Firehelper
13-06-2005, 19:36
the firehelper sniper factory has come out with a new sniper named the
M5-S4:
range 1.5 mi(acuracy at this range is off by about 10 meters max evectiveness at 1mi)
caliber: .50 caliber(you can blow someones head up) :sniper:
magazine: 7shot
cost: 10,000 firehelper franks (my econony is still struggleing so for more developed countries this is chee)
Why dont you instead go with larger calibre rifles, the .50cal has been well overused, try at least 35mm, like the XM109.
Concremo
13-06-2005, 22:09
ooc:
If you're going to try and make a crack at a storefront, some friendly advise for you.
1) Include Pics; I can't stress this enough, although not essential (I rarely include them), people like to know what they're buying and how damn good it's gonna look taking their enemies apart. You can find plenty of obscure weapons off the internet and lift the pic, but for anything bigger people might recognise it. Of course this is a bonus if you are selling modern day existing items (such as the AK-47 or XM8), but if you want to be origional i suggest making your own.
2) Highlights; The more stats and features you have, the better it looks. You have done a pretty good job of this so far, but the layout could be improved. A lot.
3) Information; If you look at any other (decent) storefront out there, they will have chunks of text describing the weapons history, design, conception, production and all sorts. The more writing the better, but dont overdo it.
All-in-all, you made a good try and its good to see new players making an honest attempt at something good.
PS. I know combat smileys may have a certain 'wow' factor, but i would avoid using them, as some here think it shows a lack of intellegnce.
Firehelper
13-06-2005, 22:30
no ill stick with the 50 cal it packs a nice puch
heres the picture
http://www.gunsmokeenterprises.net/GSE%20Sniper.jpg
i hate stats but here
weight 7lb.
Weather tolerance 120degrees f.- -300 degrees f. used in all types of weather
for a extra 5000 firehelper frank : 1. chrome barrels for eazy cleaning 2. sling 3. bipod 4. red-dot -referance sight with x10 telescopic power 5. 10 extra mags