for everyone) or just the sister. What would you prefer it to be? I can bend my nation's history to make everything good for everyone, for this RP at least.
Wouldn't mind either way, but on post 14 you called her Claudia.

Wouldn't mind either way, but on post 14 you called her Claudia.

That was a mistake. It is Zara, not Claudia.

Is anyone else interested in joining? Also, to Theao and Ravea, just to confirm, can you tell me who you will be in the RP so I can make sure of things. Also, The Ctan, are you going to be playing as Zara's father? If not, I can get someone else but I understand if you don't want to or what not.

Theao, could you post a bio for your character? I was thinking of giving you a bio for the brother you would be but I guess you could make one up if you want. I could use it for something later.


Ravea and the others, you can post bios for your character if you want.

Could you get the bio for Zara up first so my stuff doesn't clash.

Could you get the bio for Zara up first so my stuff doesn't clash.

Certainly.

Name: Princess Zara (last name I am still thinking of)
Age: 10
Height: 5'6
Zara is the daughter of a noble man, she has some siblings. She is a sweet girl and has much intelligence, but does suffer from an abusive father.

Is this a good bio? If not, I can add more.

Name: Gabriel(If he would have any titles, please tell me, same last name as Zara)
Age: 16
Height: 5'10"

ooc: It's serviceable, thought additional physical traits might be good(eye/hair colour ect)

Name: Gabriel(If he would have any titles, please tell me, same last name as Zara)
Age: 16
Height: 5'10"

ooc: It's serviceable, thought additional physical traits might be good(eye/hair colour ect)

OOC-I am thinking of titles right now. Also, thank you for complimenting my bio for Zara.

Zara has blue eyes and is a brunette. She is a pretty girl, some people think this about Zara. Would any other info be needed? Also, we could get started some time, as soon as all the roles have been accounted for or something, I guess.

Fairly *Young* bodyguard, sorry. Forgot a word.

Gimme some time to write up a bio. I'll probably have this guy torn over helping Zara by putting himself between the girl and her father and his patriotic duty by serving his ruler and master faithfully.

Do you have a bio ready, Ravea? A bio for your bodyguard character?

OOC-I am thinking of titles right now. Also, thank you for complimenting my bio for Zara.

Zara has blue eyes and is a brunette. She is a pretty girl, some people think this about Zara. Would any other info be needed? Also, we could get started some time, as soon as all the roles have been accounted for or something, I guess.
Not really(thought hobbies might be nice).

Not really(thought hobbies might be nice).

Hobbies include sports, athletics, and other things, I guess. She also wants to grow up well, I guess, she does things any little girl would do and any child would in general.

Also, the mother is a devout Orthodox Christian (think Greek and Russian Orthodox, etc), I suppose. I have considered it. Stalin's mother was a devout woman who wanted Stalin in the Orthodox Church as a clergyman, I believe. That is a example.

Name: Brail Endir
Age:21
Height:6'3

A young and proficeint soldier who acts as a bodyguard under the Zara's father's orders. Recently moved from the battlefield to the Palace, Brail is the protected and sometimes part-time caretaker for the Zara and her sibilings.

Brail is sometimes seen carrying a custom and slightly modernized M-1 rifle while on guard duty, but for serious fights he weilds an large Mechem NTW 20 mm Anti-materiel rifle, a massive weapon which can be used against a variety of mechinized air and land targets, as well as any personell.

He always carries a massive and powerful 454. Casull 'Raging Bull' revolver in a hip holster and usually a long boot knife. Sometimes he'll be hiding a pair of Derringers in small wrist holsters as well. All his guns are loaded with custom incinderary rounds.

Brail wears a well-ironed black suit, usually with full body armor underneath.

Brail is, overall, friendly and quite fond of all the his employer's children, especially the young Zara. His first duty, however, is to Zara's father's wishes. He is quite patriotic, and while some consider him to be a bit overzelous, he is proud to serve his country.

Name: Brail Endir
Age:21
Height:6'3

A young and proficeint soldier who acts as a bodyguard under the King's orders. Recently moved from the battlefield to the King's Palace, Brail is the protected and sometimes part-time caretaker for the King's children.

Brail is sometimes seen carrying a large Ahlspiess lance-sword while on guard duty, but for serious fights he weilds a huge one-of-a-kind pair of scissors, capable of cutting into even the most sturdy platemail. He always carries a long dagger in an arm holster and usually a boot knife.

Brail prefers light armor over plate armor due to the extra speed and flexibility; in battle, he wears padded leather, guantlets, and well-made chainmail. Usually he does not even wear armor around the palace, and will only suit up for serious melees.

Brail is, overall, friendly and quite fond of all the king's children, especially the young Zara. His first duty, however, is to the King's wishes. He is quite patriotic, and while some consider him to be a bit overzelous, he is proud to serve his King and country.

Excellent bio, Ravea.

However:

1. The father is but a nobleman
2. I was going for modern era or something, I guess

I guess you can keep him the way he is if you want, these two things were only things I wanted to tell you. Thank you for joining up. We could start this now, if you and Theao wanted. Though I would want to see if anyone else is interested. If not, I will RP as people like Zara's siblings or her mother (which I may say is open, another person could RP as her mother)

Excellent bio, Ravea.

However:

1. The father is but a nobleman
2. I was going for modern era or something, I guess

I guess you can keep him the way he is if you want, these two things were only things I wanted to tell you. Thank you for joining up. We could start this now, if you and Theao wanted. Though I would want to see if anyone else is interested. If not, I will RP as people like Zara's siblings or her mother (which I may say is open, another person could RP as her mother)

Oh. Shit. I should of asked what era.

I'll modify the weapons and armor accordingly, then.

Oh. Shit. I should of asked what era.

I'll modify the weapons and armor accordingly, then.

That's ok. I understand. Just tell me when you've fixed the bio and that up. Thanks for joining in!

Zing!

Correct changes made.

Name: Brail Endir
Age:21
Height:6'3

A young and proficeint soldier who acts as a bodyguard under the Zara's father's orders. Recently moved from the battlefield to the Palace, Brail is the protected and sometimes part-time caretaker for the Zara and her sibilings.

Brail is sometimes seen carrying a custom and slightly modernized M-1 rifle while on guard duty, but for serious fights he weilds an large Mechem NTW 20 mm Anti-materiel rifle, a massive weapon which can be used against a variety of mechinized air and land targets, as well as any personell.

He always carries a massive and powerful 454. Casull 'Raging Bull' revolver in a hip holster and usually a long boot knife. Sometimes he'll be hiding a pair of Derringers in small wrist holsters as well. All his guns are loaded with custom incinderary rounds.

Brail wears a well-ironed black suit, usually with full body armor underneath.

Brail is, overall, friendly and quite fond of all the his employer's children, especially the young Zara. His first duty, however, is to Zara's father's wishes. He is quite patriotic, and while some consider him to be a bit overzelous, he is proud to serve his country.

Good edits to a still excellent bio, Ravea. Thanks for clarifying things.

Zing!

Correct changes made.

Thanks for fixing them up. Also, when do you think we can start this RP?

Thanks for fixing them up. Also, when do you think we can start this RP?

Anytime you want, I suppose.

Anytime you want, I suppose.

I guess I could. How about now perhaps? If not, then soon. Let me plan the last bits out.

I guess I could. How about now perhaps? If not, then soon. Let me plan the last bits out.

Sure thing. I'd suggest starting a new thread for it, however.

At the moment, I'm exausted, so I'm going to turn in. Goodnight.

Sure thing. I'd suggest starting a new thread for it, however.

At the moment, I'm exausted, so I'm going to turn in. Goodnight.

We could do that, start a new thread. However, do you think you could create a thread for the RP? I don't know if I will be able to but if you don't want to, then I will, I suppose. I hope this RP is ok and goes ok. I understand fully. Have a good night and sleep and I hope to hear from you soon.

Are you guys still interested in this? Are any others interested?

Are you guys still interested in this? Are any others interested?

Shit...Sorry. Yea, I'm still interested, but I've been really busy recently. I'll be able to join now that things have cooled down recently.

Shit...Sorry. Yea, I'm still interested, but I've been really busy recently. I'll be able to join now that things have cooled down recently.

That is good you are still interested. I wonder if Theao is. Do you want to start now perhaps so that when Theao is online, we can all start it off together?

That is good you are still interested. I wonder if Theao is. Do you want to start now perhaps so that when Theao is online, we can all start it off together?
You called?

You called?

Yes, I did. I was wondering if you are still interested in this. I am going to start soon, perhaps now. Also, do you Theao or you Ravea have a suggestion on how to start?

Yes I am. Could start with her being born, then time-jump to however old you want her to be when the story begins.

Yes I am. Could start with her being born, then time-jump to however old you want her to be when the story begins.

I could do that. I will begin then. The story will begin from lets say from when she is 10, her siblings could be also dealing with abuse I guess.

Any other suggestions on how to start though? Just curious.

I have started the RP. See ''A Girl's Story'' thread.

Hold on a moment. It's 1920 in the beginning of the story...but Endir's weapons are top of the line year-2000's modern equiptment. Are we simply to assume that this technology is avaliable, or should I change his weapons to those of a 1920's style?

Or...you know, he could be a time traveler or something.

Or not.

Hold on a moment. It's 1920 in the beginning of the story...but Endir's weapons are top of the line year-2000's modern equiptment. Are we simply to assume that this technology is avaliable, or should I change his weapons to those of a 1920's style?

Or...you know, he could be a time traveler or something.

Or not.

How about it is set then in that time period (near 2000's)? I guess we can do that. If not, we can do what you would like, I guess. I can bend BS' history I suppose. Also, we are starting the RP now. Look for the thread- ''A Girl's Story''.

How about it is set then in that time period (near 2000's)? I guess we can do that. If not, we can do what you would like, I guess. I can bend BS' history I suppose. Also, we are starting the RP now. Look for the thread- ''A Girl's Story''.

Sure thing. 2000's, then? I'm a little lazy to revamp Endir's weapons a third time.

I'll get started on a post now.

Sure thing. 2000's, then? I'm a little lazy to revamp Endir's weapons a third time.

I'll get started on a post now.

Yes, we can do the 2000's. Ignore the 1920's thing. I'll wait for your post and any possible one from Theao. I do hope that we can get someone to play the father. Any other nations interested?

Ctan expressed interest in being the father, and can I get something to work with, so I avoid GMing your character.

Ctan expressed interest in being the father, and can I get something to work with, so I avoid GMing your character.

We will wait to when Ctan is online then, I guess. Also, I will do a post on the RP when I can, that was an intro there, I guess.

Did we say we were going for all the kids including Zara and Gabriel being abused, Theao? Just making sure is all.

Did we say we were going for all the kids including Zara and Gabriel being abused, Theao? Just making sure is all.
Up to you.

Up to you.

We could do that, I guess.

To The Ctan: Are you still interested in being the father?

The father role is open still. Unless you are still interested, The Ctan. Are you?