Barlibgil
09-06-2005, 06:35
OOC:My rp debut. TG me recommendations for improvement I guess, remember I said recommendations, not criticism only.
IC:
Bol Relym straightened his ceremonial robe. He'd been forced to wear the scarlett and white monstrosity since he'd been elected two days ago. He looked about the empty Council Room.
The Council Room was the highest room in the Capitol Tower. The room was completely open to the air, with only four supports holding the dome roof over his head. The large, circular, white marble room had only a large, intricately carved table in the center. The table had eight chairs around it, at each place was a gold and silver plaque. There were also some heavy scarlett curtains in case the weather grew bad.
Bol looked at the parchments in his hand; checking them for errors before the rest of the Council arrived. Gods let me not screw this up. He thought. This first High Council meeting supposedly set the tone for the rest of his life-long term.
Trumpets sounded from far below, signalling the approach of the rest of the Council. Fighting the sudden urge to throw up, he took the seat designated for Mafelind Leader. At the last second, he threw his hood over his face.
The person who entered came in full battle regalia. This Leader had to be General Ovessa. Long black hair tied into a braid, the General's silver armor creaked as she took her place directly across from him. She laid her sword and scabbard on the table in front of her. The General did not remove her helm; her eyes glittered behind the mask.
Next came Archmagus Offara. She wore hooded black robes covered with illegible arcane writing. The wooden staff she carried had a green gem topping it. The gem interior was cloudy, and it gleamed eerily. She leaned the staff against the table, and took her place to Ovessa's right.
A man entered as the third Leader. He had a simple blue mask over his face. Liberator Lesaarde. Bol thought. He wore blue toga, that showed off his muscular frame. The Ganil Leader sat on Bol's left.
Then a man in a wheat-colored vest and pants came in, with an odd mask over his face. The mask looked like it was made of living plants. This Leader sat next to the Liberator.
A woman came next. Wisps of brilliant red hair stuck out from under her hood. She wore a simple, white robe. The lady sat on his right.
A man in gray came in holding a large book. The man also had a gray mask on his face. Definitely Malef Hessek the Enlightened Bol was silently proud of himself for knowing most of these people on sight. Malef sat next to the woman in white.
The final person to enter was a small scantily-clad woman who took her place next to Ovessa. The woman also had long black hair, but it was unbound. She had a small veil over her face.
As soon as the last woman had sat, four black robed, hooded priests entered and took their position at the columns. They stood silently, then nodded their heads in unison.
Bol removed his hood and announced.
"I officially declare the High Council to order." He gestured for them to remove their various masks and hoods. When they finished, he continued.
"First I must read the Barlibgillian Charter. Please do as I do." he placed his hands on the plaque in front of him and slowly rotated the entire plate around. As he did, a small triangular piece of the center of the table lifted up. Other pieces lifted as the Leaders did the same. A small box lifted up from the table.
Bol reached for it, he opened the box and removed several parchments. He began reading the Charter aloud.
"We the Religious Leader of Barlibgil, in representation of the People of Barelibgil...." he read.
An hour passed....
"Article 20..", he paused, took a drink of water, and continued, "A Member of the High Council which is in arrears..."
Another hour passed. Liberator Lesaarde was leaning back in his chair, humming under his breath. Malef was studiously taking notes in his book; he had ink smudged on his face. The Archmagus was snapping her fingers and making a small flame jump into the air each time. The woman in white was reading, while the wheat-man watched the Archmagus. Ovessa just stared straight ahead unblinking.
"Article 47. Plans for the application of armed forces shall be made by the MHEB with the assistance of ther General." He stopped reading when Ovessa cleared her throat.
"Tradition dictates we read that entire document and sign it, before conducting any business. I see no point and this, and would like to sign it now." She stated.
"I agree," said the Liberator.
"As do I," added the Archmagus.
Bol thought about it a second, and nodded his head. He quickly flipped to the last page and signed it. He passed it around the table. When it came back to him, he put it back into the box and placed it back in the center of the table. The table closed again.
"Now," he declared, "we may move on. The Leaders may give their reports at this time." Ovessa stood as he said this.
"The City of Cavin is operating well. We recieve foodstuffs and medical supplies weekly, and distribute them throughout the country in as timely a manner as possible." She sat, creaking in her chair. Liberator Lesaarde didn't bother to stand, he just spoke.
"Ganil is fine. We've almost integrated the electric power lines with the entire city, and should be operating fully by the end of the month." He leaned further back in his chair while the woman in white stood.
"Arthrian has an excess of medical supplies and would like to have them traded. We expect our messenger to arrive in Ganil within the week. We hope to reach an agreement with that City soon." That would make her the First Healer Lenore then. Bol thought as she sat and Malef stood.
"Waleras is fine. the printing presses have just gone into operation. Expect a monthly pamphlet about the general state of affairs before the end of next month." He sat and the Archmagus stood.
"Naulor is comitting all it's resources to fixing the problems between recent technological advancements and our magic. We hope to have fixed the problem within the next year." She sat and the wheat man stood.
"Danivere is sending it's produce to the Army for distribution as normal. We also have an excess of production and would like to offer it as trade. So far, Ganil has made no answer to our requests." Finally the almost-naked woman spoke.
"Dreuse is the same as ever. We recently had to commission another treasury compartment, as the other are full." Bol spoke when she sat.
"Mafelind is quiet, the festival season is far off yet, so there is not much to report."
"Now we can conclude the Council for today. As long as there are no pressing issue to discuss." The Leaders shook their heads.
"Good. As Speaker for this High Council session, I officially conclu-."
"MHEB?" a Priest spoke.
"Yes?"
"The Cult Leaders respectfully request permission to to begin marriage arrangements for you." the Priest said. Bol reddened, and the other Leaders were suddenly very attentive.
"M-marriage? To whom?"
"To the Council of course", Ovessa's and Lenore's jaws dropped. "As it is written in the Charter... " the Priest smiled slightly, "None of you have ever read the entire Charter have you?" The women shook their heads. The men relaxed slightly.
"You must marry them all before your second year in office."
"Is there any alternative to this?"
"Well....just death, not much of an alternative though." the Priest replied simply. Bol flinched at this, then sighed.
"Very well, who will I be marrying first?" Bol asked.
"Well, we generally start with the person on your left, and work our way around the table from there." Bol looked around. Offara stiffened in her chair when his eyes fell on her.
"So the Archmagus will be my first wife then."
"Well technically yes, but she won't be the first person you marry."
"But you just said-"
"I said the person on your left. The person sitting on your left hand side would be Mared Lesaarde."
The brief shocked silence was broken by the loud THUMP of the Liberator falling from his chair.
IC:
Bol Relym straightened his ceremonial robe. He'd been forced to wear the scarlett and white monstrosity since he'd been elected two days ago. He looked about the empty Council Room.
The Council Room was the highest room in the Capitol Tower. The room was completely open to the air, with only four supports holding the dome roof over his head. The large, circular, white marble room had only a large, intricately carved table in the center. The table had eight chairs around it, at each place was a gold and silver plaque. There were also some heavy scarlett curtains in case the weather grew bad.
Bol looked at the parchments in his hand; checking them for errors before the rest of the Council arrived. Gods let me not screw this up. He thought. This first High Council meeting supposedly set the tone for the rest of his life-long term.
Trumpets sounded from far below, signalling the approach of the rest of the Council. Fighting the sudden urge to throw up, he took the seat designated for Mafelind Leader. At the last second, he threw his hood over his face.
The person who entered came in full battle regalia. This Leader had to be General Ovessa. Long black hair tied into a braid, the General's silver armor creaked as she took her place directly across from him. She laid her sword and scabbard on the table in front of her. The General did not remove her helm; her eyes glittered behind the mask.
Next came Archmagus Offara. She wore hooded black robes covered with illegible arcane writing. The wooden staff she carried had a green gem topping it. The gem interior was cloudy, and it gleamed eerily. She leaned the staff against the table, and took her place to Ovessa's right.
A man entered as the third Leader. He had a simple blue mask over his face. Liberator Lesaarde. Bol thought. He wore blue toga, that showed off his muscular frame. The Ganil Leader sat on Bol's left.
Then a man in a wheat-colored vest and pants came in, with an odd mask over his face. The mask looked like it was made of living plants. This Leader sat next to the Liberator.
A woman came next. Wisps of brilliant red hair stuck out from under her hood. She wore a simple, white robe. The lady sat on his right.
A man in gray came in holding a large book. The man also had a gray mask on his face. Definitely Malef Hessek the Enlightened Bol was silently proud of himself for knowing most of these people on sight. Malef sat next to the woman in white.
The final person to enter was a small scantily-clad woman who took her place next to Ovessa. The woman also had long black hair, but it was unbound. She had a small veil over her face.
As soon as the last woman had sat, four black robed, hooded priests entered and took their position at the columns. They stood silently, then nodded their heads in unison.
Bol removed his hood and announced.
"I officially declare the High Council to order." He gestured for them to remove their various masks and hoods. When they finished, he continued.
"First I must read the Barlibgillian Charter. Please do as I do." he placed his hands on the plaque in front of him and slowly rotated the entire plate around. As he did, a small triangular piece of the center of the table lifted up. Other pieces lifted as the Leaders did the same. A small box lifted up from the table.
Bol reached for it, he opened the box and removed several parchments. He began reading the Charter aloud.
"We the Religious Leader of Barlibgil, in representation of the People of Barelibgil...." he read.
An hour passed....
"Article 20..", he paused, took a drink of water, and continued, "A Member of the High Council which is in arrears..."
Another hour passed. Liberator Lesaarde was leaning back in his chair, humming under his breath. Malef was studiously taking notes in his book; he had ink smudged on his face. The Archmagus was snapping her fingers and making a small flame jump into the air each time. The woman in white was reading, while the wheat-man watched the Archmagus. Ovessa just stared straight ahead unblinking.
"Article 47. Plans for the application of armed forces shall be made by the MHEB with the assistance of ther General." He stopped reading when Ovessa cleared her throat.
"Tradition dictates we read that entire document and sign it, before conducting any business. I see no point and this, and would like to sign it now." She stated.
"I agree," said the Liberator.
"As do I," added the Archmagus.
Bol thought about it a second, and nodded his head. He quickly flipped to the last page and signed it. He passed it around the table. When it came back to him, he put it back into the box and placed it back in the center of the table. The table closed again.
"Now," he declared, "we may move on. The Leaders may give their reports at this time." Ovessa stood as he said this.
"The City of Cavin is operating well. We recieve foodstuffs and medical supplies weekly, and distribute them throughout the country in as timely a manner as possible." She sat, creaking in her chair. Liberator Lesaarde didn't bother to stand, he just spoke.
"Ganil is fine. We've almost integrated the electric power lines with the entire city, and should be operating fully by the end of the month." He leaned further back in his chair while the woman in white stood.
"Arthrian has an excess of medical supplies and would like to have them traded. We expect our messenger to arrive in Ganil within the week. We hope to reach an agreement with that City soon." That would make her the First Healer Lenore then. Bol thought as she sat and Malef stood.
"Waleras is fine. the printing presses have just gone into operation. Expect a monthly pamphlet about the general state of affairs before the end of next month." He sat and the Archmagus stood.
"Naulor is comitting all it's resources to fixing the problems between recent technological advancements and our magic. We hope to have fixed the problem within the next year." She sat and the wheat man stood.
"Danivere is sending it's produce to the Army for distribution as normal. We also have an excess of production and would like to offer it as trade. So far, Ganil has made no answer to our requests." Finally the almost-naked woman spoke.
"Dreuse is the same as ever. We recently had to commission another treasury compartment, as the other are full." Bol spoke when she sat.
"Mafelind is quiet, the festival season is far off yet, so there is not much to report."
"Now we can conclude the Council for today. As long as there are no pressing issue to discuss." The Leaders shook their heads.
"Good. As Speaker for this High Council session, I officially conclu-."
"MHEB?" a Priest spoke.
"Yes?"
"The Cult Leaders respectfully request permission to to begin marriage arrangements for you." the Priest said. Bol reddened, and the other Leaders were suddenly very attentive.
"M-marriage? To whom?"
"To the Council of course", Ovessa's and Lenore's jaws dropped. "As it is written in the Charter... " the Priest smiled slightly, "None of you have ever read the entire Charter have you?" The women shook their heads. The men relaxed slightly.
"You must marry them all before your second year in office."
"Is there any alternative to this?"
"Well....just death, not much of an alternative though." the Priest replied simply. Bol flinched at this, then sighed.
"Very well, who will I be marrying first?" Bol asked.
"Well, we generally start with the person on your left, and work our way around the table from there." Bol looked around. Offara stiffened in her chair when his eyes fell on her.
"So the Archmagus will be my first wife then."
"Well technically yes, but she won't be the first person you marry."
"But you just said-"
"I said the person on your left. The person sitting on your left hand side would be Mared Lesaarde."
The brief shocked silence was broken by the loud THUMP of the Liberator falling from his chair.