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http://www.artformfunction.com/3d/spaceship.jpg

This link shows the picture of the craft. The length of the craft is 52 KM

(Engine and Propulsion)
The engine is a "450 Black Hole Warp Space Raider 13" that if put to the max you can be 3 galaxies away in an hour. Although this is fast it eats up an insane amount of energy when pushed this hard, but it has an auxilary geneator that carries just as much energy as the first. This craft is obviously made to be the Lamborgini of space vehicles.


(Armor and Shielding)
As shown by the picture there isn't much armor but the shielding is great. A reassembling shield is the primary defence. If the shields fail use the outstanding speed to get away and let them reassemble itself. There is extremely heave sheilding around the Command Center, Loading Dock and Engine. This shielding can take about 3 times what the normal reassembling shield can. It also comes with a cloaking mode where the ship runs very very slow and invisible.

(Weaponry)
The weaponry lacks but the speed balances it out. It has two very basic laser guns on the front dip at the tip of the craft. The loop around the engine is where the shields are projected from but also the outside it it is surrounded with laser turret guns. This cannot be seen because it rolls out.http://www.groep7.co.za/Notrium/Artwork/Wazzal2/ItemIcons/Turret02.jpg This is a picture of the turret gun. The turrets are each 13 feet wide and 5 feet tall. They have 4 firing modes. Single,Burst,Auto, and Silent.

(Price this ship will cost about 12 billion maybe less depending on sales. Required 22 Man Crwe included with sale not export.



OOC:stay on this thread I have more ships to sell this isn't my only design

It's also available in Black,Pink,White,Red,Bright Red,Dark Bloodshot Red,Green,Navy Blue,Blue,Baby Blue and Gold

It is available for export and sale. sale will cost more but you will get the ship immediatly. Export will cost less but you'll have to wait. I will openly except comments

OOC: Well, to start, the discriptions are a little vague. I'm not sure on your choice of using some sort of 'gas' for fuel and power. I would recommend replacing that with a reactor or generator of some kind. Last and most important in this case. The price, 1 trillion USD. For that price you could go to the Starfordge storefront and get several more effective vessels of the same size or one much larger ship. Which brings me back to the Discriptions. You need to give the specs of the vessel such as dimentions. You have a start, there is just a ways you can go with it. Just my two cents.

Thank you and I hope your 2 cents makes me alot richer

Thank you and I hope your 2 cents makes me alot richer
ooc: No problem. On the plus side, it is nice to see a nation comeing up with their own technology. While useing ST, SW, or any other pre made designs are all well and good, Ill always support the idea of nations makeing their own technology.

If you are interested I am coming out with a whole series. And yes I hate all this Pre-maid stuff I'm creating my own engines and weapons and everything required for ship building

If you are interested I am coming out with a whole series. And yes I hate all this Pre-maid stuff I'm creating my own engines and weapons and everything required for ship building
Accually I'm not interested in buying them, I wouldn't mind seeing them. I have already designed all my own technology. Its in the first link in my signature if you want to look. *If you can not see it, you need to turn see Signature under your profile and settings.*

Name:Clagwire Cruiser http://www.3drt.com/3dm/fighters-fleet/sf-23_06.jpg

Designed Fully by:Zactarn Prime Military Defence Team. 65 KM
Engine: Dual Rocket Engine In Rear. Sith Dual Saber Engine 50150. Average to moderate speed and a Cruvlik Generator
Weaponry:2 Sith Synthisizing Blaster Cannons on each side capable of blasting a whole through a planet when fully charged. Near Central Command in the middle of the craft 2 Rapid Fire Red Rocket Range Lasers are placed.
Shielding:The armor is very very very thick. The armor is made of a metal only found on Zactarn Prime called Polytectone. Poly for the Polyeurthane plastic that is in it, tec for the metal that is found in tectonic plate, and tone for the toned smoot texture. This armor is hard to pierce even with a bomb. Due to the heavily powerful armor the shielding is weak. It is only covered by a simple ray shield.
Price: 1 trillion

Available for sale or export. 12 Man crew included

criticism is open for both ships and more are coming

remember these are available for export and sale

Bump for comments and buyers

Please someone tell me what's wrong with my ships. No one is leaving comments or buying them. A dollar or some constructive criticism would be nice

Thread closed I'm starting a FT Miltary Storefront.

OOC: Well, to start, the discriptions are a little vague. I'm not sure on your choice of using some sort of 'gas' for fuel and power. I would recommend replacing that with a reactor or generator of some kind. Last and most important in this case. The price, 1 trillion USD. For that price you could go to the Starfordge storefront and get several more effective vessels of the same size or one much larger ship. Which brings me back to the Discriptions. You need to give the specs of the vessel such as dimentions. You have a start, there is just a ways you can go with it. Just my two cents.

I gave you my opinion and you haven't changed anything. You need more then just basic discriptions. You have to have stats like length, width, height. You need exact numbers of weapons. All you have are basic discriptions which you can greatly improve on those as well. Most people are not buying because you have given them no reason to. It would be easier for them to go to the Huntears Star fordge storefront and buy ships that have fully explained stats and capabilities.

If you wish here is the site, take a look around and see how things are done on NS.

Star Forge Naval Store Front version 2.0 (http://forums.jolt.co.uk/showthread.php?t=424346)