Roman Greek Kukaria
20-04-2006, 22:26
OOC-This is a closed RP, it is just a look at Roman Greek Kukaria. However, you can tell me how I'm doing and that.
IC-Trinitarianople was the capital of Roman Greek Kukaria. Megas Doux Ferdinand, his wife Grand Duchess Juliet and his daughter, Anastasia (sometimes he called her Ana or Anna for short) lived in the Palace of the Twelve Apostles in Resurrection Square. The Palace of the Twelve Apostles was more of a citadel (perhaps similar to ones in Russia). The Citadel was surrounded by towers and walls, the Palace connected to a Cathedral (the Cathedral of the Theotokos), a barracks and other things.
The Throne Room was decorated with gold and other expensive things. For example behind the throne was a icon of Christ's Resurrection. The Cathedral of the Theotokos was named after the Virgin Mary or Theotokos as she is addressed in Orthodoxy. The barracks was of the Ducal Guard, the group responsible for guarding the Ducal Family.
Today, Megas Doux Ferdinand was working in his office on notes. His office was a ok one, the door outside had a icon of the Virgin Mary and Christ as a child on it. As he worked, he greeted many people like Juliet, his wife, Anastasia, and ministers.
OOC-Is this good so far? Any suggestions or anything? Constructive criticism only please.
IC-Trinitarianople was the capital of Roman Greek Kukaria. Megas Doux Ferdinand, his wife Grand Duchess Juliet and his daughter, Anastasia (sometimes he called her Ana or Anna for short) lived in the Palace of the Twelve Apostles in Resurrection Square. The Palace of the Twelve Apostles was more of a citadel (perhaps similar to ones in Russia). The Citadel was surrounded by towers and walls, the Palace connected to a Cathedral (the Cathedral of the Theotokos), a barracks and other things.
The Throne Room was decorated with gold and other expensive things. For example behind the throne was a icon of Christ's Resurrection. The Cathedral of the Theotokos was named after the Virgin Mary or Theotokos as she is addressed in Orthodoxy. The barracks was of the Ducal Guard, the group responsible for guarding the Ducal Family.
Today, Megas Doux Ferdinand was working in his office on notes. His office was a ok one, the door outside had a icon of the Virgin Mary and Christ as a child on it. As he worked, he greeted many people like Juliet, his wife, Anastasia, and ministers.
OOC-Is this good so far? Any suggestions or anything? Constructive criticism only please.