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USS Enterprise NCC-1701-J launched

The Fedral Union
05-08-2005, 21:51
0500 Hours August 4th

New Union space docks Terran prime, shuttles raced across the bow of an enormous ship, the largest ship built in federation history, and the most powerful, with its advanced technologies and gleaming hull the ship stood like a titan over the rest of space dock, other ships were being built galaxy classes, akria classes nebula classes and others but none could match the technology and the power of the enterprise J. the massive ship was under going final preparations for launch.

Captain Xavier walked on the bridge his boot like shoes gleaming in the light of all the holographic 3D images of space planets and scanners, advanced sensor panels and tactical analyst ,boards dominated most of the ships bridge, highly advanced instant communication systems were set up around the tactical consoles, the helm control was slight different its purple and yellow panels flashed in complex coordinates , it was holographic with almost no surface controls it was a neural interface device. Rob looked around the
Blinking complex holographic Bridge smiling shuffling over to the chair his feet taping on the carpet, he sat back on his leather chair with some holographic displays around his arm rest he sat back looking at the T minus counter, witch was at near 0

the helms officer looked over to Xavier, saying as he engaged the neural interface, “sir we are ready to depart, quarter master has called all shuttles in and released the clamps shall I take us out?”

The Capitan looked at him replying “yes full impulse”

The helms officer thought and plotted coordinates, the ship de docked with a massive mechanical whoosh sound as it flew out its IIE’s Making a huge rumbling noise, the noise reverberated thorough out the ship

The enterprise J quickly made its was far enough away from Terran prime, as it escaped the gravity of the blue green gem in the dark void, the helms officer says “I have received our orders form star fleet command we are to continue on our shake down cruise through several sectors . Xavier nodded smileg and saying “take us out“

With that the hyper warp engines engaged, a massive energy surge busted out of the ships naccles as it was propelled in a bubble like envelopment in to hyper sub space the ship going at amazing speeds a few seconds passed until they were at there first patrol sector. The ship dropped out of hyper warp slowing to a crawl, in the dark void of space.







(ooc specs: http://memory-alpha.org/en/images/e/e3/Enterprise_j.jpg
Category: Dreadnought
Length: 1.3km
Width: 998m
Height: 137.5m
Officer Crew: 250
Enlisted Crew: 2575
Maximum Capacity: 18000
Number of Decks: 68
Warp Engines: 1 Quantum Phased induction Reactor+ 1 Phased Dark matter / matter reactor core
Impulse Engines: Mk III Inertia -less Impulse drives
Computer System: LCARS Mk 50
Armament:
40 Type XVII Advanced Non liner phaser arrays (Ultra heavy duty) (non Linear meaning they disrupt space time on the Planck scale)
10 Type XVI Phaser banks on nacelle wings
30 Burst fire Rapid fire torpedo tubes (Torpedo armament includes the new Mk 7 Transphasic torpedoes and phased anti mater torpedoes,Gravimetric torpedoes, Mega Tri cobalt torpedoes )
Sensor system:
Packet IV SCVS, and phased sensor arrays, along with micro gravimetric plank sensors.
Shield system:
6 layered shield system
# 1 layer of Multi adaptive multi regenerative quantum phased shields
#2 multi over lapped plank phased shield matrix
# 3 Standard multi exajoule shield system
The other 3 are redundant
and a spatial displacement system
Defensive amour: Mk 5 Ablative amour generators, along with plates of compressed null space plaiting
Quantum string, Enchased standard tipple hull
Warp speed:
Maxim warp: 9.9999
Hyper warp drive equipped
)

Planck Energy conduit system
Skinny87
05-08-2005, 22:21
OOC: Impressive. About the only useful thing Enterprise ever gave the ST universe...
Ankhmet
05-08-2005, 22:24
ooc:Woefully outclassed by a star destroyer, but a worthy ship.
Mini Miehm
05-08-2005, 22:26
OOC: Just curious, what happened to F-I?
Ankhmet
05-08-2005, 22:34
ooc: They have never been mentioned. J was only seen for a few seconds in an episode of Enterprise.
Mini Miehm
05-08-2005, 22:35
ooc: They have never been mentioned. J was only seen for a few seconds in an episode of Enterprise.

OOC: Never mind.
The Fedral Union
05-08-2005, 22:57
glad you like it this is a semi rp to see how it will do against other nations ships. so I’m having it patrol several sectors close to nations
Ankhmet
05-08-2005, 23:01
ooc: Oooh, I want in ^_^
The Fedral Union
05-08-2005, 23:07
Sure just post what ever ... or when ever
The Fedral Union
05-08-2005, 23:44
Bump
The Fedral Union
06-08-2005, 01:18
will post soon
Sepratist States
06-08-2005, 02:47
Where can I get one of those?
Hyperspatial Travel
06-08-2005, 04:39
OOC: Fascinating. Big, bulky, but impressive. Does it have any really evil, civilian-slaughtering weapons?

IC: We have recieved information about the Fedral Union creating a dreadnought-class ship. Be warned. If this ship is sighted within Realm space, it will be destroyed.

- AI Darinas, Internal Security AI
East Coast Federation
06-08-2005, 04:49
OOC: TFU, If you'll notice, it has a Voth Style Transwarp ( from voyager ), Thats actually faster than what your using now. It might work better. And you could porbably get away with 1km, if you notice how small the windows are.
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The Fedral Union
06-08-2005, 05:24
Remember the traveler from TNG the one that made the enterprise D go ub3r fast?? That’s how fast my drive goes
Christopher Thompson
06-08-2005, 05:45
I have a question. Why do you call it the USS Enterprise. Is it a United States Ship? Because if you're using as your ship, the name should be different, not USS Enterprise.
The Fedral Union
06-08-2005, 05:46
The USS in the star trek universe is either United space ship or United Star ship
Christopher Thompson
06-08-2005, 06:14
Wow, really? I mean, I didn't watch the show, but that's the first time I've seen USS before a ship and had it not mean that.
I guess you learn something everyday.

Carry on, then.
Kazecistan
06-08-2005, 06:50
ooc: Mind having it stop by a Kazeci boarder?
The Fedral Union
06-08-2005, 16:20
Well sure, we can assume my ship is near your border since I didn’t specify witch border I put it on patrol .
Kazecistan
06-08-2005, 17:52
ooc: Thanks.

Ic: It was custom for all ships entering Kazeci space to be greeted. The extensive sensor net, which spanned the entire Kazeci boarder, picked up yet another blip. In seconds the ship was greeted. In a blinding flash of light, the Kazeci super cruiser appeared. It was a massive ship, twice as tall as it was wide, it's smooth, oval shaped, slate hull bleakly reflected the light from the nearest star. It sat parallel to the new ship, matching it's movements.

Bridge, Main Deck:
"Sir, Kazecistan has no record of this kind of ship, similar ones, but with definite differences."
"Well, let's find out who they are. Open a channel."
The K.N.S. KieBoneach wishes to welcome you to Kazeci space. We have no record of your ship type and wish to inquire where you are from as well as your intended destination within Kazeci boarders.
The Fedral Union
06-08-2005, 18:13
The enterprise slowed as the other ship rushed beside it, its saucer section gleaming form the light of a star, and its engines blue, and red glowing on its star drive section.
On the bridge:

The Capitan stood up as hundreds of holographic 3D renderings of the ship popped in front of tactical panels, tactical analysis, form every witch way every witch sensor complex readings scanning every nook and cranny of the other ship.

Xavier looked over to his neural patched in comm. officer and said “open a channel” with that the officer though and a photon scan of the captain was done instantly, lights scanning him until on the bridge of the other ship he appeared in front of every one out of no ware as a very life like hologram.

Xavier smiled saying “Greetings from the united federation of planets we were on patrol in this sector, and didn’t realize we were intruding on your space, we are always happy to make first contact with new races, we come in pace, if you wish we will reverse course and go back to our side of the border”
1

The man was 6ft 2 His uniform was different much different, it was black with red and grey cufflinks at the wrist, and a slightly visible red neck, it had the UFP seal on one of the arms, and the seal of the Enterprise J, witch had the UFP symbol the ship, and a Shield with 2 swords on it along with an olive branch wreath around the patch , the words engraved around it was it was “Were no man has gone before” the rest of the uniform was black the pants had grey lines flowing down with some cargo pockets, the chest had the newly revised comm. His rank pip were on his red color, he had 4 pips. badge (still star trek looking just with a voy type pin with 3 pips on it looking )The Uniform was meant to be less clinging than the old attire of star fleet in the past and more comfortable to the person wearing it, the increased looseness was noticeable
(I changed uniforms obviously )
Kazecistan
07-08-2005, 04:16
ooc:Mmmm, Star Trek.

Ic: The Bridge was a massive place, the second largest in the ship. It spanned most of the ship's decks. Clear flooring was suspended from the ceiling, layer upon layer. In the center of the room, an large holographic column of swirling blue text displayed all kinds of information gathered from sensors, sector reports, and much more. Workstations were organized in a circular pattern around this core. Each workstation consisted of chair, armrest, and three-dimensional, touch sensitive, holo-display. Each of the many suspended decks was devoted to a different department.

The caption and his officers were a bit startled by the appearance of the hologram, not that they hadn't seen them, but that they weren't expecting it. Their olive, maroon, and navy uniforms were not unlike the tan uniforms of those whom they commanded, as both were designed for comfort and style. It was obvious who the captain was as he bore the most symbols on his arms and shoulders. He stood to speak with his guest. "I am Commander Ferzly, of the K.N.S. KieBoneach, around you is my loyal and trusted crew. We are glad to have you as guests in our nation and invite you to stay. You are certainly not intruding, as our boarders are open to all friendly parties, even those we have not met before. Normally we would arrive, greet you, give directions, and be on our way, but in this situation, perhaps you would like to come aboard, in person? Food, tours... we are happy to provide it all."
Kazecistan
08-08-2005, 03:52
ooc: I saw the other thread about redeploying the Enterprise, but do you wish to RP it's going, perhaps send in a new ship to finish diplomatic relations?
The Fedral Union
09-08-2005, 01:20
(that took palce after this)

The captain smiled, saying “we would be glad to stay we would like to know more aobut your people in hopes of a better understanding, the enterprise floated along.
Kazecistan
09-08-2005, 01:38
ooc: Oh, good.

Ic: "Good. When is your next scheduled mealtime? If it is soon, we can eat, if not, perhaps a tour of our ship while we discuss matters of varying degrees of importance? We are wiling to host as many crew members as you wish."
The Fedral Union
09-08-2005, 01:43
Xavier smiled saying “in about an hour, would you like to be our guest?”

He looked over to his ops officer who was about to get evry thing prepared (ooc what species are you ?)
Kazecistan
09-08-2005, 01:49
ooc: We are humanoid, basically the same as humans, but with slight differences in appearances, no special treatment needed.

Ic: "We would love to be your guests, perhaps we can exchange tours and have a sort of pot luck?"

ooc: My plan is to have a tour of your ship, eat, then tour my ship, how's that sound?
Kazecistan
11-08-2005, 17:59
Bump.
Kazecistan
12-08-2005, 19:36
Prehaps I need a bigger BUMP
Kazecistan
16-08-2005, 19:38
ooc: say the word and I'll let this thread die, but untill then, BUMP!