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Umvitz This Means War!

Kakk
25-11-2005, 17:35
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Zanziik
25-11-2005, 17:41
[ooc: Don't sink to his level. You seem like an ok RPer but you need to take his insults as out of context. That means that you have no actual reason to invade him. I know, it's tough, but with the so many newbies out there, you'll get used to it.]
Kakk
25-11-2005, 17:44
[ooc: Don't sink to his level. You seem like an ok RPer but you need to take his insults as out of context. That means that you have no actual reason to invade him. I know, it's tough, but with the so many newbies out there, you'll get used to it.]


Fine i'll delete this
The Helghan Empire
25-11-2005, 18:29
Nah, attack him. I'd like to see someone to shut him up. He has extremely poor RP skills, and he insults those who help him.
Morgandia
26-11-2005, 02:48
the morgan assassin crept closer... sweat dropping from his brow... the tension in the air... the weight of the gun... it was too much.slowly, he crept out of the shadows, carefully aiming his rifle. zooming in, he targeted the representative of Kakk.

the president of morgandia issued an order, and that order was this: to assassinate the representative of Kakk, for attempting a declaration of war on his ally, the Kingdom of Umvitz. the president's orders were clear: a team of eight assassins would be dropped of at a conference which Kakk held annually. the would escort the lead assassin, fortundshot, to the main hall, where, from air duct, would fire two shots each at the representative and his two flanking bodyguards. he and his team would fight they're way to the rendevous area on top of the building, where a helicopter would pick them up. two fighter jets would escort the chopper to Kakk's main port. and then the would leave.

remembering this the assassin, corporal fortundshot, wiped the sweat from his brow, steadied his gun, and fired.

he fired six shots, two into the representative, and two each for the bodyguards. the room was silent for a moment, and then all hell broke loose. men and women scattered, guards shouted orders, and an alarm sounded.

his men moved, igoring each other if one was shot. he fought fear and kept moving. two men jumped out in front of them. he and his men took care of that:mp5: . he proceeded to the top floor, where he heard the chopping of blades. his men quickly hopped on, and lifted of.
No_State_At_All
26-11-2005, 03:22
OOC: god, i hate noobs...
that wasnt too terrible a post for a complete newbie, but you cant just say your assasins get into positions to hit his top command. you have to role-play getting in undetected, and then fighting your way out through the rest of his bodyguards (if he has them) then you have to survive when the international investigation blames you and several major nations with armys many times the size of your nation flatten you. now go away and re-type that, or ye shalt be smitten.