NationStates Jolt Archive


Introducing the Combine...(( FT. Very open.))

The Combine of Xen
06-05-2005, 15:49
On a rather large planet filled with ape like people who never fought any real wars and it almost was a perfect place. But there wouldnt be much of a story if it stayed peaceful. Researchers were developing ways to move into new dimesions for exploration reasons but they went to far and attracted something. Something bad...

As the ape people walked threw town and lived there happy lives things were coming to light. Small earthquakes had hit but they were nothing. But today was diffrent. It was a massive earthquake causing buildings to shake and the ground to rip apart. And then in the middle of the city a large citidal arised out toweering the city and casting it into a shadow. The ape people ran as the military started to come. They made a blockade and slowly moved torwards the tower. A new recruit named Melensks was nervous andscared. his group had been ordered to check it out. it was small and only about 32 people. They stopped at the door like thing of the citdal opened.

3 larged things with long legs. They looked at the Ape man. Melensks was struck with fear as everyone else. The striders started to charge up something. Melensks looked in horror " RU-" was all he had time to say before the whole group was consumed by a light that killed them ripping them apart. They didnt feel pain. Hell some didnt know they were turned into gas. And then the combine invaded....

It was the same story all over the world. citdals would pop up and decmaite the army. The Combine infantry would then take out all other restiance and estabalish a base in the city. Withen a week the combine had the planet under The Combines control. The ape people had no chance. not a chance....

OOC: Hello everyone. this is my first attempt at a FT rp so be nice about comments. Some of you may have seen me around. This is a puppet nation and decided to hell with it and use it for FT rp.
Chronosia
06-05-2005, 15:51
OOC: Tag
Dracun imperium
06-05-2005, 15:59
OOC: Taggie Wagie
The Combine of Xen
06-05-2005, 21:46
Months later the ape people were forced to do work such as building weapons and mining resources. With little food and water some died. The food was nothing but a tasteles block cotaining all the nietriunts they would need. water was filled with checimals that also supplied them with stuff they needed. Some sescaped the ities only to run into a new horror. The combine brought along werid new animals which replaced the current animals o the world. They were vicsous and ate anything possible inculding the ape people. Even the combine were at risk. Slowly the oceans started to dry up and the orests started to die. It was becoming a living hell....

(( feel free to post anytime you want guys))
The Combine of Xen
07-05-2005, 00:32
bump
Camel Eaters
07-05-2005, 00:36
OOC: Uhh........yeah. Well........I'm sure you'll get better with it yo. I swear yae will. Somehow. Someway. YOU SHALL VANQUISH THE APE FOLK!




And get on MSN.
Deatharon
07-05-2005, 00:50
A wormhole opens and a cloaked probe jumps out and starts scanning the system and the planets for signs of life.
Taledonia
07-05-2005, 00:53
(OOC: Congrats on becoming FT. I hope to have many RPs with you in the future.)
The Combine of Xen
07-05-2005, 02:15
OOC: Thanks for alll the postive enouragement. camel Eaters i dont have MSN srry.
The Combine of Xen
08-05-2005, 02:28
bump..
Central Facehuggeria
08-05-2005, 02:35
OOC: Not too shabby. Are the Combine infantry you mentioned like the ones in the game? Anyway, I like the concept but you may want to run it through a spellchecker.
Vernii
08-05-2005, 03:20
OOC: Just a tip, it's always a good idea to actually add in dialogue and character thoughts rather then just telling us what they did. More details and descriptions are good as well.