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The people of Independent Utah were led by a constitutional monarchy. During one day, the head of the Mormon Church, the Prime Minister and the Emperor met in a meeting to discuss diplomacy with other nations. ''Emperor, we must build relations with other nations. So we can survive in this world that God gave us.'' the Prime Minister said. ''I concur. We must have diplomatic relations with other nations.'' said the head of the Mormon Church. The Emperor agreed and sent out a decree.

''To the nations of the world,
the Peace and Grace of God Our Father be with each of you. I, the Emperor of Independent Utah, in accordance with the Prime Minister and the head of the Mormon Church have decided to open diplomatic relations with other established nations. If any nation wishes to open relations with my nation, they may request it. Peace be with you all.

Signed,
The Emperor of Independent Utah''

From: Allied Union Grand Senate
To: Independent Utah

The Allied Union is interested in opening relations with Independent Utah and would like to engage in an embassy exchange with said nation.

-End Transmission-

Official Imperial Communique
The Democratic Empire of Cravan is also interested in opening relations with Independent Utah. We look forward to your response.

The Emperor was pleased with the offers of diplomacy from Cravan and Velkya. He had this reply for them.

''To the nations of Velkya and Cravan,
Peace be with you. Independent Utah accepts making diplomatic relations with your nations. We hope that negotiations can begin soon. Please reply when your are able to.''

The Republic of Monkey Fights would be willing to send an envoy to establish diplomatice relations with Independent Utah. Monkey Fights would also gladly recieve any envoy sent to our capital, Chimp City. Please notify our government if you, Independent Utah, wish to proceed in this process.

El Presidente
MF

Independent Utah accepts diplomacy with Monkey Fights. We will want to have a negotiation with your nation.

We can begin negotiations right away, but I am afraid not in person. We currently have a crisi brewing outside our borders that demands our immediate attention. It would be quicker to not do it in person, too.

Monkey Fight will be sending an envoy of the following to staff and embassy in the capital of IU, once that name is revealed. This enoy will include:
50 Personal
1 ambassador
5 body guards
10 security officers
3 translators
25 office clerks, staffers, etc.
6 Diplomats

2 Armored Limousines

4 Security Motorcycles

Our office will require at least 5,000 sq ft, which we will appropiatley compensate your government for. Please notify our country of the envoy we hope to graciously recieve in the near future. Let this be the path to a long and prosperous diplomatic relationship.

El Presidente
MF

We can begin negotiations soon, Cravan, in any way you want to. We understand the crisis situation that you are involved in. Monkey Fights, We accept your terms and we will help you with an embassy in our nation.

From: Queen Lehana of the Nation of Tarayshia
To: Independent Utah

Hello, I the queen of Tarayshia am interested in setting up a diplamatic relationship with your nation.
Please respond with any questions,

Sincerely,
Queen Lehana

Independent Utah accepts opening diplomatic relations with Tarayshia. We only wish to ask for basic info of your nation.

Hello,
Tarayshia thanks you for accepting us as a diplamatic relationship. What kind of basic information do you need? We would gladdly fill out a question air for you if that would be helpful.

Please fill out a questionaire. All we want is basic info about your nation, what is it like and so on.

Hello,
The nation of Tarayshia has many people, and there is no set religion; all religions may be practiced. We respect the nature and our national animal the lioness. Our population is still growing, unfortunately our eccomony is struggling right now. My taxes are high and my heart does go out to my people. We consintrate on defense, law and order, and education. Tarayshia has many beaches, warm weather and mountains with forests as well.
Please feel free to inquire about our nation
Queen Lehana

Thank you for the info on your nation, Tarayshia. We would like to establish diplomatic relations between us.

The queen of Tarayshia accepts your offer of deplomicy.

The Emperor of Independent Utah thanks the Queen of Tarayshia for opening diplomatic relations with our nation.