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MandalMotors - Starship Division "Unveils 1st ship off the assembly

Mandalore Prime
05-04-2006, 20:20
Admins Please Deleate this Thread
Snake Eaters
05-04-2006, 21:00
Saying a squadron of your ships is unstoppable just seems like godmodding to me. Also, turning a target into slag in seconds? Again, it just seems so unrealistic.

It's not flaming, it's constructive crit.
WinTrees
05-04-2006, 21:05
To: Mandalore Prime
From: Wintrees Royal Protection

We'll take 3, should go well with the clones. We request that they're painted black however.
Mandalore Prime
05-04-2006, 21:12
Snake Eater: Description has been modified..Thanks for the heads up.

WinTrees: Order CONFIRMED...Entire Order will be ready in One NS yr.
(also since you did not specify...and you being the 1st customer...The Auxillary Craft will be added as a promotional gift...)

Total Price: $4.5T
Taldaan
06-04-2006, 17:55
ooc: Only 44,000 tonnes? This should be several million tonnes, to be honest.
Mandalore Prime
07-04-2006, 21:22
ooc: Only 44,000 tonnes? This should be several million tonnes, to be honest.

My bad....Guess i made a few too many typo's...5,975,000 tonnes is the actual tonnage
Gonna recheck all my other designs before any future releases.

Thanks for the heads up
Otagia
07-04-2006, 21:41
OOC: I don't really think calling a vessel unstoppable is godmodding. It's just good advertising, I do it all the time. Now, RPing it as unstoppable is a different story.
The American Privateer
20-04-2006, 12:12
a suggestion, k = thousand, m = million, b = billion, t = trillion

right now, you have them priced to look like it will cost trillions
Underwater Asylum
20-04-2006, 13:00
((Indeed, stating in the description that your ships are unstoppable is different to actually having them be unstoppable. And who said the target was of any significant size?))
Der Angst
20-04-2006, 13:28
a suggestion, k = thousand, m = million, b = billion, t = trillion

right now, you have them priced to look like it will cost trillionsWhich is what an FTL-capable five million ton ship should cost. Your point?
Mationbuds
20-04-2006, 13:36
The Galactic Empire of Mationbuds wishes to order 2 of the Cruisers to test if they can fit into our current fleets and if the fighting capability is up to the standard of the ships we have of around the same capabilites .

However we do not need the starfighters and so the total for the 2 cruisers is 3 Trillion Dollars . We would send the money to you upon receiving the ships .
Mandalore Prime
20-04-2006, 15:00
The Galactic Empire of Mationbuds wishes to order 2 of the Cruisers to test if they can fit into our current fleets and if the fighting capability is up to the standard of the ships we have of around the same capabilites .

However we do not need the starfighters and so the total for the 2 cruisers is 3 Trillion Dollars . We would send the money to you upon receiving the ships .

Apparently, the old Quartermaster General has made yet another Mathematical Cost Estimation error...
Because of his Negligence & Lack of Foresight... Both Cruisers will be supplied to you for $750 Billion Total


ORDER CONFIRMED

Thomas Kincaid
Quarter Master General
Mandalore Prime
Mationbuds
20-04-2006, 15:12
Apparently, the old Quartermaster General has made yet another Mathematical Cost Estimation error...
Because of his Negligence & Lack of Foresight... Both Cruisers will be supplied to you for $750 Billion Total


ORDER CONFIRMED

Thomas Kincaid
Quarter Master General
Mandalore Prime

We have sucessfully wired the money over and will conduct a series of tests and trials . If the cruiser proves useful and good , we would order more . If we do order more , do expect an order of approximately around 300 more of these cruisers . Which would ammount to 112.5 Trillion Dollars .

Signed ,
Sith Lord Darth Bane , Grand Adviser
The Galactic Empire of Mationbuds