NationStates Jolt Archive

A Colonel sits in a outpost near the Brydog-Colombia border. When a message is recived on the radio. Hotel One, This Smokey Two. Those Colombian gurrilla fighters are up to something.The Colonel graps the mike. Smokey Two, This is Hotel One. What are they doing. Smokey Two responds Theiy just entered a village and killed a bunch of villagers. The Col. grabs a phone, "Hello. get me Central Command." "Hello, This is Border Post Hotel One, my guys report that a group of gurrillas just killed a bunch of villagers in a village near the border." He hangs up, and worries about the who's next.

In Liberty City, Gen. Wilkes, Chief-of-Staff for the Army recives a message. He reads the message, and then grabs a phone. "Hello, This is Wilkes, the CPNP just attacked a village 30mins ago." "Hotel One, called and told Central Command about it. I need a task force near the border." He hangs up and rereads the message.

Start of the Air War
5 Tornados with 7 Colombian F-15Es attack a CPNP camp. The Colombian and Republic air forces have began bombings on Pro-CPNP camps and villages in prepation for the ground forces. Gen. James Mattews, Commander of the Republic Air Force said is to make them run into the jungles so ground forces can kill them.

Your writing style and use of words is absolutely atrocious, clean it up man!

Your writing style and use of words is absolutely atrocious, clean it up man!
(I'd normally be angered when someone comes in and takes a dump on a thread, but in this case, it's warranted. Your writing is going in a rather weird direction some times (Flying jets into the ground? what?) so you may want to have someone look over this before you post it if English isn't your primary language. Otherwise... well... I don't know.)

Upon reciept of this broadcast over covert networks, a Manawskistani radio operator reports to her senior officer:

"Sir, I'm not sure what's going on, but it sounds like an attack."

Capt. William Thorne picks up the reciever and puts it to his ear for only a few seconds.

"Run into the jungle? Jets? So ground forces can kill them?"

He takes off his glasses and rubs the bridge of his nose for a second.

"I don't think we need to worry much about this guy... Giancoli, scan for other activity, this guy's guano loco. Regardless, get a hold of Central and get them to ready the ADA."

Spc. Giancoli puts her headset back on and begins to scan other frequencies, per the Captain's orders. PFC. Kimball contacts Central Command and requests Air Defence Artillery be placed on alert.