NationStates Jolt Archive

((OCC: This is basically a change of paths for my nation, and instead of the whole “my nation had a military coup, this, this and that happened, etc.”, I decided to actually tell how it happened. Imagine this was a war RP, only there is only one nation involved. There will also be a short summary of what happened Every chapter.))

CHAPTER ONE


-------------8pm, Mir-TV News Station, during the evening news---------------

“Ok… we’re on in 5…4…3…2…1…”

“Good evening, I’m Lillian Smith, and this is today’s news.” The news-anchorwoman said. “Today we kick off with a hot story, earlier this year we heard that there was a mutiny and that 1000 Infantry Division men, along with an entire ship’s crew, had stolen an Iowa Class Battleship, from a Mirhuellian Navy shipyard. Well, yesterday the trial of those men finally happened, and today’s final outcome was a shocker, apparently, these men will merely be exonerated from their duties, with full retirement.” Lillian vividly exclaimed. “Wait… Hold on, are you sure…All right. This just in, an unknown source has just delivered proof that the ship wasn’t in fact stolen, but this was all part of an operation in a war. Now while this comforts many, let’s stop to think. Is it not the nation’s policy to always consult the people before going to war? If they did this with out alerting the people, and apparently not even congress, what’s stopping them from doing any other military action? I personally think that the constitution should be revised and prevent this sort of thing, but we can’t dwell on this subject for the rest of the program, so let’s move on. Today a high school student…”



----------------------------1am, Unknown location----------------------------------------

“Great Leader, every thing went according to plan. The news is out, and I can only think that, once we mobilize, the citizens will join our cause!”

“Excellent… send the word to all our cells, we will strike simultaneously at 5pm tomorrow, and rid this once glorious nation, of its Capitalistic rule...” calmly said the “Great Leader”. “For a socialist Mirhuell!” he shouted.

“For socialism!” The men shouted.

And as everyone drank and were merry, a Banner with a Two-Headed Lion in a red background, was unfolded.



((Summary: Introductive chapter, Basically setting up a motive for the rebellion, the reason why there will be no resistance from civilians, in fact there will be a great support from the people, and their goal))

OOC: Wow. Good job so far.

CHAPTER 2

----------------The following day, 5pm, on the main avenue of Niralle---------------

It was quiet afternoon, until now… Suddenly a red smear appears upon the horizon, soon the smear takes form, and it takes the form of a crowd of men, armed with rifles, the Red Mirhuellian Liberators, as they call themselves, soon the people of Niralle open their doors, and celebrate their arrival, many join them armed with nothing more than dreams, hopes, and their set of kitchen knives… Of course this didn’t go unnoticed, the minute they were identified, the Mirhuellian guards, immediately asked none other than the Defense Minister himself, Araon Hellfang.

“Sir! An unknown gathering of armed men are heading this way, what should we do?” the commander asked.

“Barricade the entrance! And get ready to fire at any sign of attack!” the Defense Minister shouted “Aim directly for the eyes, do you…”

“You will do no such thing commander!” The President exclaimed, interrupting Araon.
“You will let them pass, and tell their leader to come to this office.”

“Then we kill them all! Great plan Erathon…Quite devious, in fact.” Araon said.

“No, the population wants them to have my place, and so they shall… I will not allow any bloodshed. I will surrender the government to their faction, but on my terms…”

------------------------------- A few minutes later----------------------------------------------



“So we agree then? I will surrender this nation, but you will not execute anyone, or mistreat the population of this nation.” Erathon proclaimed.

“Of course, but just to state something, what you consider to be your terms, were our terms, only shortened, we will abolish all major private industries, but a small private sector will exist, in short-to-medium term.” The Socialist leader called Nitenor explained

“Very well, here, this is my letter of democratic surrender, you are now the leader of Mirhuell, and may you never be wrong, for all our sakes…” Erathon wished.



((Yep, two chapters, the Rebellion was peaceful with zero casualties, soon Deals with other nations will be resumed (the VERY small Friendship with Anagonia, thanks to that attempted aid, and others, mostly the creations of new weaponry.))

OOC: Interesting...I like how for once there is a weak-willed character on NS. I don't think anyone else would surrender the country peacefully. However, West Corinthia will probably put economic sanctions against you when they hear about this. We don't like rebels...or socialists.