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A small town

Joshs army
10-09-2005, 02:43
There it was.A samll civilazation.It had only about 6,000 population.Not to big though.In one of those 6,000 was a man named Josh.He had always dreamed of making the towns militry stronger and better.He had never done so though.He had only recruited 400 men but he kept trying.He was out scouting one day with his army looking for a nation to ally with.About 100 of his only 400 with him.They were traveling into the forest to find another civilazation.
Kjata Major
10-09-2005, 02:48
Can someone close this please. Its pointless. Read the II thread for it first before posting this crap.
Ankhmet
10-09-2005, 02:56
[There's been worse, Kjata, and it's got through.]
Kyanges
10-09-2005, 03:00
[There's been worse, Kjata, and it's got through.]

And that's the truth. Kind of sad in some respects...
Jenrak
10-09-2005, 03:26
Well, it's not godmoding, so I guess he has every respect to RP it like this.
Southeastasia
10-09-2005, 04:21
Not to mention he needs better spelling and description.
Children of Valkyrja
10-09-2005, 05:07
Or you could just give him a chance to practice and get better?

The next post may be better and more readable once he's had a chance to see what he's done and how it looks.

Why don't we all just leave him and see what happens before jumping down his throat?
Velkya
10-09-2005, 05:08
Sorry KM and Ank, if this newb ruins your day, but you have to start somewhere.
Kjata Major
10-09-2005, 05:30
Sorry KM and Ank, if this newb ruins your day, but you have to start somewhere.

OK maybe it wasn't clear before...

Check this thread: http://forums2.jolt.co.uk/showthread.php?t=443247

His response was to create a new thread like this. That's why I was upset.