NationStates Jolt Archive

ooc: i have decided to start rping as both mt and ft non-human concremo, so this is just to kick me off in the ft area.

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In the year 2087, in a distant Nation, almost over night the non-human population was rounded up and executed infront of tens of millions of bloodthirsty viewers. This spurred the dictator on, as he went on to annex and outright conquer hundreds of smaller states. Soon they controlled the entire continent and it was venue of the largest massacre of civillians since the holocaust. Non-humans were destroyed on sight, and soon the racial minorities followed, leaving only the "Pure Blood" to continue their crusade. Valliant nations stood their ground, and in 2098 it looked like the tides of war would change.
However, untold thousands of atomic and chemical weapons were unleashed, and the noble defenders had no choice but to retaliate. The other side of the world was relatively unafected, until the Great Defect in 2109 where roughly one third of nations joined the evil dictator.
Taking sadistic pleasure in destroying those he controlled, non-humans were routinely routed out and put on space rockets destined to the sun, and other off-worldly nightmares. Concremo was one such victim, the entire population was packed up and launched into a black-hole in 2204.

Emerging from the other end of the black-hole space tunnel came the Concremian populace, their ageing paused as they traveled faster than light to the other side of the universe. Even at this speed, it took a incredible amount of millenia for them to hit something in their unguided craft. That something was the planet Semivivus, in a system of eight good sized planets.

Semivivus was locked in a stationary orbit, with perpetual day on one side and perpetual night on the other. The planet had six large continents, that the Concremians quickly adapted to in order to survive. The atmosphere was similar to earth, only with 37% oxygen, 43% nitrogen, 14% noble gasses and 6% carbon dioxide. This was breatheable by any standards, but Concremian lungs caught on fast to the abundancy of oxygen.

The Day side of the planet was host to a huge amount of strange, tall trees that give a solid and strong wood, rivers that are home to fish-like creatures and numerous insects, mountains with snow-capped peaks and a sizeable amount of various ore, and caves uncovering the depths of the planet.

The Night side, however, was all either land mass or permanently frozen sea, the ice up to three miles deep. Jagged mountains bear an untold wealth in diamonds and other rare stones.

Oil, as well as coal are found exclusively on the day side along with fresh drinkable water.

Within 1000 years, the Concremians ruled a vast and obidient empire, unplagued by rival nations or fanatics of any kind. The Emperor himself had somehow survived since the very landing, as had all twelve of the High Daesus. However, they began to get more and more reclusive, making the odd speech or statement in the capital city named Concremo, before not being seen again for up to a decade.

From then and onwards they have only grown stronger, taking strides in space travel and eventually becoming confident enough to put the space station "Concremo II".

Extensive colonising of the surrounding asteroid-belt and the Night side have given them an economy unrivaled by even the whole of old earth, and although an army is in service, it has not one been called upon.

Years later, the Emperor himself announced his will to reveal the galaxy and answer the question that baffled the Earth of old. Alien Life.

Hundreds of thousands of scout drones were sent out, bearing a simple communication in every language known to the Concremians.


Races of the universe,
It is with joy that Concremo decides to establish diplomatic ties with any spacefaring race that holds our views of peace and equality amongst all.

Please respond, co-ordinates imbedded.

~Tag for later

A massive Kazeci super cruiser appeared in orbit over the planet. It's slate gray, whale-like hull dully reflected the light of the star. First contact.

"This is the KNS Taw. We are here to open peaceful relations between our 2 nations. We are part of a great alliance of nations...." The standard first contact message went out, including a brief history and an offer for trade.

"That should get their attention."
"Yes sir, I think it will."

Kazecistan,
We would be privelidged to start trade and hopefully an alliance, if your governing body sees fit. Soon, we intend to colonise and establish ourselves on the large planet Denuo in our system. We ask for officials from Kazecistan to board the Concremo II* to witness this leap forward in our society. Plans have been developed for large space ships such as yours, and although we have only peaceful intentions we hope to arm them.

Concremo


ooc:*this is an awful name and will change soon

The NMSS BoneCrusher blinked into space above Concremo. Well, it just looked like it blinked into space. that was a side effect of going from 50 times the speed of light to under Light Speed in about 49 milliseonds. Commander Ryan Reigel looked out from the bridge of the only starship in the North Mack space fleet.
"Sir! We have received a message from Concremo, who was involved in the recent Rebellion in North Mack on the loyalist side."
"Put it on speakers."

Races of the universe,
It is with joy that Concremo decides to establish diplomatic ties with any
spacefaring race that holds our views of peace and equality amongst all.

Please respond, co-ordinates imbedded.

"Should we respond Commander?"
"Yes. Send a message..."

This is NMSS BoneCrusher, to Concremo:
we have received your message concremo. we are interested in opening
diplomatic relations, especially after you helped us out durring the rebellion.
With permission, we would like to land near your capitol city and open
diplomatic relations. Please respond on channel 4.677, encryption 346.853.

"sir, we have detected a large ship nearby. what are your orders."
"Battle Stations until we know its friendly."
The Klaxon rang out throughout the ship. Red light flashed in time to the alarm. Troops ran through the ship. Private First Class Kent Brockman settled into the seat of his gunners station. although the warp technology that BoneCrusher used didnt let humans to see through the warp field with their naked eyes, the space force had found a way around it. He looked into his targeting screen. THe dull gray ship was dead center, with his crosshairs pointed directly at it. The crosshairs were red, indicating that the saftey was still on. only the commander could turn the saftey off.
"Weapons Clear" The inhuman voice rang out through the ship. Kent's crosshairs turned orange.
funny... he though, why orange, not green?
He thought, then smiled, and reached under his gun to flip the mechanical saftey off.
no chance of an accidental firing, no chance at all.
THe crosshairs turned green, and the locked on tone rang through his gunner station. Now they were ready for anything that might happen.

The Instellar Carrier was going through netural space at .199 Megaclicks after its warp engine had a minor malfunction.

"Sir we have a contact bering .124 Desginate contact Alpha Bravo."

Commander Manson looked up from his control centre.

"What do we got"

"Seems to be a droid of some type"

"Send out the recovery vehicle and 3 X-27's to pick it up. until we know what that thing is........General Quarters"

As a yellow light came on and sirens blard 4 spacecraft were launched from Carrier bay 2 and picked up the Droid.

As federation personell listened to the message Commander Manson looked up

"Get me starfleet command tell them we have a first contacct sisuation"

"Yessir"

Within a half hour Commanders mansons message had been delievered to the Supreme Commander of Federation Forces then to the defense minister then to the Prime minister.

The Prime minister looked at the message "Hmmm......alright lets take advantage of this. Tell manson to send them an embassy exchange and offer to the trade federation."

"Yessir"


As the message was relayed back to Manson he read it over and send a message to the droid then changed the droid orders to it would return to its point of origon.


=-=-=-=-=-=-=To Concremo-=-=-=-=-=-=-=-=-=

We have been authorized to send you are greatest wished in your diplomatic relations. We offer to exchange embassies with you as well as for you to join the Federation Trade Union (FTU) this trade areement is made of many nations and benifits the entire instellar community.

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OOC- the Link to the FTU is below
http://forums.jolt.co.uk/showthread.php?t=412097

North Mack,
We welcome your assistance and friendship and hope to build upon this. We would like to put the Revolution behind us, as it is lost in the past and we have no will to ressurect memories of those times.
However, it seems your people are as cautious as they are cynnical, and we urge you to stand down against our new friends Kazecistan. If you happen to have any previous conflict with these, then move on and conduct your business elsewhere.

Concremo

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The Planet Federation,
An embassy exchange would be most welcome, as this will strengthen our diplomatic presence and assure the populace that our new found friends and allies are not to be afraid of. We guarentee that there will be no hostilities or ill-feelings towards you from a single Concremian, as they are taught from birth to respect others regardless of appearance or background.
You may have as many armed personel in your embassy that you see fit, and we look foreward to joining the Federation Trade Union.

Concremo

bump

Although the Federation trusts your government under our policy we must have 200 Federation Soldiers on the Embassy grounds as well as various light and heavy armorments and helicopters. This is simpily standard procedure in case theings on your planet ever get out of hand.

As to the Federation Trade Union please post a transmission after clicking on hte like so i can aknowlegde that issue in a different topic.

Prime Minister
Ricky Hanekamp

The Planet Federation,
Rest assured, 200 or more soldiers in your embassy is fine, but we do limit the ammount of combat vehicles. For that ammount of men, you may have 80 light vehicles, 20 helicopters, and 2 tanks/heavy vehicles. No balistics systems will be allowed.

Concremo

And it tore, right before a split in space opened to show a black space highlighted by red flame. It looked like...hell. No screams however, mearly a red ship that looked like sharp and jaggered, yet the flow mesmerised the eyes, making it an amzing craft of work. The Design was a flyer, made for first contact and such, and since Goh Makal could now be reached directly, it was able to move much faster from the Ship yards to its desination. Then the pulse began, sending messages that all races should be able to understand, for it was spoken using the nural paths directly.

Brothers

We are Tl'kra and Ml'kra, captins of the Naggrothians. We are end to negotiate with you, in person if possible.

By Order of the Gate Keepers.

"NMSS BoneCrusher: please stand down, we wish only friendly relations with you and Concremo."

"Concremo: Be advised we are sending an ambassador. He should have the identification..."

A sleek silver bullet transport shot out of the bay and headed for the other ship.

"Requesting landing clearance."

With a flash of green light, a group of sleek black ships dropped into realspace. Turning towards the nearby planet, a small amount of communication buoys dropped out of ports on the sides of the vessels. As they fell, they began to relay a message on all probable frequencies.

--Concremians, we are the AI QUETZAL, Regent of Otagia and Chairbeing of Pale Rider Arms. We hereby welcome you into the intergalactic community, and request an embassy exchange with your sovreign nation. We eagerly await your reply. QUETZAL out.--

Kent heard the intercom crackle to life
"Weapons Safe. Stand Down."
the klaxon fell silent, and his crosshairs turned to red as he fliped the mechanichal saftey. After that, he went to his quarters.
twenty minutes in space, and already we have found another nation who just entered, like us. the universe really is a small place.

Otagia and Naggeroth,
We would like to exchange embassies with your established nation, and ambassidor transports have been prepared. We welcome a peaceful existence with you.

Concremo

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All Nations in the System,
Very soon, the latest ship from the Concremian Spaceborne Navy, the Claymore, will leave for its Maiden Voyage, to investigate an anomoly near the planet farthest from the sun of our system. We ask for you each to send a meduim/large vessel to accompany us on this minor excursion, as 'pirate' activity in the system as been feirce.

Concremo


ooc: my flagship the claymore pic and stats are here;
http://www.freewebs.com/concremo/claymore.htm

im new to ft so if any stats are insanely high/low please tell me.

a slone slip fighter drops out of warp

All Nations in the System,
Very soon, the latest ship from the Concremian Spaceborne Navy, the Claymore, will leave for its Maiden Voyage, to investigate an anomoly near the planet farthest from the sun of our system. We ask for you each to send a meduim/large vessel to accompany us on this minor excursion, as 'pirate' activity in the system as been feirce.

Concremo


the NMSS BoneCrusher will accompany you, and the NMSS Ryler II will travel to Concremo to continue diplomatic relations.

North Mack,
Thankyou for your assistance, as this will be the first real rest of our spaceborne navy. Please instruct the NMSS Ryler II to dock with the Concremo II space station for diplomatics.

Concremo

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Unidentified Fighter,
This is the CSN Claymore Battlecruiser and Flagship of the Concremian Spaceborn Navy. Four Dagger class fighters and two Cutlass class multiroles have been sent to escort you out of Concremian Space. However, if you are here on diplomatic grounds, then they shall escort you to the Concremo II space station. Any hostile actions will result in your demise. Weapons have been armed, and you have been warned.

Concremo

"Kazecistan will send the KNS Kitt to accompany you. Our diplomats will be able to travel back home without us as their ship is FTL capable."

"This is the Kitt. We look forward to traveling with you and hope that the Republic's reputation shall protect us all."

The Kitt moved into formation with the Claymore.

"Condition yellow. Prepare for possible enemy contact."

the NMSS Ryler II appears near the Concremo II space station. It warps as close as it can (North Mack ships dont have conventional engines. they 'warp' everywhere. warping can be under lightspeed.) then drops its warp bubble. The small docking jets ignite on the side of the Ryler II and the hatch fits snugly into the docking ring assigned to it. The 2 diplomats exit the ship and proceed to, um, where ever their supposed to be going. Four armed guards also walk along with the diplomats, just in case.

The Sharply made craft moved into position next to the Massive craft, a message telling they would escort was sent, the other message however had a layer of humour to it.

You are welcome to send an embassy to our home system, although your human body would die fairly quickly, because our system is not for those not of our race. We are looking for one we can use for embassies, but so far no luck.

The Flyers, Masters of this Craft.

OOC: wow. this kinda died. hows about someone posts something here.

Silently and unseen the ship entered realspace, it´s darkness so complete the only way of localisation was that the stars suddenly stopped shining.

Within seconds, hundreds of ships varying sizes and classes, everything from the small A-class mineships B89, or the "turtle" as it was known to the crew, to the gigantic S-class planetary bomber ships, known as the Destroyeras, filled the sky of the planets night side.

A few seconds later a few more ships arrived, these moving much faster though not as heavily armed; the V-class scout ships Arcanii.

The entire fleet came to a standstill, no radio communications sent.

Two ships popped into space, identical except fot the numbers painted on their hull. A unencoded radio transmission was sent from these two ships to the ones in system


Attention NMSS BoneCrusher and NMSS Ryler II. This is NMSS StarSurfer
with NMSS StarFire. You are to return to the Homeland Immediatly,
to be outfitted with the new Spacial Shift Drives. NMSS StarSurfer will
accompany the Claymore, and the NMSS StarFire will dock at the station and
unload more diplomats.

You have your Orders.