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The Tale of Darth Revan (Open - Star Wars knowledge required)

Jenrak
25-07-2005, 22:09
OOC: This will be by the assumption that Revan is a male.



Our leader is gone. Somewhere, our leader has vanished, past frozen cold stars and distant dark voids of space. For many, many years I have searched for our leader, bu where? Where is he? He has vanished without a single thread of evidence, without any word, any sign at all.

The builder's factories remained in pieces, shattered, as I have seen many unable, unworthy hands have felt its call, taken their title, hoping to be as strong as he was. I was the fool, not him, not them. I was one of the many, like so, to be stupid enough, weak enough, to not realize that our glorious leader had disappeared. But what if, that the Lord should return? That the Force will bring back our great Lord? That he should come back, and challenge the republic once more? Or should he repent his ways and fix it in his wake? Very few thoughts crawl within my mind nowadays, that do not concern with Revan.

I believed in his faith, in his strength. He did not believe in mine as tandem as I did. Now and then, he would laugh briskly at successes, and harshly correct my failures. But still, he knew what was a right, and what was deemed wrong. Perhaps there was more to him than I had once thought.

But now, as senile and unreliable as I am, I must take up my blade, my devoted saber, and find a way out of here, before the other Whatazors find me. Before they, as like the Sith Lords millenia before them, cause this planet to be a giant tomb once more. I will find a way out of Korriban...

But before he finished the last pieces of his diary, his datapad, Clavisk was marauded from behind, even as the information for his last excerpt was beginning to finalize the entries. Getting up, he stared menacingly into the eyes a feverish Sith apprentice, a greedy hunger lingering in his eyes, as he circled around the wounded and tired Sith Lord, trying to cling desperately to the stone railing that lined the inner parts of the hall.

"Yravan, you don't have to do this." Clavisk spoke in a quiet whisper, because the pain his side was still fresh with intensity. "You musn't do this. Help me, and we can leave this place together."

Yravan, the Kel-Dorian like masked apprentice, merely laughed behind his vieled visage. "You fool! You don't understand at all!" He raised his saber, but a swift jolt from Clavisk's fingers and he was drained of energy.

"You musn't make me hurt you!" Clavisk begged the student, as Yravan got up and tired, shook himself before taking out a blood red stimulant, and jabbed it viciously into his right arm. Veins pulsing out, eyes bloodshot, Yravan smiled and laughed in a sinister style.

"Don't you understand? This is my ascension to glory! I no longer have to obey anyone but myself, and I have been awaiting this for many, many years, master." He spoke.

"I am your master no longer, Yravan. I am a Whatazor no more." Clavisk told him with a fierce determination in his eyes, watching the stone slab door carefully. "Please, don't make me hurt you."

"Heh. And what makes think on that assumption?" Yravan asked his old master angrily.

"Because, Shiboku, you are barely capable of utilizing the Force!" And with that desperate yell and cry, a hand rammed out from underneath the robes of Yravan's underbodied armour, and sent Clavisk flying back into the wall in surprise.

"Wrong!" He yelled forcefully, nearby objects smashing around in midair, as the Dark side began to permeate his body. "I am no longer a Shiboku! I am a Gorgais! I am fully capable of suceeding you, Master. And with your death, I will take my saber, and rule the Sith as the greatest of the Sith Lords!" But he had barely finished, when in turn Clavisk pushed him into a pile of rubble, and the Sith Lord stood up, his red lightsaber drawn.

"Your dreams of grandeur are never going to suceed." Clavisk told him, his voice bold and smooth. "I must stop you, before you can stop me." And he leapt at the rubble.

However, as Clavisk was in midair, Yravan flew from the pile with a swift rage, two red lightsabers drawn. No! He has already killed two of his fellow students! Clavisk thought. Yravan never been given yet a lightsaber, being still a low level apprentice; the sight of him with two of them showed that he would have probably murdered two of his fellow students to have attained. Unless, however, he was indeed powerful enough to take on a fully fledged Sith.

But it did not matter any longer. All Clavisk knew now was that Yravan was a large threat to his plans of finding Revan. Lightsaber blow parried, he swung around and leapt backwards onto a pedestal, where he, with the Force, swung a large stone slab at Yravan. The apprentice used both sabers to cut them up into smaller sharp pieces as fast as he could, and he bulged it back at Clavisk.

The Sith Lord tried to block them all in a single move, but as he did so, Yravan appeared behind him, and took both his sabers down onto his cut body. The Sith Lord responded by a quick Force push, sending the apprentice flying in the ceiling as stalactites fell down like a icy needles, except they were thick and sturdy, and far from icy. Clavisk wasted no time on escaping.

As he neared the exit, hearing lightsaber battles far off, someone had launched a heavy barrage of rocks at him from behind. As he turned around, his back in pain, looking at the perpetrator, he saw the cracked face, the broken right arm, and the torn left leg. Yravan had survived the stalactites, the impact, and the rubble, and now he was intent on fighting Clavisk to the finish. The Whatazor had no other choice.

In a fury, Clavisk opened his palms at tandem, and splashed forth a brothel of electricity, pushing his apprentice back, allowing Clavisk to disappear to the spaceport. As Clavisk left, the last words Yravan heard in his maimed and eletrocuted body, was the finall finished product of Darth Clavisk's last datapad entry: ...and find Darth Revan.

OOC: So simply, make a character, and slowly lets try and build together a story that details what happens between the End of KOTOR I, and let's RP something about your character working with others to find Darth Revan.
Jenrak
26-07-2005, 02:35
bump
Ainthenar
26-07-2005, 02:37
such an awesome game
Jenrak
26-07-2005, 02:45
OOC: It truly is, I agree.
Tree Hugging Lesbians
26-07-2005, 02:49
The second one left alot to be desired.
Jenrak
26-07-2005, 02:55
OOC: The ending did two things: 1) Christmas Release and 2) It allowed a really good opening for the third possible KOTOR, which probably will be released on the Xbox 360
Jenrak
29-07-2005, 15:11
I bumped into the table and spilled some hot chocolate. It was hot.
Pyschotika
29-07-2005, 15:47
OOC:

Yea, KOTOR 3 is going to be released on all three next Gen consoles and on the new graphic cards such as the GeForce 7 Series.

And I still have to beat KOTOR...I have had little time..well I'm at the end heh.
Doomingsland
29-07-2005, 16:00
OOC:I actualy RP my FT emperor as being Darth Revan...
Moorington
29-07-2005, 17:06
OOC: Are we going to do the game or talk about video games?
IC:

The people that i'm making my character of are called the Moors. Their capital planet is called Moorington and it's system is call the Moorington system. That is how it goes for the whole of the Moorish Commonwealth's system. Their sytems are located a little bit north than directly west of the Hapes Cluster.

Maxen was walking along one of the great many ramparts that went to the Mori Shakim. The orignal building had pretty much survived throughout the ages and with some remodeling onto the Plaza of Moorington made it a historic, cultural, and even a structualy viable place for the Dukes that represent all of the planetary systems.

It had just finished a major add on. The add on was thought by most of the masses to be another building to ease the pressure on the military building's crowded population. It was though more commonly called Project Area 1.

It houses the Special Directive Units, RUF (Research and destruction of Un-known Life.), and all the best military and civilian scientists known to date.
The public knew nothing of anything even remotly like that so Maxen felt no need to be un-conspicious.

As Maxen walked along he saw some of his fellow moors walking towards him. As he saw them he quickned his pace and called out to them.
"Hey!", "Why are you guys so depressed"?
They walked up to him and explained that they had been given a year long mission which would involve all kinds of repetive buisness and managing details.
"Damm", Maxen thought and spoke. "I was hoping to have some kind of break too", said one of the moors.
"You and me both Wessen",said another moor named Taxew.
"Well this is so fun, replied a quick mouthed moor named Saxen, that i'm deciding to hit the pub for acouple hours until we have to go at o 300.

As the group walked along Maxen looked at his company and felt immense pride at them. There walked Titam and his brother Tiyan. Both where joked to be called Titans when you went along with thier names, and then there was there explosive specialist and his best friend Tavex. Followed by Wessen the semi-open to read soilder who was great at the pistol. Then came Taxew who was a fun loving moor who some how stayed that way even though he was the teams only ,and one of the best snipers to evergrace the Commonwealth.. :sniper:

They walked up the steps into the main lobby and took an immidiate right to two elevators and pushed on a concealed button ,that you really couldn't see unless you knew where to look. As the elevator was seemingly slow to come Maxen knew better. All around the priceless marble floor with it's stone pillars ,with a duresteel middle, going to the tall and vast celing there was al kinds of computer equipment that checked to make sure they where them. They split up half and half. When they reached the top floor the building had changed alot. Gone where the white marble columns and granite floors with fine wooden desks. Here there where laser proof everythings and blasst doors in three levels sometimes. Concealed and not so concealed security measures and people all over the place and regular desks.

They stopped all joking and went all serious into the General's office. It was slightly less sterilized looking and had some obviously not mandated items strewn around. The general was waiting for them and had the datacards for each of them in thier respective seats. There was a slide show going on with each slide getting more and more grizly until one scene of headless corpses made Maxen turn his head. The general took his seat.....

OOC: I have to stop there until I get a better idea on where your guy is going and what other guys are going to be in this universe.
Tree Hugging Lesbians
02-08-2005, 05:08
OOC:I actualy RP my FT emperor as being Darth Revan...


...Woopy fuckin' doo!


Anyways, when I said that Jenrak, I meant that it would have been nice to have all that content that cut out so they could do the Christmas release, and they could/should fixed alot of the bugs in the game.
Jenrak
02-08-2005, 17:48
OOC: Okay. I personally think KOTOR I had more bugs. I couldn't get Mika Dorin to sell me his awesome stuff half the time I play.

IC:

In his starship, a long sleek pretentious Sith fighter, carefully disguised amongst the warring Sith fleet, Clavisk checked his belongings, but it was apparent he had dropped his datapad back on the academy on korriban. As he left the system, he saw that tiny dusted planet far off, giant gouged out canyons still visible from the distance.

"Isillminar" He whispered softly to himself, speaking in alien tongue. A long flick os his finger, and he pressed the protruding button. Suddenly, a long blue wave smashed forth and the stars became lines, until it was as if a tunnel, neverending. Where his hyperspace co-ordinates would take him, he did not know.
Moorington
05-08-2005, 18:46
and turned off the slide show. "So no you know why we must go out and make sure that all I mean all Sith are just a fading spot on the books of this universe".
"You mean that some kind of Dark Jedi Hobo slimebantha just kicked those people up and down, or sliced, Maxen corrected himeself, those people all over?
"Depressing it seems that is the case with these Jedi of the Darkness", the General replied.
"So when do we leave" ,started Wessen, and kick-."Anyhow",Maxen interrupted, we need some serious Tie action with at least some Iron Lance class tread tanks".
The General looked at each one of the company's soilders and saw not even a trace of fear, maybe just a little aprehension due to the fact that the general could just order them out wioth just the basic hardware than really anything to do with the Sith. "Well....Alright but you need to make at least one Sith lightsaber be added to your barracks wall".
"Consider it done Commander of the 1st through 5th SPC groups" ,they said in unsion and then did a respectfull if not demeaning bow.

The general saw them leave and then put in the call to the Supply Master then made another call to his higher ups who then to thiers to finally the message reached the Head Duke of Moorington. He then read the message and then dictated a letter to.....

OOC: Just waiting for some more people.... :headbang:
Jenrak
05-08-2005, 18:51
OOC: I'm waiting for more people as well, before I post again.