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Take Da Planet, Build Da Empire! (Ork FT Intro)

Waaaaaagh
04-12-2005, 14:28
(OOC: Okay, this intro is closed at the moment, but if anyone wants to propose an RP, I'd like to do a few one-on-one RPs with certain empires finding my little Ork Empire. Basically, my Orks have just taken this former human planet and is going to capture the technology for constructing ships and weapons, so as to allow me to start expanding later on. Also, comments are welcome.)

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The western fringes of the former Imperium of Man have been beset by Alien menaces since the Emperor’s Great Crusade to reunite humanity. Attacked by Eldar, Ork and Tyranid alike, planets in the Segmentum Pacificus had always struggled to stand firm against these incursions with the full backing of the Imperial Guard and the Holy Fleet as they fought united under the shining light of the God-Emperor.

Than the Imperium fell. Left with diminishing supplies of food and ammunition, a constant attacking force and no way of being reinforced or evacuated from a dead Empire, many of the planets on the western fringe fell quickly to the tide of Xenos that drowned much of humanity in an orgy of blood and violence.

One such planet, sitting on the very border of the former Imperium, was Danubus III. A glistening jewel in the crown of the Danubus system, it had served as the main staging point for both the Navy and the Ground Forces of the God-Emperor in their activities in the west since its reunification. When the Imperium fell, it had been standing defiantly against the tide of an Ork Waaaaaagh that had been on the verge of losing its invasion. This quickly changed.

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Ghazgaroth stood on the hilltop overlooking Danubus City and grinned, his massive jaw setting in a slavering smile that showed his immense crooked teeth stained with the blood of the Imperium. Below him, in the valley that held the Hive capital of the planet, the ‘Boyz’ of his army ripped and tore at the Guardsman that vainly attempted to protect their last place of human salvation from the green tide that wished to wipe them from the face of the planet.

The huge Ork turned to face one of his inferiors, his technology-adapted frame dwarfing the smaller green-skins nearby. Ghazgaroth had seen battles, and this was one of his easier encounters. His left arm had been completely ripped off in a fight with another Ork clan during the organisation of the Waaaaaagh, and had been replaced by a large, intimidating twin-barrelled Bolter gun, whilst his right hand had been incinerated recently in combat with an Imperial Hellhound, and in its place sat a large claw that hummed idly, its reaction connected into the Warboss’ muscle reflexes by a particularly smart Mek-Boy. A third, robotic arm displaying a massive buzz-saw blade had been grafted below this claw, connected to activate when the claw was closed. The mighty leader loomed over one of his smaller counterparts that had been chosen as an assistant, and bared his teeth with a growl.

“Dem Humies is tearin’ me Boyz apart!” He roared, stomping a foot and causing the ground to shake. “Where’z me big shooty tings?”

The smaller Ork cowered in the face of his titanic superior. “Yer big shooty tings iz on the way, Boss,” he stammered, shielding his face from the rancid, meaty breath of his leader. “Dey got stuck in a fight wiv some Humie tanks, but deyz on der way now.”

Growling in anger, Ghazgaroth turned back to the battle. His Orks had managed to gain some ground on the stubborn remnants of the 812th Cadian Imperial Guard that held back their bloodthirsty assault, but now the Boyz were in range of the cities emplaced weapon systems. As he watched, massive twin-linked Lascannons and super-heavy Bolter emplacements swivelled to bear on his forces and unleash a continuous hellfire of lead and laser. A missile from one of the cities rocket defences roared forth and struck a large group of Rokkit Boyz that had been attacking the city walls in an attempt to create a beachhead.

Ghazgaroth snarled in fury once again. His assault was beginning to look shaky, and the Warboss hated losing. In rage, he swivelled on his armoured torso and grabbed a Gretchen that had been tending to a nearby Wartruk, squeezing the small green slave in his massive grip and cutting the creature in half as his buzz-saw roared to life automatically. He threw the corpse part of the way down the hill and emitted a throaty sigh.

“Alright!” He suddenly yelled to his sub-commanders, who jumped at the sound of his voice. “Tell da Boyz to pull back to da bottom ov de hill, and wait for da big shooty tings.”

One of his Sub-Commanders looked at him in astonishment. “But we’z Orks!” He cried. “We’z don’t pull back. Pulling back is for da Humies!”

Ghazgaroth grinned again, slobbering over his two massive teeth. “Dat’s why me da Warboss and you aint. Now DO IT!” He bellowed at the smaller Ork, leaning his face down closer. The Ork cowered, and ran off down the hill with his other counterparts.

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Lieutenant Colonel Horatio Grimm reloaded his Laspistol and crouched down underneath the bunker window to observe the Ork attack. Grimm had fought losing battles before, and this was a losing battle, without question. He’d turned losing battles around before, but without the support of a wider Imperium, he knew they would die today.

‘Well,’ Grimm thought as he locked his Laspistol magazine into position and took aim at the Greenskins. ‘I’m dying with a pile of these bastards lying at my feet.’

Turning to a Sergeant attached to his squad, he barked out the man’s name. “Hardy, get me a Heavy Support detachment to reinforce the third sector of the east wall; the superstructure is starting to show signs of damage.”

Hardy nodded, and moved off to issue Grimm’s orders. Next to the Lieutenant Colonel, Commissar Faustus reloaded his own weapon and fired several shots at the Orks. “They seem to be retreating, Sir!” He exclaimed, as the Ork forces began falling back under the supporting fire of the city’s weapons.

Grimm set his mouth in a thin line. “Orks only retreat to regroup, Commissar.” He glanced over at the other officer. “A man of your experience should know that.”

Faustus looked across at his CO. “But surely we will be victorious! Look how the Greenskins run; it’s only a matter-”

The rest of his words were drowned out by a terrific roar, followed by a massive explosion that shook the bunker like a plastic toy. Grimm automatically ducked, shielding his head from the falling debris of the roof, before looking up through the window. “What the hell was that?” he yelled. Then he heard Faustus gasp, and followed the Commissars gaze.

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The Ork Titan shuddered over the lip of the valley and wheezed to a halt, steam and fumes hissing from exhaust vents and ramshackle armour. Standing nearly 100 feet tall, the huge killing machine resembled a massive Killa Kan, bristling with guns and missile weapons. It rotated on its torso to face the weakened wall, and let forth several missiles from a pod on its upper arm. The wall erupted in a flash of light, armour and rockcrete flying in every direction and causing a huge hole in the side of the entrenchments.

Ghazgaroth roared in delight, joined quickly by several of the Orks standing around him. The wall was breached. “Come on, Boyz!” he yelled. “We’z got a way in! We’z take da city and capture da technology.” He lifted his head to the sky and roared. “WAAAAAAGH!”

The roar echoed over the entire battlefield, quickly joined by each Ork on the battlefield as they charged towards the whole in the defences, and the last human outpost on the planet.
Chronosia
04-12-2005, 14:47
Orks; a foul blight upon the face of the galaxy. When the Adeptus Mechanicus had sent forth probes during the Age of Strife; the piecemeal signals that had returned past the warp-storms had assured them of one, horrifying truth.

The Universe was Orkdom.

A more populous species there had never been, besides the hordes of Humanity; or the relentless menace of the Tyranids. These things were inconsequential next to the brutality and ingenuity of the Ork. Ancient data-slates had proved this with word of Armageddon; and the two wars of the Great Beast Ascendant.

Now; however; there was no Imperium of Man, no true force to stand against the vile Ork and all it's xeno ways; nothing, that was....Besides the Imperium. The Chronosian Imperium. And it was one of their strike teams; that now tore through the warp; orbing the world held in the vile clutch of the green tide.

"Brother-Captain; we are in orbit of the afflicted world..."

"Excellent; prepare all Marines for imminent drop; ready the great batteries; I want surgical strikes on the main bulk of their forces; a strafing attack of orbital bombardment, followed by a strategic drop; our forces will divide and they will conquer. In the name of the Ruinous Powers..."

For the Orks would not know the Imperium's plans; that a great reconquista be begun; that worlds once loyal to the False Emperor, and any world that stood between them and their goals, should fall to the great God-Emperor, Remiel De Drakan; Scion of the Four Powers; and Lord of Chaos Ascendant...

And so it was that the great guns crackled and hissed; howling as the shells hurtled down upon the world; and the Orks would raise their ears, not to chants of bloodlust, or the insane, half-literate prayers to Gork or Mork; but the shrill demented choirs of wailing shell-fire.
Spizania
04-12-2005, 15:00
OOC: Is this general FT or just Warhammer 40k?
Waaaaaagh
04-12-2005, 15:14
OOC: I'm happy with doing either, really. But at the moment, I think I'm going to close this to be just between me and Chronosia for now.
Waaaaaagh
04-12-2005, 16:26
The former Palace of the Imperial Governor had once stood as a proud monument to the strength of the Imperium’s political system. Now, it was a damaged and dilapidated building, its windows bordered up and its grounds surrounded by gun nests that had been used as a last ditch defence against the invading Ork forces. Now, its grounds were littered with the bodies of Guardsmen, the burning wreckage of tanks and the Ork forces that milled around, stealing weapons and food from the corpses. The Palace was draped with hastily built banners – mere pieces of wood with ‘Waaaaaagh!’ scrawled in the blood of Imperium citizens, but symbolising the strength of the Ork forces of Ghazgaroth.

Inside the Office of the Governor, Ghazgaroth sat in the creaking chair of the former planet leader, barely able to support his massive frame. He munched on the arm of the former Planetary Governor, whose corpse had been removed to another room after it had begun to smell.

“Alright Boyz,” the Warboss growled, leaning on the desk and causing one of the legs to bend as he looked at his Sub commanders. “What ‘av we got to fight wiv?”

One of the smaller Orks spoke up. “Well, we’v got a million Boyz ta fight wiv, and we’v got about a hundred Humie tanks an’ four big shooty tings.”

One of the other Orks chimed in. “Also, we’v got da city defences ta shoot wiv, and we’v got five Kill Kroozers and twenty Ram Ships in da orbit.”

Ghazgaroth groaned, stretching short green legs out under the desk. “Right den, we need ta’ start buildin’ new tings. Now-”

His sentence was interrupted by a terrific crash. Ghazgaroth grabbed the table as the Palace shuddered. “Wat was dat?” He roared.

One of the Mek-Boyz switched on his radio and conversed with the ships in orbit. “We’v got Humie ships in da orbit attacking wiv big gunz, Boss!” He cried.

Ghazgaroth snarled. “Tell da ships to attack der Humies and drive dem away.” He turned to the Mek-Boy. “’Ave we got control of da orbital gunz?”

The Mek-Boy nodded. “We’v got control of three of da guns left.”

Ghazgaroth nodded and grinned. “Tell ‘em ta fire!”

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In orbit of the planet, three large Orbital Platforms rotated on their axis and brought rows of Lance Batteries and Missile Pods to bear on the Chronosian vessels. They began firing, beams of light and rows of missiles belching forth to attack. In another part of orbit, the Ork fleet began to burn their engines to get into firing range; heavily armoured Kill Kroozers flanked with agile Ram Ships blew towards the attacking vessels in a bid to defend their fledgling Waaaaaagh.
Soviet Destruction
04-12-2005, 17:32
Can I point out that an ork titan is called a gargant also a commisar would not be spoken to like this “A man of your experience should know that.” as he would shoot the man that said it.But apart from that it is fine.Also I would like to do an eldar vs orks 1on1 RP.
Waaaaaagh
04-12-2005, 20:31
Can I point out that an ork titan is called a gargant also a commisar would not be spoken to like this “A man of your experience should know that.” as he would shoot the man that said it.But apart from that it is fine.Also I would like to do an eldar vs orks 1on1 RP.

OOC: Fair enough with the Gargant thing, but the Commissar was being spoken to by his CO, so he wouldn't shoot him. I'll get back to you on the RP idea, after this thing with Chronosia.
Waaaaaagh
05-12-2005, 18:38
OOC: Bump
MelekTaus
05-12-2005, 18:46
OOC: Fair enough with the Gargant thing, but the Commissar was being spoken to by his CO, so he wouldn't shoot him. I'll get back to you on the RP idea, after this thing with Chronosia.


-Cough- I would like to just remind you of some background info from the Imperial Guardsman's hand book. Commisars are members of the Imperial Guard army, yes, but are ENTIRELY seperate from the chain of command, and instead hold their own powers to deal with cowardice and incompitance IN ALL RANKS. That includes High Lord Generals, as well as the common human grunt. To a commisar, there is no higher CO above himself than the God-Emperor.
Waaaaaagh
05-12-2005, 18:57
-Cough- I would like to just remind you of some background info from the Imperial Guardsman's hand book. Commisars are members of the Imperial Guard army, yes, but are ENTIRELY seperate from the chain of command, and instead hold their own powers to deal with cowardice and incompitance IN ALL RANKS. That includes High Lord Generals, as well as the common human grunt. To a commisar, there is no higher CO above himself than the God-Emperor.

OOC: Okay fair enough, I accept that was incorrect, but it seems to be a bit of a small point that everyone is picking on.