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NCB Wants A Branch In Your Nation Now!

National Commonwealth
15-08-2005, 19:36
National Commonwealth Bank
6345 Rue Champs-De-République
Verum, RNC Federal District 14556

The successful launch of National Commonwealth Bank (http://forums.jolt.co.uk/showthread.php?t=438051) has led us to recognize the need for expansion and the construction regional branches to better serve our future and current clients.

NCB is prepared to offer any reasonable sum of money for a parcel of 3 acres and/or office space at 18,000 sq. feet, for an NCB branch office. Depending upon NCB's level of trade and relationship with your nation, the branch may be upgraded to a regional headquarters for the bank. Numerous opportunities for expanded trade between client nations and associaties is availabe, so we encourage you to take advantage of this offer. Please post here if your nation is interested in hosting such a branch.

New! Updated List

Current Home Offices & Major Operations

Verum, Federal District, RNC (Headquarters in National Commonwealth)
Triantistraum, Provence, RNC (State-of-the-Art Safe Arms Repository and Commodities Vault)
Vintburg, Vintovia (Consumer Loans Network - Dvision HQ)
Vintburg, Vintovia (Banc of National Commonwealth Securities & Investments HQ)
Camden Bay, Mondoth (Aquatic Businesses HQ)
Tok'ra caree, the Tokera, (Inter-Global Trade Division HQ)
Valgard, The Scandinvans (Operations HQ)
Ark, Rammsteinberg, (Regional Headquaters)
New Munsterberg, Davainia (Regional Headquarters)
Lient, Consivania (Regional Headquarters)

Branch Operations

imported_Illior, Branch Offices - Field Office Coordinator
Praeton, Praetonia, Branch Office
Melaias, the Candrian Empire, Branch Office
Leafanistan, Branch Office
Greater Mactopia, Branch Office
Theao, Branch Office

Also please come celebrate Grand Opening of the Safe Arms Repository (http://s13.invisionfree.com/Commonwealth_Bank/index.php?showtopic=7)! Their will be a gala to celebrate the opening of the new state-of-the-art repository at the Ritz Provençal Hotel in Triantistraum, Provence on August 17, 2005. All interested parties are welcome to attend. -Security will be tight.

The National Commonwealth Bank (http://forums.jolt.co.uk/showthread.php?t=438051)
National Commonwealth Banking Forum & Account List (http://s13.invisionfree.com/Commonwealth_Bank/index.php)
Theao
15-08-2005, 19:46
What are the benefits to allowing a branch of your bank to set up in a nation?
The Candrian Empire
15-08-2005, 19:50
Considering that there is very limited space in the Candrian Empire, yet economic growth is always considered a good thing, we'd like to take you up on the offer to construct a branch of the NCB in Melaias, the capital city. Rent for a 20,000 sq. foot office complex comes to 240,000 fl/month for a 10 year contract. Considering the prices of properties today, this is a very good price.
Darvainia
15-08-2005, 19:59
Dragon Realestate (a Darvainian company) sent a letter to the National Commonwealth:

"We've been searching and we have just the plot of land for you, it is 4 acres, a little bigger than you expected, but hey you can always get some beautiful lawn ornaments. Enclosed in this letter will show the exact location. As you can see it is in downtown New Munsterbeg, Darvainia, a hot spot for businesses like yours. Hundreds of citizen will flock to your bank for loans, investments, and to open up accounts I'm sure. This land is available for the small sum of $250,000 (that's including all taxes, realty fees, legal things, and etc.) So a flat price of $250,000, and you can start construction immediately.

Since the Free Trade Act allows any international businesses to set up in Darvainia, all you need to do is buy the land from us and your all set, all the government here really cares about is if you pay your taxes like everyone else, and help stimulate the local economy.
Hope to hear from you soon,
-Janice Greenwonder, Realtor.
National Commonwealth
15-08-2005, 20:05
Considering that there is very limited space in the Candrian Empire, yet economic growth is always considered a good thing, we'd like to take you up on the offer to construct a branch of the NCB in Melaias, the capital city. Rent for a 20,000 sq. foot office complex comes to 240,000 fl/month for a 10 year contract. Considering the prices of properties today, this is a very good price.

Thank you for allowing us to open a branch in your nation. We have wired the first payment ahead of the arrival of our staff to Melaias. Our construction crews will be modifying the office with NCB security and standards under your approval.

NCB
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Theao leadership,

We would like to express our thanks in regards to your interest in a branch. NCB's clients span from globe to globe and are involved with a number of organizations and trades. By having an NCB branch or regional headquarters in your nation, our other national clients will be able to trade and invest in your nation (via stocks, bonds, and commodities) more easily, or simply just facilitate doing business when in your nation. Banks also allow your citizens the benefit of a secure financial outlook and provide more money to do the things they want (like starting multinantional corporations) inter-globally. Like we always say, "Invite Investment!"
National Commonwealth
15-08-2005, 20:31
Dragon Realestate (a Darvainian company) sent a letter to the National Commonwealth:

"We've been searching and we have just the plot of land for you, it is 4 acres, a little bigger than you expected, but hey you can always get some beautiful lawn ornaments. Enclosed in this letter will show the exact location. As you can see it is in downtown New Munsterbeg, Darvainia, a hot spot for businesses like yours. Hundreds of citizen will flock to your bank for loans, investments, and to open up accounts I'm sure. This land is available for the small sum of $250,000 (that's including all taxes, realty fees, legal things, and etc.) So a flat price of $250,000, and you can start construction immediately.

Since the Free Trade Act allows any international businesses to set up in Darvainia, all you need to do is buy the land from us and your all set, all the government here really cares about is if you pay your taxes like everyone else, and help stimulate the local economy.
Hope to hear from you soon,
-Janice Greenwonder, Realtor.

We are extremely impressed and grateful for the amazing offer you have put before us. We believe we will definitely be able to complement New Munsterberg's skyline with a new highrise for our regional headquarters there. We believe there to be numerous and growing opportunities for investment and finance in the general area. The money is wired, and our staff and construction contractors are on the way.

Richard Tanny
Chief Realestate Officer, NCB
Vintovia
15-08-2005, 20:46
The VN&C (Vintovia National & Central) Bank would like to give NCB a 10-floor Unit in it's 120-storey VN&C Tower in Vintburg. We would also like them to take over the administration of the Vault 50m below the building, which contains the Central Bank's Foreign Currency Reserves.

The VNSIB (Vintovia National Savings & Investments Bank) would like the NCB to take over it's Consumer Loans unit in it's 35,000 branches accross Vintovia, and 500,000 Branches accross several regions.
Thur Lows
15-08-2005, 20:49
We here at thur lows are ready and willing for any economic growth.
We are just starting to join the modern world with our political rights and are well on track but will not be where we want to be for some time.
An foriegn bank would insure security for both sides of the debate without worry of persucution :p :D
Greater Mactopia
15-08-2005, 21:21
We here at Greater Mactopia are open to your branch of banking. We have many spaces open adn will lease it to you for a 250,000 down payment. You just pay us 10% a month and you arae good to go.


Sincerely,

Cedric Hayes
Overseer of Financial Businness for Greater Mactopia
National Commonwealth
15-08-2005, 22:12
The VN&C (Vintovia National & Central) Bank would like to give NCB a 10-floor Unit in it's 120-storey VN&C Tower in Vintburg. We would also like them to take over the administration of the Vault 50m below the building, which contains the Central Bank's Foreign Currency Reserves.

The VNSIB (Vintovia National Savings & Investments Bank) would like the NCB to take over it's Consumer Loans unit in it's 35,000 branches accross Vintovia, and 500,000 Branches accross several regions.

-----OFFICIAL CORRESPONDANCE-----
National Commonwealth Bank
6345 Rue Champs-De-République
Verum, RNC Federal District 14556

VNSIB, we are captivated by this major deal with your organization and nation. Our thousands of staff members are extremely excited about this new, honorable responsibility. Our Vintburg staff will include 300 private millitary police and security contractors in addition to 580 high-paying, executive positions, which are to be offered to the Vintovian workforce. We are standing-by with contractors to strengthen the security of the Vintovia FOREX Vault and we are currently working to adjust our brand to include the VNSIB Consumer Loans division as a subsidiary of National Commonwealth Bank, as will be reflected in our headquarters. Vintovia stands as the CLN (Consumer Loans Network) headquarters for the entire NCB network. All future NCB loans will be wired through the Vintburg facility. We are wiring $30 million to cover any costs and we hope that exterior signage will also be available. Thanks again for your commitment to trade and financial success!

CEO, NCB
National Commonwealth
15-08-2005, 22:18
We here at Greater Mactopia are open to your branch of banking. We have many spaces open adn will lease it to you for a 250,000 down payment. You just pay us 10% a month and you arae good to go.


Sincerely,

Cedric Hayes
Overseer of Financial Businness for Greater Mactopia

Thanks for your interest. We will wire the payment now, and hope that a piece of land in your capital's financial district will be available for construction. We plan to send our crews immediately!

NCB

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Thur Lows,

We are happy to hear of your interest, but would like a more thourough informatique on possible branch locations and cost. Thanks!

NCB
National Commonwealth
15-08-2005, 23:07
Bump
Jenrak
15-08-2005, 23:15
We are always interested in increasing economic power, so we will offer you two plans. As presented so:

The First plan is comprised of the inner parts of Haasdra, where the nobility, the wealthy, and the priviledged live, a sizable investment. The costs of such an area within in this city would cost to around a $300,000 down payment and a monthly payment of 15%, amounting to $45,000 per month. We will be charging no interest.*

The Second plan is much cheaper, at only around $150,000 down payment, but will situate your requested abode in the middle areas of Haasdra. This will only cost around $25,000 per month. We, like the other plan, will charge no interest.*


*These plans may change unexpectantly due to political changes or new laws are in place.
National Commonwealth
15-08-2005, 23:28
We are always interested in increasing economic power, so we will offer you two plans. As presented so:

The First plan is comprised of the inner parts of Haasdra, where the nobility, the wealthy, and the priviledged live, a sizable investment. The costs of such an area within in this city would cost to around a $300,000 down payment and a monthly payment of 15%, amounting to $45,000 per month. We will be charging no interest.*

The Second plan is much cheaper, at only around $150,000 down payment, but will situate your requested abode in the middle areas of Haasdra. This will only cost around $25,000 per month. We, like the other plan, will charge no interest.*


*These plans may change unexpectantly due to political changes or new laws are in place.

Judging from the high level of economic activity in your nation we would love to put a center in sowntown Haasdra, however, we here at NCB believe that banking is for everyone so we'll take the relatively cheaper option two! We can hopefully consider a downtown office in the future. Pending your approval, the down payment is wired. We also hope to establish a community outreach program in the area!! Thanks.

NCB
Jenrak
15-08-2005, 23:32
We have accepted, and as a sign of good faith, we offer to construct the building itself according to your designs.

We hope that you have the business you seek in Jenrak.
National Commonwealth
15-08-2005, 23:39
We have accepted, and as a sign of good faith, we offer to construct the building itself according to your designs.

We hope that you have the business you seek in Jenrak.

We thank you and are very grateful for your help in establishing our presence in your nation. We would be happy for you to help in the construction the branch, but we must insist that NCB take it over to ensure that security and NCB's hallmark industry secrets are protected. Thanks again!

NCB
Consivania
16-08-2005, 00:05
Consivania would like to extend an offer to purchase 1 city block in the east side of Lient for $300,000. You will not be required to pay rent being that this is your own property. This city and area holds great promise. We are asking in an effort to revitalize this city that you construct a building that will be considered impressive to the world audience. With luck you’re bank will make this area more attractive to other Consivanian and world businesses. After you have established your self in Lient you, like all Consivanian businesses’ are welcome to expand and find other properties throughout the country. Finding these properties will be your responsibility of course. We hope that you seriously consider this offer.
Praetonia
16-08-2005, 00:16
[OOC: Praetonia operates a free market so you can feel free to open a branch here and you dont have to go through the government. The capital is called Praeton if you want to put your branch there.]
National Commonwealth
16-08-2005, 00:42
Consivania would like to extend an offer to purchase 1 city block in the east side of Lient for $300,000. You will not be required to pay rent being that this is your own property. This city and area holds great promise. We are asking in an effort to revitalize this city that you construct a building that will be considered impressive to the world audience. With luck you’re bank will make this area more attractive to other Consivanian and world businesses. After you have established your self in Lient you, like all Consivanian businesses’ are welcome to expand and find other properties throughout the country. Finding these properties will be your responsibility of course. We hope that you seriously consider this offer.

Consivania

The NCB board of directors sees huge potential in Lient, as such we have called in a inter-globally renowed developer to aid in the construction of the office. We do not want to go building a huge white elephant, but the the new NCB Plaza will include a 500 room luxury hotel in addition to the planned East-Side Lient Megamall. The centerpiece ($15 billion) NCB Tower will be the tallest in Consiviana and offer millions of square feet of class-A office space and 1,000 condominum units. It may be worthy of a press release and gala fanfare when it opens in 5NS years! We strongly believe in city revitilization and it brings strong value to NCB. Thanks again for this great investment opportunity. We expect to get amazing returns on this monolith of a project.

NCB
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We are also happy to be able to construct in Praetonia. We will follow the standard commercial procedures.
Greater Mactopia
16-08-2005, 01:29
Ahh yes, locations, locations...

There are many spaces available.

I would recomend some near our military bases where troops can cash their checks immediatley after getting them. There are quite a number of them. Perhaps 25 locals.

Capital: Financial District: Great place. Perhaps you may want to put 1 in our Businness district too. So that is 2.

Our northern most island have some cities but not too many. Perhaps just 1 or 2 banks up there should do it. We also control a piece of land on the main continent. Perhaps 5-7 banks would be proper.


Well, there are many more places, I am just too lazy to write them down. We are happy to do businness with you.
National Commonwealth
16-08-2005, 02:55
Grater Mactopian leadership, we are pleased to find such interest! We believe we can serve your nation effectively with 5 branches and perhaps one business center in the capital financial district. We will wire the funds promptly. Thank you!

NCB
Theao
16-08-2005, 03:02
We would be interested in you opening a branch of your bank in our nation. The cost for three acres would be thirty thousand dollars, while the cost for 18,000 sq. ft. would be fourty-five thousand dollars.
imported_Illior
16-08-2005, 03:11
OOC: Allllrighty then...
IC: TO: NCB ATTN LAND REQ. DEPT.
FROM: ALLSON DEVELOPERS
To whomever it may concern,
We have learned that you would like to open a branch in Illior. In several cities(5(Illian, Narall, Haven Falls, Narcopolis, and Trighton.), we have several areas right about your size. And as for the three acres, there's a nice plot of land right next to a Marines base exactly that size, or 3 acres out in farm land.
For each city space: Price: 500K undeveloped.
for the three acre plot: 500k undeveloped.
OOC:that's quite the deal in illior.
The Scandinvans
16-08-2005, 03:13
We wish to extend an offer to NBC to open a branch in my nation outside the capital city of Valgard as commoners and foreigners who are not royalty or nobility are not allowed into it, but you will be allowed to establish it in the nation's largest city of Valdra on three acres of land and in a sixty to hundred story skyscraper for $120,000,000 dollars (smallest) to $210,000,000 (largest) building and the government of The Scandinvans is willing to give your company an loan of $100,000,000 up front for no interest in it.

Here is the link to mm to my economic page:
http://nseconomy.thirdgeek.com/nseconomy.php?nation=The+Scandinvans
Familinia
16-08-2005, 04:12
From: The Office of President August M. Clearwater
To: National Commonwealth Bank

To whom this may concern,

The Democratic Republic of Familinia is an emerging nation. Due to laws, we are not permitted to sell any government land to your organization, nor are we permitted to discourage you from investing in the country.

Though, I do have the authority to encourage you to establish a branch into our nation. We are always looking for economic growth.

Signed,

President August M. Clearwater
National Commonwealth
16-08-2005, 04:34
OOC: Allllrighty then...
IC: TO: NCB ATTN LAND REQ. DEPT.
FROM: ALLSON DEVELOPERS
To whomever it may concern,
We have learned that you would like to open a branch in Illior. In several cities(5(Illian, Narall, Haven Falls, Narcopolis, and Trighton.), we have several areas right about your size. And as for the three acres, there's a nice plot of land right next to a Marines base exactly that size, or 3 acres out in farm land.
For each city space: Price: 500K undeveloped.
for the three acre plot: 500k undeveloped.
OOC:that's quite the deal in illior.

We certainly are interested. We have taken care of the payment ($3 million for the 5 office loacations and the 3 acre undeveloped parcel). We are extremely happy with our five locations for under $5 million. It works for us quite well. Thank you for your business!

We would be interested in you opening a branch of your bank in our nation. The cost for three acres would be thirty thousand dollars, while the cost for 18,000 sq. ft. would be fourty-five thousand dollars.

We will go with the three acres for $30,000, recognizing it as a serious bargain. Thank you!

We wish to extend an offer to NBC to open a branch in my nation outside the capital city of Valgard as commoners and foreigners who are not royalty or nobility are not allowed into it, but you will be allowed to establish it in the nation's largest city of Valdra on three acres of land and in a sixty to hundred story skyscraper for $120,000,000 dollars (smallest) to $210,000,000 (largest) building and the government of The Scandinvans is willing to give your company an loan of $100,000,000 up front for no interest in it.

Here is the link to mm to my economic page:
http://nseconomy.thirdgeek.com/nsec...The+Scandinvans

Recognizing that the Scandanavians is an extremely important nation for our business to operate, we would like to purchase space in a prestigious Valgard high rise outright for $210,000,000 for our operations headquarters there. We will not be seeking a loan (we have $50 billion cash on hand), but do appreciate the generous financing. Our staff will be requesting temporary and permanent visas for their entry into Valgard proper. Thank you!

National Commonwealth Bank
National Commonwealth
16-08-2005, 04:40
From: The Office of President August M. Clearwater
To: National Commonwealth Bank

To whom this may concern,

The Democratic Republic of Familinia is an emerging nation. Due to laws, we are not permitted to sell any government land to your organization, nor are we permitted to discourage you from investing in the country.

Though, I do have the authority to encourage you to establish a branch into our nation. We are always looking for economic growth.

Signed,

President August M. Clearwater

National Commonwealth Bank
Communiqué au Familinia

We certainly understand your circumstances. We do wish to establish an branch in the future, but in the meantime, look out for the upcoming Trans-National Commodities Exchange where we are hoping to get nations like yourself out onto the open market for surplus resources and goods. We look forward to investing in Familinia in the near future! Thank you.

NCB Spokesperson, Rene Petersach
Theao
16-08-2005, 04:45
We will go with the three acres for $30,000, recognizing it as a serious bargain. Thank you!
We must inform you that the land is undeveloped, should you wish to change your mind.
The Scandinvans
16-08-2005, 04:48
The executives of your business will be given permanent visas and villas in Valgard, the rest will be given permanent working visas for the rest for the rest of the country and in thanks we will add another eight stories from our own pockets. We look forward to having you in Valdra.

OOC: The city of Valgard is the Imperial Capital and is like the Forbidden City in ancient China as only select guests are allowed in it such as the executives of the company in The Scandinvans.
National Commonwealth
16-08-2005, 05:11
The executives of your business will be given permanent visas and villas in Valgard, the rest will be given permanent working visas for the rest for the rest of the country and in thanks we will add another eight stories from our own pockets. We look forward to having you in Valdra.

OOC: The city of Valgard is the Imperial Capital and is like the Forbidden City in ancient China as only select guests are allowed in it such as the executives of the company in The Scandinvans.

We sincerely thank the government of the Scandinvans and duly announce the opening of our Operations Headquarters in Valgard. Thanks again!

NCB
National Commonwealth
17-08-2005, 18:29
bump for interest