Nerotika
19-02-2006, 21:40
(Basicly this thread is for my friend who has no idea how to RP...or at least thats what I think. anyway if any other "noobs" want to join in and get some practice go ahead. this is purly a closed rp for beginners and me the master. ^.^ I feel like this is my community servise for the day) :p
A lesser land
19-02-2006, 22:00
Capital building, Upperland, A Lesser Land
Kaiser. Lloyd C. Steel was siting at his desk when one of his secretarys walks in "sir i've got teribal new's the diplomat that was sent to nerotika has not reported in three weeks we have just resieved word that he was shot" the kaiser stands up"call the secretary of defense and tell him to get here imediatly" the secratary leaves with a sense of urgency.
Lesser Ribena
20-02-2006, 17:42
OOC: Sorry for jumping in. A few helpful hints:
First type up your RP posts in a MS Word program or similar, to eliminate spelling mistakes etc. For example the above post should read:
Capital building, Upperland, A Lesser Land
Kaiser. Lloyd C. Steel was sitting at his desk when one of his secretaries walks in: "Sir, I've got terrible news; the diplomat that was sent to Nerotika has not reported in three weeks and we have just received word that he was shot!“ The Kaiser stands up. "Call the Secretary of Defence (OOC: replace with “Defense” if American) and tell him to get here immediately". The secretary leaves with a sense of urgency.
It just makes it easier for others to read and understand. I know many of us have trouble spelling but simply using a basic spelling aid can help immensly.
Otherwise pretty good for a first attempt.
Don't take this the wrong way, i'm just trying to help you out a bit.
The "stickies" at the top of the forums could help you as well. For example: http://forums.jolt.co.uk/showthread.php?t=437653
Anyway, i'll not stop interrupting now and let you carry on...