NationStates Jolt Archive


Jina Fortuaso (Semi-Open Intro to Star Wars type tech)

Zanziik
22-05-2005, 03:08
After spinning her Kitashi Blade high above her head, the fourteen year old Jina Fortuaso brought her blade to touch the neck of the man below her, who frowned and pressed a button concealed within his palm. The girl above him spun around on her heels as she heard an all too familiar sound. She almost completely forgot about the man below her as she concentrated on the fourty-two foot tall Gashira Beast before her. Jina breathed in sharply before running off to fight her new foe. She dodged it's first strike easily, only jumping ten feet out of her original path, before running below the giant beast. With only two strokes, she emerged on the other side of the beast, as it tumbled, squacking terribly as it bled at the ankles where Jina's blade had met it's flesh. She quickly dodged around the beast to it's head, where she delivered the knockout blow.

"Tell your trainers to heal it quickly." Jina said to the forest. "I need to fight it again."

"But your attack was nearly unflawed." Spoke the man, still lying on the floor.

"Nearly is no where near good enough. I missed the right Achilles. I could have lost it there." Jina replyed, walking over to the man.

"But you did not. Do not focus only on your shortcomings. You will acheive no progress by only looking backward."

"I will try Master." Jina extended her deceptively fragile looking hand to the man who was twenty years her elder. He took it and lifted himself to his legs.

"You make me proud. You have learned much since we began, and so have I."

"Like what Master?"

"You have learned all I could possibly teach you, and I have learned humility. Every time we do that, you win. And do you know why?"

"Why, Master?"

"You are wise. And powerful. And merciful. You have many traits that many only wish they possessed. You are special Jina Fortuaso, and I am proud. And so I must allow you to leave my world and enter the galaxy. This is hard for me. Too hard. I am not supposed to grow attached to my pupils, but you are different Jina. Not only have you learned from me, you have taught me."

"What do you mean Master?"

"Jina, have you ever wondered if there is something out there?" He pointed to the sky, and when Jina looked, she saw a strange sight. A star seemed to be falling towards her.

"What is that Master?"

"It is your ticket to greatness Jina. Inside that moving star is a person. A person greater than me, or anyone else on this planet. Except for you. Because you are that person Jina. You will become a Jedi."

OOC: Ok, basically I would like for a Jedi using RPer to be inside that starship, to take Jina from her backwards homeworld and train her as a padawan. I would prefer it is someone I can actually learn from, like CoreWorlds or someone well known as a Jedi RPer.
Zanziik
22-05-2005, 03:42
Bump, any Jedi using nations out there?
Verghastinsel
22-05-2005, 03:54
OOC: Yep, just not of such calibre and experience. I've just got into it too, but I know a fair bit about SW.
Zanziik
22-05-2005, 03:56
OOC: Okay, then perhaps my standards were too high. Is anyone willing to participate?
Verghastinsel
22-05-2005, 03:57
OOC: Urm...Yes?
Zanziik
22-05-2005, 04:00
OOC: Okay then... Could you please write an IC post of a Master from your nation/planet coming to pick up Jina as asked by her former Master? We can then work out what to do from there. Also, do you have any type of Instant Messenger? I have MSN, AIM, and Yahoo.
Verghastinsel
22-05-2005, 04:03
OOC: I use MSN: templar02_uk@hotmail.com
I'll edit the post into this one once I've...'composed' it.
Verghastinsel
22-05-2005, 05:02
The 'Falling star' ripped through the planet's atmosphere, vapor trails streaming from it's wings. After a five minute descent through blinding cloud, a vast ocean of trees was revealed, green from horizon to horizon. The ship skimmed it's surface with surprising grace, dipping in and out in a smooth sliding motion.
Eventually, the designated landing area came into view - a great wooden structure, firmly secured to the tops of the massive trees. Not a creak issued from it as the KSE Firespray (http://lucasarts.com/products/galaxies/main.html#KSEFirespray) touched down on it's surface.
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Jedi Master Samani Ansu dragged himself out of his chair and made his way through the ship. His quarters were squalid at best, and he opened a wall-hatch to reveal a set of frayed robes. Ansu tugged them clear and got dressed.
He considered bringing PK-13 along, but the little droid always got under his feet. Master Ansu smoothed down his hair, lowered the exit ramp, and prepared to meet his prospective Padawan...
Zanziik
22-05-2005, 05:12
Only a few minutes after seeing the falling star, Jina was at the Lopiki Landing Pad with her Master. She watched in youthful awe as the star landed right infront of her and a man, dressed in wonderfully elegant, yet simple, brown robes stepped out onto the landing pad.

"Master, what is this?" Jina asked.

"This is your destiny Jina. This is Master Ansu, he is a Jedi, and he will teach you the ways of the Force, the ways of the greatest beings in the galaxy. He will teach you to bring peace to the war torn galaxy. He will teach you, and because you are you, I am sure you will teach him as well." He greeted the Master Jedi as he walked towards them and introduced Jina to him.

"Pleased to meet you Master Ansu," Jina said. "Will I be going with you now?"
Zanziik
23-05-2005, 00:38
OOC: Bump.
Verghastinsel
23-05-2005, 03:23
Master Ansu looked down at Jina, a friendly smile upon his face.

"We will leave as soon as you are ready, Jina. I have prepared your quarters. They're not much, but a Jedi's life is not one of luxury"

OOC: Soz for not posting much. I'm not really sure what to put. We'll talk later today/tomorrow on MSN, sort the story out.
Azurbajan
23-05-2005, 03:38
Bump, any Jedi using nations out there?

Used to...The Nationalist purges got most of them..like in episode3, the Temple was raided and burned.

OOC: I am a HUGE SW fan so..yea..and Episode3 left me scarred for life...WHY ANNIE, WHY!!!!!
Camel Eaters
23-05-2005, 03:53
OOC: DAMN! I wanted to get my Bards here to train her. Damn you Verghastinsel! DAMN YOU AND YOUR COOL MSN ADDRESS!

Hehe. Well next time.
Zanziik
25-05-2005, 00:15
OOC:Heh

IC: After a short farewell to her old Master, Jina told the Jedi that she was ready. She followed him and waited at the foot of the boarding ramp, looking back at her world.

"Goodbye."

She got on the ship.