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QuikClot® Hemostatic Agent Sale

-Rome-
09-06-2005, 01:51
FAQ
Q:So what is this?
A:It's a place where you can buy my QuikClot® Hemostatic Packages.
Q:So it's a storefront? Can I just say-"I'd like 3 million Twin Packs *Money wired*"?
A:Abseloutely not.
Q:Why not?
A:Because there's no RPing. This game is about RPing.
Q:Alright then, how do I order?
A:Well, you sorta have to do something like this:
The ____ of ____ would like to purchase *number* *products*. *Now you describe your reason for procurement in detail, and how they will be used*.*Now describe how you want them delivered*.
Now you end it with some kind of signature of a Department, person, whatever
Q:Uhh... Okay. So once I buy these, I can sell them to other people right? And give them away?
A:Nope. If you ever try to redistribute these products without permission from me, I will come down on you faster than rabid squirrels on a bag of peanuts.
Q:Can I buy production rights?
A:Nope. To prevent the spread of my product, I will not sell the ingredient list, or any production/selling rights to any nation. The only other (group) nations permitted to actively use it is my region; Greater Nova York. Sorry if you get upset about this.

*This FAQ designed and written (with some slight modifications by myself) by the nation of New Empire*

QuikClot® Hemostatic Agent
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QuikClot® Hemostatic Agent is in use with the Roman Marines and Army as a major component of their new Field First Aid Kits. Proven in plenty of tests, it has been saving lives in Fluffywuffy's war. QuikClot® is a temporary traumatic wound treatment that accelerates coagulation of moderate to severe wounds, including high-volume venous and arterial bleeding. This inexpensive packet can prevent death from excessive loss of blood and hemorrhagic shock in the critical minutes before the Medic arrives. Protective pack has two 1.75 oz pack for minor events. It is easily applied by military, police, fire, rescue and other non-medical personnel. Every home, auto, emergency services person should have this product available for rapid use.
Working at the molecular level, the highly porous QuikClot® Hemostatic Agent attracts and adsorbs the smaller water molecules, leaving the larger clotting factor and platelet molecules concentrated in the wound. This forms a powerful clot that stays in place until the patient can be moved to medical attention.
QuikClot® stops bleeding when poured in the injury in combination with direct pressure. RFDA approved for external use, the medium-sized non-allergenic zeolite granules are completely inert, making it safe to leave in the wound until the victim is transported to a medical facility where it is removed by irrigation.
QuikClot® is easily and safely applied with only minimal instruction. Literally anyone can apply QuikClot® to a wounded, bleeding victim without fear of improper handling of victims. Or, it can be self-administered. QuikClot comes in a sterile, compact, waterproof, single use, long shelf life package. Instructions are on the pouch.
Choice of single 3.5 oz. large pack for major trauma, or the new pack of twin 1.75 oz. pouches for less severe injuries and economy. Make sure your loved one in the war theater has a pack of QuikClot® in their ruck for emergencies. Made by R-Medical.
Directions: First apply pressure, then blot excess blood and any water from the wound area before pouring QuikClot® on the wound, and reapply pressure.
Cost: Twin pack: $30.00 ea; Large pack: $100.00 ea


==Reviews==
"My scientists and doctors have reviewed your product and have found it to be a useful tool."

"Nice"

"Looks like a winner."

"Wow, thats pretty amazing."

"I find it to be highly recommendable to purchase a substantial number of this agent."
Calpe
09-06-2005, 02:44
The Imperial Army would like to order 300,000 Large Packs and 1,000,000 Twin Packs. The total of 60 million $ will be wired upon confirmation.
Tanara
09-06-2005, 04:03
Oh excellent. Tanaara will be ordering a sizable quantity of these.
-Rome-
09-06-2005, 20:26
Calpe; I'm sorry, but your order delivery has been terminated. The ship delivering the packages has been turned back. The reason why is because you did not RP your order; meaning that you did not give a reason why you wanted the agent, and how you were going to use it. Please telegram me about this issue if you have a problem.

*Orders a plane to ship the money back to Calpe's government*
MassPwnage
09-06-2005, 22:42
ooc: Nice...

Now I can think of some ways to improve this.

A) Find some way to allow oxygen molecules through to keep the wound "breathed"

B) Have the stuff provide a temporary burst of nutrients and/or antibiotics to prevent bacterial infection of the wound.
-Rome-
10-06-2005, 14:13
If it saves lives, there is no need to change it. Plus, why would you need nutrients (besides at least protein) to be added into it? My point is that if it works, a change is not needed. Thank you for your input though!
Lesser Ribena
10-06-2005, 15:01
Twin pack: $30.00 ea; Large pack: $100.00 ea

To:-Rome- Medical services
From: John Baxter
Home Secretary, Kingdom or Lesser Ribena

Dear Sirs,
My scientists and doctors have reviewed your product and have found it to be a useful tool. We ask taht you supply us with the following stock, to be utilised by our armed services and civil authorities:

1,250,000 Large Pack: $125 million
2,500,000 Twin Pack: $75 million

The total is $200 million which has been wired to your bank account.

We eagerly anticpate the delivery of your products.
-Rome-
10-06-2005, 21:29
To:-Rome- Medical services
From: John Baxter
Home Secretary, Kingdom or Lesser Ribena

Dear Sirs,
My scientists and doctors have reviewed your product and have found it to be a useful tool. We ask taht you supply us with the following stock, to be utilised by our armed services and civil authorities:

1,250,000 Large Pack: $125 million
2,500,000 Twin Pack: $75 million

The total is $200 million which has been wired to your bank account.

We eagerly anticpate the delivery of your products.
Your order is confirmed. Please telegram me on how you would like your order to arrive i.e., air, sea, space, etc.
-Rome-
10-06-2005, 21:41
BUMP
Cotland
10-06-2005, 23:05
The Imperial Corps of Medicine has examined the QuikClot Hemostatic Agent, and find it to be highly recommendable to purchase a substantial number of this Agent. We intend to supply the entire military, medical and police force with plenty of units to resupply any used ones. Therefore we wish to order the following quantity.

Twin Pack: 900 Million [$27 Billion]
Large pack: 300 Million [$30 Billion]

Total price: [$57 Billion]

The money will be wired to you once this order is confirmed. We also wonder as to the possibility to produce this agent in Cotland, as it would ease the transportation problems. We are willing to pay a substantial monetary sum for this. In advance, thank you.
-Rome-
12-06-2005, 18:15
Twin Pack: 900 Million [$27 Billion]
Large pack: 300 Million [$30 Billion

Confirmed. However, I will not sell production rights to any other nations besides my regional military and pre-selected nations in my region. I appologize for not posting this earlier. I shall do so immediately.

P.S.: How would you like your order to arrive? Please telegram me reguarding this information. Thank you for your order, and have a good weekend.
Skinny87
12-06-2005, 18:32
Republican Defense Department

The Republican DoD would like to purchase:

Twin Pack: 450 Million [$13.5 Billion]
Large pack: 150 Million [$15 Billion]

The total of $28.5 Billion USD to be transferred immediately to your accounts.
Tonissia
12-06-2005, 18:38
OOC: Holy **** That Original



2 million orders of each
-Rome-
12-06-2005, 18:44
Both of your orders are declined. Unless you RP, your orders will not be confirmed. I think I need to post that so everyone knows how....lol
Skinny87
12-06-2005, 18:46
OOC: Pardon me? Define 'RP' please...I was under the illusion that my post was okay for an ordering post...such posts are usually fine for every single other storefront and ordering service...
The Merchant Guilds
12-06-2005, 18:59
OOC: That is usually an acceptable response to an RP, care to define what is acceptable since Skinny87's post is hardly different from those you have taken with good grace.

I was going to buy something but I won't until I see how you respond to this.

Note: This will be turned into an IC post or deleted once a satisfactory response is given.
-Rome-
12-06-2005, 19:21
EDIT: FAQ addition
Skinny87
12-06-2005, 19:41
Republic of Skinny87
Department of Defense
Department of Defense Requisition Department
Requisitioning Department 45 - External Medical Supplies
Requisitioning Department 45 Section B
To:-Rome- External Sales Department

Greetings,

I, Major-General Sir Wallaby-Hyphon-Smyth, head the Requisition Department for External Medical Supplies, and as the Republic will soon be engaged in several major conflicts, under Operation Attack every nation with 'R' and a '-' in their name, we wish to purchase the following units from your nation:

Twin Pack: 450 Million [$13.5 Billion]
Large pack: 150 Million [$15 Billion]

Now, I realise that this is a large order, and such an order may be past the operating parameters for such a nation as yours, and as such we will be allowing several years for their delivery, give or take a month.
Now then, to the matter of payment. We realise that such a large order will come to some $28.5 Billion USD, and as such can send the sum in the following types of payment:

US Dollars
Gold
Silver
Copper
Platinum
Bronze
Vias
Amex
American Express
Personal Cheque
Travellers Cheque

PLease communicate with our Purchasing and Payment Department quoting the official Purchasing Code of C43TY6 when finishing the payment plan.

On behalf of the entire Sub-Department, I thank-you,

Yours Mercifully, Sincerely, Magnanimously, Aplogetically and Willingly your most humble and ordinary servant,

Sir Wallaby-Hyphon-Smyth III